User contributions for FBachofner

13 June 2023

• 19:2719:27, 13 June 2023 diff hist +2 m Gaston Hall →Architecture: changed "with" to "within" to clarify painter Schroen's scope of work

7 May 2020

• 22:0422:04, 7 May 2020 diff hist +71 Delta, Colorado updated list of elected City Council Members; source: https://cityofdelta.net/citycouncil/page/council-members and https://www.deltacountyindependent.com/free_access/see-the-results-of-the-2020-municipal-elections/article_9dfd9892-793d-11ea-89a9-371a6f350093.html

12 March 2020

• 21:2321:23, 12 March 2020 diff hist −5 m Santa Rosa Island (California) →Archaeology: removed 2nd mention of Phil Orr's name within the section to match common structure and improve readability

13 November 2018

• 17:3617:36, 13 November 2018 diff hist +5 m Norman Maclean →University of Chicago: the word "with" may cause readers to incorrectly infer Stephens and McClean were both students in the same class. "Taught by" makes this sentence absolutely unambiguous.

16 October 2018

• 17:0617:06, 16 October 2018 diff hist −2 m Hodgkin lymphoma →Notable cases: Paul Allen -- changed "passed" to "died" to mirror the other citations

23 August 2018

• 23:2923:29, 23 August 2018 diff hist −2 m Widevine →Usage: subjective pronoun required, therefore "who" NOT "whom" !!

12 March 2018

• 21:2521:25, 12 March 2018 diff hist +1 Walter Reed Army Medical Center →2007 neglect scandal: without added comma, it reads as if George Bush had appointed Dick Cheney as V.P.
• 21:2021:20, 12 March 2018 diff hist −41 Walter Reed →Legacy: removed sentence fragment: "El Obelisco, Finlay's memorial in Havana" which does not seem to reference or relate to any other part of the article

9 March 2018

• 08:3708:37, 9 March 2018 diff hist +2 m Felix Platter some minor grammatical corrections (verb tense, for example), punctuation, etc.

12 November 2017

• 21:1521:15, 12 November 2017 diff hist +33 m Jack H. Harris added Anthony Harris to children in infobox

25 August 2017

• 23:3623:36, 25 August 2017 diff hist +271 Talk:The Cisco Kid (1994 film) →removing multiple issues "hat": new section
• 23:3023:30, 25 August 2017 diff hist +482 The Cisco Kid (1994 film) linked to Luis Valdez, remove link to incorrect Michael Kane citation; add quote and citation from Variety; update IMDB score

14 March 2017

• 02:1902:19, 14 March 2017 diff hist +1 Kamala Devi (actress) corrected birth year to correspond with source (and Infobox)

25 February 2017

• 22:0922:09, 25 February 2017 diff hist −4 m Ozzie Nelson →Death: grammatical correction

6 November 2016

• 20:4120:41, 6 November 2016 diff hist +311 Lyrion Music Server added information regarding ongoing open source development effort
• 20:2820:28, 6 November 2016 diff hist +16 Lyrion Music Server →External links: improved LMS download link formatting and explanation
• 20:2320:23, 6 November 2016 diff hist +27 Lyrion Music Server →External links
• 20:2220:22, 6 November 2016 diff hist +78 Lyrion Music Server →External links: added SlimDevices downloads link

23 October 2016

• 03:1703:17, 23 October 2016 diff hist +32 Walter Alvarez →Impact theory: updated K-T boundary to K-Pg boundary, the currently accepted term
• 02:5502:55, 23 October 2016 diff hist +2 Luis Walter Alvarez →Dinosaur extinction: corrected "K-T boundary" to "K-Pg boundary," the currently accepted term

22 October 2016

• 22:1322:13, 22 October 2016 diff hist +10 Margaret of Hungary separated out information regarding Margaret's death -- not appropriate to place in 3rd marriage

6 October 2016

• 22:4022:40, 6 October 2016 diff hist +121 Jeroen Krabbé corrected year of birth -- correct year is 1944

5 October 2016

• 21:0121:01, 5 October 2016 diff hist 0 D Line Extension changed infobox from open= to planopen= as this line is not yet open

29 August 2016

• 16:4416:44, 29 August 2016 diff hist 0 MODX updated current version to 2.5.1
• 16:2716:27, 29 August 2016 diff hist 0 m List of content management systems →PHP: updated MODX -> 2.5.1

16 May 2016

• 04:0504:05, 16 May 2016 diff hist −5 Brescia →Healthcare: improved English grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

8 May 2016

• 18:5118:51, 8 May 2016 diff hist −10 m Presidential Service Badge →Presidential Service Center: grammatical clean up

4 April 2016

• 01:3901:39, 4 April 2016 diff hist +12 Notting Hill (film) →Plot: clarify "copy" is a poster and grammatical corections

3 April 2016

• 23:4223:42, 3 April 2016 diff hist −3 m Emma Freud →Other work: edited to correct grammar

19 March 2016

• 23:0023:00, 19 March 2016 diff hist +318 Bolas →In popular culture: added reference to use of bolas in Romancing the Stone (1984 film)

9 December 2015

• 18:5718:57, 9 December 2015 diff hist −4 m Fredrik Fasting Torgersen grammatical correction to reflect death in 2015

4 November 2015

• 06:3006:30, 4 November 2015 diff hist −1 m Mystic Manor corrected spelling error: attraction

7 October 2015

• 15:2315:23, 7 October 2015 diff hist +125 The Private Lives of Pippa Lee →Critical response: changed multiple long (5+ line) quotes to <blockquote> to improve readability and follow accepted quoting standards

18 August 2015

• 23:5623:56, 18 August 2015 diff hist +4 Ross, California updated Town Manager: Joseph J. Chinn (appointment effective August 1, 2015)

28 June 2015

• 00:4700:47, 28 June 2015 diff hist 0 m United Arab Emirates Space Agency spelling correction "decree" not "degree"

12 June 2015

• 20:1920:19, 12 June 2015 diff hist −2 m Joe Oriolo →Career: verb tense and punctuation fixes

10 December 2014

• 20:0520:05, 10 December 2014 diff hist +24 Woodside, California →Film and television: previous version linked to The Bicentennial Man (novelette)

30 March 2014

• 18:4918:49, 30 March 2014 diff hist +1,011 Golden State Theatre →Current Status: prospective change of ownership
• 18:2018:20, 30 March 2014 diff hist +31 m Golden State Theatre →Restoration Efforts: grammatical clarification of STPG organizational structure

9 February 2014

• 02:2202:22, 9 February 2014 diff hist +33 Google data centers →Original hardware: spelling correction and link to History of Google re: Backrub

4 January 2014

• 11:3711:37, 4 January 2014 diff hist 0 m A Letter for Evie →Plot: corrected 3 spelling errors

30 December 2013

• 09:3809:38, 30 December 2013 diff hist +8 Oberlin Conservatory of Music →Facilities: clarified ambiguous reference to Bibbins Hall

30 November 2013

• 00:0900:09, 30 November 2013 diff hist +99 State Theatre →United States: added Monterey's Golden State Theatre

13 November 2013

• 05:0505:05, 13 November 2013 diff hist +116 Beverly Hills, California →Government: see also cleanup; grammar and contextual cleanup; add correct references to Vice Mayor and City Manager
• 04:4604:46, 13 November 2013 diff hist +193 Beverly Hills, California infobox --> further cleanup, added government type, and added City of BH website reference to Jeff Kolin
• 04:3104:31, 13 November 2013 diff hist +78 Beverly Hills, California infobox --> corrected reference to City Manager Jeff Kolin

10 November 2013

• 23:0923:09, 10 November 2013 diff hist +5 Compton, California →City government: updated reference to current City Manager
• 23:0723:07, 10 November 2013 diff hist +90 Compton, California added City Manager, corrected reference to City Attorney

8 November 2013

• 20:1020:10, 8 November 2013 diff hist +2 Sedum →Ecology: corrected reference and link to Sedum spathulifolium

30 October 2013

• 03:4203:42, 30 October 2013 diff hist +537 Rick Cole added new job as Deputy Mayor in Los Angeles, established references, added see also, improved external links