User contributions for Laznip

15 April 2022

• 20:3420:34, 15 April 2022 diff hist +45 List of Tim and Eric Awesome Show, Great Job! sketches and characters →Recurring sketches: Added content Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

21 October 2021

• 02:4202:42, 21 October 2021 diff hist +1 List of films voted the best →Sri Lanka: Fixed typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:3802:38, 21 October 2021 diff hist +5 List of films voted the best →Serbia: The film title was inaccurate. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 October 2021

• 15:3715:37, 14 October 2021 diff hist −3 Etymological fallacy Removed superfluous comma and determiner

13 October 2021

• 00:3000:30, 13 October 2021 diff hist +222 Talk:Vocational education →/ref?: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 December 2020

• 06:4006:40, 5 December 2020 diff hist −7 m Anticipation a few emendations to grammar and wording, but I think this page needs some more work

25 November 2020

• 18:5618:56, 25 November 2020 diff hist +3 m V for Vendetta (film) Fixed several grammatical errors, namely superfluous, missing, or misplaced commas.

16 September 2020

• 00:3500:35, 16 September 2020 diff hist +1 Alveolar consonant The IPA transcription of "alveolar" had a voiced alveolar trill [r] instead of an approximant [ɹ] as the last consonant. The Merriam-Webster source uses the North American Phonetic Alphabet, whereas Wikipedia uses the International Phonetic Alphabet for all phonetic transcriptions. Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20 July 2020

• 08:0908:09, 20 July 2020 diff hist −10 One Hour Photo →Plot

26 May 2020

• 12:0112:01, 26 May 2020 diff hist −10 m Willful ignorance replaced "himself or herself" with "themself"

17 April 2020

• 22:5122:51, 17 April 2020 diff hist −5 Trey Edward Shults Removed superfluous word Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 22:4722:47, 17 April 2020 diff hist −9 Trey Edward Shults Fixed a comma splice and fragment Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 March 2020

• 04:5204:52, 3 March 2020 diff hist −1 Frank Zappa →Anti-censorship: Removed superfluous comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

26 December 2019

• 05:0905:09, 26 December 2019 diff hist −73 Anal retentiveness The sentence I removed may have been vandalistically added. It didn't include a source, and, from my preliminary research, Nils Johnsen doesn't seem to be a notable person nor a "prime example of an anal-retentive person." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 September 2019

• 07:5907:59, 17 September 2019 diff hist −2 Climax (2018 film) →Plot: Replaced hyphens with commas in an appositive Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

12 September 2019

• 21:1121:11, 12 September 2019 diff hist −7 Wikipedia:Accuracy dispute →Disputed statement: I replaced "old, out of date" with "antiquated" for concision. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

11 September 2019

• 04:1904:19, 11 September 2019 diff hist +1 Donnie Darko →Plot: Another comma error Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:1804:18, 11 September 2019 diff hist 0 Donnie Darko →Plot: Moved comma inside quotation marks (where it's supposed to be) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:1604:16, 11 September 2019 diff hist −1 Donnie Darko →Plot: I removed the comma before "and," which was incorrectly used as a coordinating conjunction since the clause thereafter was dependent. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:1404:14, 11 September 2019 diff hist +2 Donnie Darko →Plot: Grammar fix Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

6 September 2019

• 16:0116:01, 6 September 2019 diff hist −2 Colin Mochrie Fixed word order for comprehension and conventions. Before: "...known for television improvisation show [Whose Line Is It Anyway?]" After: "... known for the improvisational TV show [Whose Line Is It Anyway?]" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:5815:58, 6 September 2019 diff hist +1 Colin Mochrie Added comma in a list Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 September 2019

• 07:5407:54, 5 September 2019 diff hist 0 Button, Button (The Twilight Zone) →Plot: I understand why "whom" was used incorrectly now. It was quoting the source material. I fixed it. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:5107:51, 5 September 2019 diff hist +1 Button, Button (The Twilight Zone) →Plot: Grammar again. Whoever wrote this certainly knows how to use a semicolon; however, this person does not know how to use a comma. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:4807:48, 5 September 2019 diff hist +1 Button, Button (The Twilight Zone) →Plot: Grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:4607:46, 5 September 2019 diff hist 0 Button, Button (The Twilight Zone) →Plot: Improved grammar and readability. Previously, it read as "(independent clause) but in consequence (independent clause)." I added commas where necessary and changed "in consequence" to "consequently." I also replaced "whom" with "who" because it was the subject of a clause, so it needed to be in its nominative case. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 June 2019

• 07:2607:26, 24 June 2019 diff hist +3 David Liebe Hart →Personal life: Grammar. Added a subject in the second clause so that the comma could stay before "but" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:2407:24, 24 June 2019 diff hist −1 David Liebe Hart →Personal life: Grammar. Commas are to separate two adjectives with the exception of ones based on age, number, or composition. "The young, Christian lady" doesn't need a comma because "young" is pertinent to age. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

2 May 2019

• 03:0103:01, 2 May 2019 diff hist +22 NSBM More accurate rewording Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 03:0003:00, 2 May 2019 diff hist +12 NSBM NSBM is not a subgenre of black metal; it's a political philosophy in black metal. The National Socialist Black Metal wiki page linked in this disambiguation even says this. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 February 2019

• 07:4007:40, 14 February 2019 diff hist +2 Turpin case Changed "on" to "upon" in "on entering their home" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 January 2019

• 23:0123:01, 22 January 2019 diff hist +1 Armadillo (2010 film) →Synopsis: Grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:0023:00, 22 January 2019 diff hist +2 Armadillo (2010 film) →Synopsis: Grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

10 December 2018

• 16:5616:56, 10 December 2018 diff hist +283 List of roles and awards of Tom Kenny I added the Kenny's television appearance in Tim and Eric Awesome Show, Great Job! Ep. "Anniversary" Tag: Visual edit: Switched

4 December 2018

• 14:3414:34, 4 December 2018 diff hist −1 The Ballad of Buster Scruggs →The Gal Who Got Rattled: Grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:0314:03, 4 December 2018 diff hist −2 The Ballad of Buster Scruggs →Near Algodones: Fixed typo Tags: canned edit summary Mobile edit Mobile web edit

21 March 2018

• 03:4503:45, 21 March 2018 diff hist +23 Anhedonia Added a common example in the "e.g." list of activities that anhedonia affects Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 August 2017

• 00:4900:49, 24 August 2017 diff hist +9 Mütiilation →The Reincarnation: Minor grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:4500:45, 24 August 2017 diff hist +18 m Mütiilation →The Beginning and The Black Legions Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

8 June 2015

• 19:3519:35, 8 June 2015 diff hist +39 Flatulence humor →Inculpatory pronouncements: Added content Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 April 2015

• 16:0516:05, 29 April 2015 diff hist +4 Coprophagia →Invertebrates: Typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 16:0416:04, 29 April 2015 diff hist −29 Coprophagia →Invertebrates: Sentence wording an structure change Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

11 April 2015

• 00:5000:50, 11 April 2015 diff hist +3 List of aircraft hijackings →1960s: Added pronoun Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 April 2015

• 22:4422:44, 9 April 2015 diff hist +2 Brusnik (island) →Flora and fauna: Minor comma usage errors Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 22:4022:40, 9 April 2015 diff hist +18 Voluntary manslaughter →Intent to kill: Minor grammatical errors Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit