User contributions for Dstlascaux

6 September 2017

• 07:1907:19, 6 September 2017 diff hist −35 m Unconditional love →Buddhism: Clearer, with minor sense corrections.

18 August 2017

• 05:4805:48, 18 August 2017 diff hist +52 Talk:Steven Mnuchin →To editor marquardtika
• 05:4105:41, 18 August 2017 diff hist +1,006 Talk:Steven Mnuchin Discussion to avoid edit war.
• 04:5204:52, 18 August 2017 diff hist +1,223 Steven Mnuchin Undid revision 796045823 by Marquardtika (talk) You are a pr flak for Mnuchin and should be exposed by Wikipedia as such.
• 04:3904:39, 18 August 2017 diff hist +1 John Ehrlichman →Political life: that comma is absolutely necessary, since Nixon fired Dean but not E&H. As it happened, he asked Ehrlichman and Haldeman to resign, and they did.
• 03:3503:35, 18 August 2017 diff hist +1,223 Steven Mnuchin →Secretary of the Treasury

14 February 2017

• 00:1600:16, 14 February 2017 diff hist 0 m Ralph Ginzburg →Avant Garde: Carnase's name was misspelled.

4 January 2017

• 06:5206:52, 4 January 2017 diff hist −1 m Jackson State killings and group is singular...
• 06:5106:51, 4 January 2017 diff hist +12 m Jackson State killings Group not specific; group of students would seem to be accurate.

14 November 2016

• 08:3008:30, 14 November 2016 diff hist 0 m Western use of the swastika in the early 20th century →Use in popular culture: modern punctuation
• 06:4506:45, 14 November 2016 diff hist −307 Monroe Doctrine The designation of the United States was all over the map in this entry. While quotations should maintain their language, either U.S. or US should be consistently applied. I went with U.S.
• 06:2306:23, 14 November 2016 diff hist −60 m Monroe Doctrine →Background: Once the United States has been defined, as above, the U.S. is proper following. The US of A is entirely too formal.
• 06:1306:13, 14 November 2016 diff hist −1 m Claude glass Modern punctuation. Note that i've added "Claude glass" to the Claude Lorrain biography page.
• 06:1006:10, 14 November 2016 diff hist +1,252 Claude Lorrain A fascinating, relevant postscript.

24 October 2016

• 18:2018:20, 24 October 2016 diff hist +66 m Introduction to the Enemy →Reception and legacy: BAM showing

12 October 2016

• 14:4214:42, 12 October 2016 diff hist +25 m Hans Paasche Translation of title of first book

15 July 2016

• 01:5401:54, 15 July 2016 diff hist 0 That Obscure Object of Desire →History
• 01:4801:48, 15 July 2016 diff hist +707 That Obscure Object of Desire The history of That Obscure Object is informative.

16 February 2016

• 03:4303:43, 16 February 2016 diff hist +1 m Richard Helms →Domestic Chaos: correct spelling of rationale

12 February 2016

• 03:5303:53, 12 February 2016 diff hist 0 m Daniel Handler →Controversy: italics
• 03:5103:51, 12 February 2016 diff hist +47 Daniel Handler →Controversy: Mr Hander is invited to provide another adjective, if "dismissive" wasn't his intent.
• 03:4503:45, 12 February 2016 diff hist +732 Daniel Handler →Controversy: Mr Handler should've been called on this by now.

23 July 2015

• 22:5422:54, 23 July 2015 diff hist +10 m Vue de toits (Effet de neige) Note that "Effect de neige" in article title should be italicized.
• 22:5222:52, 23 July 2015 diff hist 0 m Vue de toits (Effet de neige) no cap; why not
• 22:5122:51, 23 July 2015 diff hist +10 m Vue de toits (Effet de neige) Two words left out in translation

3 June 2015

• 03:3803:38, 3 June 2015 diff hist 0 m Thomas Edison →Marriages and children: who not and per previous entry and sense.

22 May 2015

• 04:1104:11, 22 May 2015 diff hist −1 m Colin Channer →Early life: no period after 1
• 04:0904:09, 22 May 2015 diff hist +148 m Colin Channer →Additional ventures: The reference article
• 04:0504:05, 22 May 2015 diff hist +41 m Colin Channer →Additional ventures: As written, this autobiography implies that Eziba still is.
• 00:2600:26, 22 May 2015 diff hist −3 m Terry Pratchett A difficult sentence since he's dead, and because, as more books are sold, this number will need to be changed. Could be, "Pratchett, having sold..." But "has" is not correct.

30 January 2015

• 15:5615:56, 30 January 2015 diff hist +8 m Free education →List of countries with free post-secondary education: I'm pretty sure that Australia provides free post-secondary, so I didn't get far in this list before saying WTF. "Partial" is needed.

14 October 2014

• 15:0915:09, 14 October 2014 diff hist +52 m Zoltán Kodály →Life: Key biographical concept which should stand alone
• 15:0615:06, 14 October 2014 diff hist +12 m Zoltán Kodály →Life: Or else doesn't belong in the entry.
• 15:0215:02, 14 October 2014 diff hist +12 m Close Encounters of the Third Kind →Post-production: "right" is a highly subjective interpretation/characterization. Right for Spielberg, bien sûr.

6 October 2014

• 11:3311:33, 6 October 2014 diff hist −5 m German submarine U-654 →Fate: The Caribbean is not the North Atlantic.
• 11:2711:27, 6 October 2014 diff hist 0 m Garden City, New York →History: Turnley is a typo; in any event, Turney is Stewart's middle name and thus inappropriate.

29 August 2014

• 19:4719:47, 29 August 2014 diff hist −29 m Johnnetta Cole →Background: You can't insult someone by saying that their parents are unknown. Fill in the data when you have it; in the meantime, leave it blank.

26 August 2014

• 22:5222:52, 26 August 2014 diff hist +1 War Is a Racket →Recommendations: missing period

19 August 2014

• 13:5613:56, 19 August 2014 diff hist −111 m Jason Box →Early life: Although I understand that this is a self-written biography, details like this diminish your (Jason's) aspired-to climatological gravitas.It's critical that humanity take you (Jason) seriously.

17 August 2014

• 18:0918:09, 17 August 2014 diff hist −1 m Virú culture →Huaca Santa Clara: You mean dominant; extra period.
• 17:0817:08, 17 August 2014 diff hist −9 m Lady Pansy Lamb →Rome: However may be a charming Britishism. However it is inappropriate and unnecessary in an encyclopedia.

12 August 2014

• 16:1516:15, 12 August 2014 diff hist −14 m Itek →Through the 1970s: unfinished sentence. Not ok as is, but at least a complete sentence....
• 15:5615:56, 12 August 2014 diff hist −22 m Sidney Hook →Later years: unencyclopedic and unamplifying amplification.
• 14:4014:40, 12 August 2014 diff hist +113 m John Dewey →Social and political activism: amplification about the CCF
• 14:1914:19, 12 August 2014 diff hist +4 m Native advertising →Platforms: a wikipedia page
• 14:1814:18, 12 August 2014 diff hist +20 m Native advertising →Platforms: RTB is not a universally-known acronym and needs to be expanded.

4 August 2014

• 14:3814:38, 4 August 2014 diff hist +4 m Microsoft PowerPoint →Criticism: Nass has a Wikipedia page
• 14:3714:37, 4 August 2014 diff hist 0 m Microsoft PowerPoint →Criticism: Nass died in 2013

2 August 2014

• 02:1002:10, 2 August 2014 diff hist −1 m Cruise of the Zaca →Deep Sea Fishing: a marlin is a fish. a marling is a typo.

24 June 2014

• 22:3122:31, 24 June 2014 diff hist −22 m D. M. Bennett →Obscenity Prosecution: its title provides the clarification specified.