Talk:Soviet destroyer Tashkent/GA1
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 09:31, 15 December 2022 (UTC)
I'll take this one, comments to follow in due course. Zawed (talk) 09:31, 15 December 2022 (UTC)
Lead
- before the Axis Powers invaded the Soviet Union (Operation Barbarossa) in mid-1941.: rather than having Operation Barbarossa bracketed here, suggest having it pipe-linked on "invaded the Soviet Union" and move the present link of Soviet Union to the "...and the Soviets contracted for design..."
Infobox
- The "2nd Five-Year Plan" is mentioned here but not in body of article.
Design and description
- The comment in the lead regarding the decline of Soviet ship design since the Russian revolution is not really reflected in this section, only that the Leningrad-class was unsatisfactory.
- Add the abbreviation for Odero-Terni-Orlando to this section, and use the abbreviation in the "Construction and career" section.
Construction and career
- link Sevastopol, Novorossiysk
- when the Germans invaded on 22 June 1941: suggest "when the Germans invaded the USSR on 22 June 1941"
- water. 3 crewmen and 56 of her passengers: write out the number so the sentence doesn't start with a numeral.
Other stuff
- Sources look fine, mostly well known publishers/authors in their field.
- Image tags OK
- No dupe links
Other than the above, this is looking in pretty good order, and am placing on hold for now. Cheers,
- Thanks for the review. See if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:39, 29 December 2022 (UTC)
- Passing as GA as I believe that the article meets the necessary criteria. Zawed (talk) 06:32, 6 January 2023 (UTC)