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Your submission at Articles for creation: Winx Health (November 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Bonadea were:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission provides insufficient context for those unfamiliar with the subject matter. Please see the guide to writing better articles for information on how to better format your submission.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The reader has to read between the lines and guess that this is a company and that it is American – please tell the readers what the topic of the article is in the introduction! The draft is rather fragmentary, with a couple of unrelated pieces of information, and nothing that ties the text together. I'm sure that if you know what Winx health is, the text is informative, but again, the context is missing.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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bonadea contributions talk 20:24, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, HealthCareAOL! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! bonadea contributions talk 20:24, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your suggestions. I updated the Winx Health page per your comments. It's now clear that Winx Health is a company, the location of its headquarters, the company was selected by Time Magazine as having one of the 200 best inventions of 2024, and info about one of its most prominent investors. I also tied the information together. Please let me know if you have any other suggestions. HealthCareAOL (talk) 18:14, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]