Talk:Aimé Mpane

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GA Review

Passed. Arconning (talk) 12:49, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: APK (talk · contribs) 02:02, 24 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 15:13, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@APK Here are my comments. Hope they can be addressed. :) Arconning (talk) 16:19, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Arconning: Thanks for the review! APK hi :-) (talk) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I will be reviewing this, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Arconning (talk) 15:13, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Prose and MoS

Lead

did not go far enough., go far enough? Could probably reword this^^
A second sculpture was added and,, add another comma after added.
restore, not repair, , add quotes.

Done APK hi :-) (talk) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Early life

Aimé Mpane was born in 1968 in the modern-day, remove the.
after the Congo Crisis had ended,, remove comma.
cabinet-maker and sculptor, replace cabinet-maker with cabinetmaker or cabinet maker. Also add a comma at the end.
taught the Congolese, taught that the Congolese.
Institut Des Beaux Arts, Institut des Beaux-Arts and add a comma at the end.
In 1994, Mpane moved to Belgium , add a comma at the end.
his first award, , remove comma.
portrayed as a savage people, remove a.

Done APK hi :-) (talk) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Career

Congo Free State, and the way racism has played a large role in it., remove comma and replace it with them.

Done APK hi :-) (talk) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

2000s

Wikilink first mention of Kinshasa.
and was featured, and were featured.

Done APK hi :-) (talk) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

2010s

in the Kinshasa, remove the.
Nike swoosh, replace with Nike Swoosh and just wikilink the entirety to the Swoosh.
1897 Brussels International Exposition, add a comma at the end.
he thought Congolese should be involved in the process., he thought Congolese people should be involved in the process..
not looking towards the past, but the Congolese looking up, towards a brighter future. , for everyone to reconcile the past instead of fighting over it., restoration rather than a repair, add quotes.

Done APK hi :-) (talk) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

2020s

No issues from me.

Images

Images have proper licenses, art works have fair use licenses which makes sense.

Refs

Random refs check: 7, 16, 23. Yep good.
Earwig picks up "violation unlikely"!
Manual check seems great.

Misc.

No ongoing edit war, focused and broad information about the topic.

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

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