User contributions for Ladam11

29 April 2017

• 19:0119:01, 29 April 2017 diff hist +22 m Rebel News →Contributors: added Lauren from the 'Former' list
• 19:0119:01, 29 April 2017 diff hist −22 m Rebel News →Past contributors: lauren southern is still active with Rebel

24 April 2017

• 14:3514:35, 24 April 2017 diff hist +1 m City-state →Jerusalem: edited for language

20 April 2017

• 21:2821:28, 20 April 2017 diff hist +56 m Churches of Christ →Demographics

17 April 2017

• 17:3017:30, 17 April 2017 diff hist −4 m Pahlavi dynasty →Legacy: balanced out the complex sentence by removing the unnecessary conjunction 'yet"
• 01:0101:01, 17 April 2017 diff hist +10 m Generation War →Reception in Poland: added "newspaper" to contextualize the Gazeta Wyborcza
• 00:1700:17, 17 April 2017 diff hist +2 m Generation War changed "project" to "objective," which seemed like a more appropriate word to use; if this edit isn't helpful, please change back!

16 April 2017

• 22:0722:07, 16 April 2017 diff hist +1 m Managerial state →Anarchy and tyranny: fixed a spelling error on "Rodney King"

10 April 2017

• 23:3223:32, 10 April 2017 diff hist +526 Talk:Education in Israel →clarification: State schools: new section

9 April 2017

• 02:0402:04, 9 April 2017 diff hist +22 m Mordechai Gur →Military career: extended sentence

7 April 2017

• 18:1818:18, 7 April 2017 diff hist +3 m Kenneth M. Pollack →Biography: grammar edit: "he was AN analyst..."
• 00:0000:00, 7 April 2017 diff hist −42 m The Jewish Home →Ideology: I took out this clause "who tend to be more nationalist in Israel" because it seemed redundant: these are Israeli voters in Israel...the clause sounds like it's making a comparison, but to or with whom?

6 April 2017

• 21:1821:18, 6 April 2017 diff hist −30 Sinai Peninsula →In the Hebrew Bible

5 April 2017

• 00:0200:02, 5 April 2017 diff hist +1 m Doron Matalon →Personal life: added a comma after "pressed charges" to balance compound sentence

3 April 2017

• 18:1818:18, 3 April 2017 diff hist −10 Talk:Law of Return →Clarification: Debate in Israel
• 18:1818:18, 3 April 2017 diff hist +761 Talk:Law of Return →Clarification: Debate in Israel: new section
• 18:1018:10, 3 April 2017 diff hist +462 Talk:Law of Return →One-sided
• 17:4217:42, 3 April 2017 diff hist +598 Talk:Aliyah →what is up with the Noun choices?: new section

2 April 2017

• 19:0219:02, 2 April 2017 diff hist +1 m Mohammad Mosaddegh →Iran: needed a comma after "Iranian Revolution"
• 04:0004:00, 2 April 2017 diff hist 0 m Ashdod →Religion: changed a comma to a semicolon
• 01:3901:39, 2 April 2017 diff hist +29 m Hod HaSharon →Notable residents: expanded on the description for Danny Ayalon

1 April 2017

• 21:5221:52, 1 April 2017 diff hist −925 Western Wall →American: this entire section is immaterial to the article
• 20:4020:40, 1 April 2017 diff hist +6 m Yom Kippur →Observance by Christians: from what I understand, the term is "Messianic Christians," not "Messianic Jews"
• 13:0213:02, 1 April 2017 diff hist +2 m 35th Paratroopers Brigade (Israel) →Operation Entebbe (1976): correction of facts: Yonatan Netanyahu is Benjamin's older brother, not younger
• 03:4703:47, 1 April 2017 diff hist −1 m Naftali Bennett →Military career: removed a comma after "commando" in the second paragraph
• 00:0300:03, 1 April 2017 diff hist −1 m Women in the Israel Defense Forces →State of Israel: moved a phrase ("it was argued") to the end of a clause

31 March 2017

• 23:3423:34, 31 March 2017 diff hist +10 m Conscription in Israel →Exemption from service: fixed sentence for clarity, no details or information changed
• 22:3622:36, 31 March 2017 diff hist −9 m Benzion Netanyahu removed an inappropriately placed modifier
• 01:3601:36, 31 March 2017 diff hist +2 m Damian Lewis edited sentence for clarity
• 01:3501:35, 31 March 2017 diff hist +5 m Damian Lewis put his credits in chronological order: Band of Brothers, then Homeland and then Wolf Hall

30 March 2017

• 00:2800:28, 30 March 2017 diff hist −16 m Humanism →Criticisms: we've already identified the subjects; it is redundant to say "they believed"
• 00:1900:19, 30 March 2017 diff hist −11 m Humanism →History: edited for clarity; superfluous adjectives

27 March 2017

• 01:1701:17, 27 March 2017 diff hist −2 m Vertigo (film) →Contemporaneous reception: added an appositive phrase for sentence clarity
• 01:1401:14, 27 March 2017 diff hist +40 m Skid row →Popular references: changed 'play' to 'musical'

25 March 2017

• 02:5102:51, 25 March 2017 diff hist −38 m Arab Christians →Doctrine: removed 'citation needed' anecdotally, what the article says is true
• 02:4502:45, 25 March 2017 diff hist +1 m Christianity in Jordan →Role in Jordanian Society: fixed last sentence (not the quote) for grammatical clarity

24 March 2017

• 02:1602:16, 24 March 2017 diff hist −80 m Tzipi Hotovely →Views and opinions: shortened sentences; removed extremporaneous commas

23 March 2017

• 00:2900:29, 23 March 2017 diff hist −2 m No-fault divorce →Russia

19 March 2017

• 16:4316:43, 19 March 2017 diff hist −459 m Hatikvah →Objections by non-Jewish Israelis: removed an inactive link

18 March 2017

• 01:4001:40, 18 March 2017 diff hist +5 m Frank Meyer (political philosopher) →Libertarian critics: added clarity to sentence, linking to 3rd paragraph

17 March 2017

• 18:3018:30, 17 March 2017 diff hist −305 m Victims of Communism Memorial Foundation →Criticism: removed dead link

16 March 2017

• 04:2404:24, 16 March 2017 diff hist +2 m Litvaks →Ethnicity, religious customs and heritage: fixed verbage (removed a split infinitive)
• 04:1404:14, 16 March 2017 diff hist −17 m Lithuania →1944–1991: edited sentence to reflect clarity

15 March 2017

• 18:5618:56, 15 March 2017 diff hist +5 m Pale of Settlement →History: cleaned up verbage for clarity
• 18:3018:30, 15 March 2017 diff hist −106 m Golden Liberty →Assessment: removed an opinion statement not backed up by any citation

13 March 2017

• 02:5402:54, 13 March 2017 diff hist +199 Who shot J.R.? →Marketing: added a citation

8 March 2017

• 01:4501:45, 8 March 2017 diff hist −485 m Michael Caine →Political views: edited sentence for clarity (no changes to sources)

5 March 2017

• 01:2801:28, 5 March 2017 diff hist −13 m Coburg →Notable people: edited sentence

1 March 2017

• 02:2402:24, 1 March 2017 diff hist +560 Talk:Haskel Lookstein →Further explanation needed in "Jewish Conversions" section?: new section

24 February 2017

• 05:5005:50, 24 February 2017 diff hist −1 m William Wyler →1960s: changed "play" to "musical"