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A user with 53 edits. Account created on 20 October 2022.
25 March 2024
- 20:3520:35, 25 March 2024 diff hist +58 m Immaculate (2024 film) →Critical response: fixed citation Tag: Visual edit
- 20:3220:32, 25 March 2024 diff hist +492 Immaculate (2024 film) →Critical response: Added review from The New York Times Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2920:29, 25 March 2024 diff hist −37 m Immaculate (2024 film) →Plot: fixed typos and deleted unfinished clauses Tag: Visual edit
12 October 2023
- 02:3302:33, 12 October 2023 diff hist +271 m Alphonso David →President and CEO of the Global Black Economic Forum: added citation for Fearless Fund. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:3002:30, 12 October 2023 diff hist +3,850 Alphonso David Added subsection "President and CEO of the Global Black Economic Forum" to cover newsworthy headlines from the last 16 months. Tag: Visual edit
27 September 2023
- 13:5113:51, 27 September 2023 diff hist +122 N User:ConsideringLobsters created page current Tag: Visual edit
- 13:4913:49, 27 September 2023 diff hist −245 Georgia Rickard Copy and tone edits throughout. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
15 March 2023
- 17:0717:07, 15 March 2023 diff hist +806 Alphonso David Added news about settlement with HRC (as reported by Washington Post) Tag: Visual edit
28 February 2023
- 06:0106:01, 28 February 2023 diff hist +45 User talk:Trialpears →Question from ConsideringLobsters (06:00, 28 February 2023)
- 06:0006:00, 28 February 2023 diff hist +997 User talk:Trialpears →Question from ConsideringLobsters (06:00, 28 February 2023): new section Tag: Mentorship module question
21 February 2023
- 15:0115:01, 21 February 2023 diff hist +430 Alphonso David →Awards and honors: Added just-announced award from Crain's New York Business Tag: Visual edit
6 February 2023
- 23:3823:38, 6 February 2023 diff hist −203 Kent Karosen Confirmed and cited date of birth, built separate sections for "career" and "personal life," reordered biography so it is more chronological and reduced redundancy, removed opinion phrases, and switched out first-name references to surname. Tags: Visual edit: Switched Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 23:1923:19, 6 February 2023 diff hist +586 Kent Karosen Built infobox and added birth-death dates in the first sentence Tags: Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 22:5922:59, 6 February 2023 diff hist −80 Jim Blasingame Put UNA award in "awards and recognition" section instead of in intro. Removed "futurist" from photo caption given that term doesn't appear anywhere else on the page. Other minor grammar edits. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
10 November 2022
- 19:1719:17, 10 November 2022 diff hist −183 Sushi →Nigirizushi: Clarified that hands are typically used (still nigirizushi if made by machine), and removed objectionable sentence about number of pieces in an order (which varies widely by geography, restaurant, and neta, so is therefore immaterial to delve into those intricacies) Tag: Visual edit
- 19:0219:02, 10 November 2022 diff hist −66 Alphonso David Changed infobox from "official" to "person" to match the style of the other former HRC heads (eg Chad Griffin) and since this is a private organization not an "official" or governmental role. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
- 18:5418:54, 10 November 2022 diff hist +208 Dragon Ball Xenoverse 2 →Downloadable content: Corrected miscount of DLC packs, and added latest pack (still same Steam source for the full list) Tag: Visual edit
- 18:4318:43, 10 November 2022 diff hist +1,017 Initiative 82 Added "Ballot initiative text" section, made a few small grammar tweaks for clarity, and added detail about all DC wards voting in favor (per same source as already cited) Tag: Visual edit
- 18:2518:25, 10 November 2022 diff hist +19 m Initiative 82 Added punctuation and clarified Initiative 77 sentence in top section.
- 01:5301:53, 10 November 2022 diff hist +33 m Dragon Ball Xenoverse 2 Clarified hub geography in "Gameplay" section, made minor grammar changes in same section. Tag: Visual edit
27 October 2022
- 16:4416:44, 27 October 2022 diff hist −73 Bittomo × Heroine Kirameki Powers! Removed a redundant sentence and changed from future to past tense. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
24 October 2022
- 19:3019:30, 24 October 2022 diff hist −26 The Three-Body Problem (novel) removed some redundant details in Background, and clarified that the book covers both a fictional future as well as alternative history Tag: Visual edit
- 19:0219:02, 24 October 2022 diff hist +200 Sushi →Chirashizushi: clarified nature of its popularity and added a citation to that effect. Also tweaked a "usually" into an "often" for the number of pieces in a maki order -- four is relatively common at high-end restaurants. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:5118:51, 24 October 2022 diff hist +5 Yanagi ba clarified that a yanagi is used to slice fish (as opposed to any and all sushi neta/toppings) Tag: Visual edit
- 18:4118:41, 24 October 2022 diff hist +7 Del Puerto Canyon fixed typos and corrected formatting Tag: Visual edit
- 18:3918:39, 24 October 2022 diff hist +1,893 Alphonso David added a sentence about his lawsuit into the top section because that was national news covered by several major news organizations (added three more citations to demonstrate that notability). Also added about a subsequent job, which seems notable given that he is being quoted again by national media (see Essence citation) Tag: Visual edit
- 18:1618:16, 24 October 2022 diff hist +32 Brooklyn Community Board 2 deleted extra spaces and made small changes for clarity current Tag: Visual edit
21 October 2022
- 22:1722:17, 21 October 2022 diff hist −85 Manhattan (soundtrack) →Background: removed opinion (which was also unnecessary given subsequent, cited, sentence) Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 22:0922:09, 21 October 2022 diff hist +268 Pittsburgh Penguins Foundation →HEADS UP Pittsburgh: updated number of baseline tests, noted when that figure was last confirmed, and added citation Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 22:0222:02, 21 October 2022 diff hist +4 m Crane Melon →Characteristics: small grammar fix for clarity Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 22:0022:00, 21 October 2022 diff hist +40 Avishai David Spelled out acronyms for clarity Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 21:5321:53, 21 October 2022 diff hist 0 St. Bartholomew's Anglican Church (Toronto) →Parish outreach programmes: Fixed formatting of bullet-pointed list. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
20 October 2022
- 20:1220:12, 20 October 2022 diff hist −25 Sanford Lake Made some changes to tense given change to lake's status, but this entry requires significant citation assistance to back up claims (e.g. water quality was "great") Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 20:0220:02, 20 October 2022 diff hist 0 Serpent Crown clarified fictionality and cleaned up some language for tone Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 19:4719:47, 20 October 2022 diff hist +10 Horton the Elephant No edit summary
- 19:4419:44, 20 October 2022 diff hist −357 Horton the Elephant Clarified the characterization is from works of fiction, removed extraneous detail from opening paragraph, and removed opinion about the cause of the character's popularity Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 19:3819:38, 20 October 2022 diff hist +24 m Shuttle (video game) Cleaned up some of the language in first two paragraphs to correct tone. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit