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15:4615:46, 24 November 2024 diff hist +1 Spanish ship Nuestra Señora de la Santísima Trinidad →Service: Changed a reference to the ship from "it" to "she" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
15:4315:43, 24 November 2024 diff hist +17 Spanish ship Nuestra Señora de la Santísima Trinidad Copy edit; no content changes Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
09:1309:13, 24 November 2024 diff hist −7 Terminal lucidity →Timeline: "more recent" --> "2020" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
06:2806:28, 24 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Betty Wragge Split up a run-on sentence current
06:2706:27, 24 November 2024 diff hist +20 m Annibale Fontana Reworded a caption per per MOS:CAPFRAG: "Most captions are not complete sentences, but merely sentence fragments, which should not end with a period or full stop" current
06:2406:24, 24 November 2024 diff hist −9 m Loiyangalani Airport Copy edit; no content changes current
06:2006:20, 24 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Heinkel HeS 40 Copy edit; no content changes current
06:1606:16, 24 November 2024 diff hist −7 m Nick Anderson (footballer) Rephrased an awkward sentence that was also missing a finishing period current
06:1406:14, 24 November 2024 diff hist +12 m Sörmlandsleden Renamed "The trail" section to rather clunky "Route and description" per MOS:AT: "Do not use articles (a, an, or the) as the first word" current
06:1206:12, 24 November 2024 diff hist −7 m Sörmlandsleden Grammar: "1,000-kilometres" --> "1,000 kilometres"
06:0806:08, 24 November 2024 diff hist 0 m INS Vikrant (2013) Improper noun "Formal Commissioning" --> "formal commissioning"
06:0606:06, 24 November 2024 diff hist 0 m INS Vikramaditya Changed improper noun "aircraft carrier" from capitalized to sentence case or lowercase current
05:5705:57, 24 November 2024 diff hist −1,312 m User talk:Stephen Hui Blanked page; deleted the message about another user without responding because a) I'm not an admin and thus have no more ability to stop abuse than anyone else, and b) the user in question has since been blocked indefinitely (i.e. this was dealt with) current Tags: Replaced Manual revert
05:5105:51, 24 November 2024 diff hist +70 m Battle of Trafalgar Rephrased references to the French/Spanish fleet as "the enemy", as they made the article read very much as written from the British perspective
03:0703:07, 24 November 2024 diff hist −2 Royal Mail →Government office: Renamed section heading "A Government Office" --> "Government office" per MOS:HEAD("Section headings [...] should be presented in sentence case") and MOS:AT ("Do not use articles (a, an, or the) as the first word") current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

05:2705:27, 22 November 2024 diff hist −69 Corn dog →Annual celebration: Removed text explaining that March Madness is the NCAA Men's Division I Basketball Championship, and containing a wikilink to an article that was already wikilinked one word prior, as it wasn't relevant to an article about corn dogs current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
05:2405:24, 22 November 2024 diff hist +1 Corn dog →New Zealand: Changed midsentence capitalized "Corn dogs" --> "corn dogs" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
05:2205:22, 22 November 2024 diff hist −5 Corn dog →Canada: Removed unnecessary (and incorrectly lowercase) "inc." from "Conagra inc." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

08:2808:28, 17 November 2024 diff hist −417 Ashfaq Munshi Deleted sentence "Munshi "lost his head" during the dot-com era"; it was a subjective judgement, nonsensical without more context, and per MOS:IDIOM, "if a literal reading of a phrase makes no sense given the context, the sentence needs rewording" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
02:1902:19, 17 November 2024 diff hist −59 MapQuest Excessively wordy "MapQuest vies for market share with competitors such as" --> "MapQuest's competitors include" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
02:1302:13, 17 November 2024 diff hist −2 AOL Removed unnecessary parentheses current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

06:5506:55, 14 November 2024 diff hist +3 AIM-174B →Range and use: "degrades the [...] ranges and capabilities" --> "understates the [...] ranges and capabilities" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

08:4208:42, 11 November 2024 diff hist 0 Chiquita Capitalized proper name "Banana Massacre" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
08:4108:41, 11 November 2024 diff hist 0 Chiquita →History: Capitalized proper name "Banana Massacre" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
08:1908:19, 11 November 2024 diff hist −16 Copacabana (1947 film) →Plot: Removed verbiage "needless to say" per MOS:OF COURSE current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
05:5105:51, 11 November 2024 diff hist +1 Orson Welles Paul Masson advertisements →Background: Added a period to the end of a caption per MOS:CAPFRAG: "If any complete sentence occurs in a caption, then all sentences [...] in that caption should end with a period or full stop." current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

07:0107:01, 5 November 2024 diff hist −6 Brazilian battleship Minas Geraes →Early career: "at the request of Armstrong's" --> "at Armstrong's request" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

15:4315:43, 3 November 2024 diff hist −35 Kelli Valade No need to mention two former names of her former employer in the second sentence of a biographical article; removed one of them Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

04:3704:37, 31 October 2024 diff hist +4 MV Mærsk Boston →History: "downturn in world economy" --> "downturn in the world economy" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

01:1001:10, 28 October 2024 diff hist 0 Warsaw Uprising →1989 to present: Changed a midsentence improper noun to lowercase Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

05:0805:08, 25 October 2024 diff hist −2 Emmanuelle (1974 film) →Filming: Deleted two extra periods from the end of a sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

00:5900:59, 24 October 2024 diff hist +8 m Joseph Stilwell Copy edit; no content changes Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

01:5801:58, 22 October 2024 diff hist −2 M27 Infantry Automatic Rifle →Design: Removed period from two captions per MOS:CAPFRAG: "Most captions are not complete sentences, but merely sentence fragments, which should not end with a period or full stop" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
01:5701:57, 22 October 2024 diff hist −1 M27 Infantry Automatic Rifle →Fielding: Removed period from caption per MOS:CAPFRAG: "Most captions are not complete sentences, but merely sentence fragments, which should not end with a period or full stop" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

14:4814:48, 21 October 2024 diff hist 0 JS Kaga →Air defense: Removed unnecessary hyphen from "air-defense" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
05:2705:27, 21 October 2024 diff hist −39 m Citicorp Center engineering crisis Copy edit; no content changes
05:2305:23, 21 October 2024 diff hist −1 m Citicorp Center engineering crisis Removed grammatically incorrect comma

01:4901:49, 20 October 2024 diff hist −5 Killer whales of Eden, New South Wales →Davidson whalers and "the law of the tongue": Hyphenated compound adjective "30 ft" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

20:3220:32, 19 October 2024 diff hist −1 M320 Grenade Launcher Module →Design: Removed period from caption per MOS:CAPFRAG: "Most captions are not complete sentences, but merely sentence fragments, which should not end with a period or full stop" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

20:2620:26, 14 October 2024 diff hist −2,239 Vacuum truck Removed section on Bangalore; there's nothing unique or noteworthy about how vacuum trucks are used there that merits mention in the article
20:2520:25, 14 October 2024 diff hist 0 m Vacuum truck Typo fix: "Vacuum trucks can be equipped with a high pressure pump if they are used to clean out sewers from sand" --> "sand from sewers"
20:2420:24, 14 October 2024 diff hist −1 m Vacuum truck Removed period from caption per MOS:CAPFRAG: "Most captions are not complete sentences, but merely sentence fragments, which should not end with a period or full stop"

06:0106:01, 13 October 2024 diff hist −3 Milorganite →History: Added a space between two words and removed a wikilink to golf course per MOS:OVERLINK ("what generally should not be linked [...] everyday words understood by most readers in context" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

21:0121:01, 11 October 2024 diff hist +4 m Trumpf Edited section titles per MOS:HEAD: "Section headings should [...] be presented in sentence case not title case" and MOS:AMP: "In normal text and headings, use and instead of the ampersand"

04:0604:06, 10 October 2024 diff hist −11 Thomas Cook Removed imprecise/ambiguous "and the like" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
04:0204:02, 10 October 2024 diff hist 0 Roger Fenton the Great Exhibition --> Great Exhibition, as "the" isn't part of the name current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

06:1606:16, 7 October 2024 diff hist −49 Ulexite Removed the dimensions of a piece of ulexite from a photo caption describing said piece of ulexite; its dimensions aren't particularly relevant or helpful in an article about ulexite in general versus that piece in particular

22:3722:37, 5 October 2024 diff hist +15 m Sukhoi S-70 Okhotnik-B Split up a run-on sentence
22:2322:23, 5 October 2024 diff hist −4 Zhou-class submarine "built at the Wuchang Shipbuilding" --> "built by Wuchang Shipbuilding" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
18:3818:38, 5 October 2024 diff hist −19 Course: Oblivion →Plot: Copy edit of an awkwardly phrased sentence current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

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