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A user with 4 edits. Account created on 17 April 2024.
17 April 2024
- 22:2022:20, 17 April 2024 diff hist −333 Powershop Minor grammar and wording changes in the first half. Bolder changes to the "Reception" section, to reduce the glorifying/advertisement-esque character of the text. Minor and unnecessary embellishments about the company removed from the very end of the article. Tags: references removed Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 21:3521:35, 17 April 2024 diff hist −87 m Captive bubble method Whole bunch of grammar, wording, and punctuation changes throughout the article! Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 21:1121:11, 17 April 2024 diff hist −4 m Megasonic cleaning Slight rewording throughout, punctuation changes, and a missing word. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 20:2520:25, 17 April 2024 diff hist −21 m Hypothetical imperative Rewording of poorly written sentence, I think this is more clear and significantly more accurate. current