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Week 2 / Evaluate an Article / ASCXX

1. I followed the instruction on week 2 training "Evaluate an Article", then I found an article that I am interested in through the link (C-class articles) provided. Finally, I answered each evaluation questions and collaborate them into one or two sentences for each evaluating section.

2. User:ASCXX/Evaluate_an_Article

3. [[1]] I am not sure if we need to comment on the article we found or comment on my "Evaluate an Article" talk page. I comment on my "Evaluate an Article" talk page just in case I am not making any errors in the original article.

4. I learned the importance of following the instruction step by step. I was lost when the first time to skip watching the training video, thus, I went back a couple of times to watch the video again to make sure I am on the right track. I also learned the guidelines of evaluating an article, especially what to focus on when evaluating each section. ASCXX (talk) 21:22, 19 September 2020 (UTC)

ASCXX, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:55, 20 September 2020 (UTC)
I've assigned myself the article in the Wiki Education Dashborad. Thank you.
ASCXX, Great; this is fine for now. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:15, 21 September 2020 (UTC)

Week 2 / Evaluate an Article / 八路军被服厂李厂长

In this week, I found that a well organized article needs to take long time to settle. There is nothing good but changes.

Here is my link toward evaluation https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:%E5%85%AB%E8%B7%AF%E5%86%9B%E8%A2%AB%E6%9C%8D%E5%8E%82%E6%9D%8E%E5%8E%82%E9%95%BF/Evaluate_an_Article?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_evaluate_article

Here is the link of article talk page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Liu_Bei#Is_Liu_Bei_really_stay_loyal_to_the_Han_dynasty%3F


The process is hard, and you have to read extreme carefully in order to see the detailed problems.--八路军被服厂李厂长 (talk) 01:11, 21 September 2020 (UTC)

八路军被服厂李厂长, Yes, this does take effort, and it is better to see that sooner rather than later! Current. FULBERT (talk) 15:12, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
八路军被服厂李厂长, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 15:19, 21 September 2020 (UTC)

week 1 /Introduction/ Amandaerfeng

Amandaerfeng (talk) 13:23, 21 September 2020 (UTC)Hi everyone I am Amanda! Sorry for creating an account so late. I don't have to give my real name here, right? I am currently in Shanghai to attend NYU SH program (I kind of give myself away).My concentration in MASY program is enterprise risk management. Hope I am all caught up with this extra credit assignment. --Amandaerfeng (talk) 13:23, 21 September 2020 (UTC)

Amandaerfeng, Welcome to Wikipedia, and correct, you only have to go by your user name here!! Current. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:24, 21 September 2020 (UTC)

Week2 / Evaluate an Article/ Bbbzhu

This week I learned about evaluating a Wikipedia article from several aspects: Wikipedia quality rating, a simple and easy to read lead section, clear structure, balanced content, neutral tone, and good and reliable source. I evaluated a page and commented on its respective talk page. The page I evaluated was Welsh Corgi, here is the link to my evaluation, and I also commented to a section in the talk page. I found the reading and editing to be fun and I feel like a part of the community. Learning to use the editor, both visual editor and source editor, to edit a Wikipedia page is helpful when it's time to make real edits. Also I learned that the editing of a Wikipedia page is teamwork that would require many people's effective communication. It is also a work that could span decades as there will always be new information about the topic. It is very interesting to learn and work on it. --Bbbzhu (talk) 04:24, 21 September 2020 (UTC)

Bbbzhu, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 15:21, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT, I have assigned myself the article. --Bbbzhu (talk) 03:20, 22 September 2020 (UTC)
Bbbzhu, Great. Current. FULBERT (talk) 20:40, 22 September 2020 (UTC)

Week 2 / Evaluate an Article / 燕京赵大知识分子

This week I found an interesting article that talks about Chinese musicology. I found some missing information about the history of Chinese music so I added it there. The article talks about the music scales which are the originators for modern music theory. Here's the link for the article, and here's the link for the talk page. I learned it's important to check the accurateness for key information, and leave a comment in the talk page to notify others too when I am about to edit. 燕京赵大知识分子 (talk) 02:17, 21 September 2020 (UTC)

燕京赵大知识分子, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 15:18, 21 September 2020 (UTC)

FULBERT, I have assigned myself this article. 燕京赵大知识分子 (talk) 12:41, 22 September 2020 (UTC)

燕京赵大知识分子, Great. Current. FULBERT (talk) 20:41, 22 September 2020 (UTC)

This Month in Education: September 2020

This Month in Education

Volume 9 • Issue 9 • September 2020

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Sat Sep 26: Met Fashion Virtual Edit Meet-up

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Week 2/Evaluate an Article/DetongChe

After completed evaluate a Wikipedia article training and finish exercises, I have got the process of evaluating an article. I choose the article is industrial arts. This article page without any images and the contents need more improvement. There is too much information about university studies, not industrial arts instruction. This task is very significant and makes me wonder what I can do to make it easier for others. Here is the link to the article talk page (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Industrial_arts) and the other link is to the evaluation of an article (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DetongChe/Evaluate_an_Article). --DetongChe (talk) 22:19, 22 September 2020 (UTC)

DetongChe, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 19:46, 24 September 2020 (UTC)

@FULBERT:I've assigned myself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard. Thank you!

DetongChe Please edit your post to include spaces between the week, assignment, and your user name and the " / " and then reply to me here and I will review. Please also remember to sign your replies.

Week 1 / Create Wikipedia Account / Jessicarose02

Hello all, my name is Jessica Nannery and I am a freshman at SUNY Sullivan. I am an English major, but I know that taking Sociology as an elective is going to have a very positive educational effect on me. Using Wikipedia is definitely going to enhance my education and help me grow to be a better student overall. --Jessicarose02 (talk) 16:57, 24 September 2020 (UTC)

Jessicarose02, Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this experience useful on many levels far beyond the course itself!! FULBERT (talk) 19:46, 24 September 2020 (UTC)

Week 2 / Evaluate an Article / Jessicarose02

In this week, I found that there are many different things you need to focus on when publishing an article such as keeping it up to date, making sure citation links work, using proper sources and there are many other things but this is what I learned are important. The article I read and evaluated was called "Sociology of Education" which not only showed me information on the subject, but a learning opportunity about what to do and not do while publishing an article.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jessicarose02/Evaluate_an_Article

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sociology_of_education

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sociology_of_education

During this process I learned that there are many different ways to conduct and use Wikipedia through articles and publishing them. Evaluating an article definitely showed me how I would publish an article just how I was able to provide evaluations on another one. --Jessicarose02 (talk) 22:22, 24 September 2020 (UTC)

Jessicarose02, Great Week 2! Current. FULBERT (talk) 19:39, 5 October 2020 (UTC)

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Week 1 / Introduction / ShawnBoom

Hi, I'm Shawn and this is my first-time edit with Wikipedia. This is my second year working on the management and system program with database technology concentration at New York University. Hope to have fun with the extra credits. Thank you and nice to meet you all. --ShawnBoom (talk) 01:40, 27 September 2020 (UTC)

ShawnBoom, Great, and welcome to Wikipedia. All current for Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 19:40, 5 October 2020 (UTC)

Week 2 / Evaluate an article / ShawnBoom

1. I followed each step strat from week2, viewed and completed two trainings. Then I start to search for articles through "find articles" on the home page.

2. The link to my article evaluation itself: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Herd_mentality

3. The link to the talk page: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Herd_mentality

4. The whole process of assigning articles is smooth, just followed the steps and search the keywords of my interest type of paper, then the article I want to assign just pop-out and click "assign yourself" at the right side.

--ShawnBoom (talk) 16:12, 27 September 2020 (UTC)

ShawnBoom, Nice initial eval. Current. FULBERT (talk) 19:41, 5 October 2020 (UTC)

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Week3 / Copyedit an Article / Bbbzhu

This week I edited the Chrysanthemum page, also assigned myself this page. I added in the medical use of Chrysanthemum in traditional Chinese medicine, here's the difference link. Also, I copyedited a passive tone sentence on the same page, here's the difference link. In this week's assignment, I learned to add content to a page, add citation (a book), and use the summary function to insert a simple and clear summary for others to see what was edited. I also learned to use the view history to compare what was edited to the previous version. --Bbbzhu (talk) 02:10, 28 September 2020 (UTC)

WEEK3 / COPY EDIT / dyy122dyy

1. This week I read the article (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ecology). 2. The link to difference is: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Ecology&diff=980757503&oldid=979649087 3. I carefully read the article, and found a typo mistake. It is common for people to make little mistakes on grammar. With the help from all the WIKI users, the article will become better. Dyy122dyy (talk) 08:19, 28 September 2020 (UTC)

Dyy122dyy, Good catch with this edit. Current. FULBERT (talk) 19:57, 8 October 2020 (UTC)

Wikidata weekly summary #435

Here's your quick overview of what has been happening around Wikidata over the last week.
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    • The Wikidata development team is seeking to evaluate and improve the process of collecting and reacting to bug reports and feature requests. You can give feedback about your experience using this anonymous form until September 30th or add feedback publically to Wikidata talk:Contact the development team/Process review 2020.
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    • A long-standing bug has been fixed (T217144) where Items and Lexemes created via OAuth would not be added to the user’s watchlist even if the user had the Add pages I create and files I upload to my watchlist setting enabled. (The Add pages and files I edit to my watchlist setting was probably likewise ineffective, but this was not tested specifically.) Affected tools include QuickStatements, Mix'n'Match, and Wikidata Lexeme Forms; users of these and other tools may see more pages being added to their watchlists now. (This only applies to new edits and page creations; previously created or edited pages will not be automatically added to the watchlist retroactively.)
    • Working on the basic building blocks of the Query Builder towards making it possible to create the first very simple query with it
    • Talking to people about comparing Wikidata's data against other databases and flagging mismatches
    • Fixing an issue with Item creations via the API by blocked users leading to skipped entity IDs (phab:T232620)
    • Fixed an input issue with invisible characters (phab:T261071)
    • Finishing the draft of the REST API spec to get it ready for feedback
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Week1/ Creat A Wikipedia Account/ Jooookerr

Hi professor, my name is Tianyu Ma, you could also call me Austin. This is my third semester at NYU, I am quite interest in Research Process and Methodology. Because in my mind, the research process includes identifying, locating, evaluating, and analyzing the information needed to support the research question, and then developing and expressing my own opinion. After this class, I hope I will fully learn and master these research methods and skills, which will be of great help to my future study and teamwork. I don't have any professional work experience but I am really looking forward to learn more in this class.Jooookerr (talk) 20:30, 24 September 2020 (UTC)Jooookerr (Tianyu Ma) / 09.11.2020

Welcome to Wikipedia Jooookerr. I hope you find this a useful experience! FULBERT (talk) 22:02, 1 October 2020 (UTC)

Week 2 / Evaluate an Article / ywrhea

1.I used the “random article” function to browse many different articles. I think the article I assigned to myself requires more reliable sources. It also need to improve its grammar and its organization. The content of it is also insufficient.

2.Article evaluation: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ywrhea/Evaluate_an_Article?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_evaluate_article#

3. Talk page: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Chinese_Poetry_Congress

4.After watching the video, I understand the process of evaluating and improving an article. Before this training, I did not know how to recognize the quality of Wikipedia’s articles. But right now, when I use Wikipedia as resources, I can exactly know how to evaluate it. Ywrhea (talk) 12:36, 21 September 2020 (UTC)

Ywrhea, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 15:22, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT, I have done with that, thank you.Ywrhea (talk) 08:23, 26 September 2020 (UTC)
Ywrhea, Great! Next time, please indent one more time to help with readability. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:04, 1 October 2020 (UTC)

Week2/Evaluate an article/ Haomimimi

1. I followed the instruction on week2 to evaluate an article. I found an article in the Academic Discipline Category that provided in the training. I added some sources for the article and delete some unnecessary duplicate content. 2. Here is the article that I evaluated: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/English_studies# 3. Here is the link of to the diff: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:History/English_studies 4. Talk page link: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:English_studies 5. I learned that everyone could contribute their wisdom to this world in this society. I used to think that Wikipedia is edited by some professionals and ordinary people like me are unable to do that. But following the instruction, everyone with great opinions or suggestions could do something to perfect the articles online. It really feels great. Haomimimi (talk) 16:08, 26 September 2020 (UTC)

FULBERT hi professor, this is my week 2 homework.
Haomimimi, Please edit your post to include spaces between the week, assignment, and your user name and the " / " and then reply to me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 22:12, 1 October 2020 (UTC)

Week3/Copyedit an Article/LBJJames

I just change a typo in the cast paragraph, which change "organised" to "organized"

https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Angels_with_Dirty_Faces&diff=980732283&oldid=980731651

I have learned how can we copyedit the wikipedia article by everyone.--LBJJames (talk) 03:41, 28 September 2020 (UTC)

LBJJames, Please edit your post title to include spaces between the week, assignment, and your user name and the " / " and then reply to me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 22:15, 1 October 2020 (UTC)
I did not see this corrected yet nor the same done in Week 3. Please do these before I review any other assignments. Ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 21:58, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

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Week3 / Copyedit an Article /ywrhea

1. The article I edit is https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Foundation_(cosmetics)#Formulation

2.The link to te difference between previous versionand the current one is https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/980771217

3. I fixing some problems of punctuation in this article. During this process, I found there are some frequent mistakes of punctuation marks appeared in this article, which may need wiki users to thoroughly proofread. Ywrhea (talk) 10:58, 28 September 2020 (UTC)

Ywrhea, Nice corrections. Current. FULBERT (talk) 00:01, 2 October 2020 (UTC)

Week 2 / Evaluate an Article / Muzizimu

For week 2, I did the training for how to evaluate an article and I found one that really interest me is called "body shape" from a C-class article. Every user in the talk page is active and good at expressing their own thoughts and opinions which is a very good thing so that we all can see varies people's view to certain things. I learned that following instructions and read carefully through training can help you succeed. link to the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Body_shape link to my evaluation: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Muzizimu/Evaluate_an_Article Muzizimu (talk) 14:51, 20 September 2020 (UTC)

Muzizimu, Please adjust the formatting (via Edit source) of your reply here without indents, as that adds strange formatting overall, and have your reply as a paragraph. Also, please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:57, 20 September 2020 (UTC)

Hi, please see my article evaluation: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Muzizimu/Evaluate_an_ArticleMuzizimu (talk) 01:13, 22 September 2020 (UTC)

Muzizimu, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. FULBERT (talk) 20:39, 22 September 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT, I assigned myself this article and please see my article evaluation: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Muzizimu/Evaluate_an_ArticleMuzizimu (talk) 08:09, 29 September 2020 (UTC)
Muzizimu, Great. Current now. FULBERT (talk) 00:03, 2 October 2020 (UTC)

Week3 / Copyedit an Article / CaptainJoseph

Hi everyone!

This week I edit playstation 5 article from wiki, here is the link of differences between the previous version and the current one.

From this week assignment, I first learned how find an article that I am interested in. Second, I learned how to actually communicate and edit the live wiki article. For this article I changed high to higher and framerates to frames per second.

CaptainJoseph (talk) 19:03, 30 September 2020 (UTC)

CaptainJoseph, Nice edits, which were further improved by other editors! Current. FULBERT (talk) 00:06, 2 October 2020 (UTC)

Week 3 / Copyedit an Article / JS11323

For week 3, I had read a random article called "Chris Wakelin", link is here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chris_Wakelin. And here is the difference between revisions: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Chris_Wakelin&diff=prev&oldid=981260962. I read through the whole article, and I found some grammatical mistakes and punctuation error. I learned a lot from this lesson. --Js11323 (talk) 07:50, 1 October 2020 (UTC)

Js11323, Please edit your post title to include spaces between the week, assignment, and your user name and the " / " and then reply to me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 22:17, 1 October 2020 (UTC)

I have done.--Js11323 (talk) 22:40, 1 October 2020 (UTC)

Js11323Please remember to indent your replies with one colon " : " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 00:39, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
FULBERT It is good now.--Js11323 (talk) 00:53, 2 October 2020 (UTC)

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