User contributions for Shakuran13

26 September 2024

• 08:2708:27, 26 September 2024 diff hist −902 Mercury contamination in Grassy Narrows this article is written super weirdly and I'm attempting to fix it but I feel like it could use more revisions

23 July 2024

• 01:2001:20, 23 July 2024 diff hist −1 m Sea of Zanj I think "the" makes more sense here?

11 February 2024

• 03:3003:30, 11 February 2024 diff hist −1 m 2024 Pakistani general election →Analysis: his name is spelled Grim not Grimm

9 February 2024

• 21:1321:13, 9 February 2024 diff hist +738 Aftermath of the January 6 United States Capitol attack saw this today and felt it was relevant to the article but if it's not pertinent then I don't mind if it's deleted/moved
• 20:5020:50, 9 February 2024 diff hist +368 Talk:Destiny (streamer) →Another canvassing effort: new section Tag: New topic

2 February 2024

• 04:5704:57, 2 February 2024 diff hist −4 m January 6 United States Capitol attack minor grammatical error

9 December 2023

• 05:5305:53, 9 December 2023 diff hist −9 The Glassworker kind of unnecessary adverb

31 August 2023

• 01:0301:03, 31 August 2023 diff hist −19 Joyland (film) people who live in inner-city Lahore who consider 40k rupees to be a lot are probably not middle-class

22 April 2023

• 10:1210:12, 22 April 2023 diff hist −149 Sexual orientation and the Canadian military idk anything about the info itself but the grammar/style of this article was pretty weak - definitely worth a second pass
• 09:5509:55, 22 April 2023 diff hist +26 John Langan adding a link

6 April 2023

• 08:1708:17, 6 April 2023 diff hist −3 Summer Triangle No edit summary

15 February 2023

• 22:2222:22, 15 February 2023 diff hist −5 Seto Kaiba No edit summary

17 January 2023

• 03:2803:28, 17 January 2023 diff hist +2 Transgender personnel in the South Korean military →Transgender women

9 December 2022

• 04:1704:17, 9 December 2022 diff hist −2 Brian Tyler italics issue

29 July 2022

• 01:4301:43, 29 July 2022 diff hist +21 Trumpism →Canada
• 01:4001:40, 29 July 2022 diff hist +33 Trumpism →Canada

19 July 2022

• 19:2219:22, 19 July 2022 diff hist −43 2020s in music grammar etc?
• 19:1319:13, 19 July 2022 diff hist −48 2010s in music trying to clean up some of the writing here - probably could still use a bit more with better citations too

16 July 2022

• 12:5912:59, 16 July 2022 diff hist +13 Military Inc. grammar fixes

17 May 2022

• 01:3001:30, 17 May 2022 diff hist +4 Gawr Gura i think you have to italicize

29 December 2021

• 11:4411:44, 29 December 2021 diff hist −41 Arabian riff →2020s: I don't think this song has it? Not as far as I heard

22 November 2021

• 21:5821:58, 22 November 2021 diff hist +423 2021 in South Korean music →Debuting groups

13 October 2021

• 11:1811:18, 13 October 2021 diff hist +4 List of K-pop songs on the Billboard charts →Canadian Digital Song Sales
• 11:1811:18, 13 October 2021 diff hist +4 List of K-pop songs on the Billboard charts →Bubbling Under Hot 100 Singles (Complete): every other entry uses stage name

23 August 2021

• 12:3212:32, 23 August 2021 diff hist −117 I Want to Eat Your Pancreas →Plot: i think we probably don't need that detail, it's kind of extraneous

6 August 2021

• 16:3416:34, 6 August 2021 diff hist −18 Freedom of religion in China Undid revision 1036594684 by 2605:8D80:627:C983:E1C8:9184:565A:AD88 (talk) this particular quote is only referring to the constitution Tag: Undo

15 July 2021

• 04:2604:26, 15 July 2021 diff hist −2 Gay icon →Responses: an homage to the shooting sounds like it's pro-shooting
• 04:2004:20, 15 July 2021 diff hist −10 Gay icon →Lady Gaga: incorrect lowercase

2 July 2021

• 05:5605:56, 2 July 2021 diff hist −2 Freedom of religion in China there may not even be a law outside Xinjiang that bans children from mosques (if there is, it's not in the cited sources from what I could tell)

4 June 2021

• 07:3007:30, 4 June 2021 diff hist −608 Pakistani hip hop music →Urdu rap: random repeated paragraph?

8 April 2021

• 18:0918:09, 8 April 2021 diff hist −5 Trumpism "incorrect" makes it seem like the comparisons are entirely wrong when the articles cited note at least some similarities and level of danger

28 March 2021

• 10:2310:23, 28 March 2021 diff hist +512 Talk:Dragon Ball (manga) →publication date: new section
• 08:5908:59, 28 March 2021 diff hist +4 m I Want to Eat Your Pancreas →Plot: added some line breaks
• 08:5808:58, 28 March 2021 diff hist +633 I Want to Eat Your Pancreas →Plot: the synopsis basically left out all of act 2 (and some of act 1) so i added it, although i think the wording could be touched up a bit

30 January 2021

• 01:5801:58, 30 January 2021 diff hist +1 Seto Kaiba →Creation and development

4 January 2021

• 07:4007:40, 4 January 2021 diff hist −465 Isekai →Other countries: this seems to be a weird inclusion? it's like saying 13 going on 30 has isekai elements, which even if true, seems to be more misleading than informative

3 January 2021

• 01:1601:16, 3 January 2021 diff hist −172 Kathryn Bigelow →2008–present: feels weirdly not-neutral to mention this but feel free to revert lol

2 January 2021

• 23:3223:32, 2 January 2021 diff hist 0 m The Rocket (short story) No edit summary
• 23:2423:24, 2 January 2021 diff hist −42 The Illustrated Man →The Exiles: not sure what that was about

29 October 2020

• 23:4223:42, 29 October 2020 diff hist +10 m F minor put his first name to not confuse with Schubert lol
• 23:3623:36, 29 October 2020 diff hist +13 B-flat major →History
• 23:3523:35, 29 October 2020 diff hist −36 B-flat major the wording here was clunky so i tried to improve it
• 23:3223:32, 29 October 2020 diff hist −1 m C major →Compositions
• 23:3123:31, 29 October 2020 diff hist −4 m C major →Compositions
• 23:2823:28, 29 October 2020 diff hist −8 m E-flat major "this is not to say" felt unnecessary but it doesn't really matter i guess
• 23:2523:25, 29 October 2020 diff hist 0 m E-flat major →Characteristics
• 23:2423:24, 29 October 2020 diff hist 0 m 1812 Overture No edit summary

12 October 2020

• 09:5509:55, 12 October 2020 diff hist +729 Twice Updated with info about new upcoming album - lmk if the citations are improper, I tried to follow the same format as other kpop pages

28 September 2020

• 09:3809:38, 28 September 2020 diff hist +298 Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Classical music →Scale degrees

27 September 2020

• 23:5023:50, 27 September 2020 diff hist +11 1812 Overture surely homonym album can't be correct here