User:ScottyPometta/Accepting the non-binary gender/Charris0524 Peer Review

Peer review

Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects:

Lead

Guiding questions:

Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Content

Guiding questions:

Is the content added relevant to the topic?
Is the content added up-to-date?
Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

Is the content added neutral?
Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
Does the content accurately reflect what the cited sources say? (You'll need to refer to the sources to check this.)
Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
Are the sources current?
Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
Are there better sources available, such as peer-reviewed articles in place of news coverage or random websites? (You may need to do some digging to answer this.)
Check a few links. Do they work?

Organization

Guiding questions:

Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Images and Media

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
Are images well-captioned?
Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only

If the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
What are the strengths of the content added?
How can the content added be improved?

Examples of good feedback

A good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.

Peer review of "Homemaking"
Peer review of this article about a famous painting

Additional Resources

Check out the Editing Wikipedia PDF for general editing tips and suggestions.

General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

ScottyPometta

Link to draft you're reviewing

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Charris0524/Erotic_talk?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Legal recognition of non-binary gender (?)
Non-binary gender (?)

Evaluate the drafted changes

Hello Scotty, I am not entirely sure if you are creating an entirely new article or revising one of these articles I've attached above. Either way, I will include some stuff I think would be important for your content.

In the case of article 1: I think it would be a good idea for you to include some of the legal status of intersex people or non-binary people in some more traditional countries. I do not see many African countries included for the legal status, and I do not see any countries that are in the Middle East. I'd imagine I could guess what the legal status is for some of these countries, but I would love to learn about what they are.

In the case of article 2: I think it would be prudent to bolster up the sections about History, Pronouns and Titles, and Discrimination. For history there simply has to be a lot more out there than 4 obscure facts. I'd love to learn more about the rich history of the matter and this section simply does not have enough information. For pronouns I'm sure that there is more to say than just listing the "they, them, theirs" pronouns and the " xe, ze, sie, co, and ey" pronouns. I'd love to learn about why people use the pronouns they do and such. For discrimination, it's similar to history. There is simply too much in history about the discrimination of non-binary people to fit into that small paragraph that exists currently.

In the case of creating your own article, I would love to see what you have/will create and please email me with what you create and I'd be glad to review it and see what you come up with. I think there is definitely a place for an article talking about general societal acceptance of non-binary people.

Regardless of what article you choose to edit or write yourself, I think that this is an exciting topic and I'd love to read what you decide to write or edit!