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The section Unusual Laws seems a bit too conversational in tone, making direct addresses to the reader, such as the use of the word "you", and self consciousness acknowledgement of what the author pointedly considers to be a pun. MDonfield 11:51, 24 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, the tone of this article is completely wrong, and it addresses the reader, which it shouldn't directly. Let me see what I can do. T^heDJA^tC^lubR^ock :-) ^(T/C) 11:28, 2 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]