User contributions for Jwjwj

19 September 2024

• 21:2421:24, 19 September 2024 diff hist −5 m Haitian independence debt →Aftermath: Reworded the opening words to address two instances of the phrase "according to" in the same sentence. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor

11 August 2024

• 19:2519:25, 11 August 2024 diff hist −1 m List of political parties in the United States →Parties by number of registered voters: Removed trailing "=" on FreedomReform Party item Tag: 2017 wikitext editor

19 February 2024

• 23:5823:58, 19 February 2024 diff hist +7 m Dimitri Tsafendas →Reaction and police investigation: Clarified pronoun antecedents Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 23:5223:52, 19 February 2024 diff hist +16 m Dimitri Tsafendas →Reaction and police investigation: Rephrased sentence for clarity. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 23:4723:47, 19 February 2024 diff hist 0 m Dimitri Tsafendas →Early life: Modified a semicolon to a comma. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor

9 January 2024

• 02:5402:54, 9 January 2024 diff hist +2 m Lillian Gish filmography →Sound films: Fixed broken Vincente Minnelli link Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 02:5002:50, 9 January 2024 diff hist +12 m Lillian Gish filmography →Sound films: Repaired last column in three rows Tag: 2017 wikitext editor

6 October 2023

• 15:3615:36, 6 October 2023 diff hist −8 Farrier Moved text about the operations of farriers' work from the "Women farriers" section to the "Work" section to remedy an unintentional sexist perspective.

28 September 2023

• 19:2319:23, 28 September 2023 diff hist +6 m Herman Ehrenberg →Death: Added word "stage" for clarity. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 19:2219:22, 28 September 2023 diff hist −1 m Herman Ehrenberg →Death: Removed orphan trailing bracket Tag: 2017 wikitext editor

26 May 2023

• 16:5416:54, 26 May 2023 diff hist −2 m Moorpark College →Notable alumni: Removed extra whitespace Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 16:5416:54, 26 May 2023 diff hist +17 m Moorpark College →Notable alumni: Fixed broken broken LinkedIn link Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 16:5116:51, 26 May 2023 diff hist −1 m Moorpark College →Notable alumni: Fixed broken LinkedIn link Tag: 2017 wikitext editor

22 April 2023

• 20:5720:57, 22 April 2023 diff hist −1 m Vladimir Sukhomlinov →Imprisonment and death: Removed extra white space. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 20:5520:55, 22 April 2023 diff hist −1 Vladimir Sukhomlinov →Imprisonment and death: Removed unopened closing parenthesis. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor

12 March 2023

• 06:5306:53, 12 March 2023 diff hist −6 m Schlieffen Plan →Analysis: Minor grammatical changes Tag: 2017 wikitext editor

11 January 2023

• 05:2505:25, 11 January 2023 diff hist +6 m Hanged, drawn and quartered →First recorded examples: Slight punctuation corrections. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor

29 December 2022

• 23:2923:29, 29 December 2022 diff hist +7 m Cold Mountain (film) →Production: Clarified pronouns reference Tag: 2017 wikitext editor

8 December 2022

• 17:1317:13, 8 December 2022 diff hist +45 m Mob Town (2019 film) Slight rewording to reduce some rather overused phrases. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 17:0717:07, 8 December 2022 diff hist −15 m Mob Town (2019 film) →Plot Summary: corrected numerous typos and slightly modified language. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor

4 October 2022

• 02:0202:02, 4 October 2022 diff hist −3 m Dead Ringer (film) →Notes: Changed the text to separate the fictional story from production details. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 02:0102:01, 4 October 2022 diff hist −5 m Dead Ringer (film) →Notes: Reworded slightly and added a break so the information about remakes is separate from the paragraph on film locations. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor

21 September 2022

• 02:1802:18, 21 September 2022 diff hist +2 m Stanford White Reverted the change after re-reading the paragraph. My bad. Tags: Manual revert 2017 wikitext editor
• 02:1702:17, 21 September 2022 diff hist −2 m Stanford White Changed from "the" show to "a" show because the specific show had not yet named. Tags: Reverted 2017 wikitext editor

5 September 2022

• 21:3821:38, 5 September 2022 diff hist −459 m Ivan the Terrible and His Son Ivan →Reception and imperial censorship: Removed unnecessary duplicate reference. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 21:3621:36, 5 September 2022 diff hist 0 m Ivan the Terrible and His Son Ivan →Creation: Repositioned reference to end of quotation. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 21:3221:32, 5 September 2022 diff hist 0 Ivan the Terrible and His Son Ivan →Creation Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 21:3121:31, 5 September 2022 diff hist −25 m Ivan the Terrible and His Son Ivan →Trip to Europe: Removed unnecessary and incorrectly placed duplicate reference. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 21:2921:29, 5 September 2022 diff hist −1 m Ivan the Terrible and His Son Ivan →Music of Rimsky-Korsakov: Removed punctuation typo Tag: 2017 wikitext editor

21 August 2022

• 18:4818:48, 21 August 2022 diff hist +5 Crawford Goldsby →Crimes involving Cherokee Bill Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 18:4618:46, 21 August 2022 diff hist −86 m Crawford Goldsby →Life as an outlaw: Combined two sentences to remove redundancy Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 18:1518:15, 21 August 2022 diff hist +42 m Hang 'Em High →Plot: More wordsmithing for accuracy. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 18:1218:12, 21 August 2022 diff hist +52 m Hang 'Em High →Plot: Clarified for accuracy Tag: 2017 wikitext editor

9 May 2022

• 15:3515:35, 9 May 2022 diff hist +2 m Mortimer J. Adler →New York City: Replaced (but in a different position) the parenthesis.
• 15:3315:33, 9 May 2022 diff hist −1 m Mortimer J. Adler →New York City: Removed ill-placed parenthesis
• 15:2915:29, 9 May 2022 diff hist +8 m Great Books of the Western World →Rationale: Small wording change for continuity of ideas and verb tense.

31 March 2022

• 17:3117:31, 31 March 2022 diff hist +1 m André Tardieu →Tardieu's Second Government, 2 March - 13 December 1930: Changed verb tense of "succeeds"
• 17:3017:30, 31 March 2022 diff hist −2 m André Tardieu →Bibliography: Removed punctuation in list items for consistency
• 17:2917:29, 31 March 2022 diff hist −11 m André Tardieu →Bibliography: Because there are four listed, modified "couple" (which means "two") and used a more formal approach.

4 January 2022

• 19:2319:23, 4 January 2022 diff hist −17 m My Foolish Heart (1949 film) →Reception: Reworded a damaged sentence.

3 January 2022

• 17:2417:24, 3 January 2022 diff hist 0 m Steve Jobs (film) →Plot: "Walkman" should be capitalized as it is a product name

18 October 2021

• 23:1923:19, 18 October 2021 diff hist −76 m The White Countess →Production: Removed incorrect "sic" and cleaned up the sentence for clarity and accuracy

13 October 2021

• 17:3117:31, 13 October 2021 diff hist +28 Pitfall (1948 film) →Dreams: Flushed out the paragraph because the original text seems to suggest the scene is only in the screenplay and not in the film.

28 February 2021

• 02:1102:11, 28 February 2021 diff hist +26 m BUtterfield 8 Added reference to novel's page

3 January 2021

• 23:2623:26, 3 January 2021 diff hist −4 Justin Herbert →Early life and high school career: Modified section for chronological cohesion and overall structural consistency.

28 December 2020

• 20:1620:16, 28 December 2020 diff hist 0 m Patricia Roc →Later Life and Death: Changed case of section title for consistency
• 20:1520:15, 28 December 2020 diff hist −3 m Patricia Roc →Film career: Moved "Later life" section from being subsection of "Film career" section
• 20:1120:11, 28 December 2020 diff hist 0 m Patricia Roc →Later films: Changed "shoplifting" to lower case.

23 December 2020

• 23:4623:46, 23 December 2020 diff hist −12 m History Is Made at Night (1937 film) →Reception: Updated the AFI link

21 December 2020

• 05:2505:25, 21 December 2020 diff hist −18 Big Business (1929 film) →Plot: Removed reference to summer as not supported by the film. Good idea, though it is.