Talk:Dancing's Done

Dancing's Done has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: February 13, 2024. (Reviewed version).

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On 26 December 2022, it was proposed that this article be moved from Dancing's Done (song) to Dancing's Done. The result of the discussion was moved.

Requested move 26 December 2022

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: moved. Per consensus (closed by non-admin page mover) – robertsky (talk) 15:06, 2 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Dancing's Done (song) → Dancing's Done – The article without the "(song)" was created for the same thing. Jvaspad (talk) 14:47, 26 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support per nom.--Ortizesp (talk) 04:01, 28 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Speedy move no need to DAB from redirect for the same topic as a subtopic. Crouch, Swale (talk) 19:27, 28 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

GA Review

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Reviewer: AskeeaeWiki (talk · contribs) 01:21, 13 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I'll be happy to review this article. I hope you can be patient with me, as it is my first time reviewing a GA nominee article. Thank you. AskeeaeWiki (talk) 01:26 February 12, 2024 (UTC)

Review

Read through the article, and here is what I can say:

First criteria – understandable to a broad audience, follows WP:WTW and WP:MOSLAYOUT, but I recommend lead could be seperated into two paragraphs, preferably split after the mention of its release date, or split before mention of critical reception. If changed, the article passes this criteria.
- Edit: Fixed per WP:GAN/I#R3

Second criteria – Article generally follows a summary style, and does not stray into unneeded trivial information. Mentioning who wrote/produced the song in the article again in the Background and composition section is unneeded, so I would remove it. All information is reliably cited, does not violate WP:OR, and does not include any copyright violations or plagiarism. Overall, article passes the criteria if the mentioned problem is dealt with.
- Edit: Fixed per WP:GAN/I#R3

Third criteria – Pass, overall addresses the main aspects of the topic, and doesn't stray away from a summary style.

Fourth criteria – Pass, follows a neutral point of view, and doesn't include biased words.

Fifth criteria – Pass, article is stable, only fixes are performed to the article.

Sixth criteria – Pass, doesn't have any illustration, media, or audio, but is not a requirement. However, if such information can be provided, I would recommend.

Additional information: I would recommend removing the false title present in the article, by adding "the" before "American singer Ava Max". However, as it is a personal essay, it is fine to keep.

Overall, if the two problems mentioned in the first and second criteria are fixed, the article passes nomination. Respond when you can. Cheers! User:AskeeaeWiki (talk) 10:26 February 12, 2024 (PST)

Problems with the article have been fixed, as they are easily resolvable. Article passes nomination. User:AskeeaeWiki (talk) 10:26 February 12, 2024 (PST)