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Your submission at Articles for creation: Undergraduate Advanced Diploma (March 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by J947 was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Try to find significant coverage of this award in newspapers and books.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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J 947 ^{^{^(c)}}, at 03:02, 3 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Sirtonystark! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! J 947 ^{^{^(c)}}, at 03:02, 3 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Undergraduate Advanced Diploma (March 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

This submission provides insufficient context for those unfamiliar with the subject matter. Please see the guide to writing better articles for information on how to better format your submission.

The comment the reviewer left was:

There is insufficient context for those not aware of the peculiar titles and meaning of Oxbridge degrees and qualifications. Ref 1 provides the necessary information, and that information needs to be incorporated here. In particular it must be stressed that these are part time continuing education programs, and not meant to be equivalent into Oxford and Cambridge degrees.

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DGG ( talk ) 10:15, 4 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Undergraduate Advanced Diploma (March 5)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Curb Safe Charmer was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please add references that show that the diploma has been written about in depth by multiple reliable, independent publications. Anything written by Oxford or Cambridge doesn't count towards establishing notability.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 15:49, 5 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you sir, would you be able to help with the edit? Sirtonystark (talk) 16:00, 5 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Undergraduate Advanced Diploma (March 8)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This is promotional. College facilities are heoreticla available--but the people aretypically there only a few days a year. It needs to be explicit that thei si an extension program, not parto f regualar instruction, and it needs ,a as I said before, to be explicit about where it fits in the UK framework.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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DGG ( talk ) 10:57, 8 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Undergraduate Advanced Diploma concern

Hi there, I'm MDanielsBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Undergraduate Advanced Diploma, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. MDanielsBot (talk) 01:46, 9 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Undergraduate Advanced Diploma

Hello, Sirtonystark. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Undergraduate Advanced Diploma, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Draft space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for article space.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion under CSD G13. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it. You may request userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 20:02, 10 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Undergraduate Advanced Diploma

Hello, Sirtonystark. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Undergraduate Advanced Diploma".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 17:38, 7 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]