User contributions for Mcorson

17 April 2024

• 07:4007:40, 17 April 2024 diff hist +46 m Intensive farming Changed "acre" to "unit land area" to generalize to both SI and Imperial systems. Corrected some punctuation and improved some grammar.

3 February 2024

• 13:4513:45, 3 February 2024 diff hist −58 m Functional principal component analysis →Applications: Decreased wordiness

20 March 2023

• 19:0319:03, 20 March 2023 diff hist +1 m Mark Twain Prize for American Humor changed "excepting" to "except for", since the former is much less common in English

12 September 2022

• 11:0011:00, 12 September 2022 diff hist +6 m Samara Weaving →Personal life: added missing </ref>

24 August 2022

• 11:1311:13, 24 August 2022 diff hist +42 m As Above, So Below (film) →Plot: Specified a detail of the plot

19 November 2021

• 11:4711:47, 19 November 2021 diff hist +908 Talk:Nostalgia →Please remove photo of pre-computer home office

27 July 2021

• 11:4111:41, 27 July 2021 diff hist +11 m Lafayette Square Mall →History: minor grammatical corrections and addition of one internal link

22 November 2020

• 16:2116:21, 22 November 2020 diff hist +9 m Second plague pandemic →France: minor grammatical change

18 November 2020

• 07:2507:25, 18 November 2020 diff hist +12 m Bayesian probability →Objective and subjective Bayesian probabilities: More grammar edits
• 07:2207:22, 18 November 2020 diff hist 0 m Bayesian probability →Objective and subjective Bayesian probabilities: Grammar: "on" to "of"
• 07:1907:19, 18 November 2020 diff hist −6 m Conditional probability →Use in inference: Minor grammatical edit to make sentence more direct and clearer

16 August 2020

• 15:4115:41, 16 August 2020 diff hist −9 m Katherine Heigl →Personal life: Updated name of Lady A

3 August 2020

• 10:3310:33, 3 August 2020 diff hist 0 m Fencing response →Notable fencing displays: Improved chronological order of events (still not in complete chronological order)

30 July 2020

• 11:2011:20, 30 July 2020 diff hist −3 m Green chemistry Minor grammatical change from "the designing of" to "the design of"

10 May 2020

• 07:2707:27, 10 May 2020 diff hist +25 m National Churchill Museum added another link to St Mary Aldermanbury wiki page

15 March 2020

• 08:0808:08, 15 March 2020 diff hist +1 m Doctorate →France: Changed acronym of INRA to INRAE

12 March 2020

• 07:2007:20, 12 March 2020 diff hist −3 m Erythema ab igne →Causes: Minor formatting correction for the sentence with "Naare Tatte"

6 March 2020

• 07:1207:12, 6 March 2020 diff hist −3 m Trophic level →Fractional trophic levels: modified grammar of photo caption for clarity

27 August 2019

• 11:5411:54, 27 August 2019 diff hist +30 m Hotel Beau Séjour →Season 1 (2017): Minor clarification to a sentence about Renée in episode 10

18 August 2019

• 10:4310:43, 18 August 2019 diff hist +1,403 Desegregation busing →Historical examples: Added example of Indianapolis
• 10:3610:36, 18 August 2019 diff hist +89 Indianapolis Public Schools →Civil Rights era (1960s - 1980s): Changed date of the start of busing from 1981 to 1973 and added source of the information

12 August 2019

• 10:5710:57, 12 August 2019 diff hist −137 m New Ipswich, New Hampshire →History: Removed a sentence about tall white-pine trees that seemed completely out of context.

18 July 2019

• 10:5510:55, 18 July 2019 diff hist +64 m (I Just) Died in Your Arms →In popular culture: Specifying that the reference in the Stranger Things episode is anachronistic.

3 June 2019

• 06:1506:15, 3 June 2019 diff hist −2 m Global South →Politics
• 06:1406:14, 3 June 2019 diff hist −22 m Global South →Politics: Minor grammatical modifications and "tightening up" of the text to increase clarity

13 April 2019

• 16:1516:15, 13 April 2019 diff hist −11 m 1789 in the United States →Federal Government: removed nonsensical text

7 December 2018

• 21:3921:39, 7 December 2018 diff hist +1 Peltandra virginica →Wildlife: Added apostrophe Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

25 November 2018

• 06:0306:03, 25 November 2018 diff hist −1 m Greyfriars, Dumfries grammatical correction (it's to its)

3 November 2018

• 19:3819:38, 3 November 2018 diff hist −171 m Denailing Removed a sentence about how to remove fake fingernails that is unrelated to this topic.

8 August 2018

• 18:5118:51, 8 August 2018 diff hist +1 m Wayfair →2011 to present: Added "$" before "500 million" for precision and clarity.

11 July 2018

• 20:1720:17, 11 July 2018 diff hist +21 Penny-farthing →Origins and development: Removed the 1889 date from the sentence about the American Star bicycle, which was invented in 1880 (manual for it written by E.H. Corson in 1883)
• 19:4519:45, 11 July 2018 diff hist 0 m American Star Bicycle Modified end of H.B. Smith link, since it refers to the person and not his machine company
• 19:4019:40, 11 July 2018 diff hist +154 History of the bicycle →1870s: the high-wheel bicycle: Added a sentence about the American Star Bicycle

10 July 2018

• 14:0214:02, 10 July 2018 diff hist +153 Wernher von Braun →In popular culture: Added information about Timeless episode

5 June 2018

• 19:2919:29, 5 June 2018 diff hist +2 m Operation Barbarossa →German preparations: changed "who" to "which" for grammar purposes
• 19:0419:04, 5 June 2018 diff hist +2 m Soviet offensive plans controversy added a comma for readability and changed "claim" to "claims" for grammar

8 May 2018

• 06:3606:36, 8 May 2018 diff hist +84 N User:Mcorson page created current
• 06:3306:33, 8 May 2018 diff hist −266 m User:Mcorson/sandbox/Mcorson No edit summary
• 06:3106:31, 8 May 2018 diff hist +518 N User:Mcorson/sandbox/Mcorson page created

4 May 2018

• 05:3105:31, 4 May 2018 diff hist 0 m Jacobite rising of 1745 Changed link from "Prestonpans" to "Battle of Prestonpans"

3 April 2018

• 12:2212:22, 3 April 2018 diff hist +26 m Johnny Cash →Last years: added ", including a Grammy award" to highlight just how much acclaim the video received

14 March 2018

• 18:5118:51, 14 March 2018 diff hist −1 m Arumer Zwarte Hoop →Success: changed "Loosing" to "Losing"

21 February 2018

• 17:5717:57, 21 February 2018 diff hist +181 m Residence permit Added links to pre-existing pages for Canada, Singapore, and the United States

15 February 2018

• 11:4211:42, 15 February 2018 diff hist +11 m Rizwan Farook and Tashfeen Malik →Terrorist attack: Added date for those who might have forgotten it by this point in the text.

22 December 2017

• 18:2518:25, 22 December 2017 diff hist +4 m Hittites →Downfall and demise of the Kingdom: added Sea Peoples link

8 December 2017

• 11:2211:22, 8 December 2017 diff hist +1 m Flattop →Styling: grammar correction

29 November 2017

• 12:0512:05, 29 November 2017 diff hist −1 m Crematorium →The first modern crematory: Changed "were" to "was"

10 November 2017

• 11:5311:53, 10 November 2017 diff hist +105 Honeycrisp →International growth: Added information for France

17 October 2017

• 11:5211:52, 17 October 2017 diff hist −12 m Bar Kokhba revolt →Fourth phase: Grammar fixing
• 11:5111:51, 17 October 2017 diff hist +2 m Bar Kokhba revolt →Julius Severus' campaign: Grammar fixing