User contributions for Saharawiki

9 February 2023

• 16:0616:06, 9 February 2023 diff hist +4 m Burt Bacharach →Personal life: inserted word 'his'~~~~~
• 16:0516:05, 9 February 2023 diff hist +9 m Burt Bacharach →Personal life: inserted the word 'marriage' (unintentionally deleted on last editing round)~~~~~
• 16:0316:03, 9 February 2023 diff hist −53 m Burt Bacharach →Personal life: Edit for writing quality + flow only—no change to content (rephrased slightly to eliminate some repeated sentence structures and word choices, such as 'lasted,')~~~~~
• 15:4315:43, 9 February 2023 diff hist +4 m Burt Bacharach →Personal life: inserted two paragraph breaks for clarity~~~~~

20 January 2023

• 01:0801:08, 20 January 2023 diff hist −53 m Grant Wahl →Personal life: Reordered paragraph slightly for flow, logic, and succinctness.~~~~~

28 December 2022

• 19:4519:45, 28 December 2022 diff hist +1 m Carlo Ponti →Death: inserted a comma~~~~~

30 November 2022

• 08:4808:48, 30 November 2022 diff hist −27 m David W. Anderson →Personal life: Edit for writing quality—not for content (e.g. eliminated double parenthetical and changed 'her original last name was... ' to 'nee...'~~~~~ )~~~~~

29 November 2022

• 22:0722:07, 29 November 2022 diff hist +1 m Henry Clay Folger →Early life: Inserted a comma~~~~~
• 22:0522:05, 29 November 2022 diff hist +1 m Henry Clay Folger →Early life: Inserted a comma~~~~~
• 22:0422:04, 29 November 2022 diff hist +3 m Henry Clay Folger →Early life: Inserted the word 'in'~~~~~
• 22:0422:04, 29 November 2022 diff hist +9 m Henry Clay Folger →Early life: Edits for writing quality only — with no change to content (e.g. changed 'the board of trustees at Adelphi' to 'Adelphi's board of trustees )~~~~~
• 21:5921:59, 29 November 2022 diff hist −70 m Henry Clay Folger →Early life: Edits for writing quality only—no change to content (slight rephrasing + streamlining to eliminate excess verbiage)~~~~~

23 November 2022

• 19:2719:27, 23 November 2022 diff hist −2 m Dick Scanlan →Personal life: deleted two spaces~~~~~

13 November 2022

• 16:0816:08, 13 November 2022 diff hist +23 m Petra Němcová →Career: Edits for writing quality only—with no change to content (slightly rephrased sentence).~~~~~
• 01:5301:53, 13 November 2022 diff hist +3 m Edward Hopper →Early life: Edits for writing quality only — not for content (e.g. changed 'being' to 'becoming')~~~~~
• 01:5101:51, 13 November 2022 diff hist −20 m Edward Hopper →Early life: Edits for writing quality only — not for content (inserted and deleted commas)~~~~~
• 01:4001:40, 13 November 2022 diff hist −8 m Edward Hopper →Early life: Edits for writing quality only—not for content (e.g. changed 'ten' to '10' and rephrased slightly to eliminate repetition of verb 'to include' within a single sentence~~~~~
• 01:3601:36, 13 November 2022 diff hist +35 m Edward Hopper →Early life: Edits for writing quality only — not for content (changed "...and showed talent in drawing at age five..." to "...and, by the time he was five, his talent with drawing was already apparent...."~~~~~
• 01:3301:33, 13 November 2022 diff hist −3 m Edward Hopper →Early life: Edits for writing quality only — not for content (changed '...his only sister Marion...' to 'his sister, Marion,...' since it was already stated that he was one of two children)~~~~~)~~~~~

12 November 2022

• 18:2618:26, 12 November 2022 diff hist −2 m Hannah Arendt Edits for writing quality only—not for content (e.g. eliminated a grammatical 'dangler'—changing 'At the age of three, her family...' to 'When she was three, her family....')~~~~~
• 17:3517:35, 12 November 2022 diff hist 0 m Rob Delaney →Writing: Capitalized a 'T'~~~~~
• 17:2817:28, 12 November 2022 diff hist +13 m Rob Delaney →Writing: Added missing spaces, etc.~~~~~
• 17:2717:27, 12 November 2022 diff hist +486 Rob Delaney Added referenced info about the subject's most recent book~~~~

30 October 2022

• 17:0617:06, 30 October 2022 diff hist −2 m Portia (The Merchant of Venice) →Plot: Deleted two commas~~~~~

28 October 2022

• 20:0320:03, 28 October 2022 diff hist +72 Gypsy Taub Inserted referenced/footnoted birthdate of subject~~~~
• 19:5819:58, 28 October 2022 diff hist +25 Gypsy Taub →Personal life: Based on the other info in this Wikipedia entry, inserted an approximate age~~~~~
• 19:5419:54, 28 October 2022 diff hist −1 m Gypsy Taub →Early life and education: Changed 'immigrating' to 'immigrated' for correct verb construction~~~~~
• 19:5319:53, 28 October 2022 diff hist −6 m Gypsy Taub →Early life and education: Deleted a repetition of the word 'father' and inserted a period~~~~~
• 19:5219:52, 28 October 2022 diff hist +32 m Gypsy Taub →Early life and education: Edits for writing quality, flow, and clarity only—not for content (slight rephrasing)~~~~~

27 October 2022

• 06:4706:47, 27 October 2022 diff hist −8 m Marla Malcolm Beck →Personal life: Replaced an m-dash with a comma~~~~~

26 October 2022

• 19:1119:11, 26 October 2022 diff hist +11 m Stephen Kaufer →Early career: Added double square brackets to link to another Wikipedia entry.~~~~~
• 19:0719:07, 26 October 2022 diff hist +4 m Stephen Kaufer →TripAdvisor: Added double square brackets to link to another Wikipedia entry.~~~~~
• 19:0619:06, 26 October 2022 diff hist +24 m Stephen Kaufer →TripAdvisor: Added double square brackets to link to other Wikipedia entries.~~~~~
• 19:0219:02, 26 October 2022 diff hist +4 m Stephen Kaufer →TripAdvisor: Added double square brackets to link to another Wikipedia entry.~~~~~
• 19:0019:00, 26 October 2022 diff hist +12 m Stephen Kaufer →Early life: Added double square brackets to link to other Wikipedia entries.~~~~~
• 18:5718:57, 26 October 2022 diff hist +8 Stephen Kaufer →Early life: Added double square brackets to link to other Wikipedia entries.~~~~~
• 18:5518:55, 26 October 2022 diff hist +4 m Stephen Kaufer →Early life: Put double brackets around 'Harvard University' to link it to its own Wikipedia entry~~~~~
• 18:5318:53, 26 October 2022 diff hist 0 m Stephen Kaufer →Early life: Added a missing period.~~~~~
• 18:5118:51, 26 October 2022 diff hist +1 m Stephen Kaufer Changed 'Tripadvisor' throughout this article to 'TripAdvisor'~~~~~
• 18:4718:47, 26 October 2022 diff hist −3 m Stephen Kaufer →Personal life: Deleted a stray not-equal sign.~~~~~
• 18:4718:47, 26 October 2022 diff hist +2 m Stephen Kaufer →Personal life: corrected an extra 'has' to read as 'he'~~~~~
• 18:4618:46, 26 October 2022 diff hist +4 m Stephen Kaufer →Personal life: Inserted the word 'has'~~~~~
• 18:4518:45, 26 October 2022 diff hist +4 m Stephen Kaufer →Personal life: Inserted the word 'its'~~~~~
• 18:4418:44, 26 October 2022 diff hist −3 m Stephen Kaufer →Tripadvisor: Deleted the superfluous word 'up'~~~~~
• 18:4118:41, 26 October 2022 diff hist +2 m Stephen Kaufer →Early life: Slight rephrasing for better flow—with no change to content or meaning.~~~~~
• 18:3818:38, 26 October 2022 diff hist −4 m Stephen Kaufer →Tripadvisor: Changed 'purchase' to 'sale'—minor, word-choice tweak with no change to content or meaning.~~~~~
• 18:3618:36, 26 October 2022 diff hist +2 m Stephen Kaufer →Early career: Changed 'he'd' to 'he had'~~~~~
• 18:3418:34, 26 October 2022 diff hist −7 m Stephen Kaufer →Personal life: Deleted the superfluous words 'the' and 'of'~~~~~
• 18:3318:33, 26 October 2022 diff hist +2 m Stephen Kaufer →Early life: Changed 'who'd' to 'who had'~~~~~
• 18:3118:31, 26 October 2022 diff hist +1 m Stephen Kaufer →Personal life: Added a missing (closing) square bracket~~~~~