User contributions for Tynam

18 April 2024

• 21:4821:48, 18 April 2024 diff hist +742 Talk:Morning Glories →Discontinued: new section Tag: New topic

18 June 2023

• 18:2918:29, 18 June 2023 diff hist −2 m Meld (software) Grammar edit. To call it "the" visual diff tool implies that it's the only one (false) or is superior (non-neutral); it should have been "a".

30 July 2020

• 14:3114:31, 30 July 2020 diff hist +1 m Talk:High-g training →Excessively strong claim: Corrected sig; had accidentally logged out.
• 14:3014:30, 30 July 2020 diff hist −36 m Talk:High-g training →Excessively strong claim: Corrected sig; had accidentally logged out.

10 April 2020

• 18:4718:47, 10 April 2020 diff hist −5 m Yoomurjak's Ring Duplicate noun in opening sentence.

10 June 2019

• 14:0014:00, 10 June 2019 diff hist −17 Sound Blaster Audigy →Sound Blaster Audigy 2 ZS: More neutral tone, without changing factual content. Consider removing {review} warning.

18 May 2019

• 16:0016:00, 18 May 2019 diff hist 0 Shadowgrounds →Gameplay: Less aggressive wording about the thin plot; old version was close to opinion.
• 15:5815:58, 18 May 2019 diff hist −25 Shadowgrounds →Gameplay: Removed POV tag - there is no NPOV debate on the talk page, tag has been dormant for years, no obvious NPOV violation visible.

21 April 2019

• 17:3717:37, 21 April 2019 diff hist −15 m Castlevania: Curse of Darkness →Gameplay: Grammar fix - "faster load times" is not the converse of "obtaining a special item if you finished a previous computer game".

19 April 2019

• 18:1818:18, 19 April 2019 diff hist −4 3rd Super Robot Wars Alpha: To the End of the Galaxy Grammar edit; 'out-beaten' is (a) not a word, and (b) a needless emphasis when 'beaten' already conveys the meaning.

7 April 2019

• 22:0322:03, 7 April 2019 diff hist −42 Gurumin →Reception: Removed extra detail that didn't provide any actual information.

27 March 2019

• 18:4518:45, 27 March 2019 diff hist −64 Robot Arena 2: Design and Destroy →Gameplay: Removed unsourced claim as it's irrelevant to the article; replaced with historical fact. Changed to past tense as servers no longer exist.

21 March 2019

• 01:2401:24, 21 March 2019 diff hist −1,540 Blood Omen 2 →Story: Tidied up over-enthusiastic wording and removed needless details. Needs more work before we consider removing 'excess detail' template.

20 March 2019

• 18:0218:02, 20 March 2019 diff hist −139 Freedom: First Resistance Removed 'Gamespot reported it was about to be released just before it was released' in opening paragraph. It is neither surprising nor particularly relevant to the game. Citation kept.

13 March 2019

• 17:5017:50, 13 March 2019 diff hist +20 Soulcalibur (video game) Corrected use of 'backward compatible' to describe what is in fact forward compatibility.
• 15:2715:27, 13 March 2019 diff hist −45 Jeff Wayne's The War of the Worlds (1998 video game) →Impact: Replaced sentence marked {or} with phrasing elsewhere that avoids the issue; added {cn} as appropriate.

12 March 2019

• 18:0618:06, 12 March 2019 diff hist +2 m Pax Imperia: Eminent Domain Fixed italic misplaced
• 18:0518:05, 12 March 2019 diff hist −113 Pax Imperia: Eminent Domain Other instances of the use of the word 'Pax' aren't relevant at all; much less headline material. Removed; the Pax Romana reference is enough.

11 March 2019

• 21:4521:45, 11 March 2019 diff hist −81 Star Control 3 →Gameplay: removed comment expressly saying game element _isn't_ compared to MoO - not encyclopaedic or useful.
• 14:1614:16, 11 March 2019 diff hist +33 m Battleground 3: Waterloo Link series article in summary box

9 March 2019

• 13:4813:48, 9 March 2019 diff hist −18 Superhero League of Hoboken →Characters: Tidied up repetitious overuse of 'off-beat' as adjective.

8 March 2019

• 23:1323:13, 8 March 2019 diff hist +156 Battle Isle →See also: Added the spiritual sequel Battle Worlds Kronos
• 23:0623:06, 8 March 2019 diff hist +9 Battle Isle →Games in the series: Last game is not 'due 2013' as it was cancelled years ago.

7 March 2019

• 15:2815:28, 7 March 2019 diff hist +8 The Adventures of Robin Hood (video game) Linked reference (already included) to remove {cn} tag.
• 14:5914:59, 7 March 2019 diff hist −34 Star Control →Cancelled games and sale to Stardock: Replaced obsolete claim (true at time of writing, now false) which contradicted other information on page.
• 00:2900:29, 7 March 2019 diff hist −2 m Balance of the Planet →Development: word choice fix

6 March 2019

• 20:1820:18, 6 March 2019 diff hist −61 Tower of Babel (1989 video game) →Gameplay: Removed note describing what the game _isn't_, since the 'plot' section already covers this adequately.
• 16:0416:04, 6 March 2019 diff hist −133 m Rex (video game) Removed nonexistent wikilinks. Since the game developers were pseudonyms, there's no reason to link to or create Wiki pages for them.

4 March 2019

• 22:2122:21, 4 March 2019 diff hist −343 Way of the Tiger Tidied up some wording to be less fan, more encyclopedic. Removed a couple of over-detailed lore references. Needs further work.

3 March 2019

• 23:5423:54, 3 March 2019 diff hist +13 The Incredible Shrinking Fireman Removed tone tag, having fixed the issue, and replaced with expansion tag - this article is now neutral but may not contain enough relevant information.
• 23:4623:46, 3 March 2019 diff hist +325 m The Incredible Shrinking Fireman Added gameplay note and citation to review.
• 23:3523:35, 3 March 2019 diff hist −354 The Incredible Shrinking Fireman →Game Objective: Replaced the copy-pasted back-of-box game description, with a basic Gameplay summary per wikipedia convention.

27 February 2017

• 10:0010:00, 27 February 2017 diff hist +4 m Hourman Grammar edit to avoid breathless run-on sentence.

4 October 2015

• 22:0122:01, 4 October 2015 diff hist +4 m Black Library Copy edit - improve grammar; tidy one sentence that is unnecessarily in-universe to better distinguish factual Black Library from fictional one; removed prolix flowery adjectives.

27 January 2014

• 14:4814:48, 27 January 2014 diff hist +8 Luz (bone) Rephrased to avoid making assertions about what people believe.

14 September 2012

• 13:4213:42, 14 September 2012 diff hist −155 Ravnica: City of Guilds →Storyline: Made a start on rewriting the plot synopsis to be a summary instead of back-cover-copy advertising. Needs more work.

24 August 2012

• 13:5313:53, 24 August 2012 diff hist −10 m List of screw drives →{{visible anchor|One-way}}: Fix grammar, added missing verb, tidied run-on sentence.

15 May 2012

• 17:2817:28, 15 May 2012 diff hist +331 Talk:History of London →18th century: Questioning the phrasing of this section.

4 April 2011

• 22:2622:26, 4 April 2011 diff hist +272 Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/MystiCon →MystiCon

28 March 2010

• 16:1416:14, 28 March 2010 diff hist +1 m 2009 in downloadable songs for the Rock Band series Holiday season 2009 should now be in past tense. ToDo: Somebody correct this sentence to indicate whether goal was achieved.
• 16:1116:11, 28 March 2010 diff hist +16 m 2009 in downloadable songs for the Rock Band series Add correct sorting template to fix sort order for The Damned
• 16:1016:10, 28 March 2010 diff hist +33 m 2010 in downloadable songs for the Rock Band series Add correct sorting template to fix sort order for The Police, The Subways

23 October 2009

• 12:4812:48, 23 October 2009 diff hist −9 m Talk:Prefactoring Confirmed stub

11 October 2009

• 20:4620:46, 11 October 2009 diff hist −3 m Highlander: The Series →Location: tidied sentence phrasing

3 October 2009

• 10:1410:14, 3 October 2009 diff hist −4 m Madballs →Toys: Trivial copy edit

2 October 2009

• 13:0113:01, 2 October 2009 diff hist −30 m Subatomic scale Rephrased clumsy second sentence to be clearer.

6 June 2009

• 20:3120:31, 6 June 2009 diff hist +45 m Eladrin Tidied up introduction; still needs work before removing context tag.

29 May 2009

• 13:5913:59, 29 May 2009 diff hist 0 m Igor (character) →In other media: copy edit punctuation

10 May 2009

• 19:0719:07, 10 May 2009 diff hist −10 m Parabolic microphone Copy edit: Deleted redundant 'in diameter'; moved incidental calculation into parentheses.

2 March 2009

• 00:0400:04, 2 March 2009 diff hist −8 m Rock Band (video game) →Sequel: Copy edit: Grammatical tidy up.