Talk:Dick Simpson (politician)/GA1
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Nominator: SecretName101 (talk · contribs) 17:56, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: All Tomorrows No Yesterdays (talk · contribs) 15:25, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
Early Life
[edit]This sections seems to bee too scattered, could it be combines into one or two paragraphs?
@SecretName101 Are you going to continue with improving the article for the GA review or....?
@Sangsangaplaz: I'm confused. You gave me one singular item of feedback. I edited accordingly. Where would you get the idea that I have abandoned this review process? I have been given no further items of feedback to improve based-upon. SecretName101 (talk) 21:35, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Oh sorry. I did not realize that. But continuing the review, I think one-line paragraphs like "In 2022, Simpson retired as a professor and was named a professor emeritus." Should be combined with other paragraphs so that it doesn't put unnessary emphasis. Sangsangaplaz (Talk to me! I'm willing to help) 04:53, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Made a number of edits (before and after that suggestion) to that effect. SecretName101 (talk) 17:32, 1 January 2025 (UTC)