User:Ldw15/Hohenbuehelia petaloides/Thea.sar Peer Review

Peer review

Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects:

Lead

Guiding questions:

Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Content

Guiding questions:

Is the content added relevant to the topic?
Is the content added up-to-date?
Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

Is the content added neutral?
Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
Does the content accurately reflect what the cited sources say? (You'll need to refer to the sources to check this.)
Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
Are the sources current?
Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
Are there better sources available, such as peer-reviewed articles in place of news coverage or random websites? (You may need to do some digging to answer this.)
Check a few links. Do they work?

Organization

Guiding questions:

Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Images and Media

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
Are images well-captioned?
Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only

If the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
What are the strengths of the content added?
How can the content added be improved?

Examples of good feedback

A good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.

Peer review of "Homemaking"
Peer review of this article about a famous painting

Additional Resources

Check out the Editing Wikipedia PDF for general editing tips and suggestions.

General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

Ldw15

Link to draft you're reviewing
User:Ldw15/Hohenbuehelia petaloides
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Hohenbuehelia petaloides

Evaluate the drafted changes

Lead:

I think you did a good job of updating the original lead of the article to reflect the other additions in information you added, this sets up the information for the article without going into too much detail. I think your lead is concise, and includes relevant information.

Content:

I think all your content is relevant information to the article topic, nothing seems unnecessary. I don't know much about the topic, so I'm not sure if any information is "missing" but I think that there is still room to build the article with more information.

Tone and Balance:

I think your tone is very neutral, and you only state the facts. There are no apparent biases as to how the information in the article is represented.

Sources and References:

I see that you have a list of references from where you got your information from. All your sources seem to be reliable, but 1 or 2 seem to be more dated than your other sources, maybe make sure the information is still reliable. Your links are working, I clicked through all of them.

Organization:

I think your article is organized well. I like how from the lead it goes to a general description and then to more specific details about your topic. I did not notice any grammatical or spelling errors.

Images and Media:

I think the images are definitely helpful in comprehension, and they are labelled well.

Overall Impressions:

I think your contributions definitely heighten the quality of the article, I think it definitely helps in building a greater understanding of your topic and goes more in depth than the original does. I definitely think there is more information out there that could be added to your article, but its coming along very nicely and has already improved so much.