User contributions for Jerry4dos

11 October 2024

• 22:1922:19, 11 October 2024 diff hist +3 Stauffer Chemical This discarded ballast became the inexpensive raw material for precipitated calcium carbonate the newly formed company. current

17 July 2024

• 04:0704:07, 17 July 2024 diff hist 0 Lee Dixon (actor) →Biography: typo correction ior -> for

29 July 2023

• 14:4314:43, 29 July 2023 diff hist +1 m Los Angeles County Probation Department was -> were (change for better grammar)

22 May 2023

• 20:2720:27, 22 May 2023 diff hist +3 Ken Niles Avenue -> Boulevard Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

13 April 2023

• 02:1602:16, 13 April 2023 diff hist +3 m The Bamboo Prison "... agent posing a man disillusioned..." -> "...agent posing as a man disillusioned..."

11 March 2023

• 20:3020:30, 11 March 2023 diff hist +2 m Marmara Prison separate -> separately (change to adverb form)

10 March 2023

• 20:4920:49, 10 March 2023 diff hist 0 m Beverly Park (amusement park) "amount" -> "number" for better grammar. See: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/us/grammar/british-grammar/amount-of-number-of-or-quantity-of

28 February 2023

• 01:5401:54, 28 February 2023 diff hist −1 m William Demarest fix type "threes" -> "three"

12 February 2023

• 17:1917:19, 12 February 2023 diff hist −2 Dynamic pricing →Cost-plus pricing: skewered -> skewed Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 December 2022

• 16:4416:44, 19 December 2022 diff hist +3 m Bruce Weber (photographer) and one OF his closest collaborators Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15 October 2022

• 23:2523:25, 15 October 2022 diff hist +4 m How the West Was Won (film) "known his Western film scores" -> "known for his Western film scores" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 October 2022

• 11:0711:07, 1 October 2022 diff hist −1 m Bruno Tesch Typo fix woujld used -> would use

25 July 2022

• 21:4821:48, 25 July 2022 diff hist +63 Talk:Forest Falls, California This page needs professional help. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

18 July 2022

• 20:5420:54, 18 July 2022 diff hist 0 Breast torture →Techniques: Fixed typo show or power -> show of power Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:5120:51, 18 July 2022 diff hist +1 Breast torture →Techniques: Fix typo clams -> clamps Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 June 2022

• 20:3920:39, 30 June 2022 diff hist 0 m Budweiser trademark dispute fix typo behinning -> beginning

1 August 2020

• 22:0222:02, 1 August 2020 diff hist −3 Coco Chanel →Activity as Nazi agent: Reworked awkward sentence. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

13 May 2020

• 23:0123:01, 13 May 2020 diff hist 0 Cincinnati Subway →Proposed route: description from 1916 bond campaign[1]: Fix typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

6 May 2020

• 07:0007:00, 6 May 2020 diff hist +3 Keith Andes →RKO and Universal: Correct punctuation, correct actual title of movie Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

18 March 2020

• 22:2522:25, 18 March 2020 diff hist +3 KLAA (AM) added missing word Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 22:1022:10, 18 March 2020 diff hist −1 m Bonneville International →History: typo

7 July 2019

• 01:1501:15, 7 July 2019 diff hist 0 m Ridgecrest, California →1995 Ridgecrest earthquake

17 July 2018

• 04:0804:08, 17 July 2018 diff hist 0 Cellebrite →History: Fixed capitalization. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 July 2018

• 04:3304:33, 9 July 2018 diff hist −2 m SlimFast →Effectiveness: Clean up the spacing.

9 January 2018

• 18:4618:46, 9 January 2018 diff hist +445 Wikipedia:Editor assistance/Requests →Film base: new section

9 April 2017

• 02:2802:28, 9 April 2017 diff hist −1 Sacagawea →The Lewis and Clark expedition: Standardize printing conventions of commas and periods within closing quotation marks. This article contained a mixture of American English styling (sample.") and British English styling (sample".) According to Wiki... Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:0902:09, 9 April 2017 diff hist 0 Heracleum mantegazzianum →In popular culture: More punctuation fixes. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:0702:07, 9 April 2017 diff hist 0 Heracleum mantegazzianum →Countermeasures: Touch up punctuation: steroids". -> steroids." (to match conventional printing styles) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

2 April 2017

• 15:5115:51, 2 April 2017 diff hist −2 m Nocturnal penile tumescence grammar: "their" -> "his" (singular pronoun "his" to match singular subject "patient")

13 March 2017

• 15:2015:20, 13 March 2017 diff hist +2 LeRoy Prinz →Career: Conformed name style of Agnes de Mille. ("deMille" -> "de Mille") See the discussion of Agnes's spelling here: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cecil_B._DeMille Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

6 March 2017

• 03:5303:53, 6 March 2017 diff hist −2 Dollar Tree →2000s: Fixed grammar: "their website" -> "its website" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 03:4903:49, 6 March 2017 diff hist +2 Dollar Tree Fixed grammar: "it is member company" -> "it is a member company" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 February 2017

• 21:5021:50, 9 February 2017 diff hist 0 m Ellis Act ellis -> Ellis

4 December 2016

• 03:4803:48, 4 December 2016 diff hist +22 Lake Arrowhead, California →Geography: added new content "date of reopening" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20 November 2016

• 02:5902:59, 20 November 2016 diff hist −2 St. Francis Dam →Dam safety legislation: grammar fix "their" -> "its" singular subject ("municipality") requires singular possessive pronoun ("its") Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 August 2016

• 19:1519:15, 7 August 2016 diff hist 0 m List of Foucault pendulums →United States: Rearrange table (Wheaton was stuck in the list as a "state" following "Illinois" rather than within the listings for "Illinois"

27 June 2016

• 23:4623:46, 27 June 2016 diff hist +109 List of Foucault pendulums →United States: MSI has two pendula -- I'll try to get the details on the second one when I visit in August

25 April 2016

• 17:2917:29, 25 April 2016 diff hist −2 m Sticky-shed syndrome grammar fix "their" -> "his" (singular to agree with singular antecedant "each"

18 April 2016

• 16:1516:15, 18 April 2016 diff hist −2 m San Francisco Transbay Terminal →Bridge Railway: for better grammar "there" -> "its"

14 April 2016

• 01:3401:34, 14 April 2016 diff hist +2 m Arrowhead Water →Water sources: add comma "SpringHimalyas" -> "Spring, Himalyas"
• 01:2901:29, 14 April 2016 diff hist +2 m Arrowhead Water →Discovery: grammar fix "in" -> "into"

9 April 2016

• 03:2203:22, 9 April 2016 diff hist −1 Orson Bean →Filmography: correct typo ("Throwbridge" changes to "Trowbridge") Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 March 2016

• 04:4404:44, 7 March 2016 diff hist −73 Azusa, California →Transportation: Updated to reflect opening of new train line service

8 February 2016

• 04:0004:00, 8 February 2016 diff hist +4 m Sixth Street Viaduct →Demolition and replacement: Rewrite sentence for more grammatical cohesion.

27 January 2016

• 06:4306:43, 27 January 2016 diff hist 0 m Los Angeles Aqueduct →Construction: Add "Fred" to first reference to "Eaton," removed "Fred" from second reference.

25 January 2016

• 17:1817:18, 25 January 2016 diff hist −1 m Auto Train →Operations: Change "an" to "a"

23 January 2016

• 14:3614:36, 23 January 2016 diff hist 0 Tesch & Stabenow Change "absorbents" to "adsorbents". See discussions here:

1 September 2015

• 16:5216:52, 1 September 2015 diff hist +1 m Frank Stanton (executive) →Color television: Change "a" to "an" for better grammar.

13 July 2015

• 15:2315:23, 13 July 2015 diff hist −8 m CBS Studios Fix the grammar (yikes!)
• 15:0615:06, 13 July 2015 diff hist 0 m RKO Pictures correct typo "Musac" -> "Muzak" (Musac is a museum; if the author really means "the elevator music company, he wants "Muzak"))