User contributions for Editor1205

17 October 2024

• 04:1704:17, 17 October 2024 diff hist −4 m Spectre (2015 film) fixed some syntactical errors in one sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit App section source

25 May 2024

• 22:1922:19, 25 May 2024 diff hist −7 Voyage of the James Caird removed redundant word in the introduction

4 May 2024

• 18:2018:20, 4 May 2024 diff hist −46 Titanic removed awkward sentence in intro and moved the name of the ship's line a few sentences later

28 January 2024

• 22:0222:02, 28 January 2024 diff hist −1 m Unrestricted submarine warfare removed misplaced apostrophe

11 January 2024

• 03:2103:21, 11 January 2024 diff hist −11 Titanic removed unnecessary editorial adjective in introduction

9 January 2024

• 18:5018:50, 9 January 2024 diff hist −1 m Health effects of tobacco removed misplaced comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

8 January 2024

• 17:2817:28, 8 January 2024 diff hist +1 m Alaska Airlines Flight 1282 added missing apostrophe Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

27 December 2023

• 09:1009:10, 27 December 2023 diff hist −1 m The Thing (1982 film) removed misplaced comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

15 December 2023

• 04:0204:02, 15 December 2023 diff hist −1 m Alexander the Great removed misplaced comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

4 December 2023

• 21:3221:32, 4 December 2023 diff hist 0 m Saltburn (film) replaced comma with period Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

15 October 2023

• 22:2822:28, 15 October 2023 diff hist −57 Sinking of the RMS Lusitania cleaned up syntactically incorrect sentence and removed ambiguous sentence at the end of the intro

4 October 2023

• 19:0719:07, 4 October 2023 diff hist +1 m James Paul Moody →RMS Titanic: added paragraph break

22 September 2023

• 23:0823:08, 22 September 2023 diff hist −77 m The Other Woman (Mad Men) →Plot: fixed an error I made in previous edit
• 23:0723:07, 22 September 2023 diff hist −266 The Other Woman (Mad Men) →Plot: removed unnecessary details and cleaned up a few wordy/run-on sentences

6 September 2023

• 23:5523:55, 6 September 2023 diff hist −14 Titanic changed sentence in introductory paragraph to include more relevant information and remove a more minor detail Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

24 June 2023

• 21:0921:09, 24 June 2023 diff hist −2 m Sinking of the Titanic →Iceberg warnings: fixed misplaced possessive Tag: Reverted

23 May 2023

• 00:3300:33, 23 May 2023 diff hist −1 m Air India Express Flight 812 removed extraneous comma

8 May 2023

• 05:0105:01, 8 May 2023 diff hist −71 Tomorrowland (Mad Men) cleaned up wordy section and removed extraneous comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

4 May 2023

• 17:4317:43, 4 May 2023 diff hist 0 Industry (TV series) →Series 1 (2020): corrected misleading plot detail

25 April 2023

• 22:4822:48, 25 April 2023 diff hist +1 m The Other Woman (Mad Men) →Plot: fixed run-on sentence
• 22:4822:48, 25 April 2023 diff hist −11 The Other Woman (Mad Men) →Plot: replaced overly specific descriptor (this ad is not referenced before in the summary or the script and shouldn't be referred to this way)
• 22:4622:46, 25 April 2023 diff hist −2 The Other Woman (Mad Men) →Plot: clarified plot point
• 22:4522:45, 25 April 2023 diff hist −1 m Paris Peace Conference (1919–1920) →American approach: removed extraneous comma

1 April 2023

• 07:2307:23, 1 April 2023 diff hist −244 William McMaster Murdoch →Titanic: removed sentence; source did not verify the statement and was likely misunderstood by the editor who wrote it

27 March 2023

• 20:2420:24, 27 March 2023 diff hist 0 m Lifeboats of the Titanic →Collapsible Engelhardt Lifeboat D (port): fixed run-on sentence
• 19:1419:14, 27 March 2023 diff hist +1 m Lifeboats of the Titanic →Lifeboat 14 (port): added missing comma
• 19:1419:14, 27 March 2023 diff hist −1 m Lifeboats of the Titanic →Lifeboat 14 (port): removed erroneously placed parenthese
• 19:1219:12, 27 March 2023 diff hist −1 m Lifeboats of the Titanic →Lifeboat 14 (port): syntactical correction
• 18:3618:36, 27 March 2023 diff hist −1 m The Munsters (Succession) →Plot: spelling and grammatical fix
• 18:3618:36, 27 March 2023 diff hist +3 The Munsters (Succession) →Plot: syntactical fixes and changing minor inaccurate details

12 March 2023

• 23:0223:02, 12 March 2023 diff hist −20 Christmas Comes But Once a Year (Mad Men) removed extraneous adjective and fixed syntax Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

11 February 2023

• 07:3907:39, 11 February 2023 diff hist −6 1986 United States bombing of Libya updated phrase to more encyclopedic tone Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

26 January 2023

• 00:0600:06, 26 January 2023 diff hist +3 Boeing 747 corrected run-on sentence

19 January 2023

• 07:0507:05, 19 January 2023 diff hist +4 Atlanta (TV series) added missing verb Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 00:2700:27, 19 January 2023 diff hist −5 World Chess Championship 2021 removed extraneous word Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

19 December 2022

• 06:0506:05, 19 December 2022 diff hist −1 m Golden Gate Bridge removed extraneous comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

14 November 2022

• 05:1805:18, 14 November 2022 diff hist −1 m Velociraptor fixed grammatical error

23 October 2022

• 21:2321:23, 23 October 2022 diff hist −10 Li Qiang fixed sentence with several grammatical errors Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

20 October 2022

• 16:2916:29, 20 October 2022 diff hist +5 Leader of the Conservative Party (UK) fixed run-on sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

11 October 2022

• 20:3120:31, 11 October 2022 diff hist +23 The Crash (Mad Men) →Plot: made clarifying edits and grammatical fixes
• 15:4415:44, 11 October 2022 diff hist −34 The Crash (Mad Men) →Plot: removed irrelevant detail
• 06:1006:10, 11 October 2022 diff hist −121 The Crash (Mad Men) →Plot: reworded some unclear sentences in plot summary and moved incorrectly placed commas
• 05:5105:51, 11 October 2022 diff hist −68 The Crash (Mad Men) reworded awkward sentence

7 October 2022

• 04:3804:38, 7 October 2022 diff hist +1 m John Tillmann →Early life and political involvement: fixed run-on
• 04:3704:37, 7 October 2022 diff hist −2 m John Tillmann →Early life and political involvement: fixed oddly formatted detail
• 04:3404:34, 7 October 2022 diff hist −8 m John Tillmann No edit summary

5 October 2022

• 17:2117:21, 5 October 2022 diff hist +3 Benign prostatic hyperplasia →Imaging and other investigations: changed word to more encyclopedic synonym
• 05:3105:31, 5 October 2022 diff hist −4 Gabriel García Márquez →Declining health: remove dead link

28 September 2022

• 03:2703:27, 28 September 2022 diff hist −5 m Killing Them Softly removed extra word Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

27 September 2022

• 23:5323:53, 27 September 2022 diff hist 0 George B. McClellan →Legacy: replaced qualifying verb with more encyclopedic tone