User contributions for Chris3145

30 June 2024

• 14:2214:22, 30 June 2024 diff hist 0 Bait-and-switch Undid revision 1231503683 by 41.210.147.230 (talk) Tag: Undo

3 June 2024

• 17:4217:42, 3 June 2024 diff hist −42 Keith Gill Cited source says $50 million, not $200 million. Tag: Reverted

18 September 2023

• 11:5211:52, 18 September 2023 diff hist −11 m Circlip Grammar, punctuation, and phrasing

22 May 2023

• 22:0222:02, 22 May 2023 diff hist −38 Feels (song) Do we need a citation explicitly saying that Feels bears a resemblance to Let's Groove when the songwriters of Let's Groove were later given credit as songwriters on Feels?

5 May 2023

• 17:0617:06, 5 May 2023 diff hist +1,084 Talk:Agile software development →First sentence is difficult to parse and not very informative: new section Tag: New topic

2 February 2023

• 15:5815:58, 2 February 2023 diff hist −4 m The Legend of Zelda: Tears of the Kingdom →Development: Removed some, extraneous, commas

12 December 2022

• 22:3222:32, 12 December 2022 diff hist +524 Talk:Smooth (Santana song) →Were the 12 weeks at number 1 consecutive or not?: new section Tag: New topic

27 October 2022

• 14:5314:53, 27 October 2022 diff hist +188 IPhone 13 Tagged a sentence that seems to have errors. I can't correct it because I'm not sure what it's trying to say.

10 March 2022

• 19:4519:45, 10 March 2022 diff hist −1 m Phosphoric acid Removed extraneous comma

3 June 2021

• 05:2505:25, 3 June 2021 diff hist −16 Emily VanCamp No need to list every alias of the character (and especially not ones that spoil plot twists)

22 May 2021

• 14:3914:39, 22 May 2021 diff hist +1 Skeuomorph Tweaked lead definition to better match cited source

20 March 2021

• 22:1322:13, 20 March 2021 diff hist −1 m AJ McLean →Television and film appearances: removed extraneous, comma

18 November 2020

• 23:5423:54, 18 November 2020 diff hist +447 Talk:Procedural drama →Non-crime series?: new section

17 October 2020

• 23:3623:36, 17 October 2020 diff hist −101 Chuck E. Cheese "Including" does not require an exhaustive list. Save the exhaustive list for the body, not the lead.

1 July 2020

• 20:2120:21, 1 July 2020 diff hist −1 Shuffling →Riffle: The citations say 6 shuffles, not 5.

21 April 2020

• 15:4515:45, 21 April 2020 diff hist −1 m Remote Desktop Protocol Removed extraneous comma

12 March 2020

• 16:2416:24, 12 March 2020 diff hist +426 User talk:Sbaio →2019–20 NBA season change
• 16:2216:22, 12 March 2020 diff hist 0 m 2019–20 NBA season →Retirement: Punctuation fix (non-vandalized version)
• 13:5713:57, 12 March 2020 diff hist +17 m User talk:Sbaio →NBA Change
• 13:5713:57, 12 March 2020 diff hist +336 User talk:Sbaio →NBA Change: new section
• 13:5413:54, 12 March 2020 diff hist 0 m 2019–20 NBA season →Retirement: Punctuation fix

6 October 2019

• 14:0014:00, 6 October 2019 diff hist −1 m Phil Jackson Removed extraneous comma

29 July 2019

• 16:3116:31, 29 July 2019 diff hist 0 m List of Formula One driver records farther to further link fix

15 July 2019

• 18:5018:50, 15 July 2019 diff hist −1 Xbox One →Xbox One X: People pronounce "UHD" as the three letters, right?

17 June 2019

• 00:1900:19, 17 June 2019 diff hist −1 m Kris Jenner Removed, random comm,a

26 April 2019

• 04:3104:31, 26 April 2019 diff hist −1 m John Avon Removed extraneous comma

15 April 2019

• 14:4214:42, 15 April 2019 diff hist +1,202 Talk:Adoption of the Gregorian calendar →There is no information on how the calendars are different, and very little information about why the change is meaningful: new section

27 February 2019

• 02:1102:11, 27 February 2019 diff hist −2 m Baba Yetu Removed some random commas

22 January 2019

• 17:1017:10, 22 January 2019 diff hist −2 m 2018–2019 United States federal government shutdown →Beginning of shutdown: Remove "th" from date
• 17:0917:09, 22 January 2019 diff hist −8 2018–2019 United States federal government shutdown →Beginning of shutdown: Clarified date. Also, the bill did not pass unanimously.

17 December 2018

• 04:5804:58, 17 December 2018 diff hist −2 m Theranos Grammar fix. Commas aren't like salt and pepper that you can sprinkle on anything just for variety. They actually change the meaning of sentences.

4 December 2018

• 14:5514:55, 4 December 2018 diff hist +18 Nier: Automata →Reception: The issue with 30 fps locks was only during cutscenes, which is an important qualifier.

16 March 2018

• 21:2421:24, 16 March 2018 diff hist +59 History of the Electronic Entertainment Expo →2009 (June 2–4): Added context to percentage.

19 July 2017

• 18:2818:28, 19 July 2017 diff hist −1 United States v. Causby →Background: Removed extraneous comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 May 2017

• 15:5915:59, 30 May 2017 diff hist −1 m Akinator Removed extra blank line
• 15:5815:58, 30 May 2017 diff hist −360 Akinator There are five possible answers for each question, not just two, so that number is wrong. The searching isn't perfect anyway.

17 February 2017

• 14:1314:13, 17 February 2017 diff hist +1 m Tony Hawk's Pro Skater Fixed missing space in developer notes

9 November 2016

• 20:4520:45, 9 November 2016 diff hist −57 Graham Hill Corrected definition for Triple Crown of Motorsport. This version also reads better.

11 October 2016

• 21:2021:20, 11 October 2016 diff hist −2 m Steve Urkel Removed incorrect commas from opening sentence.

4 August 2016

• 18:2718:27, 4 August 2016 diff hist +7 Biosphere 2 Made mission one challenges a subsection under mission one instead of its own top-level section

15 December 2015

• 23:5323:53, 15 December 2015 diff hist −7 The Truth About Pyecraft →Plot summary: Removed incorrect comparison of fatness to mass. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20 October 2015

• 13:1513:15, 20 October 2015 diff hist −4 Twin films Removed inappropriate bolding in lead paragraph. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 October 2015

• 18:4918:49, 19 October 2015 diff hist −1 m Niantic, Inc. grammar

10 April 2015

• 23:4323:43, 10 April 2015 diff hist +6 Essential tremor Grammar fix Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

4 February 2015

• 23:1023:10, 4 February 2015 diff hist −182 User:Chris3145 No edit summary current

23 January 2015

• 03:1503:15, 23 January 2015 diff hist 0 Starship Troopers The sentence about protagonists lauding the utility of corporal punishment for juvenile delinquents is way too specific for the lead in. I moved it to the "Allegations of Fascism" section where it seems to fit best.

6 November 2014

• 15:4615:46, 6 November 2014 diff hist −54 Graham Hill The generally accepted definition for the Triple Crown is three races, not two races and a series championship. Monaco is the Formula 1 race.

9 October 2014

• 20:4420:44, 9 October 2014 diff hist +146 FIA Super Licence 300 km in a Formula 1 car is only a requirement if the junior series conditions have not been met
• 15:3015:30, 9 October 2014 diff hist −1 m The Journeyman Project 2: Buried in Time →Releases and bug fixes: removed extraneous comma

7 October 2014

• 15:2315:23, 7 October 2014 diff hist −1 m Jules Bianchi Removed extraneous comma in first sentence.