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Article Selection

Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

These are in no specific order.

Article title: Platinum print
Article Evaluation: The Platinum Print article is Part of the WikiProjects Photography. It has been rated as a start-class article for the project's quality scale. The article is marked with many issues. These issues include vague phrasing, bias words or lack of neutrality, possible factual inaccuracy, and the need for a new intro. This page is pivotal in photo process history and could be a positive update.
Sources: https://www.nga.gov/research/online-editions/alfred-stieglitz-key-set/practices-and-processes/platinum-prints.html; Ware, M. (2005). Photography in Platinum and Palladium. Platinum Metals Review - PLATIN MET REV. 49. 190-195. 10.1595/147106705X70291. https://www.getty.edu/conservation/publications_resources/pdf_publications/pdf/atlas_platinotype.pdf; https://manual.museum.wa.gov.au/book/export/html/42

Article title: Bellows (photography)
Article Evaluation: The article is extremely brief for such an important aspect of a camera. The article also does not cite any sources at all in the article. This article is in need of expansion and was found through the photography stubs page. This could include multiple sections on history, use, evolution, and examples.
Sources: Needs more research for books and camera history

Article title: Collodion-albumen process
Article Evaluation: This article was found through the photography stubs page. The article itself needs to be expanded. There is much more information that could be of use to this page. And the writing for this page is not scholarly. Sections including process, use, treatment for preservation, and history would be great additions to this article. There are currently only two references for this article yet does not provide citations.
Sources: https://www.bhphotovideo.com/explora/photography/features/historical-processes-collodion-negatives-and-albumen-prints; https://sites.middlebury.edu/landandlens/2016/10/17/albumen-print/; https://cool.culturalheritage.org/albumen/library/c19/sidebotham.html; https://unwritten-record.blogs.archives.gov/2020/05/14/19th-century-photographic-processes-and-formats/; https://manual.museum.wa.gov.au/book/export/html/42; https://www.nga.gov/conservation/photographs/robinson-photo-treatment.html

Article title: Chromophotography
Article Evaluation: This article is also on the photography stubs page and needs expansion. The article has a short description that could use expansion in topics like history, process, preservation, and notable use. The article also lacks verified citations from reliable sources.
Sources: Would need more research and books for more information.

Article title: Triple cream
Article Evaluation: As someone that has made many a batches of triple crème brie style cheese in my short period of being a cheesemaker for a small company this article could definitely be expanded. I found this article on the cheese stub page and because of that it definitely needs expansion. There could be multiple sections including history, make, and types of cheese that use triple crème as well as notable makers of this style including awards. The article has no citations and could definitely be much better considering it is only three sentences.
Sources: https://culturecheesemag.com/stories/creme-de-la-triple-creme/; https://food52.com/blog/26290-four-fat-fowl-interview; I have a few cheese books that are packed away from a move that could also be beneficial as well as additional research.

This week has been super hectic and most research could be expanded upon.