User contributions for SweetLight

13 April 2024

• 11:5711:57, 13 April 2024 diff hist −10 m Hiroo Yamagata removed evaluative word "important" Tag: Visual edit

28 January 2024

• 05:1005:10, 28 January 2024 diff hist −105 Geophysical imaging The sentence I erased is repetitive in structure and not worthy of the first paragraph as far as content. Tag: Visual edit

5 December 2023

• 23:2523:25, 5 December 2023 diff hist +1 High-altitude platform station →Studies
• 23:2423:24, 5 December 2023 diff hist −471 High-altitude platform station →Studies: corrected grammatical errors and erased the name of an article author that was unecessary
• 23:1523:15, 5 December 2023 diff hist +11 High-altitude platform station No edit summary
• 23:1223:12, 5 December 2023 diff hist −17 High-altitude platform station grammatical errors corrected
• 23:0923:09, 5 December 2023 diff hist +18 High-altitude platform station Grammatical error corrected
• 23:0823:08, 5 December 2023 diff hist −1 m High-altitude platform station No edit summary
• 23:0823:08, 5 December 2023 diff hist +4 High-altitude platform station Grammatical errors corrected

4 December 2023

• 00:4200:42, 4 December 2023 diff hist −22 Solar wind →Velocity and density: Removed imperial unit which was arbitrarily inserted here

3 December 2023

• 01:0601:06, 3 December 2023 diff hist +36 Heliophysics Create subsection for tangential historical information
• 00:5800:58, 3 December 2023 diff hist −1 Space weather →Humans in commercial aviation: Erased extra line break
• 00:5800:58, 3 December 2023 diff hist −2,038 Space weather →Humans in commercial aviation: Deleted a passage that was a significant digression from the topic of space weather. Move to a separate page covering the cancer risks of aviation.

23 October 2023

• 23:0023:00, 23 October 2023 diff hist −10 m A Canticle for Leibowitz →Development: "Extensive" is vague, undefined. Tag: Visual edit
• 22:5922:59, 23 October 2023 diff hist −40 A Canticle for Leibowitz →Development: Whether this novel is a "success", "achievement" etc. is a matter of opinion. Such a evaluations should be reserved for a Reception section in this article.
• 22:5522:55, 23 October 2023 diff hist −12 A Canticle for Leibowitz →Development: Whether the layer of complexity is "significant" is a matter of opinion. Too evaluative.
• 22:5022:50, 23 October 2023 diff hist −40 A Canticle for Leibowitz →Development: Deleted an evaluative statement. It is a matter of opinion which version is better. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
• 22:4522:45, 23 October 2023 diff hist −61 A Canticle for Leibowitz Unsourced and unreferenced opinion

12 March 2020

• 10:3910:39, 12 March 2020 diff hist −486 Viroid This information is distracting and irrelevant in the introduction.

19 January 2019

• 01:1701:17, 19 January 2019 diff hist −184 Vegetation The distinction "natural vegetation" is not helpful in intro so I erased it. Include below if necessary. Tag: Visual edit

1 October 2018

• 05:4305:43, 1 October 2018 diff hist −172 SUV Grammatical misuse of "the", vague use of "a lot," and uncited. Tag: Visual edit

25 September 2018

• 05:4205:42, 25 September 2018 diff hist +6 m Constitution of the United States No edit summary Tag: Visual edit

9 August 2018

• 01:0401:04, 9 August 2018 diff hist −265 Eskimo →Description: A blog on a university website is not a valid source. Citations should be made to the linguistic literature. Tag: Visual edit

5 July 2018

• 08:0408:04, 5 July 2018 diff hist +121 Aspergillus oryzae This discussion of kōji being a "national" fungus juxtaposed with facts elsewhere in the article that indicate it originated in China and is used throughout East Asia seemed in need of qualification Tag: Visual edit
• 07:5807:58, 5 July 2018 diff hist 0 Aspergillus oryzae Titles not used Tag: Visual edit

25 June 2018

• 11:3411:34, 25 June 2018 diff hist −39 Montesquieu →Political views: This claim is uncited and uses an unfamiliar word in a confusing way Tag: Visual edit
• 11:2711:27, 25 June 2018 diff hist +6 The Spirit of Law →Liberty and the separation of powers: Leaving the title of the book in French is confusing, pretentious and unjustified. Tag: Visual edit

5 June 2018

• 05:5405:54, 5 June 2018 diff hist −68 Red blood cell The synonyms were overlapping and scattered so I put them at the beginning as per other articles Tag: Visual edit
• 02:3702:37, 5 June 2018 diff hist −7 Antigen The introduction was *way* too long and complicated so I moved a bunch of text down to "terminology." The text I moved should probably be made into a separate section or simply deleted. Tag: Visual edit

29 May 2018

• 05:1405:14, 29 May 2018 diff hist +11 m Chemical formula No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 05:1105:11, 29 May 2018 diff hist 0 m Aciclovir →History Tag: Visual edit

28 May 2018

• 06:1106:11, 28 May 2018 diff hist +9 m Cathode-ray tube No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 04:4604:46, 28 May 2018 diff hist +2 Volumetric display No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 04:0604:06, 28 May 2018 diff hist −225 Pixel Irrelevant, distracting detail for the introduction. Include elsewhere or erase. Tag: Visual edit
• 04:0504:05, 28 May 2018 diff hist −83 Pixel Too complex and detailed for the introduction. Distracting. Put elsewhere Tag: Visual edit

27 May 2018

• 12:1612:16, 27 May 2018 diff hist −68 Discourse on Inequality Uncited and unclear so I deleted a section Tag: Visual edit

15 May 2018

• 05:3405:34, 15 May 2018 diff hist −4 m Sheree Thomas →Career: Sounds like marketing copy Tag: Visual edit
• 05:3305:33, 15 May 2018 diff hist −12 Sheree Thomas →Career: "some of the best" is not a fact but an individual opinion Tag: Visual edit
• 00:5300:53, 15 May 2018 diff hist −19 m Amnesty International →Criticism and controversies: removed repitition Tag: Visual edit

9 May 2018

• 11:2711:27, 9 May 2018 diff hist −29 Global public good Erased unclear passage Tag: Visual edit
• 08:2308:23, 9 May 2018 diff hist −381 Standard deviation Eliminated repitition Tag: Visual edit
• 00:3200:32, 9 May 2018 diff hist −62 Ruth Glacier →See also: Imperial measurement is not appropriate for an international encyclopedia. Tag: Visual edit

1 May 2018

• 05:5505:55, 1 May 2018 diff hist +8 m List of cyberpunk works →Novels and novellas Tag: Visual edit
• 05:5305:53, 1 May 2018 diff hist +682 List of cyberpunk works →Novels and novellas: Re-added two titles that belong here but were deleted. Both titles are cited to trustworthy sources Tag: Visual edit
• 05:3905:39, 1 May 2018 diff hist +75 List of cyberpunk works →Novels and novellas: Added missing title Tag: Visual edit
• 05:3205:32, 1 May 2018 diff hist +79 Cyberpunk →Style and ethos: Phillip K. Dick is not one of the members of the cyberpunk movement. He is of a previous generation. Tag: Visual edit
• 05:2905:29, 1 May 2018 diff hist −48 Cyberpunk →History and origins Tag: Visual edit
• 05:2305:23, 1 May 2018 diff hist −34 m Cyberpunk →History and origins Tag: Visual edit

30 April 2018

• 01:3801:38, 30 April 2018 diff hist −789 Adoption study →Personality: This entire section is so ungrammatical, poorly, written and unsourced it is almost incomprehensible. I have deleted most of it in the hopes that it can be re-written by someone with sufficient expertise Tag: Visual edit
• 01:3501:35, 30 April 2018 diff hist −31 m Adoption study →Personality: Corrected poor grammatical construction Tag: Visual edit