User contributions for BangkokBeauty

19 April 2017

• 20:5720:57, 19 April 2017 diff hist −9 Language Two fewer words in a sentence that remains very difficult.
• 20:5520:55, 19 April 2017 diff hist +3 m Language Putting in a subject "it" so that the preceding comma makes sense.
• 20:5320:53, 19 April 2017 diff hist −52 Language Trying to reduce wordiness.
• 20:4920:49, 19 April 2017 diff hist +138 Talk:Language →First sentence in lede section: Again, thank you.
• 20:4820:48, 19 April 2017 diff hist −20 Language Slight modification as per discussion on the talk page. Thank you and have a nice day.
• 19:1419:14, 19 April 2017 diff hist +306 Talk:Language →First sentence in lede section: Responding to Bill.
• 18:5018:50, 19 April 2017 diff hist +171 Talk:Language →First sentence in lede section: Thank you.
• 18:3718:37, 19 April 2017 diff hist −24 Talk:Language →First sentence in lede section
• 18:3618:36, 19 April 2017 diff hist +1,124 Talk:Language →First sentence in lede section: new section
• 18:0218:02, 19 April 2017 diff hist −9 Language A bit more accurate, since this seems to be about language AND communication.
• 17:5917:59, 19 April 2017 diff hist −50 Linguistics More to the point.
• 17:5617:56, 19 April 2017 diff hist −4 m Language Remove extraneous "the".
• 17:5517:55, 19 April 2017 diff hist −66 Language Left in "human" communication, though simplified. The additional note about "a language" seems unnecessary, so I took it out.
• 12:5012:50, 19 April 2017 diff hist +1 Letter (alphabet) →Types of letters: This image is too big, obstructs flow of reading, but for now, I moved it down to the appropriate section.

18 April 2017

• 08:0708:07, 18 April 2017 diff hist −31 Feather Undid revision 775977343 While the Spanish word is acknowledged, the English word will be based in French.
• 01:1201:12, 18 April 2017 diff hist +1 m Book Grammatical fix.
• 00:5400:54, 18 April 2017 diff hist −1 Book Remove an unnecessary comma.
• 00:5300:53, 18 April 2017 diff hist −23 Book Breakup long first sentence, and rearrange material.
• 00:2100:21, 18 April 2017 diff hist +188 Talk:Book →First sentence.: Revised.
• 00:2000:20, 18 April 2017 diff hist −24 Book Slightly revised as according to the talk page.

17 April 2017

• 18:3718:37, 17 April 2017 diff hist +2 m Writing A couple of commas.
• 09:4609:46, 17 April 2017 diff hist +297 Jules Verne Undid revision 775821767 by Rovingrobert Why was this removed?

16 April 2017

• 20:1120:11, 16 April 2017 diff hist +179 Feather Undid revision 775737645 by 63.143.86.237 (talk)
• 14:0814:08, 16 April 2017 diff hist −25 Rivoli's hummingbird →Description: Moving subject "magnificent hummingbird" up to first paragraph of section.
• 14:0414:04, 16 April 2017 diff hist −3 University of Chicago Not just various, but many.
• 14:0014:00, 16 April 2017 diff hist +24 Rivoli's hummingbird →Description: The same.
• 13:5913:59, 16 April 2017 diff hist +24 Rivoli's hummingbird →Behaviour: The same.
• 13:5813:58, 16 April 2017 diff hist +19 Rivoli's hummingbird →Distribution and habitat: Add clarification.
• 13:5213:52, 16 April 2017 diff hist −2 Bee hummingbird Fixing a word.
• 13:2413:24, 16 April 2017 diff hist −6 Writing Some consistency.
• 13:0013:00, 16 April 2017 diff hist +10 Occam's razor Insert "candidate" for clarity.
• 12:5412:54, 16 April 2017 diff hist −43 Occam's razor More to the point.
• 01:1201:12, 16 April 2017 diff hist +1 m Occam's razor Smallish edits.

15 April 2017

• 19:0319:03, 15 April 2017 diff hist −31 Writing More to the point, removing redundant developed.
• 19:0019:00, 15 April 2017 diff hist −8 Writing "A form of" is not needed.
• 15:0215:02, 15 April 2017 diff hist +162 User talk:Kanguole →ISBN and ideogram: Okay, thank you.
• 14:3914:39, 15 April 2017 diff hist +64 User talk:Kanguole →ISBN and ideogram: I think I chose a neutral link.
• 14:3814:38, 15 April 2017 diff hist +118 User talk:Kanguole →ISBN and ideogram: Okay.
• 14:3614:36, 15 April 2017 diff hist +201 Ideogram →Mathematics: Perhaps I'm missing something, but the ISBN doesn't seem to go directly to the source. The url does, so I added this back, but I also kept the ISBN.
• 14:2514:25, 15 April 2017 diff hist +336 User talk:Kanguole →ISBN and ideogram: new section
• 14:1414:14, 15 April 2017 diff hist −35 Writing Shorten sentence to the point.
• 13:5413:54, 15 April 2017 diff hist 0 Writing →Writing systems: Changing four to five, given the sentence I just modified.
• 13:5313:53, 15 April 2017 diff hist −79 Writing →Writing systems: I took out assertion that ideograms are somehow underdeveloped. They are widely used in certain contexts, such as mathematics.
• 13:4813:48, 15 April 2017 diff hist +257 Talk:Ideogram →Mathematics: Added brief mention and source.
• 13:4713:47, 15 April 2017 diff hist +420 Ideogram Mathematics and a reliable source too.
• 04:0704:07, 15 April 2017 diff hist +138 Talk:Ideogram →Mathematics: new section

14 April 2017

• 02:1902:19, 14 April 2017 diff hist −1 m Albrecht Dürer Taking out a comma.
• 01:0701:07, 14 April 2017 diff hist +6 Albrecht Dürer →Nuremberg and the masterworks (1507–1520): This assertion that Durer was in communication with other notable artists is interesting. Therefore, it needs a source.

13 April 2017

• 23:1023:10, 13 April 2017 diff hist −1 m Wood Taking out a comma.
• 23:0923:09, 13 April 2017 diff hist +3 m Wood Sentence copy editing, small.