User contributions for Awgrasso

30 October 2024

• 18:2518:25, 30 October 2024 diff hist +2 m Shine (film) →Plot: "Electric shock therapy" replaced by the more accepted term, "Electroshock therapy," and active Wikilink added

6 October 2024

• 17:5617:56, 6 October 2024 diff hist 0 m Tania León →Career: Stride was premiered in February of 2020, not 2019. See the provided reference from Feb 2020 New York Times.

29 August 2024

• 17:2017:20, 29 August 2024 diff hist +19 m Largs →History: Link to a nonexistent Wikipedia page, "Haylie Chambered Tomb," was present. Replaced with link to "Stones of Scotland" page, which contains information on the Haylie Chambered Tomb.

19 August 2024

• 21:3421:34, 19 August 2024 diff hist 0 m Beck Weathers Fixed typo. Replaced "hypertheric" with the correct term, "hypothermic" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit App section source

12 April 2024

• 02:3402:34, 12 April 2024 diff hist +56 m Spectrum (arena) →Notable concerts: Added years of Metallica Spectrum shows other than 1989, as referenced in the Inquirer list (ref. 54)

28 February 2024

• 02:2202:22, 28 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Chevalier de Saint-Georges →Death: Subject of sentence is the Chevalier de Saint George, and as such, past tense of verb should be "was," not "were," as written.

10 January 2024

• 04:2804:28, 10 January 2024 diff hist 0 m Frank Sampedro Corrected misspelling of Sampedro's name

31 October 2023

• 02:3602:36, 31 October 2023 diff hist +4 m Black Sabbath Added first name of Ray Gillen, so as to avoid confusion (as I had) with Ian Gillan Tag: Reverted
• 02:3502:35, 31 October 2023 diff hist 0 m Black Sabbath Undid revision 1182738235 by Awgrasso (talk) Tag: Undo
• 02:3202:32, 31 October 2023 diff hist 0 m Black Sabbath Corrected spelling of Ian Gillan's last name from "Gillen" Tag: Reverted

9 October 2023

• 02:0102:01, 9 October 2023 diff hist 0 m Marquis de Sade Fixed typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit

9 September 2023

• 02:1202:12, 9 September 2023 diff hist −1 m Lincoln Portrait Corrected spelling of the town, Lenox, Massachusetts. It has one "n.' Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit

24 January 2023

• 00:2700:27, 24 January 2023 diff hist +11 m Rhinophyma →Complications: Spelling of rhinophyma corrected. Phrase altered slightly to increase clarity.

22 January 2023

• 21:5321:53, 22 January 2023 diff hist +4 m The Plot Against America →Antisemitism: WikiP link to Kristallnacht added

29 December 2022

• 01:3401:34, 29 December 2022 diff hist +1 m Eddie Van Halen →Guitars: Corrected spelling of "cannibalized"

12 December 2022

• 16:2016:20, 12 December 2022 diff hist +3 m Dive bomb (guitar technique) Added word "in" to sentence, in order for it to make sense.

14 November 2022

• 02:0102:01, 14 November 2022 diff hist −4 m Rocks (Aerosmith album) →Reception and legacy: removed one word from sentence in order for syntax to match quote

6 October 2022

• 16:0016:00, 6 October 2022 diff hist +4 m Nancy Walker Bush Ellis Added link to Miss Porter's School WikiP article

21 September 2022

• 19:1919:19, 21 September 2022 diff hist +2 m Donato Renzetti Fixed typo - corrected spelling of Artists Management Company Ltd. to match what is written on their own website. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit

30 August 2022

• 14:0714:07, 30 August 2022 diff hist +24 m Historically informed performance Christophe Rousset added to list of foremost modern players of harpsichord.

28 August 2022

• 13:4413:44, 28 August 2022 diff hist +4 m Portrait of Ambroise Vollard (Picasso) Wiki-link to Pablo Picasso article added to first sentence

2 June 2022

• 15:0615:06, 2 June 2022 diff hist +60 m Piscataquis County, Maine Added links to List of counties in Maine Wiki page
• 14:2014:20, 2 June 2022 diff hist +4 m Aroostook County, Maine Corrected erroneous link to Counties of Minnesota, replace with link to List of Counties in Maine

28 May 2022

• 19:0519:05, 28 May 2022 diff hist +13 m Ragdoll Changed description of cat breed's head markings from "V-shaped" to "upside-down V-shaped," which is more accurate, and grammatically correct. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit

19 May 2022

• 00:3400:34, 19 May 2022 diff hist +3 m Peter Gabriel (1978 album) Sentence missing the word, "of," which was added.

9 May 2022

• 23:4523:45, 9 May 2022 diff hist +1 m Paramount Theater (Springfield, Massachusetts) Changed "decade" to "decades," since the venue was used for concerts at least back to 1974

10 April 2022

• 00:4600:46, 10 April 2022 diff hist +11 m AMC AMX Fixed grammar. In its original form, sentence did not make grammatical sense. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

5 April 2022

• 23:4723:47, 5 April 2022 diff hist −1 m Paulette Goddard Corrected word choice for this context, which is attributable, not contributable. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

25 March 2022

• 19:5919:59, 25 March 2022 diff hist −2 m Chevrolet Camaro Accessed date corrected
• 19:5719:57, 25 March 2022 diff hist +617 m Chevrolet Camaro Information and reference inserted regarding 7:16.04 Nurburgring Nordschleife hot lap time of the 2018 Camaro ZL1 1LE.
• 19:4119:41, 25 March 2022 diff hist +252 m Chevrolet Camaro Corrected top speed of 2017 Camaro ZL1, which is 198 mph, see reference.
• 19:3419:34, 25 March 2022 diff hist −14 m Chevrolet Camaro Prior time quoted of 7:16.04 was the Nurburgring time achieved by the 2018 ZL1. The time for the 2017 ZL1 was 7:29.60

24 December 2021

• 01:5301:53, 24 December 2021 diff hist +3 m Lawrence Tibbett Altered redundant mention of Simon Boccanegra, and added Wikilink to Verdi's opera Otello Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

22 December 2021

• 18:0818:08, 22 December 2021 diff hist +2 Giacomo Puccini Phrase "stemming to the late-" changed to the more appropriate "stemming from

10 December 2021

• 23:0723:07, 10 December 2021 diff hist +1 m Quadraphonic sound Corrected spelling of "satellite" in new information regarding Elvis' 1973 album. See Wiki entry: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aloha_from_Hawaii_Via_Satellite_(album)
• 02:5402:54, 10 December 2021 diff hist 0 m Big Audio Dynamite capitalized "t" in "the Clash," as the band is known as The Clash

2 December 2021

• 03:2303:23, 2 December 2021 diff hist +5 m Patrick J. Sweeney Added links Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

29 November 2021

• 00:1400:14, 29 November 2021 diff hist −122 m Thoracic outlet syndrome Chronically dead link to "thoracic outlet decompression" (no Wiki page for this) was removed. If someone creates a page describing the surgical procedure Thoracic Outlet Decompression, then the link can be restored at that time.

10 November 2021

• 19:2519:25, 10 November 2021 diff hist +1 m Wolf Run (North Branch Mehoopany Creek tributary) Corrected spelling of reference for html pointing to tessellated darter Wiki entry

7 October 2021

• 17:4617:46, 7 October 2021 diff hist −8 m Niels Bohr Fixed error in entered website address, removing https
• 17:3817:38, 7 October 2021 diff hist +353 m Niels Bohr Added to accolades section the fact that a Google Doodle was created in celebration of Niels Bohr's 127th birthday, on October 7, 2012.

4 October 2021

• 19:4419:44, 4 October 2021 diff hist +5 m Iguala mass kidnapping Simple terminology/phraseology correction. Replaced "of" with "made by." Journalists do not possess a case, they make a case.

13 September 2021

• 18:2518:25, 13 September 2021 diff hist +40 m Giovanni Battista Morgagni Fixed prior minor edit to rename "Sinuses of Morgagni" to "Aortic Sinuses of Morgagni." This is because the anatomical feature most closely associated with the name of Giovanni Battista Morgagni is the pharyngeal sinus, which already has its own Wiki page, but was not in this list. The Sinus of Morgagni (pharynx) was subsequently added to the list in alphabetical order. It could be argued that this one should be at the top of the list, but I have conformed to the prior writer's style.
• 18:1518:15, 13 September 2021 diff hist +42 m Giovanni Battista Morgagni Aortic sinus changed to plural form, as they are normally three in number. Indicated that they are better known as the Sinuses of Valsalva, which can be confirmed at the referenced Wiki page.

1 September 2021

• 15:2315:23, 1 September 2021 diff hist +47 m McIntosh Laboratory Additional links added to MC2300 amplifier page. Spacing altered on amplifier chronology for improved readability.

31 August 2021

• 17:0417:04, 31 August 2021 diff hist 0 m Quadraphonic sound Corrected the four instances in which the word "discrete" is written as "discreet." The term is referring to separate, distinct channels of sound (discrete), as opposed to its homophone (discreet), which means careful or circumspect in one's speech or actions.

24 August 2021

• 00:0200:02, 24 August 2021 diff hist +288 m Riccardo Muti Added names of his parents, as well as a few extra descriptors of them provided by Muti himself in the cited interview.

5 August 2021

• 19:0019:00, 5 August 2021 diff hist 0 m Thoracic outlet syndrome Corrected page number in cited reference from 767 (typo) to 167.
• 18:5218:52, 5 August 2021 diff hist +886 m Thoracic outlet syndrome Pitcher J.R. Richards added to list of major league pitchers with Thoracic Outlet Syndrome, along with brief description of his career-ending stroke.

22 July 2021

• 14:1114:11, 22 July 2021 diff hist +54 m Marion, Massachusetts Added composer Charles Ruggles to list of notable people from Marion, MA