User contributions for ArchCardinal

8 September 2024

• 15:5115:51, 8 September 2024 diff hist −140 AllTrails Removed and rewrote a number of elements in violation of MOS:Puffery, I feel that this has addressed the issues raised by Template:Peacock so I have removed it. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 15:3215:32, 8 September 2024 diff hist −867 AllTrails Reformatted article to remove issues relating to MOS:OVERSECTION as the article was broken up into many sections/subsections which mostly contained one paragraph or less, cluttering the article - collapsed the Operation and Acquisition sections into History and new Overview section. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 14:5014:50, 8 September 2024 diff hist −49 Calgary →Festivals: Removed statement about doubling the cities population during stampede, this is false and uncited. While the Stampede does draw in over a million visitors per year, these are not all necessarily from out of town as many are locals. Tag: Visual edit
• 14:1914:19, 8 September 2024 diff hist +997 WestJet →2007–2009: Continued growth: Added some citations Tag: Visual edit
• 13:5713:57, 8 September 2024 diff hist −23 Calgary International Airport →1990s: Reorganization and WestJet: Swapped image as the previous image didn't display the WestJet logo/branding/etc. so didn't really serve any purpose here. Changed to an image showing the WestJet campus at CYYC. Old image also broke policy on WP:Watermark as photographers name was in the title. Tag: Visual edit
• 13:3513:35, 8 September 2024 diff hist +39 Dubai Police Force Added Template:Citation needed to an uncited claim in the lead Tag: Visual edit

7 September 2024

• 16:0116:01, 7 September 2024 diff hist +9 m Hoodie →Canada: Added a couple of words for clarification Tag: Visual edit
• 15:5815:58, 7 September 2024 diff hist −1 m Israel Del Toro →Military career: fixed grammatical error (awaking -> waking) Tag: Visual edit

6 September 2024

• 19:1119:11, 6 September 2024 diff hist +9 Frye Fire Added start date to infobox as per documentation and examples in Template:Infobox wildfire Tag: Visual edit
• 17:0617:06, 6 September 2024 diff hist 0 User:ArchCardinal No edit summary current Tag: Visual edit
• 17:0517:05, 6 September 2024 diff hist +565 James K. Gray Fixed phrasing of the Green Line committee sentence to be more accurate and added sources and wikilinks Tag: Visual edit

4 September 2024

• 12:5712:57, 4 September 2024 diff hist +339 Jim Weirich Flagged a few statements with Template:bcn and Template:fact current Tag: Visual edit

3 September 2024

• 19:1119:11, 3 September 2024 diff hist +61 User:ArchCardinal No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 18:5918:59, 3 September 2024 diff hist −70 User:ArchCardinal No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 18:5818:58, 3 September 2024 diff hist +53 User:ArchCardinal No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 17:4717:47, 3 September 2024 diff hist +117 Agrium Added Template:Citation needed to 3 uncited claims current Tag: Visual edit
• 17:4017:40, 3 September 2024 diff hist −15 Declara Removed Awards section, collapsed it into the History section as the only award listed was a non-notable award and is really only relevant to the founder, not the company as a whole current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 15:3915:39, 3 September 2024 diff hist −30 Franworks Group Collapsed all sections in a single 'Overview' section to get rid of issues relating to MOS:OVERSECTION - added Template:Unreferenced section to the Overview as none of the sections were properly referenced. Tags: nowiki added Visual edit
• 15:1215:12, 3 September 2024 diff hist −199 Wilmslow Added links to article for St. Bartholomew's Church, Wilmslow in image label and under places of worship Tag: Visual edit
• 15:0815:08, 3 September 2024 diff hist +58 Cheshire Relabeled image of St. Bartholomew's Church to point to the page for the church Tag: Visual edit
• 04:1304:13, 3 September 2024 diff hist −1 m Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Grasslands Entertainment Fixed formatting of my comment
• 04:1204:12, 3 September 2024 diff hist +229 Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Grasslands Entertainment →Grasslands Entertainment: Reply Tag: Reply
• 03:0803:08, 3 September 2024 diff hist +349 Questerre Energy Added Template:More citations needed as there are many uncited claims throughout the article, as well as many where an unreliable source is used (primary source/press release) - tagged a few of these throughout the article current Tag: Visual edit
• 02:5502:55, 3 September 2024 diff hist −441 True North Mortgage Removed some MOS:PUFFERY elements from the lead section, removed a piece of duplicate info from the lead section (also appears in the first paragraph of history immediately below, and isn't necessary for the lead) - also added Template:Advert as there is still more work to be done to remove all the puffery/advertising stuff Tag: Visual edit

2 September 2024

• 23:4723:47, 2 September 2024 diff hist 0 m Low-cost carrier →Low-cost business-only carriers: Moved Silverjet ref to end of sentence so it doesn't disrupt the reader in the middle. Tag: Visual edit
• 23:4223:42, 2 September 2024 diff hist −20 Casefile Removed 'Number of Seasons' from infobox as it was listed as n/a so it's just adding noise to the box. Not listed as required on the infobox template. Tag: Visual edit

1 September 2024

• 19:4819:48, 1 September 2024 diff hist −1,412 Attabotics Reformatted the History section to better align with MOS:HEAD guidelines. Removed some Puffery/Advertising from the history section along with some superfluous lists of non-notable customers. Still lots of Puffery/Advertising to be removed so I have added the Advert template. Tag: Visual edit

31 August 2024

• 17:2717:27, 31 August 2024 diff hist +166 SensorUp Added multi-issue template box for WP:COI and WP:Advertising - NPOV and Puffery are also issues here though they are mostly addressed by the WP:Advertising side of things, so not adding templates for those. Tag: Visual edit
• 17:1817:18, 31 August 2024 diff hist +888 Talk:SensorUp →Conflict of Interest / Connected Contributor: new section current Tags: Disambiguation links added New topic
• 16:1516:15, 31 August 2024 diff hist +68 Wop May →Death of the Red Baron: Added some text to help bridge sentences together, clarifying that the Red Baron was killed during this encounter. current Tag: Visual edit

29 August 2024

• 17:3217:32, 29 August 2024 diff hist −141 North Cariboo Air Removed watermarked image per WP:WATERMARK and MOS:CREDITS, added new non-watermarked photo of same aircraft type taken at same location Tag: Visual edit

2 August 2024

• 03:3603:36, 2 August 2024 diff hist −1,861 SensorUp Removed Awards section per WP:LISTCRITERIA, removed Events section because it was a list of years-old events and added nothing of value to the article, added archive url to NATO Defence Innovation Challenge award page Tag: Visual edit

26 May 2024

• 04:1904:19, 26 May 2024 diff hist +1 m Pascal Dupuis →Injuries and retirement: fixed spelling mistake Tag: Visual edit

28 April 2024

• 17:5817:58, 28 April 2024 diff hist −692 Summify Removed 'Investors' and 'Reception' sections, folded relevant content into 'History'. Removed founders photos. Removed reference to advisors in the opening Tag: Visual edit
• 17:3917:39, 28 April 2024 diff hist +2,445 Summify Added archive links to dead refs, added 'dead' url status to various refs where I couldn't find archived versions Tag: Visual edit
• 15:5415:54, 28 April 2024 diff hist −27 Kenny Richey Removed confusing reference to birthplace in opening sentence. Tag: Visual edit

11 March 2024

• 16:0516:05, 11 March 2024 diff hist +166 National CineMedia Brought source over from Movie Night Out Tag: Visual edit
• 15:5815:58, 11 March 2024 diff hist −42 National CineMedia Removed 'See Also' section as it linked to the page I just merged here (Movie Night Out) Tag: Visual edit
• 15:5615:56, 11 March 2024 diff hist +18 Movie Night Out Forgot to replace destination page in original edit, sorry - fixed now current Tag: Redirect target changed
• 15:5515:55, 11 March 2024 diff hist −901 Movie Night Out Merged content to National CineMedia. No talk to ref, this page was tiny and had no real reason to be on it's own. WP:BOLD Tags: New redirect Visual edit: Switched
• 15:5315:53, 11 March 2024 diff hist +436 National CineMedia Merged content from Movie Night Out to here. No talk to reference, this article is tiny and has no real reason to remain separate. WP:BOLD Tag: Visual edit
• 15:5115:51, 11 March 2024 diff hist −434 Movie Night Out Removed list of features per WP:NOTDB, list of features was also uncited and I was unable to find a reliable secondary source for this information. Tag: Visual edit

10 March 2024

• 22:2522:25, 10 March 2024 diff hist +343 Talk:Berkeley College →Merge here proposal from Dover College: Reply Tag: Reply
• 22:1722:17, 10 March 2024 diff hist +37 Steven Tainer Removed Template:NN as it survived AfD (per WP:WPNN guidelines 4.6). Added Template:Tone and Template:Peacock as this article needs some work throughout to get rid of peacocking, weasel words, improper formatting, and general issues with the tone and writing style. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
• 21:5521:55, 10 March 2024 diff hist +70 User:ArchCardinal Added userbox for notability project Tag: Visual edit: Switched
• 21:5121:51, 10 March 2024 diff hist +97 Wikipedia:WikiProject Notability/Member List Adding myself to the list!
• 21:4821:48, 10 March 2024 diff hist +1,342 User talk:Aenariel →Proposed deletion of The Martini Henry Rifles: new section Tag: New topic
• 21:4321:43, 10 March 2024 diff hist −73 The Martini Henry Rifles Removed a dead ref link, removed a ref link that lead to a page where the claimed content was not present, article is now relying entirely on a single-source. Unable to find other reliable/verifiable sources, therefore have proposed this page be deleted under WP:BAND and WP:ARTN, added WP:ONESOURCE. Tag: Visual edit
• 20:4020:40, 10 March 2024 diff hist +449 Talk:Mind, Body & Kick Ass Moves →Merge proposal: Chris Crudelli to here: Reply current Tag: Reply

9 March 2024

• 22:2122:21, 9 March 2024 diff hist −1,310 YouTrack Removed large amount of WP:PROMOTION content and large lists of external tools and integrations per WP:NOTDIRECTORY #6. Folded Architecture, External Integrations, User Interface, and API sections into a new Overview section as most of the sections were completely uncited and mostly full of WP:PROMOTION. Kept some relevant items and removed the rest. Updated version in Infobox and removed more advertising from there. Added more-citiations-needed template and removed advert template Tags: COI template removed Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit