User contributions for JJP29

9 March 2014

• 15:4815:48, 9 March 2014 diff hist 0 m Levant Fair →History: Capitalized name: from "lion Elhanani" to "Lion Elhanani."
• 15:3415:34, 9 March 2014 diff hist −15 m Levant Fair →History: Avoided awkward sentence structure and unnecessary words: from "the fair was given the name 'Jubilee Fair' – marking Tel Aviv's 20 years" to "named 'Jubilee Fair' to mark Tel Aviv's 20-year anniversary."
• 15:2815:28, 9 March 2014 diff hist −1 m Levant Fair →History: Eliminated an unnecessary comma: from "degradation, and featured" to "degradation and featured."
• 15:2415:24, 9 March 2014 diff hist −1 m Levant Fair →History: Removed an unnecessary comma: from "come, and improved" to "come and improved."
• 15:1315:13, 9 March 2014 diff hist +2 m Levant Fair →History: Added a comma pair for clarity: from "exhibition in April 1924 was" to "exhibition, in April 1924, was."
• 15:1115:11, 9 March 2014 diff hist −11 m Levant Fair Eliminated a redundancy: from "continued to retain" to "retained."
• 15:0615:06, 9 March 2014 diff hist −6 m Rock-paper-scissors-lizard-Spock →Rules: Eliminated a redundancy: from "still remain the same" to "remain the same."
• 01:4901:49, 9 March 2014 diff hist +1 m Grain rationing in China →Grain Rationing System: Added a comma.
• 01:4801:48, 9 March 2014 diff hist −8 m Grain rationing in China →Grain Rationing System: Changed "maintain the urban demand for food low" to "maintain low urban food demand."
• 01:4601:46, 9 March 2014 diff hist −4 m Grain rationing in China →Historical setting: Changed "rationing of consumers" to "consumer rationing."
• 01:4501:45, 9 March 2014 diff hist 0 m Grain rationing in China →Historical setting: Changed produces to produced.
• 01:4401:44, 9 March 2014 diff hist −4 m Grain rationing in China →Historical setting: Eliminated an unnecessary "the."
• 01:4301:43, 9 March 2014 diff hist −1 m Grain rationing in China →Historical setting: Deleted an unnecessary comma.
• 01:4201:42, 9 March 2014 diff hist +1 m Grain rationing in China →Historical setting: Added a return inadvertently deleted in previous edit.
• 01:4201:42, 9 March 2014 diff hist +1 m Grain rationing in China →Historical setting: Changed "In the planned period" to "During central planning,"
• 01:4001:40, 9 March 2014 diff hist +1 m Grain rationing in China →Historical setting: Added a space after 1).
• 01:4001:40, 9 March 2014 diff hist −28 m Grain rationing in China →Historical setting: Changed "China's economic history can be traced to two main policy eras" to "This is seen in two main policy eras:"
• 01:3601:36, 9 March 2014 diff hist −58 m Grain rationing in China →Historical setting: Edited paragraph 1, last sentence, for sentence structure and punctuation, and eliminated a sentence fragment.
• 01:3101:31, 9 March 2014 diff hist −3 m Grain rationing in China →Historical setting: Changed "main policy regimes" to "main policy eras."
• 01:2901:29, 9 March 2014 diff hist −24 Grain rationing in China Changed "Gradual reforms have transformed agricultural production in rural areas, which have shifted from private" to "Gradual reforms have shifted agricultural production in rural areas from private."
• 01:2301:23, 9 March 2014 diff hist −3 m Grain rationing in China Changed "coupons, meaning that they" to "coupons with which they."
• 01:2201:22, 9 March 2014 diff hist −8 m Grain rationing in China Changed "system is a system imposed" to "system was imposed"
• 01:1801:18, 9 March 2014 diff hist +2 CCTV-1 Changed "CCTV-1 began 24-hour broadcasts daily on 1 October 2004," to "CCTV-1 began 24-hour daily broadcasting on 1 October 2004."
• 01:1701:17, 9 March 2014 diff hist −15 m CCTV-1 Changed "CCTV-1 was a change of system broadcasting from analog to digital in 2002," to "CCTV-1 changed from analog to digital broadcasting in 2002."
• 01:1501:15, 9 March 2014 diff hist −3 m CCTV-1 eliminated unnecessary preposition "to."

8 March 2014

• 19:0719:07, 8 March 2014 diff hist −2 m Sì (surname) Changed "the Xia Dynasty ruler has the surname Si," to "the Xia Dynasty ruler's surname was Si (姒)." Tag: gettingstarted edit
• 19:0519:05, 8 March 2014 diff hist −1 m Sì (surname) Completed revisions to most recent edit. Tag: gettingstarted edit
• 19:0419:04, 8 March 2014 diff hist +6 m Sì (surname) Changed "Generally Chinese believe Xia founder Yu the Great (禹) is a descendant of Emperor Yao (堯)," to "In general, the Chinese hold Xia founder Yu the Great (禹) to be a descendant of Emperor Yao (堯)." Tag: gettingstarted edit
• 19:0019:00, 8 March 2014 diff hist −2 m Sì (surname) Removed a comma pair that was unnecessary and confusing. Tag: gettingstarted edit
• 18:5918:59, 8 March 2014 diff hist −1 m Sì (surname) Changed "By opinion of" to "According to." Tag: gettingstarted edit