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16 December 2024

  • 16:2216:22, 16 December 2024 diff hist +836 Narodnaya Volya Added - ‘ The assassination of Tsar Alexander ll who had been a seemingly more progressive Tsar, and more willing to pass reforms despite their lack of success and to mostly benefit the security of the Tsar state. Would instead work to discredit the idea of reform since the people showed a un-willingness to reform, justifying further repressions under Alexander lll. [1] ‘ Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

13 December 2024

  • 16:1816:18, 13 December 2024 diff hist +617 m Narodnaya Volya Assignation of Alexander ll Beginning paragraph - explained the short term effects of the immediate assassination and how the security of the Tsarist state in Russia was not as affected as it would seem an assassination would suggest. In general I went into more detail just on how the security of the Tsar was not challenged Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

28 November 2024

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21 June 2024

20 June 2024

  • 15:2015:20, 20 June 2024 diff hist +261 Taiping Rebellion The ending felt too random and unhistorical - being too vague or too precise- often incorrect grammar and historical accuracy throughout the page especially during Hongs death and root cause or goals of the heavenly kingdom Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

18 May 2024

  • 10:3310:33, 18 May 2024 diff hist +4 First Opium War “letter to Queen Victoria appealing to her moral responsibility to stop the opium trade, although she never read it.” Changed ‘read ‘to received since it wasn’t she never read it but was unable as it never reached her in the first place - saying she never read it insists that there were tensions or aggression as it suggest the queen outright refused where as that simply isn’t the case Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15 May 2024

  • 15:1415:14, 15 May 2024 diff hist +221 m First Opium War Lin zexu actions as the most senior and incorruptible viceroy as when stamping on the illegal trade of opium ok d that many European warehouses of opium which publicly displayed there merchandise had not been punished or had it removed showing the amount of corruption within the government and how many officials had conclude against the imperial ban for personal benfifit never truly being about the opium itself , if any issues with this or being simplistic please make changes or arguments agaisn Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15 April 2024

  • 16:1416:14, 15 April 2024 diff hist +563 Louis-Napoléon, Prince Imperial Summary of the last events of the prince imperials life in the Zulu ambush of the British patrol during the Anglo Zulu war of 1879 - the Orginal I had felt had been to vage about it , leaving gaps and questions to be asked - I you feel as if the grammar is inadequate or the text is too long , please feel free to shorter it but with a proper and viable reasoning. Thank you Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 February 2024

21 February 2024

  • 16:0116:01, 21 February 2024 diff hist +15 m Nian Rebellion Changed the date in the introduction for the taiping revolution to 1850-1864 farther than the 1851-1864 due to taiping movements before the main revolution took place in 1850 aswell as correcting ‘south china ‘ to Southern china Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit