User contributions for Bonni

9 December 2023

• 09:2909:29, 9 December 2023 diff hist +8 m Gisela Getty Sorry. Same thing as before. I just thought of an even clearer way to structure the sentence so all the information is there but the grammar is correct. Still a minor edit.
• 09:2609:26, 9 December 2023 diff hist −6 m Gisela Getty Just a fix for an incredibly awkward sentence.

2 December 2023

• 12:2312:23, 2 December 2023 diff hist −5 m Stefan Salvatore →Characterization: Fixed a really badly worded sentence

13 August 2023

• 13:1113:11, 13 August 2023 diff hist +1 m Death of Edgar Allan Poe →Cause of death: Just changed a misplaced period to a comma and changed the spelling of a word. Very minor.

20 July 2023

• 03:4103:41, 20 July 2023 diff hist −7 m Chicago Tylenol murders →Johnson & Johnson response: Minor sentence structure for better flow and clarity.

14 April 2023

• 13:3613:36, 14 April 2023 diff hist +15 m Dodge Correctional Institution Just added some nouns to go with the adjectives

12 November 2022

• 06:4406:44, 12 November 2022 diff hist +1 m Carl Williams (criminal) Corrected verb tense on one word

10 October 2021

• 09:1309:13, 10 October 2021 diff hist +64 User:Bonni No edit summary current
• 09:1009:10, 10 October 2021 diff hist +216 User:Bonni No edit summary

18 July 2021

• 15:0215:02, 18 July 2021 diff hist −5 m Micki & Maude Fixed awkward tense

22 July 2020

• 17:5817:58, 22 July 2020 diff hist −154 m User:Bonni ←Blanked the page Tag: Blanking

4 October 2017

• 21:0621:06, 4 October 2017 diff hist +11 m James Hart (vocalist) →Personal life: Slight changes to words and structure for readability and/or clarity.
• 17:1517:15, 4 October 2017 diff hist −76 User:Bonni No edit summary

12 March 2017

• 15:2915:29, 12 March 2017 diff hist +8 m Elizabeth Gaskell →Married life and writing career: Sentence seemed to be missing a word, impossible to parse. Fixed it so it makes sense.
• 15:0415:04, 12 March 2017 diff hist +1 m Elizabeth Gaskell →Early life: Just added a comma after a clause. No biggie, but makes for better reading.

25 July 2015

• 20:1520:15, 25 July 2015 diff hist +3 m Rancho San Vicente y Santa Mónica Added a comma and a single article. Comma was grammar fix. Article not strictly needed, but aids readability.

6 July 2015

• 14:3114:31, 6 July 2015 diff hist 0 m Terry Clark (drug smuggler) →Women: Minor grammatical fix

10 December 2012

• 02:2202:22, 10 December 2012 diff hist −8 m Christa Pike →Crime: Reworded a sentence for better clarity and ease of reading.

13 November 2011

• 03:3103:31, 13 November 2011 diff hist −1 m Melbourne Athenaeum "a library" is not an "activity" :) Minor change.

1 July 2011

• 15:1615:16, 1 July 2011 diff hist −1 m Tilly Devine →Criminal career: Fixed an incorrect apostrophe.

17 April 2011

• 05:5705:57, 17 April 2011 diff hist +16 m Roseanne Barr →"Incest survivor": Very minor grammar fixes and slightly style adjustment.

16 April 2011

• 20:1520:15, 16 April 2011 diff hist +7 m Roseanne Barr →Personal life: Another style edit for clarity. Minor.
• 20:1220:12, 16 April 2011 diff hist +13 m Roseanne Barr →Personal life: Minor style adjustments for clarity.
• 20:0920:09, 16 April 2011 diff hist −13 m Roseanne Barr →Personal life: Moved a couple of sentences around for better chronology. No information added or removed.
• 20:0520:05, 16 April 2011 diff hist +3 m Roseanne Barr →Personal life: Minor style edit. No information changed, added, or removed.

4 March 2011

• 06:0606:06, 4 March 2011 diff hist −35 m Bonsai Kitten →Controversy post-2000: Changed a couple of words (decried to declared, better sentiment) and slight sentence restructuring. Content otherwise unchanged.

24 January 2011

• 16:3216:32, 24 January 2011 diff hist −2 m August Diehl Very minor grammar/usage fix.
• 04:1804:18, 24 January 2011 diff hist +3 m Colin Firth →Personal life: Very minor change of a pronoun to a proper noun for clear identification.
• 04:0904:09, 24 January 2011 diff hist 0 m OpenLeaks Changed some words around so he's not a former German, but a former spokesman.

19 January 2011

• 05:3305:33, 19 January 2011 diff hist −4 m Mount Lubra bushfire Very minor grammar/syntax fix for better readability.
• 05:3105:31, 19 January 2011 diff hist +1 m Pomonal, Victoria →History: Very minor typo fix.

3 January 2011

• 06:3506:35, 3 January 2011 diff hist −1 m Nicole Richie →Relationships and family: Spelling correction

30 December 2010

• 04:2204:22, 30 December 2010 diff hist −5 m Queenscliff, Victoria →Transport: Removed one word to make the sentence make sense.

9 December 2010

• 12:5412:54, 9 December 2010 diff hist +2 m WikiLeaks →Support: Changed a pronoun to make the sentence make sense (i.e., PayPal is not a "he")
• 12:3112:31, 9 December 2010 diff hist −2 m PRQ →Criticism: Minor change to sentence structure to remove unnecessary redundancy

24 November 2010

• 21:5821:58, 24 November 2010 diff hist −5 m Weeds (TV series) Removed a grammatically incorrect and redundant "with"

31 October 2010

• 09:0609:06, 31 October 2010 diff hist +4 Jemima Goldsmith Minor change so it didn't sound like Jemima's parents had converted to Islam.

22 October 2010

• 16:2516:25, 22 October 2010 diff hist +3 m Conan the Destroyer →Plot: Minor change of pronoun to proper name for clarity

8 October 2010

• 01:2601:26, 8 October 2010 diff hist +2 m Australian magpie Separated a paragraph for clarity.

15 August 2010

• 06:0606:06, 15 August 2010 diff hist +3 m Crawford family murder →Inquest: Very slight altering of a sentence for better cadence. No change of information whatsoever.

14 August 2010

• 16:2216:22, 14 August 2010 diff hist +65 m Perfume (novel) →Characters (in order of appearance): Whoops, forgot to include the sentence I had in the buffer, as part of previous edit. Fixed now.
• 16:2116:21, 14 August 2010 diff hist −95 m Perfume (novel) →Characters (in order of appearance): Rearranged a sentence a bit for clarity. No information added or taken away.

9 August 2010

• 09:1809:18, 9 August 2010 diff hist −451 User talk:Bonni No edit summary

8 August 2010

• 19:2519:25, 8 August 2010 diff hist +3 m Amish →Youth, courting, and Rumspringa: Changed "biweekly" to "fortnightly", as "biweekly" implies "twice per week" and can't be correct in this sentence.
• 18:1118:11, 8 August 2010 diff hist −2 m Koo Stark Changed "subsequently" to "subsequent"

24 May 2010

• 09:4009:40, 24 May 2010 diff hist +2 Cynthia Lennon Changed to note that she is not John Lennon's "widow". They had been divorced for more than ten years when he died. She's his former wife, not his widow (that's Yoko Ono)

11 May 2010

• 15:5015:50, 11 May 2010 diff hist +4 m Wineville Chicken Coop murders →Christine and Walter Collins: Added an internal link to Folsom Prison

6 May 2010

• 15:1115:11, 6 May 2010 diff hist +1 m Christina Crawford →Career after mother's death: Minor preposition change. No information otherwise altered.

19 April 2010

• 12:0912:09, 19 April 2010 diff hist +37 m Carl Williams (criminal) Minor style changes for readability. No change in content whatsoever.

9 April 2010

• 09:4309:43, 9 April 2010 diff hist −2 m John G. Schmitz Fix for readability.