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Adi Meyerson

Hello fellow Wikipedians! I have been working on this article for a few days. Adi Meyerson is a jazz double bassist currently operating in New York City. I'm a fairly new editor, but my goal is to get this article up to GA status, as I think its achievable. One thing I know I might have to do but don't know how to is to split off the discography, as it is getting a bit large.

I hope that whoever reviews this can give me some good suggestions and reassess the article, as I don't want to overrate it.

This is what the article looked like just 1 week ago:

https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Adi_Meyerson&oldid=1221638020

Thanks, Surfinsi (talk) 05:04, 10 October 2024 (UTC)

Comments

• Are there any photos of the subject that could be added or requested?

• Ensembles of which she was a guest rather than a member should not generally appear in |current_member_of=
  • Fixed, also changed the discography section to reflect this.
• The lead could be streamlined - her beginning to play double bass is mentioned twice, which could be consolidated
  • Fixed, removed second second mention.
• The article would benefit from a thorough copy-editing, in particular for punctuation and capitalization in places where it isn't needed - eg "She has Synesthesia" should be "She has synesthesia"
  • Done
• Subdoctoral academic designations are not generally included as honorific suffixes
  • Done
• Is a date for her MM known?
  • Done
• Publications should generally be italicized
  • Done
• The article is on the shorter size for a potential GA. The Discography section suggests many collaborations which aren't discussed in the text, which would be one area for potential expansion.
  • Added paragraph on Dark Matter, a quartet she leads, and Works For Me, a musical collective she was in.

Nikkimaria (talk) 15:36, 13 October 2024 (UTC)