User talk:Jenynfur/Busan KCC Egis/Lindsay Kim Peer Review

Thank you for peer review!

Thank you for your thoughtful review and for suggesting areas to enhance the article. I appreciate your feedback on expanding the lead to summarize the sections and clarify the team’s regional significance. I purposely limited content on Jeonju, Busan, and the broader KBL context since these are covered in separate Wiki entries, focusing here on the Busan KCC Egis as a specific topic within those larger categories. I’ll keep in mind your ideas on sustainability efforts and team challenges when I update, as they could add valuable insight into the team's journey. Thank you for the constructive suggestions! Jenynfur (talk) 03:59, 2 November 2024 (UTC)