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== Q on reference source language ==


== Women in Red December 2024 ==
== 07:53:55, 14 November 2017 review of submission by FriendlyB ==
{{Lafc|username=FriendlyB|ts=07:53:55, 14 November 2017|declined=Draft:Dr._Petry_Textile_Auxiliaries}}


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thank you for reviewing the draft "Dr. Petry Textile Auxiliaries".
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For the sources, I cited independent sources, such as
- http://www.genios.de/fachzeitschriften/artikel/MTB/20080617/umweltschutz-und-nachhaltigkeit-in-/060817061.html
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- https://www.biooekonomie-bw.de/de/fachbeitrag/aktuell/insektenchitin-macht-textilherstellung-nachhaltiger/
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- https://www.bloomberg.com/profiles/companies/6311207Z:GR-textilchemie-dr-petry-gmbh
- https://www.bluesign.com/industry/chemical-suppliers/references/textilchemie-dr-petry


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== Thanks for your help! ==
== Comment on my draft ==


Hey,
Thanks for your assistance with Draft:InnoCare. I have included {{connected contributor}} and noted it on your user page that I work for that company. They're not paying me to create this page, I just think it would cool to have a Wikipedia page. Let me know if there's anything else you can suggest to improve my draft. I appreciate your help!


I recently saw your comment on my draft. I would like to say that I am aware that youtube is generally speaking not a reliable source, however i tried to avoid using youtube as a source except when discussing equipment, where as far as I know, footage can generally be considered a source.
== 05:44:48, 23 November 2017 review of submission by Lizzybunker ==
{{Lafc|username=Lizzybunker|ts=05:44:48, 23 November 2017|declined=Draft:Anita_Bernstein}}
I've added the appropriate citations!


Additionally, in my references using youtube(source 6, 7, 8 and 9(which 8 and 9 are the same source)), 6 is directly from the CGTN africa channel, 7 is from CCTV channel 7, and 8/9 is a reupload from the chinese MOD.
== Invacio ==


If i have to, i am willing to remove the equipment section as a whole if the sources are still not considered reliable.
Hi Theroadislong
Best Regards,
I've edited the text - please let me know if it's better this way
Thehistorianisaac
I appreciate your feedback!
[[User:Thehistorianisaac|Thehistorianisaac]] ([[User talk:Thehistorianisaac|talk]]) 10:15, 1 December 2024 (UTC)


== Review of Maurice Molarsky page ==
== 00:53:26, 27 November 2017 review of submission by Cmolaro ==
{{Lafc|username=Cmolaro|ts=00:53:26, 27 November 2017|declined=Draft:Paul_Mango}}


I understand why you would reject this page, based on the information submitted thus far. We have not yet uploaded the main section about his career. Molarsky was one of the best known portrait painters in Philadelphia during the first half of the 20th century, and his work is currently held by the Pennsylvania Academy of the Fine Arts, the Woodmere Gallery, the Princeton University Art Museum, and numerous private collectors. His work regularly comes up for auction in the Northeast US:


https://davidsmernoff.com/product/maurice-molarsky-1885-1950-american-impressionist-painting-portrait-of-young-beautycirca-1910/
I added more 3rd party sources that are verifiable and are independent, professional sources (not personal blogs or sites). I now have 15 citations.


Frank Beck [[User:DieHoren|DieHoren]] ([[User talk:DieHoren|talk]]) 20:54, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
Please let me know what else you think is required to have it accepted?
:Who is "we"? User accounts are strictly single person use. We can only review the content that you add, you need to add the details of the collections with reliable independent sources and then re-submit. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 21:23, 1 December 2024 (UTC)


== That got interesting very quickly ==
== 12:54:53, 27 November 2017 review of submission by Llewol ==
{{Lafc|username=Llewol|ts=12:54:53, 27 November 2017|declined=Draft:London_Art_Week}}


Thank you for your intervention. Legal threats were the last thing I thought would happen. 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 17:33, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
== 08:40:08, 28 November 2017 review of submission by Salt&pepper12345 ==
:Yes... extraordinary! [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 17:36, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Salt&pepper12345|ts=08:40:08, 28 November 2017|declined=Draft:Hidden_Charms}}
::Escalation in this general manner we have seen before with COI editors seeking to use bluster to force their way in. This topic is their pet topic. The neologism is their neologism. They seem to have mistaken Wikipedia as a place to enhance their reputation instead of a please to record it, assuming verifiable notability. 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 17:42, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
:::and now "Sorry you are violating US laws and please clarify for any consequences!" whatever that means! [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 17:45, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
::::It means they are blocked! 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 18:03, 2 December 2024 (UTC)


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[[File:Information icon4.svg|link=|25px|alt=Information icon]] There is currently a discussion [[WP:ANI]] regarding making and doubling down on legal threats.&nbsp;The thread is [[Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents#User:MehdiAlireza making and doubling down on legal threats]]. Thank you. 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 18:00, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
Hi there, thank very much for your care and consideration to to help build this page. I can understand why the review was rejected, as i hadn't cited enough sources on the first draft. I was wondering if you'd mind having a read over the latest draft and checking if it is better now thank you. SP
{{abot}}


== I, and it seems you, too, am drawn to argumentative editors ==
== 13:22:45, 4 December 2017 review of submission by 79.106.95.85 ==
{{Lafc|username=79.106.95.85|ts=13:22:45, 4 December 2017|declined=Draft:Albanian_photographer}}


I just encountered your strategic withdrawal over shadow footprints. 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 20:52, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
== 21:10:13, 6 December 2017 review of submission by Innocent Cuty ==
:Yes it appears so! They are editing a series of connected articles and seem to have a [[WP:BATTLEGROUND]] mentality, I didn't feel I was getting through so withdrawal seemed easier. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 20:56, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Innocent Cuty|ts=21:10:13, 6 December 2017|declined=Draft:Rodbari}}
::I think they are righteously indignant, but too much self involved. You probably saw I commented on the Estelle one, which appears to be under a different username. I am damned if I will get into an argument with them, though. 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 22:22, 2 December 2024 (UTC)


== A barnstar for you! ==
Dear Theroadislong


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Hope you are fine and doing good.
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|style="font-size: x-large; padding: 3px 3px 0 3px; height: 1.5em;" | '''The Special Barnstar'''
I am requesting for a review again as the major comment for rejection/decline of this article was its Reference section or having less references. Now, the draft has been updated, and more than 20 solid references have been employed, with more historical details, and best possible bibliographic support in the light of the available literature. This single page article is now having over 25 appropriate references, and are strengthened with new data.

Your anticipation in this regard will be highly appreciated.

Sincere Regards

== The objected references (facebook) has been udpated with the departmental URLS (links to the webpages). Thank you for the Prompt response and providing support to make this draft better. ==

Dear Theroadislong

Thank you very much for your prompt response.

The objected references (facebook) has been udpated with the departmental URLS (links to the webpages). I think, these were the most up to dated and regularly updating references. Moreover, the last paragraph was deleted, because the book describing the paragraph and the mentioned material is in press (which is written by Dr. Ikram), and once the book got published, the three to four lines paragraph will be inserted again.

I do hope, that the draft will get approved now and will get online, as after coming across other such articles, this one seems to be far better than those.

Your prompt and positive anticipation in this regard will be highly appreciated.

Thanking you in anticipation

Sincere Regards

== 07:43:09, 15 December 2017 review of submission by Kgkg90 ==
{{Lafc|username=Kgkg90|ts=07:43:09, 15 December 2017|declined=Draft:Just_Dakhila}}

== A note ==

Me thinks that this ought to be accepted and have main-spaced on re-submission! Can you clarify a bit?[[User:Winged Blades of Godric|<span style= "color:green">''Winged Blades'']]</span><sup>[[User talk:Winged Blades of Godric|<span style= "color:green">Godric]]</span></sup> 06:47, 17 December 2017 (UTC)
:Which article are you talking about? [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 08:34, 17 December 2017 (UTC)

== Thank you ==

Thank you for your helpful annotations, I appreciate. <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/2003:CA:4F1E:701:78D4:9524:4A38:6A92|2003:CA:4F1E:701:78D4:9524:4A38:6A92]] ([[User talk:2003:CA:4F1E:701:78D4:9524:4A38:6A92#top|talk]]) 10:31, 17 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

Dear Thereodislong,

Thank you for reviewing my draft [[Draft:Bancroft (TV Series)]]. As may be quite obvious this is my first attempt at creating an entry. I have added some sources for the article and would much appreciate a re-review. Many thanks in advance.

[[User:DHWorth|DHWorth]] ([[User talk:DHWorth|talk]]) 11:51, 17 December 2017 (UTC)

== Draft for Shehab Khan ==

Hi Theroadislong,

The alterations you suggested for the page have been made and sources have been changed so they are not written by the subject.

There are currently 10 sources - 9 of which are written by different authors and refer to the subject directly. These include articles from national media organisations and posts from universities.

In your opinion do you think that would suffice?

Best wishes, <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Asda3991|Asda3991]] ([[User talk:Asda3991#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Asda3991|contribs]]) 13:17, 17 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

== Welcome ==

Thank you for your help!
Looking forward to improving the article and Wikipedia.
Your username says it all... <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Encyclopediaeditor456|Encyclopediaeditor456]] ([[User talk:Encyclopediaeditor456#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Encyclopediaeditor456|contribs]]) 17:10, 17 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

== Draft:Bancroft (TV Series) ==

Dear Thereodislong,

Thank you for reviewing my draft [[Draft:Bancroft (TV Series)]]. As may be quite obvious this is my first attempt at creating an entry. I have added some sources for the article and would much appreciate a re-review. Many thanks in advance.

[[User:DHWorth|DHWorth]] ([[User talk:DHWorth|talk]]) 14:04, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

==The International Pediatric Ophthalmology and Strabismus Council==
Hi, I drafted the page The International Pediatric Ophthalmology and Strabismus Council and I've tried rephrasing the contest as much as I can from a neutral POV and language. Is there a specific section of the draft that you believe violates the copyright clause? The main IPOSC website is also public domain. I am not sure how to continue from here. Please advise.
[[User:Eyecare10|Eyecare10]] ([[User talk:Eyecare10|talk]]) 15:16, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
:My concerns were that it was written like an advert, when you have a conflict of interest or even when you don't, forget everything you know about them. It's best to search for newspaper or magazine articles or internet content that discuss the subject, not their own website. Basically Wikipedia has no interest in what the organisation wants to say about itself, (ie. it's goals and aims) but only what independent reliable sources have to say about it. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 16:18, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

== 20:01:32, 18 December 2017 review of submission by Trainerguy ==
{{Lafc|username=Trainerguy|ts=20:01:32, 18 December 2017|declined=Draft:CarriersEdge}}

The feedback notes that the article is written more as advertisement, and references the fact that they should be written in a neutral tone with third party reference. I'd like to make this article comply, and I certainly don't want it sounding like ad copy, so I'd be interested in feedback about why it was declined.

Just about every point in the article includes a reference to a third party news site verifying the content, and the few that aren't referenced didn't seem that significant. As well, I was trying to write it in such a way that it was consistent with other articles about software companies, so I'd love feedback on the points that come across as biased, salesy, or inappropriate. Can you point me to specific sections that are examples of unacceptable style or unverified content?

I'd like to resubmit it with changes that make it suitable, so any feedback would be appreciated.

Thanks
:Sorry but the whole article reads like it was written by somebody who works there. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 20:06, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

== references are genuine ==

Given links/reference are genuine and supports the facts mentioned in the article <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/58.2.236.196|58.2.236.196]] ([[User talk:58.2.236.196#top|talk]]) 09:11, 19 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

== thanks and request for immediate assistance ==

Hi Theoroadislong,

Thank you for your feedback on my first draft. I am completely aware that autobiographies are discouraged by Wikipedia but this is to certify this all the information provided by me was factually correct.

After my recent contribution as an Actor on an Indian Television Channel, it has been brought to my notice that audience has started looking me up on google(thus, in turn, wikipedia) and I, would not appreciate them coming across wrong information about me. It is therefore only apt that the such traffic meets with right and correct information as it is going to change their perception of me or my show, 'Woh Apna Sa' which airs regularly on ZeeTv(India).

I would therefor like the editors, such as yourself to assist me converting this draft into a successful article and help me present right information about myself.[[User:Bhavyasachdeva08|Bhavyasachdeva08]] ([[User talk:Bhavyasachdeva08|talk]]) 10:07, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
:Sorry, Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell the world about themselves. There are plenty of social-networking sites like Facebook where you can do that, Wikipedia is different - a project to build an [[WP:ENC|encyclopedia]]. This is explained at [[WP:Wikipedia is not about YOU|Wikipedia is not about YOU]] and [[Wikipedia:Autobiography]]. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 10:14, 19 December 2017 (UTC)

== https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Elcka ==

I wish to delete my comments so they are NOT in the public domain

Many thanks & best wishes! <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:MJSC123|MJSC123]] ([[User talk:MJSC123#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/MJSC123|contribs]]) 10:37, 19 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:It will need a LOT more reliable sources first, the sources you have included do not demonstrate that the subject meets our [[WP:NBIO|guidelines for notability]]. Normally, this is done by showing that the band has received sustained in-depth coverage in reliable secondary sources. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 10:47, 19 December 2017 (UTC)

== Help on draft validation Camilo Ricordi ==

Hi Theroadislong, thanks for your tip on how to make more interesting / valid my first page about Camilo Ricordi. I have added some changes there and just wanted to drop you a line to see if is ok now or still need some improvements from my side. Thanks a lot! <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:SaraGWik|SaraGWik]] ([[User talk:SaraGWik#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/SaraGWik|contribs]]) 14:58, 19 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:Please read [[WP:REFB]] for help with formatting the references which are bare url at the moment.[[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 15:20, 19 December 2017 (UTC)

== Request on 16:22:37, 19 December 2017 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by Kooligan123 ==
{{anchor|16:22:37, 19 December 2017 review of submission by Kooligan123}}
{{Lafc|username=Kooligan123|ts=16:22:37, 19 December 2017|declinedtalk=Draft:Kool_Magazine}}

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Hi, thanks for the advice, just a beginner and trying to get my head around all this. Does an entry and cataloging at the British Library count as 'notable'? Thank you!

<!-- End of message -->[[User:Kooligan123|Kooligan123]] ([[User talk:Kooligan123|talk]]) 16:22, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
:It helps, but what we really need is to demonstrate that the subject meets our [[WP:NBIO|guidelines for notability]]. Normally, this is done by showing that the magazine has received sustained in-depth coverage in reliable secondary sources. So a listing in British Library is not sufficient on it's own. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 16:25, 19 December 2017 (UTC)

== Will Erwin Headache Research Foundation References ==

I have added two newspaper mentions of the Will Erwin Headache Research Foundation.

Also, I wanted to point out that the Will Erwin Headache Research Foundation and the Will Erwin Headache Research Center are not the same thing. The center is run by Memorial Hermann, and is named after Will Erwin who took his life.

This article is about the foundation. I hope that isn't too confusing.

--[[User:Longstation|Longstation]] ([[User talk:Longstation|talk]]) 18:56, 19 December 2017 (UTC)

== Draft for Shehab Khan altered ==

Hi,

You left a comment on my article saying that The Sun and Facebook were not considered reliable sources.

These have now been removed.

Is the draft now acceptable?

Kind regards, <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Asda3991|Asda3991]] ([[User talk:Asda3991#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Asda3991|contribs]]) 19:41, 19 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

== Thank you for the quick review of my article ==

We'll strive to become more notable and try again. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Cramshorn|Cramshorn]] ([[User talk:Cramshorn#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Cramshorn|contribs]]) 20:42, 19 December 2017 (UTC)</small>

== 20:42:34, 19 December 2017 review of submission by PrajwalMohan ==
{{Lafc|username=PrajwalMohan|ts=20:42:34, 19 December 2017|declined=Draft:Poon_Hill}}

I have added references as requested <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:PrajwalMohan|PrajwalMohan]] ([[User talk:PrajwalMohan#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/PrajwalMohan|contribs]]) 20:42, 19 December 2017 (UTC)</small>

== Notice ==

I'd like you to know, I just need a stub, and a Wikipedia user-created group written by that user doesn't have any sources. Please approve it.
[[User:GermanGamer77|<span style="color:black">German</span>]][[User talk:GermanGamer77|<span style="color:red">Gamer</span>]][[Special:Contributions/GermanGamer77|<span style="color:gold">77</span>]] 21:13, 19 December 2017 (UTC)

== Camillo Ricordi Article ==

Good evening:

I'am writing to enquire about the activitation of my article on Camillo Ricordi. I think that I correctly made the changes you requested. Can you let me know if it is ok? What more can I do to get this approved?

Please let me know so that I can fix whatever you need.

Thank you!
[[User:SaraGWik|SaraGWik]] ([[User talk:SaraGWik|talk]]) 23:06, 20 December 2017 (UTC)
:Your draft has three references the first is to a paper he wrote, (a primary source) the second is a Wikipedia article (Wikipedia cannot be used as a reference) the third is to Youtube which is not a reliable source. In order to demonstrate notability, you need to provide references to articles written about Camillo Ricordi in unrelated, independent journals, magazines, books, etc. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 09:32, 21 December 2017 (UTC)

== In-depth coverage ==

What do you mean by in-depth coverage? [[User:Martinc1994|Martinc1994]] ([[User talk:Martinc1994|talk]]) 08:19, 21 December 2017 (UTC)
:The links to follow are in the grey box at the top of your draft article. In order to demonstrate notability, you need to provide references to articles written about Danielle Judovits in unrelated, independent journals, magazines, books, etc. The two sources you have used, are user generated content and not [[WP:RS|reliable sources]]. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 09:27, 21 December 2017 (UTC)

== Thanks ==

Hii theroadislong! thank you for alerting me to my mistake. i really appreciate it and ive fixed it now :). i hope u dont mind me asking..... im new to wikipedia. is the draft now acceptable?
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== 12:44:31, 22 December 2017 review of submission by Georginablue25 ==
{{Lafc|username=Georginablue25|ts=12:44:31, 22 December 2017|declined=Draft:Spaceslide}}


Hi Theroadislong,

Do you have any specific recommendations on how I can improve this article to have it approved?

Thanks
:There are helpful links in the grey box of the decline at [[Draft:Spaceslide]]. We need multiple in-depth coverage in independent sources. The current sources come no where near establishing notability. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 12:49, 22 December 2017 (UTC)

== Paul Jean Daverio ==

Hello and many thanks for looking into my article! I have an obvious problem with grasping what you mean when you say that seven articles are by himself: he is a researcher and I am naming the texts he has published about his research, both in the art history field and the, more relevant, medical field where he is very notorious in transgender circles and named in a number of chat forums to be one of the world's top surgeons if you need a new penis (sorry, that is his specialty but it is quite necessary, isn't it, whether you lost it by accident -burns etc.- or never had one). So how can I prove that? In the German speaking world (I have put him already on German wikipedia) I had less problems as there are also articles which speak about his approach, very respectful, to anybody who feels he is in the wrong body, but how to quote those in the English wikipedia? Is it useful at all? Many thanks again for your help!!!
[[User:Drakegreune|Drakegreune]] ([[User talk:Drakegreune|talk]]) 13:23, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
:I think the English Wikipedia may be stricter in it's following of guidelines. Wikipedia is only interested in what people who have no connection with the subject have published about it, in [[WP:RS|reliable places]], so his own works do not establish his notability only others reporting on them can do that. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 13:35, 22 December 2017 (UTC)

== 18:13:37, 22 December 2017 review of submission by Wikilover2604 ==
{{Lafc|username=Wikilover2604|ts=18:13:37, 22 December 2017|declined=Draft:Buchalter}}


Hi, thanks for taking the time out to review Buchalter. I followed the exact pattern of Goldberg Segalla who is a close competitor of the company and whose page has been there for a while. Is that incorrect? Law360 which is a major publication for legal news has covered Buchalter frequently. In California, it is one of the top 10 law firms. So notability (hopefully) should not be an issue. It is to do with how I have written it perhaps. I will definitely rework this. But any suggestions that you can give me? I am relatively new here so trying to learn [[User:Wikilover2604|Wikilover2604]] ([[User talk:Wikilover2604|talk]]) 18:13, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
:You have not chosen a good article on which to base yours, [[Goldberg Segalla]] was full of promotional links and written in list format, please see [WP:Other stuff exists]]. Such is the disdain that when you are being paid to edit the bar will be set much higher too. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 18:22, 22 December 2017 (UTC)

== Cornshed sisters draft ==

Hi!
I drafted a page which was declined for publication. I was wondering if you had any thoughts on why and how to fix it. The page was clearly of interest - this is a band with two albums, that has appeared on a film soundtrack and on the BBC, whose members are present or former members of well-known bands - so I can't see the issue. But I'd appreciate a bit of guidance to resolve it.
Thanks.
[[User:JamesLance|JamesLance]] ([[User talk:JamesLance|talk]]) 03:01, 23 December 2017 (UTC)
:Your draft contains a number of Wikipedia references, these need to be replaced, (Wikipedia is not a reliable source) also Twitter. Allmusic and Youtube are not reliable sources either, see [[WP:BAND]] for the notability guidelines for bands. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 08:02, 23 December 2017 (UTC)

== Arishfa khan ==

hey this is chiranjiv i want to create an article about mys sister she is an actress her name is arishfa khan so can you help me to write an articlejivarshu 19:24, 23 December 2017 (UTC) <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Chiranjiv138|Chiranjiv138]] ([[User talk:Chiranjiv138#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Chiranjiv138|contribs]]) </small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:I'm afraid your sister doesn't appear to pass the [[WP:GNG|Wikipedia guidelines]] for inclusion. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 20:13, 23 December 2017 (UTC)

== 23:49:06, 23 December 2017 review of submission by Pearl ally ==
{{Lafc|username=Pearl ally|ts=23:49:06, 23 December 2017|declined=Draft:Peter_Russell_(author)}}

The submission's referencing was improved as advised, and I added a few more. More information on his teachings and publications were added. The page exists in 3 other Wikipedia:
https://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peter_Russell
https://pt.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peter_Russell
https://sk.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peter_Russell

== In-depth coverage ==

I added RPG Site. Is that a reliable source?

== In-depth coverage ==

I added RPG Site. Is that a reliable source? [[User:Martinc1994|Martinc1994]] ([[User talk:Martinc1994|talk]]) 07:19, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

== Compulsive Hoarding ==

Hi Theroadislong I have just tried to correct and update my url in the last 30 mins from cityclearances.com to averyassociates.co.uk but I see you may have thought it was not a legitimate correction, would you kindly take another look and reconsider the action
I appreciate your assistance in this matter
jeffreyavery53 [[User:Jeffreyavery53|Jeffreyavery53]] ([[User talk:Jeffreyavery53|talk]]) 14:49, 24 December 2017 (UTC)
:It looked like spam to me i.e..promoting your own website. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 14:52, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

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== Cranbourne West Secondary College Draft Decline ==
== St Lawrence Shakespeare Festival ==


Hi @[[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]]! Thank you for your review on [[Draft: Cranbourne West Secondary College]].
Hi. You rejected my article because you believed it sounded more like an advertisement than an article. I disagree, and unfortunately you have given no facts in support of your opinion. This is, in itself, a violation of first principles of Wikipedia, regarding the emphasis of evidence over opinion. So, here are my facts. First, let's look at the article. Why does it seem like advertising? There is only factual information here---it has information attesting to the importance of the Festival (an essential qualification for Wikipedia articles), about the origins of the festival, and some brief information about the fifteen-year history of the festival, including its leadership and the highlights of their contributions, as well as mentions some of the more significant productions. In no way does it advertise upcoming seasons. That is exactly the sort of information that I would write (on a different scale) if I were preparing an article on any theatre company. Second, while I find it distasteful to cite my credentials as point of debate, it seems necessary in this case, because you have effectively suggested that I do not know how to write an article about a theatre company. I don't know upon what basis you have made this judgement, because you simply deleted my work with that sneer about advertising and without offering a single helpful comment. But the fact is that I certainly do know what an article about a theatre company needs. I am a full professor at Queen's University, I have a PhD in Drama and have edited a great number of encyclopedia articles and written contributions to various journals. So, please tell me about the factual basis upon which you have made your decision and perhaps you would also be so good as to explain what your credentials are to make this judgement. [[User:Craig Walker|Craig Walker]] ([[User talk:Craig Walker|talk]]) 18:25, 25 December 2017 (UTC)
:Please assume good faith, I have edited the parts I deemed advertising and your article has been accepted. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 18:28, 25 December 2017 (UTC)
Thank you. You will understand, I hope, why it is difficult to assume good faith when a whole article is rejected without any specifics offered. But I am grateful for your helpful alterations.[[User:Craig Walker|Craig Walker]] ([[User talk:Craig Walker|talk]]) 18:37, 25 December 2017 (UTC)


Can I please get an idea of what part of the article sounds like its blatant advertising? I would like to improve the quality of the article prior to submitting again for review.
== Draft for Shehab Khan ==


Your feedback is much appreciated! Thank you! [[User:DebugDruid|DebugDruid]] ([[User talk:DebugDruid|talk]]) 21:58, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
Hi,
:From the very first paragraph " growing steadily, adding a new year level annually. The school is committed to providing a diverse and inclusive learning environment for its students" is blatant promotion. Followed by "Rob Duncan, the current principal, brings extensive experience in educational leadership" then " has facilities designed to support both academic and extracurricular activities" etc etc. It reads like it was written by the schools marketing department. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 22:02, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
::Hi @[[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] I have edited the draft as per your feedback. Could you please have a look now and let me know if anything else needs changing.
::Thank you in advance! [[User:DebugDruid|DebugDruid]] ([[User talk:DebugDruid|talk]]) 23:39, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
:::Hi @[[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]], I saw your comment on the draft, it states the same thing as the reply from before, however the draft has been edited.
:::Could you please let me know which part of the page still seems like its advertising, as all the information I have got is from the sources listed in the draft.
:::Thank you. [[User:DebugDruid|DebugDruid]] ([[User talk:DebugDruid|talk]]) 22:44, 5 December 2024 (UTC)


== X-tail ==
You asked me to remove sources from The Sun and Facebook.


sorry for being annoying, (i can tell you got a lot to deal with). i'll try to find a reliable source to support the article, sorry it didn't meet specifications. Cheers! <3 [[User:Taffy boeing b 17|Taffy boeing b 17]] ([[User talk:Taffy boeing b 17|talk]]) 22:04, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
This has been done - I was just wondering if you could possibly have another read and see if the article is now acceptable?
:No worries at all it seems like [[Draft:X-tail]] could make a great new article, you just need to find reliable sources that confirm your content, presumably you have them. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 22:07, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
::You might find some of the references in the [[Tail-sitter]] article of some use. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 22:14, 3 December 2024 (UTC)


== 7th marine brigade ==
Also, Merry Christmas! <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Asda3991|Asda3991]] ([[User talk:Asda3991#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Asda3991|contribs]]) 00:22, 26 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->


Thank you for the comment on my draft on the 7th marine brigade.
== 02:14:50, 26 December 2017 review of submission by Pearl ally ==
{{Lafc|username=Pearl ally|ts=02:14:50, 26 December 2017|declined=Draft:Peter_Russell_(author)}}


Even though the nickname of the Jiaolong commandos is much more common, I have seen that it is also sometimes known as the 7th Marine Brigade, especially on some chinese websites, and the chinese wikipediia article along with red links on english wikipedia use the same name. I would prefer that the draft keep the name of the 7th marine brigade and have a redirect of Jiaolong commandos instead as it just simply is a more official name. [[User:Thehistorianisaac|Thehistorianisaac]] ([[User talk:Thehistorianisaac|talk]]) 23:51, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
Please see references 15,18,19,21,22


== World-Ecology article ==
== Maurice Molarsky article ==


Hi, Theroadislong--
Hi Teahouse!


I have edited the article about the American painter Maurice Molarsky (1885-1950), which you reviewed. I have provided citations from archival and web sources to demonstrate his stature as an award-winning portrait painter whose was displayed in many leading galleries and is now part of the permanent collections of several important museums.
What are the criteria for notability for a new academic field? The links indicate for World-Ecology: 1) 3,300 followers on academia; 2) annual conferences with 60-plus papers every year; 3) high profile scholars; 4) over 250 published essays in the field.


Please let me know if you have any questions about the article.
Can you help clarify? By way of contrast, Wikipedia includes an article for the field, Object Oriented Ontology, which has a far more narrow reach relative to world-ecology: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Object-oriented_ontology


Thank you.
Warmly, Jason <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Jasonwsmoore|Jasonwsmoore]] ([[User talk:Jasonwsmoore#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Jasonwsmoore|contribs]]) 19:30, 26 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:Your article has no references. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject, if these sources exist then notability might be established but with no sources it is unlikely. The article [[Object-oriented ontology]] has 53 sources by contrast. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 19:34, 26 December 2017 (UTC)


Frank Beck [[User:DieHoren|DieHoren]] ([[User talk:DieHoren|talk]]) 03:31, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
== 20:52:55, 26 December 2017 review of submission by DgpG201AS ==
:You could wiki link the museums if notable and then re-submit for review. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 07:47, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=DgpG201AS|ts=20:52:55, 26 December 2017|declined=Draft:Tuomas_Eerola}}


== Be careful about your wlecomings ==


Crapple snapple hasn't made useful contributions, so they typically shouldn't be welcomed.
I have converted all references to inline citations to publicly available documents with access dates in them. I just wonder whether the problem I had in the page page originally has now been addressed. Thank you.
:Thank you, article has been accepted. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 21:13, 26 December 2017 (UTC)


[[User:Kingsmasher678|<span style="color:green;">'''Kingsmasher678'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Kingsmasher678|<span style="color:black;">'''talk'''</span>]]) 18:42, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
== Hugo gottesmann ==


:As you probably know given your number of edits, sorry for the bother!
Thanks for any help you can give me. Mary Jane Doerr <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/2602:306:C40B:F50:A51C:4763:6371:E9E0|2602:306:C40B:F50:A51C:4763:6371:E9E0]] ([[User talk:2602:306:C40B:F50:A51C:4763:6371:E9E0#top|talk]]) 00:03, 27 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:[[User:Kingsmasher678|<span style="color:green;">'''Kingsmasher678'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Kingsmasher678|<span style="color:black;">'''talk'''</span>]]) 18:42, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
::@[[User:Kingsmasher678|Kingsmasher678]] {{tpw}} I truly do not think there is a problem with extending a welcome to any editor, even to a disruptive one, assuming your quoted editor to be one such. I have not checked. 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 17:32, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
:::I think it would be rather !AGF ''not'' to welcome a new editor, even if with the benefit of hindsight this turns out to have been naïve. (Granted, I don't bother myself welcoming very obvious vandals and spammers, but even then, perhaps I should.) -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 17:42, 5 December 2024 (UTC)


== Draft:La Casita Cultural Center ==


Hiii,
The article should be included on the Wikipedia page giving that Tor Madira has been one of the upcoming writers in South Sudan who have as a matter of facts attracted the attentions of thousands of South Sudanese readers. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Junubipedia|Junubipedia]] ([[User talk:Junubipedia#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Junubipedia|contribs]]) 09:55, 27 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->


You rejected by draft most recently saying, "Four of the sources are their own website, we have little interest in what that says".
== Tor Madira Machier ==


I have fixed that issue, now there is no website used twice as a source! I believe I have addressed your other concerns too :)
Dear Theroadsilong,


Let me know of any other necessary edits!
Thanks for reviewing the article I created, Tor Madira Machier. However, to my surprise, I see that the article is rejected. As I did, I mentioned independence sources such as the Sudan Tribune, and Tor's own blog. I wrote the article because Tor has attracted the attention of thousands of South Sudanese readership in recent years.


-Vato Pato [[User:Vato Pato|Vato Pato]] ([[User talk:Vato Pato|talk]]) 20:14, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
Thanks


== Do you have a moment to assist a new editor, please ==
looking forward to seeing you reconsidered my article <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Junubipedia|Junubipedia]] ([[User talk:Junubipedia#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Junubipedia|contribs]]) 09:59, 27 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:Tor's own blog is not independent? In order to demonstrate notability, you need to provide references to articles written about Tor Madira Machier in unrelated, independent journals, magazines, books, etc. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 10:02, 27 December 2017 (UTC)


I an is a dialogue with them at [[:User talk:Theo Scientist Physics]], but I think I am not making myself understood. If you would take a short time to absorb the dialogue I think you may be able to improve on my advice there. 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 17:25, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
== 10:35:14, 27 December 2017 review of submission by TheoSalisbury ==
:However the draft was written, it's not suitable for Wikipedia, an Earwig check comes up with nothing but it looks like it's been copied and pasted. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 17:43, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=TheoSalisbury|ts=10:35:14, 27 December 2017|declined=Draft:Theo_Salisbury}}
::ChatGPT (etc) always presents that way. It's one of the ways to detect it. The opposite of Artificial Intelligence is Genuine Stupidity, of course <big>🤡</big> 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 17:47, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
:::Ha haa...there is a book called "Beyond Genuine Stupidity Ensuring AI Serves Humanity" too! [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 17:52, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
::::There had to be! Was it AI generated?
::::I'm waiting for WMF to launch the AI version of Wikipedia, with AI generating everything and administering it as well 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 17:57, 5 December 2024 (UTC)


== Why Are You Rejected Draft Shubham X Rameshwar ==
The "Copyrighted" text taken from www.exiliansudios.com is information that I own. I am the owner of the website and should be aloud to use my own words from my website www.exilianstudios.com . I understand that you would not have known this and I am requesting that I am able to publish my article on wikipedia.


Why Are You Rejected Draft Shubham X Rameshwar Please Dont Reject This Draft [[User:Bollysocialmedia|Bollysocialmedia]] ([[User talk:Bollysocialmedia|talk]]) 12:17, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
Thankyou.
:If you insist on using content from your own website then you will need to read to [[Wikipedia:Donating copyrighted materials]]
and change the text on your website which currently reads "2017 Exilian Studios. All rights Reserved." Please be aware that writing an article on Wikipedia is difficult and writing an autobiography is about the hardest thing to do and is STRONGLY discouraged. If you are truly notable someone else will write it eventually. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 11:14, 27 December 2017 (UTC)


== Remove Reference ==
== Anzer Ayoob ==


Hello, Hope you're fine. I have taken [[Anzer Ayoob]]'s creator to the [[Wikipedia:Sockpuppet investigations/ANZER.AYOUB|SPI]]. Kindly look at it and help me if there's anything wrong, it's my first-ever SPI filing. [[User:Taabii|<span style="color: HotPink">Taabii</span>]] ([[User talk:Taabii|<span style="color: DarkKhaki">talk</span>]]) 15:07, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
How to remove reference link from my draft article <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Vikas9gupta|Vikas9gupta]] ([[User talk:Vikas9gupta#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Vikas9gupta|contribs]]) 12:20, 27 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:I'm sorry I don't understand your question. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 12:28, 27 December 2017 (UTC)
:That looks good thank you. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 15:25, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
::@[[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] Thank you for appreciating. [[User:Taabii|<span style="color: HotPink">Taabii</span>]] ([[User talk:Taabii|<span style="color: DarkKhaki">talk</span>]]) 16:24, 7 December 2024 (UTC)


== draft: Southbridge investments ==
== Gold Medal for Italian Architecture ==


Thank you for your comment on my draft and really believe it will go along way in helping me work on it. I definitely will try to rephrase the topics to avoid blatant advertising. Will look forward to your assistance whenever you can. Thank you. [[User:Marvs100|Marvs100]] ([[User talk:Marvs100|talk]]) 18:20, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Theroadislong, the Gold Medal for Italian Architecture is wide known internationally as the most important architectural prize in Italy. Strange enough most of the available references I know are in Italian language. I'm trying to collect more. as much as I can at least. in order to re publish the article with more comprehensive data. In any case I suggest you to consider that the entire argument "Triennale di Milano" is treated in wikipedia eng in a very curious way as it looks like we are speaking of museum or a local institution while instead The Triennale is the most important cultural institution for art, design and architecture promotion of Italy. If you may and have time, please help me to correct all this issue. Best, EnghireSpika <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:EnghireSpika|EnghireSpika]] ([[User talk:EnghireSpika#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/EnghireSpika|contribs]]) 13:57, 27 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:Your draft has only one reference which is to the subject's own website. Wikipedia requires [[WP:RS|independent reliable sources]]. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 14:26, 27 December 2017 (UTC)


== A barnstar for you! ==
== New Year's resolution: Write more articles for Women in Red! ==

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== Request on 03:29:46, 28 December 2017 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by Faremusic23 ==
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== FUTSOC WIKIPEDIA ==

We have received your message rejecting our submission. Kindly imndicate specifics so that we may proceed to edit and re-submit for consideration. Thank you! [[Special:Contributions/2601:589:101:6725:5027:926D:B0CE:CD5E|2601:589:101:6725:5027:926D:B0CE:CD5E]] ([[User talk:2601:589:101:6725:5027:926D:B0CE:CD5E|talk]]) 04:35, 28 December 2017 (UTC) Esteffan Lopez

== 07:39:46, 28 December 2017 review of submission by Nat.johnson ==
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Hi Theroadislong! I have recently uploaded a draft of the article "Admitad" here and you have declined it. Could you kindly explain what can I do to make it right? Is it possible to work with you as my mentor on the draft? Or, maybe, you can help with writing, could you kindly tell me what is the best option?
admitad is a global company, it already helps over 630,000 people worldwide. I believe, that it needs to be on Wikipedia.

== 11:49:18, 28 December 2017 review of submission by Nicholaspanteliwiki ==
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Reposted from WP:TH
My question concerns Draft: Logic Sticks (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Logic_Sticks). As per Wikipedia’s need for significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondarysources that are independent of the subject— Logic Sticks are an emerging skill toy which have their own website, social media (I know, off-limts for WP referencing) but have yet to have their coverage in academic journals or other approved media. What should I do? For full disclosure, I am working towards a brief set by my client, the creator of Logic Sticks, Mitchell John but want to put forward a stub (or possibly an article) worthy of the well-meaning, and nobler, aims of this encyclopaedia.

Best wishes,

Nick

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Reposted from WP:TH
My question concerns Draft: Logic Sticks (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Logic_Sticks). As per Wikipedia’s need for significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondarysources that are independent of the subject— Logic Sticks are an emerging skill toy which have their own website, social media (I know, off-limts for WP referencing) but have yet to have their coverage in academic journals or other approved media. What should I do? For full disclosure, I am working towards a brief set by my client, the creator of Logic Sticks, Mitchell John but want to put forward a stub (or possibly an article) worthy of the well-meaning, and nobler, aims of this encyclopaedia.

Thank you!
Best Wishes,
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:I'm afraid that, like many others, you have misunderstood what Wikipedia is about. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia that summarizes what [[WP:RS|independent sources]] say about a subject. You would need to provide detailed references showing the subject has received [[WP:42|'''significant''' coverage, in '''reliable sources''' that are '''independent''' of the topic.]] You also have a [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]] I'm afraid that, like many others, you have misunderstood what Wikipedia is about. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia that summarizes what [[WP:RS|independent]] say about a subject. You would need to provide detailed references showing the subject has received [[WP:42|'''significant''' coverage, in '''reliable sources''' that are '''independent''' of the topic.]] You have a [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]] because you are working for the. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 12:53, 28 December 2017 (UTC)

== Help is needed Theroadislong ==

Greetings Theroadislong,

I trust all is well. Please advise me in simplest terms of what I need or must do in order to have a wikipedia page for the Mayor of Greenville, MS? I am seeking assistance because I am unsure of what mistakes or necessary changes are needed. Any assistance with this matter would be greatly appreciated. I'm thanking you in advance!! Much obliged- <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Erchinn37|Erchinn37]] ([[User talk:Erchinn37#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Erchinn37|contribs]]) 15:17, 28 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:There are a number of links in the decline notice which explain what is required but basically... Wikipedia is an encyclopedia that summarizes what [[WP:RS|independent sources]] say about a subject. You would need to provide detailed references showing the subject has received [[WP:42|'''significant''' coverage, in '''reliable sources''' that are '''independent''' of the topic.]]. You would need to provide detailed references showing the subject has received [[WP:42|'''significant''' coverage, in '''reliable sources''' that are '''independent''' of the topic.]] His own website confers no notability at all. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 15:23, 28 December 2017 (UTC)

== Solar Innovations ==

How does it read like an ad? It's an objective history on the company citing regional newspapers and industry publications. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Frankiestar|Frankiestar]] ([[User talk:Frankiestar#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Frankiestar|contribs]]) 15:28, 28 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

== style ==

Thank you so much for helping. This is totally new to me and I didn't know that I was reversing your help. I did not mean to do that. I have edited it again but I haven't gotten the line that you put in under Military Service under all the sections right. I have made the changes recommended on the references.

I will not touch it until you have looked at it. Please let me know when you have seen it. I hope I have gotten things better !! Dec. 28, 2017 10:47 am. Mary <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Mary Jane Doerr|Mary Jane Doerr]] ([[User talk:Mary Jane Doerr#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Mary Jane Doerr|contribs]]) 15:49, 28 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

I can't thank you enough for your kind help. Can I resubmit it now? ```` Mary <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Mary Jane Doerr|Mary Jane Doerr]] ([[User talk:Mary Jane Doerr#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Mary Jane Doerr|contribs]]) 16:41, 28 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

== style - page numbers ==

Hi, I just put in the page number for Tully Potter's book.

The Hugo Gottesmann - Gestorben 1970 is a published world wide by the Rathaus in Vienna. I have given that source and the date.

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:Sources don't have to be online but they do need to have been published somewhere like newspapers or magazines. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 18:53, 28 December 2017 (UTC)

== Review ==

Hello! I was wondering if I could have a bit of an assist with your comments on the article I created on the IPSF. I already wrote the wikipedia pole sports article with a variety of academic sources. As I wrote that article, I realized that other sports federations have pages but not the IPSF. I wanted to create a quick simple article that gave basic statistics on this federation. I looked at other sports federation pages and they mostly discuss such facts as well as any historical controversies. I edited my article to add in academic sources like peer-reviewed journal articles as background but the details of that are in the pole sports general page. Since this is a relatively new federation there is not much to write about controversies. I now reference some media sources, as pole sports getting GAISF observer status made some headlines. Can you please let me know what I am doing wrong or if this is sufficient. Thanks! [[User:Dmfennell|Dmfennell]] ([[User talk:Dmfennell|talk]]) 22:09, 28 December 2017 (UTC)dmfennell

== 22:16:45, 28 December 2017 review of submission by KarsOG ==
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Theroadislong, changes are made with information from reliable sources only, could you review this article again?
:Looks like you requested deletion and it has been deleted? [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 12:59, 29 December 2017 (UTC)

== Too Bold ==

Thank you for your guidance, I have cleaned up the article per your suggestion.
[[User:Blackflute|Blackflute]] ([[User talk:Blackflute|talk]]) 02:28, 29 December 2017 (UTC)blackflute

== page` numbers and publishers ==

Hi, I can't thank you enough for helping me. I clarified the information on Tully Potter and the Information on Wiener Kultur-Notizen published by the City of Vienna.

[[User:Mary Jane Doerr|Mary Jane Doerr]] ([[User talk:Mary Jane Doerr|talk]]) 12:24, 29 December 2017 (UTC)

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== Links ==

I don't know how to do LINKS I have tried but wasn't successful.

There are numerous possibilities: Busch Quartet, Das Gottesmann Quartett, Hugo Kauder, Hugo Gottesmann Wikimedia Commons. Vienna Symphony,

Also I have pictures but I have failed to figure how to incorporate them.

Thank you so much for your continued help. [[User:Mary Jane Doerr|Mary Jane Doerr]] ([[User talk:Mary Jane Doerr|talk]]) 13:44, 29 December 2017 (UTC)
:Simply enclose the words with two square brackets either side. <code> <nowiki>[[Busch Quartet]]</nowiki></code> will give you [[Busch Quartet]]. There are details here [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking#Link specificity]] [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 14:16, 29 December 2017 (UTC)

== [[Draft:Clifford Inniss]] ==

Hey. I've read the references guide and made some changes. Thanks once again for your help.
[[User:BajanBrent|BajanBrent]] ([[User talk:BajanBrent|talk]]) 14:39, 29 December 2017 (UTC)
:That's great...I know nothing about cricket so will leave it to another reviewer to work out if he is notable or not. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 14:42, 29 December 2017 (UTC)

Hey. I understand. I've decided I don't want to be a member of this site. There are too many things I don't like. Too many bad editors who spoil articles and make life difficult for the better editors. I see all this and don't want any part in it. Can you delete the draft for me, please, because it will be a waste of somebody's time. You have been a real help and I appreciate that. One of the good guys. So long and thanks again. [[User:BajanBrent|BajanBrent]] ([[User talk:BajanBrent|talk]]) 17:32, 30 December 2017 (UTC)
:I am not an admin so can't delete your draft, I have accepted the article, if he is not notable then someone might tag it, but it seems fairly good to me. 17:50, 30 December 2017 (UTC)

== References ==

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Thanks for the message about Wikipedia not a legal reference. I will remove those before it gets reviewed. This is the first draft of my first submission. Cheers Sandwich58 <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Sandwich58|Sandwich58]] ([[User talk:Sandwich58#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Sandwich58|contribs]]) 15:45, 29 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

== Article Help ==

Hi Theroadislong,

Thank you so much for reviewing the article I submitted for review. The notability of the subject of the article was questioned, could you please provide some additional insight on how I can edit this for publishing? This is my first article on WIKI and I want to ensure I am meeting all guidelines. If you can provide any additional tips/advise I would really appreciate it! Thanks again for your help, look forward to getting my first WIKI article published!
[[User:Esmarin|Esmarin]] ([[User talk:Esmarin|talk]]) 20:19, 29 December 2017 (UTC)

== Links ==

Hi I put the LINKS in. It says the the Wikimedia page does not exist but it does. You have been a wonderful help. Thank. Mary <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Mary Jane Doerr|Mary Jane Doerr]] ([[User talk:Mary Jane Doerr#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Mary Jane Doerr|contribs]]) 22:51, 29 December 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:You listed the linked the words in a separate section though?? The idea is to link relevant words in the body of the article, I have linked a few terms for you as an example. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 23:17, 29 December 2017 (UTC)

I am working on those links. You have been so fabulous. [[User:Mary Jane Doerr|Mary Jane Doerr]] ([[User talk:Mary Jane Doerr|talk]]) 13:29, 30 December 2017 (UTC)

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== Links ==

I hope that I have these correct now. Thanks [[User:Mary Jane Doerr|Mary Jane Doerr]] ([[User talk:Mary Jane Doerr|talk]]) 15:15, 31 December 2017 (UTC)

== Notability and verification...? ==

Thank you for your feedback on my submission for Texas Consilium. I have reviewed the notability requirements and am trying to better understand the disconnect and your concerns so I can take appropriate actions.

From my perspective, the recognition of Texas Consilium by the State of Texas with the State's own House Resolution HR 922 dedicated to Texas Consilium, read on the House floor and published in the House record on behalf of a state representing 28 million people, would constitute "notable." As I understand the Wikipedia guidelines, this recognition by the State of Texas would constitute published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of Texas Consilium.

It is unclear to me whether the concern is that this does not constitute notable, or whether this notability of HR 922 is not adequately verified by the referencing, or if I am missing the standards in some other way. Would you kindly provide further insight and guidance for me? Thank you.

[[User:JimKarla|JimKarla]] ([[User talk:JimKarla|talk]]) 16:38, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
:This is a primary source [http://txconsilium.org/state-of-texas-house-of-representatives-resolution-hr-922-march-23-2017] This is a press release [http://markets.financialcontent.com/stocks/news/read/34218872/state_of_texas_recognizes_contribution_of_texas_consilium], and I’m not sure what this is [http://www.capitol.state.tx.us/tlodocs/85R/billtext/pdf/HR00922F.pdf#navpanes=0] but none of them are independent sources which discuss the subject in-depth. In order to demonstrate notability, you need to provide references to articles written about Texas Consilium in unrelated, independent journals, magazines, books, etc.[[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 16:50, 1 January 2018 (UTC)

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== Notability and verification...? ==

Sorry, but I couldn't figure out how to add a comment to our existing talk dialog so I've copied and pasted it here for reference.

You said "I’m not sure what this is [3]" and I wonder if that confusion might be the root issue here, since [3] is the key documentation presented here for the notability of Texas Consilium. [3] is the .gov official online publishing verification of the resolution by the State of Texas, documenting the State's evaluation of the importance of Texas Consilium to the State of Texas and Texas Consilium's impact on the economy of the State. The State of Texas is independent of Texas Consilium, was published as a representation of the 28 million residents of Texas, and this entire resolution is dedicated to Texas Consilium. While many organizations can be discussed in journals, magazines, books and other commercial publications, we are not aware of another business improvement organization that has received this level of published recognition by the State of Texas, or any other state government.

If we clarified the importance and this meaning of [3] in the article, would this be helpful?

[[User:JimKarla|JimKarla]] ([[User talk:JimKarla|talk]]) 19:18, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
:Could you clarify who you are referring to as "we" ? [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 19:54, 1 January 2018 (UTC)


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Notability and verification...?[edit source]
Thank you for your feedback on my submission for Texas Consilium. I have reviewed the notability requirements and am trying to better understand the disconnect and your concerns so I can take appropriate actions.

From my perspective, the recognition of Texas Consilium by the State of Texas with the State's own House Resolution HR 922 dedicated to Texas Consilium, read on the House floor and published in the House record on behalf of a state representing 28 million people, would constitute "notable." As I understand the Wikipedia guidelines, this recognition by the State of Texas would constitute published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of Texas Consilium.

It is unclear to me whether the concern is that this does not constitute notable, or whether this notability of HR 922 is not adequately verified by the referencing, or if I am missing the standards in some other way. Would you kindly provide further insight and guidance for me? Thank you.

JimKarla (talk) 16:38, 1 January 2018 (UTC)

This is a primary source [1] This is a press release [2], and I’m not sure what this is [3] but none of them are independent sources which discuss the subject in-depth. In order to demonstrate notability, you need to provide references to articles written about Texas Consilium in unrelated, independent journals, magazines, books, etc.Theroadislong (talk) 16:50, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
Hi, Thank you ... — Preceding unsigned comment added by Andy Deddy (talk • contribs) 17:34, 1 January 2018 (UTC)

== Notability and verification...? ==

My apologies for my ambiguous writing. I can only speak for myself, so please replace "we are not" with "I am not." Thank you.

RE: Could you clarify who you are referring to as "we" ? Theroadislong (talk) 19:54, 1 January 2018 (UTC)

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Notability and verification...?[edit source]
Sorry, but I couldn't figure out how to add a comment to our existing talk dialog so I've copied and pasted it here for reference.

You said "I’m not sure what this is [3]" and I wonder if that confusion might be the root issue here, since [3] is the key documentation presented here for the notability of Texas Consilium. [3] is the .gov official online publishing verification of the resolution by the State of Texas, documenting the State's evaluation of the importance of Texas Consilium to the State of Texas and Texas Consilium's impact on the economy of the State. The State of Texas is independent of Texas Consilium, was published as a representation of the 28 million residents of Texas, and this entire resolution is dedicated to Texas Consilium. While many organizations can be discussed in journals, magazines, books and other commercial publications, we are not aware of another business improvement organization that has received this level of published recognition by the State of Texas, or any other state government.

If we clarified the importance and this meaning of [3] in the article, would this be helpful?

JimKarla (talk) 19:18, 1 January 2018 (UTC)

PRIOR DIALOG

Notability and verification...?[edit source] Thank you for your feedback on my submission for Texas Consilium. I have reviewed the notability requirements and am trying to better understand the disconnect and your concerns so I can take appropriate actions.

From my perspective, the recognition of Texas Consilium by the State of Texas with the State's own House Resolution HR 922 dedicated to Texas Consilium, read on the House floor and published in the House record on behalf of a state representing 28 million people, would constitute "notable." As I understand the Wikipedia guidelines, this recognition by the State of Texas would constitute published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of Texas Consilium.

It is unclear to me whether the concern is that this does not constitute notable, or whether this notability of HR 922 is not adequately verified by the referencing, or if I am missing the standards in some other way. Would you kindly provide further insight and guidance for me? Thank you.

JimKarla (talk) 16:38, 1 January 2018 (UTC)

This is a primary source [1] This is a press release [2], and I’m not sure what this is [3] but none of them are independent sources which discuss the subject in-depth. In order to demonstrate notability, you need to provide references to articles written about Texas Consilium in unrelated, independent journals, magazines, books, etc.Theroadislong (talk) 16:50, 1 January 2018 (UTC) Hi, Thank you ... — Preceding unsigned comment added by Andy Deddy (talk • contribs) 17:34, 1 January 2018 (UTC) <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:JimKarla|JimKarla]] ([[User talk:JimKarla#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/JimKarla|contribs]]) </small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

== Request on 14:30:17, 2 January 2018 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by Shenalyn2018 ==
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all the citations came from notable Asian newspaper. [[User:Shenalyn2018|Shenalyn2018]] ([[User talk:Shenalyn2018|talk]]) 14:30, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

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:Reference number 1 is to his own website which is a primary source, refs number 2,3 and 5 don't mention him, refs 7, 8 and 9 are to his own website. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 15:29, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

== [[Ubagroup.ci]] ==

Sorry, but this is not CSD A7. This just makes double work for accredited reviewers. I suggest you read [[WP:NPR]] and the tutorial and apply for the reviewer right. [[User:Kudpung|Kudpung กุดผึ้ง]] ([[User talk:Kudpung|talk]]) 17:01, 2 January 2018 (UTC)
:Thank you I already have had the right for some years. The article was about a website with no indication of importance why wasn't it CSD A7 ? [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 17:07, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

== I have now completed the text along with references ==

I have now completed the text along with references
I hope it can be now accepted
[[User:Alfons Helbert|Alfons Helbert]] ([[User talk:Alfons Helbert|talk]]) 19:11, 2 January 2018 (UTC)
:Please read [[WP:REFB]] for help with formatting sources we need in-line citations to verify the content. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 19:22, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

== Shehab Khan ==

Hi,

As you requested I removed the links from The Sun and Facebook and have provided other external sources about the entry which include the BBC, Press Gazzette, Manchester Evening News and LBC.

Could you please read over the entry, would be great to hear from you and happy to make any other changes you deem necessary.

Best,
[[User:Asda3991|Asda3991]] ([[User talk:Asda3991|talk]]) 20:58, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

== Suzanne A. Rogers ==

Hi there: I don't know Suzanne A. Rogers but just chose her as a subject to try my hand at writing a Wiki entry, for learning. She is a fashion influencer in my city. If you can give me some guidance, I'd appreciate it. I was concerned about altering the wording as much of it is referenced in articles and other sources. I did get permission from the photographer to use the main image, so if you can give me a sense of what needs to happen to put it back up, I will do what is required. Thank you.[[User:Katie Dupuis82|Katie Dupuis82]] ([[User talk:Katie Dupuis82|talk]]) 00:27, 3 January 2018 (UTC)
:The photo was deleted as a copyright violation. The photographer would have to release the photograph under a creative commons licence letting anyone use it. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 08:54, 3 January 2018 (UTC)

== help ==

You left a message on my talk page for George S. Flinn sandbox. Can you glance at that page again and give me additional feedback. I'm made some revisions. I appreciate feedback. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Orual1963|Orual1963]] ([[User talk:Orual1963#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Orual1963|contribs]]) 01:03, 3 January 2018 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

== Submission Rejection ==

Hello Theroadislong,

Thank you for your prompt review of the article submission for Delta H Design, Inc.

I believe the company should be part of Wikipedia's database so I wanted to ask what should be explicitly omitted and/or added to get the article in proper shape for publication.

Once again thank you for your time and expertise. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Gottaloveham|Gottaloveham]] ([[User talk:Gottaloveham#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Gottaloveham|contribs]]) 21:43, 3 January 2018 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:The whole article reads like an advert and some content has been copied and pasted from here [https://www.dunnedwards.com/colors/specs/posts/delta-h-design-inc-dot-innovating-the-sights-and-sounds-of-design] Wikipedia takes copyright very seriously you need to re-write the article entirely in your own words using available independent sources. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 21:54, 3 January 2018 (UTC),

== Re Theo Brown ==

Theo Brown - I thought she was notable enough, but I am not sure I can do more to confirm that - so I may have to give in. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Charles.bowyer|Charles.bowyer]] ([[User talk:Charles.bowyer#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Charles.bowyer|contribs]]) 22:35, 3 January 2018 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:I hadn't noticed the external links you had added, I have used these as references. It could do with a bit of editing still but I think she is probably notable enough to pass the [[WP:GNG|notability guidelines]]. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 22:48, 3 January 2018 (UTC)

== Thank you Theroadislong ==


I just wanted to ask. On average how many citations do I need for an article to be considered acceptable?

Regards,[[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]]

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:If they are reliable, in-depth and independent then two to three would suffice more details here [[Wikipedia:Identifying reliable sources]]. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 17:52, 4 January 2018 (UTC)

== 23:24:44, 4 January 2018 review of submission by Yesterdaysfire ==
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Hi there!

I was just wondering what the issue was with my article submission? I tried to follow all the guidelines. I hope that I can make any revisions that you may require!

== oops! ==

Sorry about that!

I'm new here and just learning how all this works! haha!

I think I messed up and clicked in too many places and ended up in the sandbox instead of in my user profile.

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== My Milan Diekman draft ==

I've submitted a draft which you then declined for obvious reasons so I improved it and resubmitted it, then you declined it again with the exact same message. So I changed it again with the exact same structure another (accepted) page had, and I also addressed the problems in my draft (according to your message) head-on and re-submitted my draft again. Now you've declined it once again, which I don't mind, but I'd just like to know the reasons why because I feel like I can't do anything with the message you've send me three times now. Thanks in advance. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:LucaKlijn|LucaKlijn]] ([[User talk:LucaKlijn#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/LucaKlijn|contribs]]) 13:37, 5 January 2018 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:{{ping|LucaKlijn}}You have ignored the comment I left, that says that you cannot use Wikipedia as a reference which you have done three times. The remaining reference is a primary source and also not acceptable. Notability requires verifiable evidence, sources of evidence include newspapers, magazines, peer-reviewed publications, credible and authoritative books, reputable media sources, and other [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] generally. [[See WP:WHYN]]. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 13:42, 5 January 2018 (UTC)

== [[Gerhard W Goetze]] ==

Hello Theroadislong,
Thank you for looking at the draft on Gerhard W Goetze. What suggestions would you make to improve it?
I left out an interview with Walter Cronkite because I need to verify the date of the broadcast.
Many thanks,
rgroman[[User:Rgroman|Rgroman]] ([[User talk:Rgroman|talk]]) <!--Template:Undated--><small class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|undated]] comment added 17:14, 5 January 2018 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:{{ping|Rgroman}}You have done a very fine job for a first article! It could do with some more categories being added. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 17:18, 5 January 2018 (UTC)

Thank you Theroadislong, could you clarify what you mean by adding some more categories. Does that mean adding more material or just sectioning into more categories the material that is already there. I am a first time contributor and tried to follow all the suggestions as best as possible so thank you in advance for your patience in answering my questions to make this the best possible article! Rgroman[[User:Rgroman|Rgroman]] ([[User talk:Rgroman|talk]]) 22:53, 5 January 2018 (UTC)
:{{ping|Rgroman}} categories can be found at the bottom of the article I have just added the category inventors but there are probably many more that could be added I will take a look. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 22:58, 5 January 2018 (UTC)

Thanks - that sure makes more sense now. Rgroman[[User:Rgroman|Rgroman]] ([[User talk:Rgroman|talk]]) 23:12, 5 January 2018 (UTC)

== Thank you for improving Marisa Peer article ==

Just stopped by to say thanks for improving [[Marisa Peer]] article. -- [[User:Bbarmadillo|Bbarmadillo]] ([[User talk:Bbarmadillo|talk]]) 09:58, 6 January 2018 (UTC)

== You just stepped all over me... with glacier cleats. ==

You changed a section of the Marshall HS page I was working to correct ''as I was doing it'' resulting in a complete reversion of two sections; completely wasting two hours of my time. Did Wiki not tell you that before you saved your change? I am demotivated to spend the time to fix it again. It will just have to remain the mess it is. Charley CarlitosCorazon 14:41, 6 January 2018 (UTC) <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:CharleyHart|CharleyHart]] ([[User talk:CharleyHart#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CharleyHart|contribs]]) </small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:My edit removed a very ungainly, poorly formatted table, with non notable alumni. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 14:44, 6 January 2018 (UTC)

== Gerhard W Goetze Draft ==

Hello Theroadislong, I wanted to share this youtube link https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-IeG5aZPwms. Is it possible to use some of the words in this article - it was a CBS broadcast on July 21, 1969. The reel to reel tape is in the Goetze Family collection.
In gratitude for your time and efforts with all of Wikipedia, Rgroman [[User:Rgroman|Rgroman]] ([[User talk:Rgroman|talk]]) 14:49, 6 January 2018 (UTC)
:We don't usually use Youtube as a source and in particular this type which looks like a copyright violation of CBS. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 14:52, 6 January 2018 (UTC)

== 15:13:55, 6 January 2018 review of submission by Hhpop ==
{{Lafc|username=Hhpop|ts=15:13:55, 6 January 2018|declined=Draft:Esmee_Visser}}
Hello,
Re: the Esmee Visser article submission - the content is a carbon copy of the Dutch page for Esmee Visser. The Dutch version, incidentally, is also sourceless. (Edit: someone has inserted an ISU source, by the looks.) <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Hhpop|Hhpop]] ([[User talk:Hhpop#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Hhpop|contribs]]) 15:16, 6 January 2018 (UTC)</small>
:The fact that there are poorly sourced articles on another Wikipedia is not a good argument, and you or I watching a programme is NOT a reliable published source, somebody else has helped out and added a source so it will be accepted soon. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 15:23, 6 January 2018 (UTC)

== Draft for Shehab Khan ==


Hi,
Hi,


I'm trying to write a page about the Penn Medicine BioBank, similar to the UK BioBank's: [[UK Biobank]]. This page has generally the same sections plus more than mine, so I'm unsure of why mine is being rejected. Thank you! [[User:JLD120|JLD120]] ([[User talk:JLD120|talk]]) 14:43, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
I hope you are well - you have not replied to last few messages.
:You haven't submitted it for review? The previous draft was deleteted because it was a copyright violation, your latest version is blatant advertising, what is your connection? [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 14:46, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
::I just submitted a new one, I tried to add a sentence and change my wording so it doesn't look like advertising, I'm just trying to add it to the list of biobanks and make a page for it.
::I'm not connected to the subject- For one of my classes I get extra credit for contributing to Wikipedia about any topic in genetics, so I picked a biobank that hasn't been written about yet. I went off the formatting of the [[UK Biobank|UK BioBank]]'s page and sections. [[User:JLD120|JLD120]] ([[User talk:JLD120|talk]]) 15:10, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
:::The [[UK Biobank]] article has 90 sources, yours has two neither of which appear to be reliable or independent. Has your tutor read [[Wikipedia:School and university projects]]? [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 15:24, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
::::I will search for more sources! Thank you [[User:JLD120|JLD120]] ([[User talk:JLD120|talk]]) 15:30, 12 December 2024 (UTC)


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I am very disappointed but no bother, maybe there will be more sources in the future.
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== I have unreviewed a page you curated ==

Thanks for reviewing [[Banglar Bodhu]], Theroadislong.

Unfortunately [[User:Winged Blades of Godric|Winged Blades of Godric]] has just gone over this page again and unreviewed it. Their note is:

<blockquote>None of the sources mention the film.How did you pass it without any tag?</blockquote>

To reply, leave a comment on Winged Blades of Godric's [[User talk:Winged Blades of Godric|talk page]].

[[User:Winged Blades of Godric|<span style= "color:green">''Winged Blades''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Winged Blades of Godric|<span style= "color:green">Godric</span>]]</sup> 07:03, 7 January 2018 (UTC)
:The film has a notable award, I assumed with good faith that the foreign language reference confirmed this. My mistake. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 08:32, 7 January 2018 (UTC)

== 12:24:07, 7 January 2018 review of submission by JoeyFeeni ==
{{Lafc|username=JoeyFeeni|ts=12:24:07, 7 January 2018|declined=Draft:Tai_Lopez_(Entrepreneur)}}
I think the page now meets Wikipedia's standards
:I will leave it for another reviewer to look at. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 12:32, 7 January 2018 (UTC)

== [[Draft:Tai Lopez (Entrepreneur)]] declined ==

Hey Theroadislong, I saw you declined [[Draft:Tai Lopez (Entrepreneur)|this draft]] on basis of notability. I'm not sure that was a fair assessment, given the three reliable sources I added to the article yesterday (Forbes, Vice, HuffPo) which are mainstream media outlets that have significant coverage of the subject of the article. Could you please take a moment to look over the article again? I think it easily meets [[WP:GNG]]. Thanks, [[user talk:Anne drew Andrew and Drew|<span class="nobreak">AdA&D</span>]] 14:45, 7 January 2018 (UTC)
:My decline was before your addition of sources, I'll let another reviewer take a look. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 15:27, 7 January 2018 (UTC)
::Ah, I see that now. My mistake! [[user talk:Anne drew Andrew and Drew|<span class="nobreak">AdA&D</span>]] 15:58, 7 January 2018 (UTC)

== Sherry Sufi ==

Hi @Theroadislong ,

In regards to the submission for [[Draft:Sherry_Sufi|Sherry Sufi]], given that we have articles such [[Karina Okotel]] and [[Avi Yemini]], who have similarities with Sufi in regards to being right-wing former or prospective candidates who have a public profile, hold political positions, and were featured in interviews and write opinion pieces, I believed the article is sufficiently notable. He has multiple television appearances both related and unrelated to his political candidacy. The original draft wasn't mine, but I've taken it up for consistency's sake. Thanks, [[User:Judeti|Judeti]] ([[User talk:Judeti|talk]]) 15:16, 7 January 2018 (UTC)
:I didn't decline the article? I pointed out that no changes had been made since the previous decline. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 15:29, 7 January 2018 (UTC)

== Donovan J. Greening ==

Hi, please give me a call I have a few questions on how we can adjust the Donovan J. Greening wiki page so that it can be more reliable and remain on wikipedia. 248-225-0882 <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/97.70.133.170|97.70.133.170]] ([[User talk:97.70.133.170#top|talk]]) 16:07, 7 January 2018 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:No thanks you can tell me here. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 16:16, 7 January 2018 (UTC)

== Request on 18:41:05, 7 January 2018 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by Camdavis ==
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I don't understand. I made the mechanical fixes requested. Then the article was rejected for a completely different and more fundamental reason. I would not have made the mechanical fixes requested had I known earlier about the newest and different reasons for rejection. A lot of us understand that Wikipedia relies heavily on volunteers. All the more reason that respecting people's time is paramount.

I'm not sure what to do now. And even if these latest problems are fixed, whether Wikipedia will reject the article again for completely different reasons.


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:The article is entirely unsourced? No articles are ever accepted without sources. The first decline was for being poorly sourced, the second was because it doesn't show why the subject is even notable enough for an article. WE need reliable secondary sources that discuss the subject in-depth. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 18:50, 7 January 2018 (UTC)

== edited ==

Hi there
Thanks for your comment. Made the edits per your notes on the page for David A. Hurwitz. GigiH0118

== Thank you for your quick review ==

I appreciate your quick feedback on the draft page for thank you for reviewing the draft for "Krishan A. Canekeratne". He truly is an interesting man from the creation of several major companies, receiving the Sri Lanka Sikhamani Honor to being the number 1 ranked under-16 table tennis player in Sri Lanka. I would love to be able to get this page up there for him. I have removed all in-line external hyperlinks as you requested to improve the overall readability.

I look forward to your re-review!

[[User:Greenough Ben|Greenough Ben]] ([[User talk:Greenough Ben|talk]]) 12:59, 8 January 2018 (UTC)

== 13:36:39, 8 January 2018 review of submission by Tearstosweat ==
{{Lafc|username=Tearstosweat|ts=13:36:39, 8 January 2018|declined=Draft:Biju_Sopanam}}

More reliable references like newspaper sources(Times of India, Decaan Chronicle) are added

== Liz Hannah ==

Hello! I saw back on the 14th of December, you reviewed my [[Draft:Liz Hannah|Liz Hannah]] page. I have added three sources, so I think it should be fine now! I am just telling you because it has not been reviewed again in around 24 days. Thanks for your initial review, and will accept and change anything that you point out. Thanks a ton for the help!

[[User:DrChicken24|DrChicken24]] ([[User talk:DrChicken24|talk]]) 15:25, 8 January 2018 (UTC)DrChicken24

== Gerhard W Goetze Draft ==

Thanks for the heads-up on the YouTube. Will try to contact CBS directly since we probably have the only tape of that time period. Also, just FYI made a donation to Wikipedia Foundation with gratitude for your work. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Rgroman|Rgroman]] ([[User talk:Rgroman#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Rgroman|contribs]]) 20:47, 8 January 2018 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

== Request on 11:35:18, 9 January 2018 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by Orlando Murrin ==
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Hello, thank you for your comments. No I didn't create this page, it was done by an academic at Exeter University but he asked me to check it for accuracy and provide citations, and then I ended up posting it myself because he found the publishing system confusing. It seemed to me was disproportionately long and detailed.
Regarding notability and verifiability, a lot of the facts in the biography are recorded: e.g. books and articles published. Would you suggest I ask him to try again, sticking only to these 'published' facts? Would you rather he actually published it, rather than me?
Thank you again [[User:Orlando Murrin|Orlando Murrin]] ([[User talk:Orlando Murrin|talk]]) 11:35, 9 January 2018 (UTC)

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== 16:07:57, 9 January 2018 review of submission by Bgrandone80 ==
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Hello,
can you please help me with the edit of my article? I've tried to follow all your notes and I've quoted each time certain peacock terms are used. It's my first time here, I'd love if you could point out more specific edits I can do to improve the article!
thanks
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== 01:36:45, 10 January 2018 review of submission by Sparx.kfukui ==
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Hi Theroadislong,

I updated the sparx group draft page and resubmitted for publishing. I had originally not done enough citing; I found 5 or so articles that directly discuss Sparx group. There are many more articles in Japanese than English, wondering if I should add Japanese references as well.

Would appreciate if you could take a look when you get a chance.

Thank you! <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Sparx.kfukui|Sparx.kfukui]] ([[User talk:Sparx.kfukui#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Sparx.kfukui|contribs]]) 01:36, 10 January 2018 (UTC)</small>
:Japanese references would be fine, I will not be advising you further though, because you are being paid to edit. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 18:51, 10 January 2018 (UTC)

== 11:01:59, 10 January 2018 review of submission by JWegel ==
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Hello,
I don't know what I have to change in this article that it can be published. Could you please tell me exactly what I need to change or give me examples in the text?
I do not quite understand why this article is considered advertising. What is exactly the problem?

I look forward to your reply.
regards
:Do you work for the company by any chance? Wikipedia has essentially no interest in anything the company has to say about themselves. It is only interested in what people who have no connection with them have chosen to publish about them. Your article has no sources except the company website and so is not acceptable. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 13:37, 10 January 2018 (UTC)

== Can you edit my BeepBox article? ==

If you find more about fixing my references, please let me know! <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:StinkerB06|StinkerB06]] ([[User talk:StinkerB06#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/StinkerB06|contribs]]) 18:58, 10 January 2018 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

== Speedy Deletion ==

Hello,

I'm new to Wikipedia editing and I accidentally deleted the template for speedy deletion that you put in the Tammie Shannon article I am working on. I want to finish the page and contest the speedy deletion properly—not trying to play dirty here—but can't figure out how to reinsert the template, can you add it back? Sorry to bother you

here's the link to the page I'm talking about

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tammie_Shannon

PJ <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Evan07x|Evan07x]] ([[User talk:Evan07x#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Evan07x|contribs]]) 22:07, 10 January 2018 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:You seem to have found more sources so speedy deletion wouldn't be right now, I have tagged it for notability. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 22:14, 10 January 2018 (UTC)

== 23:03:11, 10 January 2018 review of submission by Rossmoody88 ==
{{Lafc|username=Rossmoody88|ts=23:03:11, 10 January 2018|declined=Draft:Drab_Majesty}}
Please tell me what exactly about Discogs makes it an unreliable source, so I can re-do the article with sources that will be considered reliable. Also please let me know what exactly (if anything) needs to be changed about the article besides what you mentioned in your comment.

Thanks.
:The Discogs links merely confirm the existence of the music. You need to provide detailed references showing the subject has received in-depth [[WP:42|'''significant''' coverage, in '''reliable sources''' that are '''independent''' of the topic.]] The essay, [[Wikipedia:No amount of editing can overcome a lack of notability]], may explain this better. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong#top|talk]]) 23:11, 10 January 2018 (UTC)

== 01:11:13, 11 January 2018 review of submission by Sparx.kfukui ==
{{Lafc|username=Sparx.kfukui|ts=01:11:13, 11 January 2018|declined=Draft:SPARX_Group}}


Hi Theroadislong,

My apologies, I didn't see you last response. I do work for the company, I attempted to disclose that according to the guidelines.. but perhaps I did not do it right. The citations and references I made were all second party articles, and I did not use anything the company publishes. Please let me know if there is anything I can do.

Hi again, just read up about COI and sounds like I should not be publishing this article. Would it be allright if I ask a non-affiliated friend to start this page? Thank you


== How to improve my draft - I'm new editor ==
Thank you
[[User:Sparx.kfukui|Sparx.kfukui]] ([[User talk:Sparx.kfukui|talk]]) 01:54, 11 January 2018 (UTC)


My draft is about an [[Draft:Madiad Internship Program|Internship Program]] which i found interested in. Can you show me which paragraph reads like an advertisement, or which links doesn't reliable please. I just want to improve my draft. [[User:Miyano25|Miyano25]] ([[User talk:Miyano25|talk]]) 08:42, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
[[User:Sparx.kfukui|Sparx.kfukui]] ([[User talk:Sparx.kfukui|talk]]) 01:11, 11 January 2018 (UTC)

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Women in Red December 2024

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Women in Red | December 2024, Vol 10, Issue 12, Nos 293, 294, 324, 325


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Comment on my draft

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Hey,

I recently saw your comment on my draft. I would like to say that I am aware that youtube is generally speaking not a reliable source, however i tried to avoid using youtube as a source except when discussing equipment, where as far as I know, footage can generally be considered a source.

Additionally, in my references using youtube(source 6, 7, 8 and 9(which 8 and 9 are the same source)), 6 is directly from the CGTN africa channel, 7 is from CCTV channel 7, and 8/9 is a reupload from the chinese MOD.

If i have to, i am willing to remove the equipment section as a whole if the sources are still not considered reliable. Best Regards, Thehistorianisaac Thehistorianisaac (talk) 10:15, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Review of Maurice Molarsky page

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I understand why you would reject this page, based on the information submitted thus far. We have not yet uploaded the main section about his career. Molarsky was one of the best known portrait painters in Philadelphia during the first half of the 20th century, and his work is currently held by the Pennsylvania Academy of the Fine Arts, the Woodmere Gallery, the Princeton University Art Museum, and numerous private collectors. His work regularly comes up for auction in the Northeast US:

https://davidsmernoff.com/product/maurice-molarsky-1885-1950-american-impressionist-painting-portrait-of-young-beautycirca-1910/

Frank Beck DieHoren (talk) 20:54, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Who is "we"? User accounts are strictly single person use. We can only review the content that you add, you need to add the details of the collections with reliable independent sources and then re-submit. Theroadislong (talk) 21:23, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

That got interesting very quickly

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Thank you for your intervention. Legal threats were the last thing I thought would happen. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 17:33, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yes... extraordinary! Theroadislong (talk) 17:36, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Escalation in this general manner we have seen before with COI editors seeking to use bluster to force their way in. This topic is their pet topic. The neologism is their neologism. They seem to have mistaken Wikipedia as a place to enhance their reputation instead of a please to record it, assuming verifiable notability. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 17:42, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
and now "Sorry you are violating US laws and please clarify for any consequences!" whatever that means! Theroadislong (talk) 17:45, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It means they are blocked! 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 18:03, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Administrator's Noticeboard

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


Information icon There is currently a discussion WP:ANI regarding making and doubling down on legal threats. The thread is Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents#User:MehdiAlireza making and doubling down on legal threats. Thank you. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 18:00, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

I, and it seems you, too, am drawn to argumentative editors

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I just encountered your strategic withdrawal over shadow footprints. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 20:52, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yes it appears so! They are editing a series of connected articles and seem to have a WP:BATTLEGROUND mentality, I didn't feel I was getting through so withdrawal seemed easier. Theroadislong (talk) 20:56, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I think they are righteously indignant, but too much self involved. You probably saw I commented on the Estelle one, which appears to be under a different username. I am damned if I will get into an argument with them, though. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 22:22, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

A barnstar for you!

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The Special Barnstar
Thanks for being a stalker. qcne (talk) 21:45, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Cranbourne West Secondary College Draft Decline

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Hi @Theroadislong! Thank you for your review on Draft: Cranbourne West Secondary College.

Can I please get an idea of what part of the article sounds like its blatant advertising? I would like to improve the quality of the article prior to submitting again for review.

Your feedback is much appreciated! Thank you! DebugDruid (talk) 21:58, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

From the very first paragraph " growing steadily, adding a new year level annually. The school is committed to providing a diverse and inclusive learning environment for its students" is blatant promotion. Followed by "Rob Duncan, the current principal, brings extensive experience in educational leadership" then " has facilities designed to support both academic and extracurricular activities" etc etc. It reads like it was written by the schools marketing department. Theroadislong (talk) 22:02, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hi @Theroadislong I have edited the draft as per your feedback. Could you please have a look now and let me know if anything else needs changing.
Thank you in advance! DebugDruid (talk) 23:39, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hi @Theroadislong, I saw your comment on the draft, it states the same thing as the reply from before, however the draft has been edited.
Could you please let me know which part of the page still seems like its advertising, as all the information I have got is from the sources listed in the draft.
Thank you. DebugDruid (talk) 22:44, 5 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

X-tail

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sorry for being annoying, (i can tell you got a lot to deal with). i'll try to find a reliable source to support the article, sorry it didn't meet specifications. Cheers! <3 Taffy boeing b 17 (talk) 22:04, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

No worries at all it seems like Draft:X-tail could make a great new article, you just need to find reliable sources that confirm your content, presumably you have them. Theroadislong (talk) 22:07, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
You might find some of the references in the Tail-sitter article of some use. Theroadislong (talk) 22:14, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

7th marine brigade

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Thank you for the comment on my draft on the 7th marine brigade.

Even though the nickname of the Jiaolong commandos is much more common, I have seen that it is also sometimes known as the 7th Marine Brigade, especially on some chinese websites, and the chinese wikipediia article along with red links on english wikipedia use the same name. I would prefer that the draft keep the name of the 7th marine brigade and have a redirect of Jiaolong commandos instead as it just simply is a more official name. Thehistorianisaac (talk) 23:51, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Maurice Molarsky article

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Hi, Theroadislong--

I have edited the article about the American painter Maurice Molarsky (1885-1950), which you reviewed. I have provided citations from archival and web sources to demonstrate his stature as an award-winning portrait painter whose was displayed in many leading galleries and is now part of the permanent collections of several important museums.

Please let me know if you have any questions about the article.

Thank you.

Frank Beck DieHoren (talk) 03:31, 4 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

You could wiki link the museums if notable and then re-submit for review. Theroadislong (talk) 07:47, 4 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Be careful about your wlecomings

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Crapple snapple hasn't made useful contributions, so they typically shouldn't be welcomed.

Kingsmasher678 (talk) 18:42, 4 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

As you probably know given your number of edits, sorry for the bother!
Kingsmasher678 (talk) 18:42, 4 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Kingsmasher678 (talk page watcher) I truly do not think there is a problem with extending a welcome to any editor, even to a disruptive one, assuming your quoted editor to be one such. I have not checked. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 17:32, 5 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I think it would be rather !AGF not to welcome a new editor, even if with the benefit of hindsight this turns out to have been naïve. (Granted, I don't bother myself welcoming very obvious vandals and spammers, but even then, perhaps I should.) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 17:42, 5 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:La Casita Cultural Center

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Hiii,

You rejected by draft most recently saying, "Four of the sources are their own website, we have little interest in what that says".

I have fixed that issue, now there is no website used twice as a source! I believe I have addressed your other concerns too :)

Let me know of any other necessary edits!

-Vato Pato Vato Pato (talk) 20:14, 4 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Do you have a moment to assist a new editor, please

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I an is a dialogue with them at User talk:Theo Scientist Physics, but I think I am not making myself understood. If you would take a short time to absorb the dialogue I think you may be able to improve on my advice there. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 17:25, 5 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

However the draft was written, it's not suitable for Wikipedia, an Earwig check comes up with nothing but it looks like it's been copied and pasted. Theroadislong (talk) 17:43, 5 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
ChatGPT (etc) always presents that way. It's one of the ways to detect it. The opposite of Artificial Intelligence is Genuine Stupidity, of course 🤡 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 17:47, 5 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ha haa...there is a book called "Beyond Genuine Stupidity Ensuring AI Serves Humanity" too! Theroadislong (talk) 17:52, 5 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
There had to be! Was it AI generated?
I'm waiting for WMF to launch the AI version of Wikipedia, with AI generating everything and administering it as well 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 17:57, 5 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Why Are You Rejected Draft Shubham X Rameshwar

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Why Are You Rejected Draft Shubham X Rameshwar Please Dont Reject This Draft Bollysocialmedia (talk) 12:17, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Anzer Ayoob

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Hello, Hope you're fine. I have taken Anzer Ayoob's creator to the SPI. Kindly look at it and help me if there's anything wrong, it's my first-ever SPI filing. Taabii (talk) 15:07, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

That looks good thank you. Theroadislong (talk) 15:25, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Theroadislong Thank you for appreciating. Taabii (talk) 16:24, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

draft: Southbridge investments

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Thank you for your comment on my draft and really believe it will go along way in helping me work on it. I definitely will try to rephrase the topics to avoid blatant advertising. Will look forward to your assistance whenever you can. Thank you. Marvs100 (talk) 18:20, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

A barnstar for you!

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The Brilliant Idea Barnstar
Thanks for the AFD! I really appreciate your work at AFC. Maliner (talk) 19:12, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Penn Medicine BioBank

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Hi,

I'm trying to write a page about the Penn Medicine BioBank, similar to the UK BioBank's: UK Biobank. This page has generally the same sections plus more than mine, so I'm unsure of why mine is being rejected. Thank you! JLD120 (talk) 14:43, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

You haven't submitted it for review? The previous draft was deleteted because it was a copyright violation, your latest version is blatant advertising, what is your connection? Theroadislong (talk) 14:46, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I just submitted a new one, I tried to add a sentence and change my wording so it doesn't look like advertising, I'm just trying to add it to the list of biobanks and make a page for it.
I'm not connected to the subject- For one of my classes I get extra credit for contributing to Wikipedia about any topic in genetics, so I picked a biobank that hasn't been written about yet. I went off the formatting of the UK BioBank's page and sections. JLD120 (talk) 15:10, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The UK Biobank article has 90 sources, yours has two neither of which appear to be reliable or independent. Has your tutor read Wikipedia:School and university projects? Theroadislong (talk) 15:24, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I will search for more sources! Thank you JLD120 (talk) 15:30, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

New pages patrol January 2025 Backlog drive

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How to improve my draft - I'm new editor

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My draft is about an Internship Program which i found interested in. Can you show me which paragraph reads like an advertisement, or which links doesn't reliable please. I just want to improve my draft. Miyano25 (talk) 08:42, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]