User contributions for Marc44

6 November 2024

• 12:3312:33, 6 November 2024 diff hist +5 m RocKwiz →House Band: Olympia is also touring with Rockwiz in 2024, I saw her personally on stage current

9 February 2024

• 12:5812:58, 9 February 2024 diff hist −2 m Chicken tax →Background: To bring writing style in line with professional writing practices.

16 May 2023

• 23:4523:45, 16 May 2023 diff hist +3 m Robert Chambers (criminal) →Arrest and trial: corrected grammar mistake: the verb "to plead" is regular, hence its past tense form is "pleaded"

22 April 2022

• 23:5123:51, 22 April 2022 diff hist −9 m Renault Caravelle →Name: grammar and wording. Using a singular predicate ("was") and then the plural predicate ("were") in the same sentence and both for the same object is inconsistent.

2 July 2021

• 04:3904:39, 2 July 2021 diff hist −1 m Gas stove →Burner heat: punctuation correction

6 January 2020

• 00:5600:56, 6 January 2020 diff hist 0 m Shooting brake grammer
• 00:5500:55, 6 January 2020 diff hist 0 m Shooting brake wording

4 June 2019

• 05:2005:20, 4 June 2019 diff hist 0 m Picnic compound adjective needs a hyphen

29 December 2017

• 08:5308:53, 29 December 2017 diff hist −3 m Electroluminescent wire language: replaced and/or with the correct word

7 December 2017

• 07:4507:45, 7 December 2017 diff hist +2 Roach bait →Mechanism

21 June 2017

• 02:2902:29, 21 June 2017 diff hist +1 m Bedford Vehicles proper English wording

16 May 2017

• 11:4111:41, 16 May 2017 diff hist 0 m Newstead House, Brisbane →History: capitalisation

15 January 2017

• 13:1013:10, 15 January 2017 diff hist −4 m Top Gear (2002 TV series) writing style

8 December 2016

• 10:5610:56, 8 December 2016 diff hist −8 m Churn rate writing style

25 August 2016

• 16:2716:27, 25 August 2016 diff hist −1 m Pontiac V8 engine →History: grammar correction

18 August 2016

• 11:5211:52, 18 August 2016 diff hist −2 m Gladstone, Queensland →History: Writing style

12 July 2016

• 09:5109:51, 12 July 2016 diff hist −2 m Software design writing style
• 09:4909:49, 12 July 2016 diff hist −3 m Software development process writing style and spelling corrections

21 March 2016

• 11:3011:30, 21 March 2016 diff hist −2 Charles Bukowski →Family and early years: writing style: "before", not "prior to". Bukowski would turn in his grave at such affectation.

5 May 2015

• 14:0014:00, 5 May 2015 diff hist −1 m Telemark skiing grammar: there must be no apostrophe on a plural 's'.

16 April 2015

• 15:3715:37, 16 April 2015 diff hist 0 m Hazelwood, Victoria →Landmarks: compound adjectives need a hyphon

21 March 2015

• 11:2611:26, 21 March 2015 diff hist −260 Ringwood, Victoria →History: removed the doubt about the revamp, as it is in fact proceeding
• 11:2411:24, 21 March 2015 diff hist −14 m Ringwood, Victoria →History: writing style and grammar corrections
• 11:2011:20, 21 March 2015 diff hist +9 m Donvale, Victoria →History: grammar correction
• 11:1811:18, 21 March 2015 diff hist −26 m Doncaster, Victoria →History: Writing style improvement.

6 January 2015

• 03:3003:30, 6 January 2015 diff hist −20 Abbreviated Injury Scale removed unnecessary wording

31 December 2014

• 09:1809:18, 31 December 2014 diff hist −2 m Siemens Communications corrected writing style

28 November 2014

• 07:0107:01, 28 November 2014 diff hist +206 Globe Telecom Included the latest reported numbers for revenue and profit. Included a reference to the source of the information

29 September 2014

• 08:3408:34, 29 September 2014 diff hist −5 m SMS →Initial concept: writing style, "time period" is a tautology

23 September 2014

• 08:2608:26, 23 September 2014 diff hist −8 m Wikipedia:Public domain →When does copyright expire?: writing style ("period of time" is a tautology)

17 September 2014

• 06:4706:47, 17 September 2014 diff hist 0 m Fluid coupling →Overview
• 06:4506:45, 17 September 2014 diff hist −3 m Fluid coupling No edit summary

20 May 2014

• 05:2105:21, 20 May 2014 diff hist +3 m History of the Panama Canal →Canal handover
• 05:1705:17, 20 May 2014 diff hist −1 m History of the Panama Canal removed wrong apostrophe
• 05:0405:04, 20 May 2014 diff hist −3 History of the Panama Canal →Setting the course: Fixed a broken sentence.
• 04:5304:53, 20 May 2014 diff hist +1 History of the Panama Canal →New French Canal Company: spelling

5 May 2014

• 06:5106:51, 5 May 2014 diff hist −63 Western Peripheral Expressway →Progress: update on delays

14 October 2013

• 00:5300:53, 14 October 2013 diff hist +44 Pontiac Bonneville →1961-1964: added width and corrected length in accordance with the 1963 owner's guide
• 00:3400:34, 14 October 2013 diff hist −1,022 Pontiac Bonneville →1961-1964: deleted this paragraph because it is not about 1961 to 1964 Bonnevilles

13 April 2013

• 17:2717:27, 13 April 2013 diff hist +6 National Temperance Hospital updated the year of the latest status

6 March 2013

• 12:2012:20, 6 March 2013 diff hist −3 m Android (operating system) writing style

19 September 2012

• 05:5405:54, 19 September 2012 diff hist 0 South Luzon Expressway →Current Exits: grammar: "lies"

17 August 2012

• 13:5213:52, 17 August 2012 diff hist +3 Technology roadmap →Phase 2: Development phase: missing word: IDENTIFICATION AND DESCRIPTION OF *THE* TECHNOLOGY

7 July 2012

• 08:3508:35, 7 July 2012 diff hist −1 M2 Hills Motorway "tollway" instead of "motorway". This makes it clearer and is consistent with other Wikipedia articles (like lane cove tunnel)

4 July 2012

• 07:3607:36, 4 July 2012 diff hist −18 m Lane Cove Tunnel corrected writing style

25 April 2012

• 16:4416:44, 25 April 2012 diff hist −1 m Cutty Sark →History: grammar: "that" instead of "which"

29 March 2012

• 17:5317:53, 29 March 2012 diff hist +21 Ultralight aviation maximum weight is maximum take off weight

22 January 2012

• 09:0209:02, 22 January 2012 diff hist −3 m Whitney Boomerang →History: Grammar: wrong apostrophe on a pronoun

11 January 2012

• 11:1711:17, 11 January 2012 diff hist −2 m Donvale, Victoria No edit summary

4 January 2012

• 10:1910:19, 4 January 2012 diff hist −33 m Cessna 172 writing style and repetition