User contributions for Lush.hill

14 November 2023

• 05:5705:57, 14 November 2023 diff hist +13 m Riaz filmography Copyedit. Did not find it to have the "advertisement" feel. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

7 November 2023

• 05:0405:04, 7 November 2023 diff hist −256 Mahadev Govind Ranade Copyedits. Significant changes to bring the "encyclopedia feel", especially in the last section. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

4 November 2023

• 15:4215:42, 4 November 2023 diff hist −90 ViaMichelin Copyedits. Changes to avoid the "advertisement feel". Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

3 November 2023

• 11:1711:17, 3 November 2023 diff hist −21 m Axoni Copyedit.... To be honest, although the article lists some big names as users of the platform, I could not understand why it is said to sound like an advertisement. Those still are facts. Maybe, I am missing something. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

30 October 2023

• 04:4804:48, 30 October 2023 diff hist −22 m Gregory Short Copyedits Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

24 October 2023

• 05:1005:10, 24 October 2023 diff hist +7 m Kamal Swaroop Copyedits Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

23 October 2023

• 14:3914:39, 23 October 2023 diff hist +4 m Strategic information system Minor edits Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

19 October 2023

• 05:4105:41, 19 October 2023 diff hist −49 CRCC Asia Copyedits. About it "sounding like an advertisement", it does seem to be material from a brochure. Whats more, there is only one citation. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

18 October 2023

• 05:0705:07, 18 October 2023 diff hist −7 m Jim Trelease Copy edit Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 04:3704:37, 18 October 2023 diff hist −8 Rajeev Suri Copy edits Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

16 October 2023

• 14:4214:42, 16 October 2023 diff hist −44 Viju Shah Copy edits Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 11:4811:48, 16 October 2023 diff hist −11 m Vidhi Kasliwal Minor edit Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 11:0911:09, 16 October 2023 diff hist −45 m Audition website Minor edits. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 10:5510:55, 16 October 2023 diff hist +8 Scenic design Minor edits Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

17 June 2023

• 16:0916:09, 17 June 2023 diff hist +183 List of Two and a Half Men characters My second edit of the page. Minor proofread throughout. Happy reading!! Tags: Reverted Visual edit

17 April 2023

• 18:2318:23, 17 April 2023 diff hist +1 List of Two and a Half Men characters Part 2 of this humungous edit :-) With this, first edit is over. Tasks were similar to those in the first one -- copyedits; corrections of capitalization, punctuation, tense, etc. Tag: Visual edit

5 April 2023

• 11:0511:05, 5 April 2023 diff hist −65 List of Two and a Half Men characters First part of my edit of this page (too large for one sitting :-)); copyedits including sentence completions, correction of terms (e.g., “executive produced”), serious tense corrections, and punctuation corrections. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

1 April 2023

• 15:4415:44, 1 April 2023 diff hist −317 Windesheim University of Applied Sciences Attempted to remove that feel of an "advertisement". Capitalization corrections. Edits for brevity. Copy edits. Punctuations. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

29 March 2023

• 05:0105:01, 29 March 2023 diff hist +201 59 Productions →Origins: Minot to medium copy edit. Removed “award-winning”. Punctuation consistency…………….Unclear “mounted between every one of the 70,000 seats”. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

10 March 2023

• 06:2306:23, 10 March 2023 diff hist −73 Counter-terrorism Rapid Response Completed edits missed in previous edit due to time paucity. Ensured uniform use of the abbreviation ATPI. Pls chk long and unclear sentence beginning “Born as an evolution of the 5 Supervision…”, and unclear parts: “would have been at the…”, ”The Courses S.V.A.T.-P.I. altogether 16…”, “The number of marksmen…” “…the smuggling asked by…” Tag: Visual edit

9 March 2023

• 12:1712:17, 9 March 2023 diff hist +8 Counter-terrorism Rapid Response Several punctuation corrections. Structure and clarity. Concise and formal language. ----- Many incomplete sentence (in the original text) that are unclear). Tag: Visual edit

28 February 2023

• 15:1915:19, 28 February 2023 diff hist −81 Shemaroo Entertainment Corrections pertaining to style consistency, punctuations, articles, conciseness, tense, and italicization. The following need to be reworded. 1) "...all three existing products in store (online & offline) – Bhagavad Gita, Bhajan Vaani and Quran Majeed And is available in the market currently with leading offline and online retailers. 2) ...called Shemaroo Bollywood Premiere – Premieres One World Digital Premier every week movies every Friday movies classic. 3) ...movies classic nataks. Tag: Visual edit
• 11:0411:04, 28 February 2023 diff hist +14 m Shemaroo Entertainment No edit summary Tag: Visual edit

13 February 2023

• 11:1911:19, 13 February 2023 diff hist +143 India national cricket team selectors Corrected grammar, capitalization, and date format. Tag: Visual edit

10 February 2023

• 03:5503:55, 10 February 2023 diff hist −8 m Courtney Solomon Grammar corrections Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 03:4203:42, 10 February 2023 diff hist −1 m New Hope Christian Fellowship Grammar corrections Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

9 February 2023

• 12:1912:19, 9 February 2023 diff hist −10 m Zack Kìnùthia A few grammatical corrections. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit