User contributions for Freakychakra987

8 October 2024

• 22:5022:50, 8 October 2024 diff hist −143 Santa Susana Field Laboratory →Sodium reactor experiment: The previous text included several sentences copied directly, without quotation, from the source reference. Changed these sentences to paraphrase. Removed the word "independent," as two of the experts were affiliated with interested parties (DOE and NRDC). Edited the statement about the experts' conclusions to clarify what they agreed on, and where their views differed. Finally, the DOE website source has gone dead, so updated the reference to an act archive link. Tag: Visual edit

24 September 2024

• 22:5822:58, 24 September 2024 diff hist −1,157 Santa Susana Field Laboratory The "analysis" this entire paragraph is based on are two self-published documents written by a Boeing contractor Tag: Visual edit

11 September 2024

• 19:1719:17, 11 September 2024 diff hist +307 Santa Susana Field Laboratory →2007 Consent Order for Corrective Action: Added information about the timeline established by the 2007 Consent Order. Tag: Visual edit

19 August 2024

• 23:4723:47, 19 August 2024 diff hist +748 Santa Susana Field Laboratory →2022 DTSC-Boeing Settlement Agreement: added information about community criticism of Settlement Agreement, as reported in the local press Tag: Visual edit
• 23:3423:34, 19 August 2024 diff hist −74 Santa Susana Field Laboratory →2002 CBG Sues CDHS: deleting this vague editorial speculation that adds nothing factually or substantively Tag: Visual edit
• 23:2223:22, 19 August 2024 diff hist +266 Talk:Santa Susana Field Laboratory →All my July 10 edits reverted: Reply current Tag: Reply

12 July 2024

• 03:3203:32, 12 July 2024 diff hist +1,314 Talk:Santa Susana Field Laboratory →All my July 10 edits reverted: Reply Tag: Reply
• 03:2203:22, 12 July 2024 diff hist +1,175 Talk:Santa Susana Field Laboratory →All my July 10 edits reverted: Reply Tag: Reply

11 July 2024

• 16:5516:55, 11 July 2024 diff hist +2,234 Talk:Santa Susana Field Laboratory →All my July 10 edits reverted: new section Tag: New topic
• 00:2000:20, 11 July 2024 diff hist +712 User talk:FlightTime →A message from Freakychakra987: Reply Tags: Reverted Reply
• 00:1400:14, 11 July 2024 diff hist +980 User talk:Freakychakra987 →July 2024: Reply current Tag: Reply
• 00:0600:06, 11 July 2024 diff hist +2,139 User talk:FlightTime →A message from {{subst:currentuser}}: new section Tag: Reverted

10 July 2024

• 23:4423:44, 10 July 2024 diff hist −1,150 Sodium Reactor Experiment Entire paragraph is based on references to self-published reports by an author with an SSFL conflict of interest. Deleted per WP:SPS and WP:IS Tag: Visual edit
• 23:4323:43, 10 July 2024 diff hist +147 Sodium Reactor Experiment Replaced dead link with archived link. Clarified that the experts were not all "independent," as Pickard worked for DOE. Tag: Visual edit
• 23:3923:39, 10 July 2024 diff hist +12 Sodium Reactor Experiment Corrected spelling of Beyea's name, and included relevant modifier from his quote in the article. Tag: Visual edit
• 23:3623:36, 10 July 2024 diff hist −143 Sodium Reactor Experiment Reference does not support claim that it summarizes internal company memoranda. Tag: Visual edit
• 23:3523:35, 10 July 2024 diff hist +679 Sodium Reactor Experiment Added other expert opinion to balance assertions from Boeing document Tag: Visual edit
• 22:5722:57, 10 July 2024 diff hist +19 Sodium Reactor Experiment Replaced dead link with archived link. Removed word "controlled" as reference does not confirm the release was controlled. Tag: Visual edit
• 22:5022:50, 10 July 2024 diff hist +521 Santa Susana Field Laboratory →2022 DTSC-Boeing Settlement Agreement: Added additional information and citation about community response. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 22:4122:41, 10 July 2024 diff hist −365 Santa Susana Field Laboratory Added relevant information about study funding, and swapped longer quote for shorter summary of study findings. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 22:3622:36, 10 July 2024 diff hist +234 Santa Susana Field Laboratory Edited to more accurately reflect the study's conclusions. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 22:2322:23, 10 July 2024 diff hist −259 Santa Susana Field Laboratory Deleted reference to non-independent source, per WP:IS Tags: Reverted references removed Visual edit
• 22:1922:19, 10 July 2024 diff hist −357 Santa Susana Field Laboratory Deleted duplicative reference. The full study is available, with additional contextual information, at the first reference. Tags: Reverted references removed Visual edit
• 21:3321:33, 10 July 2024 diff hist −1,157 Santa Susana Field Laboratory Entire paragraph is based on references to self-published reports by an author with an SSFL conflict of interest. Deleted per WP:SPS and WP:IS Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 19:2819:28, 10 July 2024 diff hist +6 m Santa Susana Field Laboratory →Sodium reactor experiment: Added acronym for Department of Energy. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 19:2719:27, 10 July 2024 diff hist +50 Santa Susana Field Laboratory →Sodium reactor experiment: Replaced dead link with archived link. Clarified that the experts were not all "independent," as Pickard worked for DOE. Re-wrote summary of expert opinion to more accurately reflect the source referenced. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 18:4518:45, 10 July 2024 diff hist +949 Santa Susana Field Laboratory Added references to studies showing cancer cases at rates higher than normal. Added "renewed" to indicate that public interest existed before 2018. Edited last sentence to more accurately reflect the reference. Tags: Reverted Visual edit: Switched