User contributions for Jordanpedersen

20 September 2024

• 14:0514:05, 20 September 2024 diff hist +247 Sublime (band) →2023–present: Reunion with Jakob Nowell: added new song from the reformed group

18 September 2024

• 10:5610:56, 18 September 2024 diff hist +198 Oblique Strategies →Cultural impact: Untied a knotty sentence referring to the AS Velasca football club. Readers unfamiliar with the team would I think have a hard time understanding that something could be a football club and a work of art - I did. So I split the sentence into two.

26 August 2024

• 14:1214:12, 26 August 2024 diff hist +401 Trevor Rogers (baseball) Rogers was demoted last Thursday

31 July 2024

• 13:5813:58, 31 July 2024 diff hist +5 m Anna Torv added "also" to clarify chronology of career
• 13:5813:58, 31 July 2024 diff hist +24 m Anna Torv Fixed formatting of title of Mindhunter, as well as link. Previous link went to disambiguation as opposed to the correct content
• 13:5613:56, 31 July 2024 diff hist +3 m Anna Torv Added italics to title of Mindhunter, per style guide
• 13:5513:55, 31 July 2024 diff hist −6 m Anna Torv Changed wording to be less awkward and grammatically correct. Removed hyperlink to psychologist, seems unnecessary.
• 11:1711:17, 31 July 2024 diff hist −3 m Daimonion (Socrates) Removed the word "as." I've read the sentence five times, and I can't figure out why the word is there. If there's a reason, please let me know! And my apologies if there is.

19 October 2023

• 14:4614:46, 19 October 2023 diff hist +57 The American Analog Set Unwound unnecessarily confusing sentence. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

11 October 2023

• 00:3300:33, 11 October 2023 diff hist +11 Kellen Mond No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 September 2023

• 00:2800:28, 19 September 2023 diff hist +372 Talk:The Unconsoled →“Generally considered one of his best books”: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic

24 August 2023

• 19:1019:10, 24 August 2023 diff hist +4 The Academy Is... Added italics to title per style guide Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:0219:02, 24 August 2023 diff hist −1 The Hush Sound Removed extra space Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

4 August 2023

• 12:1712:17, 4 August 2023 diff hist +210 Kay Hanley →Life and career Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

10 July 2023

• 02:5402:54, 10 July 2023 diff hist +371 Talk:FanGraphs →This entire page is out of date: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic
• 02:4702:47, 10 July 2023 diff hist 0 Barbara Mandrell & the Mandrell Sisters →Cancellation: Fixed word order Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 July 2023

• 23:1123:11, 5 July 2023 diff hist +3 Bill Pohlad Unnecessarily cumbersome sentence. Unwound it a bit. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

18 May 2023

• 19:4319:43, 18 May 2023 diff hist −467 Fast X →Critical response: first sentence is redundant - this section already states that the film received mixed reviews - and "Indian Paper Ink" is not a credible source. It has almost no online presence to speak of - no facebook page and 12 follows on Twitter

6 April 2023

• 22:2622:26, 6 April 2023 diff hist +74 The Hold Steady No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16 December 2022

• 13:5413:54, 16 December 2022 diff hist +26 Jim E. Mora Clarify that this was the first iteration of the US FL, because the league relaunched last year Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

13 December 2022

• 16:2916:29, 13 December 2022 diff hist +79 Meghann Fahy No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

6 December 2022

• 19:0619:06, 6 December 2022 diff hist +85 The New Possibility →Reception: Updated to reflect the fact that the review in question was of the 2000 re-issue of the album Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:1402:14, 6 December 2022 diff hist 0 Purdue Boilermakers women's basketball Geralds is in her second season as coach Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

28 November 2022

• 20:3120:31, 28 November 2022 diff hist +5 Willians Astudillo →Fukuoka SoftBank Hawks
• 20:3020:30, 28 November 2022 diff hist +494 Willians Astudillo →Fukuoka SoftBank Hawks: the date Astudillo signed was not cited. Changed the date based on the available info

20 October 2022

• 13:4813:48, 20 October 2022 diff hist −105 Enema of the State Removed citation needed tag, citation is offered later in article Tags: Manual revert Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 13:4713:47, 20 October 2022 diff hist +105 Enema of the State No edit summary Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 October 2022

• 09:1909:19, 7 October 2022 diff hist +5 Chester Bennington →Aftermath: Relocated misplaced prepositional phrase - the band stated this information in April 2022 - as opposed to saying they wouldn’t tour or record in that particular month Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 September 2022

• 12:1712:17, 29 September 2022 diff hist −13 Rod Walker Corrected formatting for years played for Titans Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 September 2022

• 20:0020:00, 14 September 2022 diff hist −4 Jay Hernandez Removed mention of cbs since it’s been on 2 networks. Rephrased “has been portraying” as the gerund is inelegant Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:5919:59, 14 September 2022 diff hist −49 Jay Hernandez Deleted info about magnum pi being rescued by nbc. 1, “rescued” is unnecessary editorializing and 2, that info is important to the show, not to understanding Hernandez’ career Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

4 September 2022

• 19:4819:48, 4 September 2022 diff hist +407 Miguel Cairo →Post-playing career: Updated to reflect that Cairo is the current acting manager of the white Sox due to TLR’s absence - included citation Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:4319:43, 4 September 2022 diff hist +38 Miguel Cairo No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:1418:14, 4 September 2022 diff hist +30 Miguel Cairo No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 August 2022

• 13:3613:36, 29 August 2022 diff hist −12 Patrick Beverley →Los Angeles Lakers (2022–present): This is not ironic Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

8 August 2022

• 11:5411:54, 8 August 2022 diff hist −5 m Conan O'Brien →The Tonight Show (2009–2010): rephrase: idiomatic english says one "suffers a concussion" when talking about the incident occurring - as opposed to later, when one might suffer from the effects of a concussion

2 August 2022

• 11:4211:42, 2 August 2022 diff hist −16 Half God Streamlined language Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 July 2022

• 00:2500:25, 9 July 2022 diff hist +78 Lucas Giolito →Personal life Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

12 June 2022

• 16:1116:11, 12 June 2022 diff hist +7 José Ramírez (infielder) →Personal life Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 June 2022

• 00:3900:39, 3 June 2022 diff hist −51 Christina Chong Deleted information was redundant - it said earlier in the paragraph that she appeared in Line of Duty Tags: Manual revert Mobile edit Mobile web edit

10 May 2022

• 13:2813:28, 10 May 2022 diff hist −16 Grievous Angel →Reception: Rephrased - previous phrasing made it sound like he died after the album’s release Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 May 2022

• 00:1200:12, 1 May 2022 diff hist −9 Memoria (2021 film) →United States: Reverted edit Tags: Manual revert Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:1100:11, 1 May 2022 diff hist +9 Memoria (2021 film) →United States: Clarified that the release strategy was conventional. Calling it “new” implies that it was something other than a standard release strategy. Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit

21 April 2022

• 22:0022:00, 21 April 2022 diff hist −13 FanGraphs →Podcasts: Removed Sam Miller from Effectively Wild - he is not a host, at least for the time being Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

11 April 2022

• 23:5923:59, 11 April 2022 diff hist +53 Tyler Chatwood Added Hawks to teams section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 March 2022

• 01:4101:41, 24 March 2022 diff hist −7 Short People No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:4001:40, 24 March 2022 diff hist +6 Short People Removed run on sentence, turned voice from passive to active. Newman intended something from the song rather than interpreting it - since he was the one who created it Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

13 February 2022

• 18:1118:11, 13 February 2022 diff hist +446 It's a Shame (The Spinners song) Added disputed claim about song's authorship based on a new book by Dan Charnas. I would argue this claim is worth including because of the ever-increasing profile of J Dilla.

1 February 2022

• 16:4616:46, 1 February 2022 diff hist −64 The Big Payback (book) →Reception: made a few style changes, clarified that the book "largely ignores" those three cities rather than failing to mention them entirely
• 16:4316:43, 1 February 2022 diff hist +1 m The Big Payback (book) →Reception: added a space after a period