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Q on reference source language

07:53:55, 14 November 2017 review of submission by FriendlyB


Dear Thereodislong,

thank you for reviewing the draft "Dr. Petry Textile Auxiliaries".

For the sources, I cited independent sources, such as - http://www.genios.de/fachzeitschriften/artikel/MTB/20080617/umweltschutz-und-nachhaltigkeit-in-/060817061.html - https://www.biooekonomie-bw.de/de/fachbeitrag/aktuell/insektenchitin-macht-textilherstellung-nachhaltiger/

In order to have more evidence, I added information from further independent sources and references: - https://www.bloomberg.com/profiles/companies/6311207Z:GR-textilchemie-dr-petry-gmbh - https://www.bluesign.com/industry/chemical-suppliers/references/textilchemie-dr-petry

Thank you in advance for re-reviewing.

Thanks for your help!

Thanks for your assistance with Draft:InnoCare. I have included {{connected contributor}} and noted it on your user page that I work for that company. They're not paying me to create this page, I just think it would cool to have a Wikipedia page. Let me know if there's anything else you can suggest to improve my draft. I appreciate your help!

05:44:48, 23 November 2017 review of submission by Lizzybunker

I've added the appropriate citations!

Invacio

Hi Theroadislong I've edited the text - please let me know if it's better this way I appreciate your feedback!

00:53:26, 27 November 2017 review of submission by Cmolaro


I added more 3rd party sources that are verifiable and are independent, professional sources (not personal blogs or sites). I now have 15 citations.

Please let me know what else you think is required to have it accepted?

12:54:53, 27 November 2017 review of submission by Llewol


08:40:08, 28 November 2017 review of submission by Salt&pepper12345


Hi there, thank very much for your care and consideration to to help build this page. I can understand why the review was rejected, as i hadn't cited enough sources on the first draft. I was wondering if you'd mind having a read over the latest draft and checking if it is better now thank you. SP

13:22:45, 4 December 2017 review of submission by 79.106.95.85


21:10:13, 6 December 2017 review of submission by Innocent Cuty


Dear Theroadislong

Hope you are fine and doing good.

I am requesting for a review again as the major comment for rejection/decline of this article was its Reference section or having less references. Now, the draft has been updated, and more than 20 solid references have been employed, with more historical details, and best possible bibliographic support in the light of the available literature. This single page article is now having over 25 appropriate references, and are strengthened with new data.

Your anticipation in this regard will be highly appreciated.

Sincere Regards

Dear Theroadislong

Thank you very much for your prompt response.

The objected references (facebook) has been udpated with the departmental URLS (links to the webpages). I think, these were the most up to dated and regularly updating references. Moreover, the last paragraph was deleted, because the book describing the paragraph and the mentioned material is in press (which is written by Dr. Ikram), and once the book got published, the three to four lines paragraph will be inserted again.

I do hope, that the draft will get approved now and will get online, as after coming across other such articles, this one seems to be far better than those.

Your prompt and positive anticipation in this regard will be highly appreciated.

Thanking you in anticipation

Sincere Regards

07:43:09, 15 December 2017 review of submission by Kgkg90


23:49:06, 23 December 2017 review of submission by Pearl ally


The submission's referencing was improved as advised, and I added a few more. More information on his teachings and publications were added. The page exists in 3 other Wikipedia: https://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peter_Russell https://pt.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peter_Russell https://sk.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peter_Russell

In-depth coverage

I added RPG Site. Is that a reliable source?

02:14:50, 26 December 2017 review of submission by Pearl ally


Please see references 15,18,19,21,22

07:39:46, 28 December 2017 review of submission by Nat.johnson


Hi Theroadislong! I have recently uploaded a draft of the article "Admitad" here and you have declined it. Could you kindly explain what can I do to make it right? Is it possible to work with you as my mentor on the draft? Or, maybe, you can help with writing, could you kindly tell me what is the best option? admitad is a global company, it already helps over 630,000 people worldwide. I believe, that it needs to be on Wikipedia.

23:24:44, 4 January 2018 review of submission by Yesterdaysfire


Hi there!

I was just wondering what the issue was with my article submission? I tried to follow all the guidelines. I hope that I can make any revisions that you may require!

edited

Hi there Thanks for your comment. Made the edits per your notes on the page for David A. Hurwitz. GigiH0118

13:36:39, 8 January 2018 review of submission by Tearstosweat


More reliable references like newspaper sources(Times of India, Decaan Chronicle) are added

00:42:00, 26 February 2018 review of re-submission by Vliander


Dear Theroadislong,


Thank you for your valuable time and timely reply.


The bellow listed recognition letters and independent press publications may provide a more in-depth coverage regarding different subjects about Carl-W. Röhrig's life and work mentioned in the WIKI article.


I now additionally added the following references to the Citations and References section in the article:


8. Röhrig, Carl-W. (1992). "Newspaper Article". DIE WELT - Independent Daily Newspaper for Germany.

9. Röhrig, Carl-W. (1993). "Newspaper Article". East Grinstead Courier, United Kingdom.

10. Röhrig, Carl-W. (1989). "Recognition Letter". by the National Geographic Society, Washington D.C.

11. Röhrig, Carl-W. (1993). "Newspaper Article". THE PRESS, Christchurch, New Zealand.

12. Röhrig, Carl-W. (1992). "Recognition Letter". by Heinz Sielemann, Munich, Germany.

14. Röhrig, Carl-W. (1993). "Newspaper Article". BILD Newspaper, Germany.

17. Röhrig, Carl-W. (2003). "Newspaper Article". Fränkischer Tag, Newspaper, Germany.


I am looking forward hearing from you.


Sincerely,

Vliander


Vliander (talk) 00:42:00, 26 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

12:27:00, 26 February 2018 review of re-submission by Vliander

Dear Theroadislong,


The article was written from a neutral point of view and reliable sources where provided.

The questioned links in regards to Röhrig letters could be removed if required.


Sincerely,

Vliander

Who are u

Who are u to correct me or remove the changes I made to kammara sambhavam.

Request on 08:52:05, 6 June 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by WildBullMiller


Thanks for the info

For the bio, is Nicholas Kaufmann's official website a good enough source? That's where the info comes from, anyway.

Typo in Title

Hi and thanks for approving my post for "Helgesias of Sinope." Unfortunately there's a typo in the title, which should be "Hegesias of Sinope" (no L). My apologies for that (it was my first post). I don't know how to fix a mistake in a title. Are you able to help me? Thank you, Budapest Joe

Re-submitted

Hi Theroadislong.

I have resubmitted the article for a re-review, please let me know if it reads better now? If not, can you give me an example of how to improve it. Thank you, Christian.

Images/Imágenes

Hi! As Images/Imágenes stated I am being paid to edit this page, but I am also working on this program as it is a work in progress. It was on the aire for over 30 years and pulled off in 2011. We are currently working on starting the project again but as this program began in the 70's there is not a large online presence. Is there anyway this page could be published for now, so we can show people that Images/Imágenes is coming back? Thanks, Alice

I have a lot of information from the Executive Producer but since none of it is available online, I cannot reference it. For example: (None of this is available online) Mission Images/Imágenes is a multi- Emmy award-winning television program series that creates, chronicles, and promotes the varied rich diverse history, culture, and life experiences of Hispanic/Latino communities in the state of New Jersey and the nation. Brief Organizational History For 46 years, the Images/Imágenes television series provided a voice and platform for New Jersey's diverse Latino population. The program series is known as the longest-running Latino community program in the history of PBS. Over the decades, the Emmy award winning series featured thought provoking round table discussions, interviews, profiles, documentaries and special topic episodes on the most prevalent issues pertaining to and for the Hispanic/Latino populations – the fastest growing demographic in New Jersey. Program topics ranged from lifestyles, business, education, legal matters, community affairs, pop culture/entertainment, the arts, sports and the health and sciences. Images/Imagenes was launched on January 6, 1972 than titled “Mi Casa Su Casa” on NJPTV hosted by producer, Diego Castellanos. The program made history as the first Latino television series on Public Television in New Jersey to air across the Garden State and surged as the nation’s number one market in New York and the number 4 market in Philadelphia. Since then the series is recognized as a resource for top Latino stories, both at local, as well as the national level. Award Winning Producer William Sánchez is the Producer/Director of Images/Imágenes since 1972, and is currently revitalizing a new series as its producer/director at Rutgers, The State University of New Jersey. He produced the series with the PBS NJ Television Network until the station was dissolved by the state on June 30, 2011. Within the first ten years Images/Imágenes became the leading contributor of programs for the PBS Series Presente hosted by Rita Moreno. Images/Imágenes competed with mainstream networks and was selected over ABC World News Tonight at the National Unity Awards in St. Louis. Then it rose to the top of the Latino Broadcasting Media when it was highlighted at the San Antonio Film Festival in the 1980s as a must see series on Latin Music alongside the films “LA BAMBA” and “STAND AND DELIVER.” National Recognition

For over 40 years, Images/Imágenes under the leadership of producer William Sanchez the television industry has recognized the series with four Emmys and nominated for twenty by National PBS. The series is distinguished having received numerous national acclaims from the White House, Congress, National PBS, the National Corporation for Public Broadcasting (CPB), and three New Jersey Governors. The series represented PBS in Europe, Asia, and Latin America. It was distributed by the Department of Defense and with audiences including American military bases around the world. It was also national under the Latino Consortium’s series “PRESENTE” with host Rita Moreno. Now under the banner of Rutgers, The State University of New Jersey, Images/Imagenes’ legacy continues for public viewing at the United States Library of Congress. Signature Shows There are a number of evergreen programs that were signature shows for the series and are timeless works of history and culture. A. Sembrando El Futuro/Seeding the Future (5-part Parent Education Series) Nationally acclaimed/ New York Emmy Award Winner 1985 B. The Hispanic Youth Showcase 1999 (Talent competition/motivational program hosted by kids (Ages 5 to 17) was recognized as one of the top six children’s programs in the nation by The Arts Council Co-op/ Mid-Atlantic Emmy Award Winner C. Su Salud Primero/Your Health First with host John Quiñones Mid-Atlantic 2008 Emmy Award Winner, drew national acclaim D. The Spanish Guitar (History/Legends: Jose Feliciano) Mid-Atlantic Emmy Winner 2010


Notable Programs & Specials Include: E. Festival Afro-Caribeño (Afro-Caribbean Festival at Newark’s Symphony Hall 1980) 2,500 people attended concert/first of several Images’ shows to obtain national acclaim F. Word-Up Stop the Violence with Edward Hames Olmos (Actor) 2004 Emmy Nominated Town meeting with 400 teens G. Lainzation of New Jersey, 1982 winner of the national Unity Award held in St. Louis, Ma. Won against ABC’s World News Tonight Other Notable Programs & Specials Include: H. Caribbean Music And Dance Emmy Nominated, Represented PBS At An International Level I. Latin Music Special Emmy Nominated J. The Art of Baseball Emmy Nominated K. Latinos in Boxing (History and Legends) L. History of Flamenco (History and Performance)

The Golden Age of Dance: The Palladium Obtained worldwide download success on the internet in 2009 1983 Special: Alcoholism & Mental health Inspired New Jersey Government offices to establish policies and focus groups aimed at understanding and serving Latinos in need of mental health

Productech Corporation draft reviewing

Dear Thereodislong,

thank you for reviewing the draft of Productech Corporation article. I was trying to do it objective aтв not an advertising, taking an article about JBL as an inspiration. Looks like I failed (( Would you please advise, what parts of the article require editing? thank you in advance!

References added

Hi, I filled up the draft with some useful references and also added some literature. I hope it could be enought. Thanks

Thanks

I want to know that why my article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Dolmen_Malls not approving any suggestion

Grateful!Gmli82164 (talk) 11:12, 7 October 2018 (UTC)Gmli82164

Hi! Thank you for the review. I will do what I can to improve that article.

Lorraine McGowen Draft Page

Thank you for the notification. I have removed all external links from the Lorraine McGowen page.

DRAFT:Summation Formula List Decline

Ok, I took your advice and added my material back onto the wiki page on summation. You watch how long it takes D Lazarus to delete it and post his own rambling notes. His notes don't transition well for sentence-to-sentence; paragraph-to-paragraph, nor make any sense; Some of what he posts really is not related to closed form summation. Roger

Dixon Algebra submission.

I have followed your instructions and I think I have successfully updated the references to conform to wiki practices.

Historical notes: • I begsn working on this topic some 40 years ago; • Periodically the algebra has cropped up in the works of others; • Most of this activity has occurred in the last 8 years; • John Baez was the first to call the algebra the Dixon algebra; • This became somewhat solidified when the Quanta Mag and Wired articles appeared; • I recently saw a blog in which the blog's author said there is no wikipedia page for the Dixon algebra yet; • So I decided to start one.

Cheers, Geoffrey Dixon

Great American Doll Company Draft

Hello. Can you please help me edit this wiki page. I have done it the best I can. Can you please tell me what i need to fix up

Thank you for your help....

I really appreciate your help with my draft:Marek Holeček. I will try my best to add those missing citations you pointed out so hopefully it can get better. Thanks again...I really hope the article will be accepted at last ...

autobio

Dear Theroadislong,

Thank you for your reply - I wasn't aware of restriction on autobiographies, but can well appreciate the reasoning behind it!

all best,

Ketty Nez

Aron Ain Draft

Thank you for reviewing the draft. I'll edit the page to include more sources or remove sections that don't have sources. Thank you!

Ashleylouisewilliams3408

FYI: Ashley has been adding photos to Commons and then inserting those photos into various articles in preparation for her intention to create an article about her grandfather, Virgil Williams. I left a note on her Talk to declare paid or COI if she proceeds with the attempt. (Evidence for intention is creation and then deletion of a draft in her Sandbox.) The quail hunting photo you deleted was there because Virgil owns the land that was name-mentioned in the image caption. David notMD (talk)

Mona Lisa Brookshire

New edits

https://ameyawdebrah.com/mona-lisa-brookshire-blay-miezah-featured-in-upcoming-inspirational-film-becoming-the-keys

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Ml4lyfe2 (talk • contribs) 22 January 2019 (UTC)

Can you help me improve my page?

Celalettin-Field Quantum Observation Tunnel

Hello there,

I have removed unsourced material and thinned it out as per your direction. Can you please cast an eye?

Draft:900 wine prosecco

Hi Theroadislong, thanks for reviewing my page!

I saw your comment on my draft page 900 wine, I'm inserting the Italian wine brand on the market. I'm not connected to the company, I just try to make the list of brands on wikipedia as complete as possible. I am passionate about wine and I think this brand is important in the Italian sparkling wine scene.

can you possibly and kindly advise me of the changes that can better comply with the policies of wikipedia? Thanks a lot!

April editathons at Women in Red

Page deletion tagged

I am definitely not using it as a free hosting service and i am sorry i ll need to disagree with your analysis. its just i am taking time to be up to the required standard of trained wiki editors and i think i ll make it. thank you for taking the time to reviewing my page.

Regards

Request on 11:06:16, 24 April 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Gedgmoss


Hello, I have attempted to follow the advice on citations, the neutral tone, and converting the opening history into prose. Could I please ask for further advice if/where it is required?

thank you

Gedgmoss (talk) 22:29, 13 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Shahara Ahmad-Llewellyn

Why can't you just add some things and save as you modify instead of it making you resubmit and publish. Because I have a long way to go and I can't keep getting rejected.

Re-review My Article

Hello Theroadislong,

I have already added new sources like you adviced for my draft article Draft:Finalist of the Intel ISEF and hope if you could review it again and see if its notable enough for Wikipedia.

Thank you very much Mathew Anderson

Review of submission by Casper da Costa-Luis


Thanks for your review.

As requested, I've removed external links as requested (except for the "See Also" section) and used more neutral language.

Do let me know if anything else needs improving!

Short information about Ukrainian scientist

Hello. Could you please help to create short info page about Ukrainian scientist? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Yevgeniy_Zadorin

Milly Bennett review

Hey! Thanks for reviewing the article. I'm very new to this, so I'll try to learn more and go back in to cite third-party sources. Thanks for your help

re-edit is submitted

Hi Theroadislong.

I have re-edited my article submitted on the 19th of April. Will be very thankful if you can have a loot at it in the nearest possible date. Thank you!

M28 Trombonico

hey how can I make my article better or get some exceptions by changing a few things cause I don't really understand what the bot thing wants

Wikipedia page

Dear Theroadislong,

Thank you for getting back to me so quickly, I take on board what you say and will think again.

Many thanks,

Ian

Australian Biome Project

Thank you for your advice, do I need to add credit or remove the biome reference entirely.````

I have re edited for your comment. could you please take a look and give me some feed back thanks````

Update

Hi, Theroadislong -- thanks for your comment. I have updated the situation with the external links. Sorry for the mistake! Please let me know if anything else needs changing. Thanks!

Thank you

Thank you for the swift review of my article. Best, K

PyCM

Hi

I think Draft:PyCM is good enough to be accepted. This article provides some reliable references like Journal of open source software and Github (the most popular community of software developers) and etc. In comparison with other accepted open-source software articles like Aika_(software), Renjin , UIMA , BigDL, Cantera_(software) that most of them are self-cited. And also this library with more than 640 stars, 200 dependant codes and 1000 installs per week, is more popular than currently available articles on English Wikipedia like ELKI, Cantera_(software), OpenNN. Any suggestion is gratefully welcomed to improve this draft.

Thank you for your consideration.

Where is the page I want to work on that I left in my sandbox?

I left a page in my sandbox that needed corrections or I submitted it and it was rejected, but I can no longer find it. I put a lot of time and work into it and would like to make the necessary correction to get it published. Where can I find it? Thanks.Billgroll (talk) 00:11, 29 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Billgroll It appears to have been deleted as an abandoned draft, by User:Sphilbrick I declined it at AFC because it had no sources.If there is to be an article on Howard B. Stroud Sr then you will need to demonstrate notability, you need to provide references to articles written about him in unrelated, independent journals, magazines, books, etc. Theroadislong (talk) 06:34, 29 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Billgroll, See WP:REFUND/G13 if you want it back. S Philbrick(Talk) 12:07, 29 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Here.

Why did you come to my talk page? I don't even know you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Numberblock99 (talk • contribs) 00:15, 29 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Numberblock99 You made a test page with a couple of words on it and submitted it for article review, it wasn't an article so I declined it. You then vandalised a page of mine, this was reverted by another editor. Theroadislong (talk) 06:38, 29 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

29 May 2019 Submission of Margot Friedlander by MinatoAri

Hi Theroadislong!

I saw that you had rejected my article submission. The article I was working on was a translation of the German article of the same name, and I do not have any references to add to the article. Is it ok to publish, or will it just not be allowed on the site?

Thank you, MinatoAri

Your draft Draft:Margot Friedlander has insufficient sources at the moment, all content should be sourced, the English Wikipedia is slightly more strict on this than other countries. I am sure that sources exist, they do not have to be in English either. Theroadislong (talk) 08:32, 29 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

AFC submission template - language parameter fixed

I have fixed the language parameter to {{AFC submission}} here [1]. --CiaPan (talk) 14:42, 29 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

RE:Spacesldie

Hi Theroadislong,

I have just received your message regarding Spaceslide article. My intention was to message you before I submitted this, as is the Wikipedia best practice.

This article is a factual account of Spaceslide, a company owned by Home Decor. There is no advertising here whatsoever. I'd like to point you towards the B&Q page, which this is modelled off, how does this differ? What else would you require to accept this page?

We have been creating this page from a non-advertising background for some time now, we are a little stuck as to how we are supposed to proceed, as this page does not differ from the thousands of other factual records of businesses that exist on Wikipedia.

Regards, Tom — Preceding unsigned comment added by Agrove11 (talk • contribs) 16:33, 29 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Agrove11 Firstly Wikipedia accounts are strictly for single person use, who is "we"? Notability is judged by looking at the depth of coverage in independent, reliable, secondary sources, we have no interest in what the company says about itself on it’s own website. The B&Q refers to a broad range of independent reliable sources whereas your draft does not. Theroadislong (talk) 16:48, 29 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Draft: Hily (app)

Hi Theroadislong - Thank you for reviewing Draft: Hily (app). Can you offer feedback as to which sections in the draft need reworking to meet neutrality guidelines? E-Stylus (talk) 20:28, 29 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Well for a start terms like "Leveraging his experience, Pronin created Hily as a secure platform aimed at improving the way people connect" and "Hily maintains a safe environment through prioritizing user safety and platform security" are over the top promotional. Theroadislong (talk) 21:00, 29 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Noted. I've worked on removing the promotional language. If possible, can you take a look to see if further revision is needed? Thanks. E-Stylus (talk) 22:43, 29 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Theroadislong - Just following up on your feedback regarding the draft's tone revisions. The content refers to independent, reliable, published sources to meet verifiability guidelines and establish notability. Thanks. E-Stylus (talk) 13:43, 1 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Draft: Russia–United States sports rivalries

Hi. Why isn’t Canada–United States sports rivalries contrary the purpose of Wikipedia? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gumswick55 (talk • contribs) 13:40, 30 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Gumswick55 Judging by the notices at the the top of it's page it probably is! Please see other crap exists. Theroadislong (talk) 13:46, 30 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ILYAH

Hey there, I replaced the youtube links (cause they had FOX and ABC interviews about my craft) and put other references. Can you check now if it's correct? Thank you — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ilyasshas (talk • contribs) 18:55, 31 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

It looks like your draft has been deleted, in more than ten years of editing here I can recall hardly any successful autobiographies. If you are notable be patient, someone is bound to create an article about you. Theroadislong (talk) 21:28, 31 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Is there anyway you can help me with this article M.A.C. (rapper)

M.A.C. (rapper)

Is there anyway you can help me with this article? M.A.C. (rapper) — Preceding unsigned comment added by MVMG2019 (talk • contribs) 19:52, 31 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

You need to show that he passes the Wikipedia:Notability guidelines, you need to find multiple in-depth coverage of him in reliable independent sources. Theroadislong (talk) 19:57, 31 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Article rejected

Hello Theroadislong;

Can you please tell me why my article was rejected? I see lots of directors and photographers on Wikipedia. Please help me fix what is needed to achieve my submission. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zroxuf (talk • contribs) 21:20, 31 May 2019 (UTC) Your draft Draft:Kiarash Behain has one poor quality source [2] Notability is judged by looking at the depth of coverage in independent, reliable, secondary sources, you have none so far. Theroadislong (talk) 21:23, 31 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

User ID: Nmalguri Page Title : Prof Mahesh Tandon

Dear Sir,

I have created a page for Prof Mahesh Tandon, who is one of the greatest Structural Engineer of India. He has published so many articles and has so received so much recognition and awards and still his page has been declined. I have put several independent sources (link to websites) where his accomplishments are mentioned.

Please let me know where I went wrong which has lead to decline in the request of page.

Please help.

Nithil Malguri +91 9810201425 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nmalguri (talk • contribs) 07:09, 1 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your review, follow up

Dear reviewer,

Thanks for the input/work that you provide to the users of Wikipedia.

I understand that your rejection of the "Scotching" contribution was due to the lack of information that was provided / lack of resources and data on the subject.

I would appreciate if you could guide me further in order to know which elements (lenght, depth, etc) I should take into consideration for my submission to be accepted.

This being a new form of art that i am a fan of, I would like to make sure that it has its own definition and description as it is normally confused with other forms of tape work.

Best regards,

Fernanda — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mariferchis (talk • contribs) 06:41, 2 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Verdis

Why have you rejected my draft for Verdis? It's a new micronation somebody wants to start between Serbia and Croatia, just like Liberland. If Liberland and Sealand can get their own page, then why can't Verdis?

-Bulbasaur777Eevee

Sorry but your draft is unreferenced and not sufficiently notable for an article. We only summarise what reliable, independent published sources have to say about a subject and your draft has none. Theroadislong (talk) 09:46, 2 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I've deleted most of it as copyvio and posted in more detail to their talk page. Doug Weller talk 10:31, 2 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

It IS notable. it's a new country someone wants to start, if all micronations, even the satirical ones can have its own page, then why can't Verdis have? Croatian media talked a lot about it and I took most of information from micronation's official webpage. If the offical micronation's webpage isn't reliable, then what is? --Bulbasaur777Eevee (talk) 17:00, 3 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Bulbasaur777Eevee In order to demonstrate notability, you need to provide references to articles written about Verdis in unrelated, independent journals, magazines, books, etc. Theroadislong (talk) 17:10, 3 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Whizz Recordings declination

Why is Whizz Recordings advertising? It does not sell products, nor does it make money from it's music. I am also not related or associated with the company, but I do know a lot about it due to a long-running friendship with one of the founders, and I am merely setting this up due to the limited amount of information available on the record label. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Inconspicuous Stick (talk • contribs) 16:09, 2 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Inconspicuous Stick It reads like an advert because all it is doing is promoting what they do. Your friendship means you have a conflict of interest. Notability is judged by looking at the depth of coverage in independent, reliable, secondary sources. Novice editors are commonly advised to cite at least three independent, reliable, secondary sources containing significant coverage. Some degree of regional, statewide, national, or international media coverage is also required. Most businesses are not suitable subjects for an encyclopedia article. Your draft has no reliable sources, YouTube is not a reliable source. Theroadislong (talk) 16:26, 2 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Citations on new article

Hi there - the admins on the live chat said there were enough citations for my article which you declined - but I have added more! I'm learning so thank you. Hopefully now it can be approved. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Magicsystemzou (talk • contribs) 22:36, 2 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I have now accepted it. Theroadislong (talk) 07:02, 3 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion declined: OMD Worldwide

Hello Theroadislong. I am just letting you know that I declined the speedy deletion of OMD Worldwide, a page you tagged for speedy deletion, because of the following concern: subsidiary of notable company, clearly claims significance. Thank you. SoWhy 09:41, 3 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I have unreviewed a page you curated

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I have unreviewed a page you curated

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Nosebagbear (talk) 11:52, 4 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Harold Red Baker

I added a sources catagory and can't get the link to IMDB right, can you help?John J Morris (talk) 13:46, 4 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

John J Morris IMDb is not a reliable source so there is no point in adding it (it is user generated). In order to demonstrate notability, you need to provide references to articles written about Baker in unrelated, independent journals, magazines, books, websites etc. Theroadislong (talk) 14:14, 4 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Harold Red Baker

I put the hyperlink to the web site azbilliards.com on the sources category where they talk about Harold Baker please let me know if this is acceptable,I will still have to figure how to make the right tag. I also have a National Billiards News from 1968 that has a three page article with pictures that tells about his life story, but I don't think it is on the net anywhere. Also have news paper articles in my photo album from the Los Angeles times and the Van Nuys California News. Can I just mention them on the sources category or do i need to copy and have a link.John J Morris (talk) 17:17, 4 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

John J Morris That's great, sources don't have to be on line, but please read WP:REFB for help with formatting them. Theroadislong (talk) 17:24, 4 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

/* Media */ adding Bristol Media which is a local membership organisation representing over 600 creative industry organisations

Hi there, Thanks for your message regarding the edits to Bristol - would something like the below be better?

Bristol Media Group CIC, a local non-profit membership organisation, represents many of the creative industries and individuals in the city by facilitating collaborations and delivering projects and events for members.

Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kaypizzo (talk • contribs) 08:19, 5 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

David Stairs page

Thanks for your assistance in improving this proposed entry. I’ve removed all external links in what I consider the article’s body. My question: is anything above the References line considered “body.” If so, I need to remove the article links. I’ve found such links on other pages, but possibly I’ve misunderstood.

Elzze — Preceding unsigned comment added by ElzzeWellze (talk • contribs) 13:55, 5 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Harold Red Baker

I have edited my page please look and let me know if it is ok to resubmit or do I need more.John J Morris (talk) 14:16, 5 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Talk Page Warning for Edit Warring RE William Lane Craig Article

Good Evening Theroadislong, I appreciate the warning on my talk page about the recent edits to the William Lane Craig article and I sympathize with why it would appear that I am edit warring. However, I'd like to point out that I am engaged on the talk page and that I am only reverting the edits of another user who has 5 consecutive reverts across two other editors now and who has consistently not engaged on the talk page. The reverts are an attempt to maintain the page as was agreed to on multiple occasions until a consensus is reached on the talk page for further changes. This is not an edit war in the classic sense, but an attempt by an editor to impose a change on a page without discussion. Squatch347 (talk) 23:22, 6 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Bumping this comment. Again, please note before leaving warnings on my page that I am editing inline with the talk page discussion and actively involved in a talk page discussion. Selective warnings to me while ignoring the consistent edits by others to remove content repeatedly agreed to in talk page archives is not productive to resolution. Squatch347 (talk) 15:27, 11 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
There is no consensus on the talk page for the content to be added. Theroadislong (talk) 15:36, 11 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I lost my entire sandbox article before publishing. Can I recover it?

Hello there, I lost my entire sandbox article is there any way to recover it? Thanks for your help! --ArgieAtl19 (talk) 18:24, 8 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ArgieAtl19 Not that I am aware of, sorry. Theroadislong (talk) 18:30, 8 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Challenging your rejection of my article

Hi Theroadislong, the article I am writing about is notable and is verifiable. Shen is a well known figure in Southern Taiwan. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Taiwanbro101 (talk • contribs) 03:54, 9 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

IndiaUpdates/sandbox

Thanks for reviewing and rejecting my first sandbox article. Please review updated article. Thanks for cooperation — Preceding unsigned comment added by IndiaUpdates (talk • contribs) 05:52, 9 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Not very impressed with You !!!!

how could you turn down this article. what are you academic CREDENTIALS? — Preceding unsigned comment added by LuckyhollywoodMahler (talk • contribs) 18:50, 9 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

please help me what changes need to be made and careteria followed

please help me what changes need to be made and careteria followed so i can publishing this artical , regards sonu — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sonusatinter (talk • contribs) 20:30, 9 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Draft is Draft:Sartaj Singh Pannu fwiw. I've left a comment there regarding WP:RS and the need for verifiability. Primefac (talk) 21:25, 9 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Why did u decline my draft. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Info_Myanmar_College There are reliable references below but unfortunately, most of them are in Burmese. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Smartburmese (talk • contribs) 08:28, 10 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you!

Thank you for your feedback on my first submitted article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Solared (talk • contribs) 21:47, 10 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Talk page question.

Hi, thank you so much for the comment on my draft article. I already disclosed on my own talk page that I was paid, per Wikipedia's note when you try to publish an article. Do I also have to do it on the individual page I'm publishing? I read this on wikipedia about it "They must do this on their main user page, or on the talk page accompanying any paid contributions, or in edit summaries." It says first I can do it on my main user page. I hope that works! I hope in the future to edit more pages and I might get paid by others and add it there too, unless you say the actual talk page is mandatory? Thank you again. Tuuzi (talk) 22:53, 10 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The Psychic reading article

I'm rather new to all of this, but you stated I added a link to this article? This simply is not true, all I did was fix the spelling of Lati to Latin, as that is what the paragraph was trying to say. No such alphabet of Lati exists, only Latin (which is what we are using right now). — Preceding unsigned comment added by 161.216.51.64 (talk) 23:19, 10 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"Mícheál Mór" "City Sue"

Hi

You've rejected "Mícheál Mór angus City Sue" as not relevant enough to merit a wikipedia article. But if you Google "Mícheál Mór" "City Sue" you get over 100 entries and two pages of video uploads. The provenance of this poem has long been unknown, and so to reveal it now is something of interest in Irish oral culture - are you expert in that, may I ask? I would want to expand the page with later versions

Best

John — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bergsonn (talk • contribs) 17:32, 11 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

If you can find and include multiple in-depth sources that cover the poem then we could have an article, but your draft doesn't have these. Theroadislong (talk) 18:04, 11 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

To add preposition.

Respected sir, 

           Yesterday, I browsed about Dr Shamsheer vayalil on wikipedia. There I saw an infobox in that an alma mater column is present. In that name of two medical colleges are given;

1.) Kasturba Medical College, Manipal. 2.) Sri Ramachandra Medical College and Research Institute, Chennai.

Sir, I request you to add preposition "in" between the name of second medical college (described up)and the name of the city where it is located.

Note: This preposition is "not"needed in first medical college name and it's location name.

Thankyou. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 223.230.167.2 (talk) 17:39, 11 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Rabindra Jha

He is the well known actor of Nepal. In two more than 15 movies are released. His movies are super hit. In spite of these you think that this page is not good. what should I do now? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gamerabhisek (talk • contribs) 19:07, 11 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Theroadislong how are you?

I am sorry that my addition to the Prince biography broke rules/upset you/violated something. I added the info because it is true. I went to St Louis U School of Med 80-85 (took a year off trying to decide whether I wanted to do Residency at Mayo Clinic vs NY. We met by accident in Minneapolis and developed a strong attachment - I was not in the music world, and he and I became very close friends and confidantes. I will NEVER sell our secret info ... ever, but I just thought that it would be disrespectful to Prince not to acknowledge our deep friendship. I decided to go to NY, he ended up not marrying Ms Melvoin but they remained friends ... at a distance lol. Since she worked with him, as did almost all of his friends/associates ... the working relationships often bring out different personality qualities (as many in V Fair commented) He was intrinsically kind and soft and good. He enjoyed conversation and jokes and non music related stories. He wasnot cold or harsh. Anyways Theroadislong ( and it seems too damn long for me@) respectfully I say I did not IMHO "vandalize" his bio. Please tell me what I did wrong? Thanks! PS I chose NY where I am a physician ... on leave bc I was a 9/11 first responder and have a potpourri of medical issues. Prince and I are (were) the same age - perhaps you are younger and do not feel the "joy" of the joint pain of a life well lived!

Regards, Vanessa T Pero, MD — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shelovesbigdogs (talk • contribs) 19:08, 11 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Shelovesbigdogs: Thank you for the delightful details of your friendship, if your relationship was reported on by reliable sources then it could be added, but I'm afraid Wikipedia only reports on what the reliable published sources say, we are not concerned with the truth. All very good wishes to you. Theroadislong (talk) 19:19, 11 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Request for Dispute Resolution

Apologies for not notifying you on your talk page. I thought notification on the related talk page was appropriate initially, but see that I need to notify everyone individually.

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Squatch347 (talk) 19:31, 11 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Bren Munro

Hi Thero,

Thanks for the prompt review and taking the time to leave me a message. I do want Bren's article to get published. How many citations would it take for the article to get approved. Does it need to be from widely circulated newspapers or can it be from local/community newspapers.

Sarin — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sarin.asb (talk • contribs) 20:06, 11 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Ideally at least three references to independentreliable sources with in-depth coverage of her. (and not local press) Theroadislong (talk) 20:31, 11 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

re Distillerie Neisson

Thanks for the heads up regarding your rejection of my draft article on Distillerie Neisson. This is my second try with this article, and if you have time, I would appreciate any advice on how to revise it to meet standards for submission. I have no ties to the company and am not attempting to advertise — the article seems to me to be in line with articles for similar companies, such as Flor de Caña and Distillerie Dillon. Is it the product listing? The link to the distributor (which I noted in Talk could be deleted if not acceptable)? I'm a new contributor, so any advice is appreciated. Thanks. Swordswfriends (talk) 00:57, 12 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

HTV - Health Taste Vitality

Dear Theroadislong


Can you tell me please the reason of rejection. I want to create HTV's Wikipedia page its a Health and wellness online portal by Ziauddin hospital group. Please create and publish the page. All the information can be found via google and youtube or htv website.

Thank You — Preceding unsigned comment added by Htvpk360 (talk • contribs) 09:28, 12 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

the reason is given in the box above your draft, the portal is not notable there are no in-depth sources covering it, Google and YouTube are not reliable. Theroadislong (talk) 10:27, 12 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Harold Red Baker Elwood Call Leader ad

I got the ok to use the article about Harold Red Baker visiting relatives in Elwood Indiana from Bob Nash at the Elwood Call Leader, does he need to get in touch with you to verify or do you contact him? Please advise what I need too do. I also have to get in touch with the Los Angles and Van Nuys News too get there Ok on the other Newspaper articals. Regards, John J Morris — Preceding unsigned comment added by John J Morris (talk • contribs) 18:31, 12 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

We cannot use, photographs as references, you can cite the newspaper article using page number, date, title etc. We don't need anyone's permission to use content, but we do need reliable sources however. Theroadislong (talk) 18:43, 12 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello

I am not completely clear on if adding links to my website, interviews, videos etc is what you are needed from me to complete acceptance.

Can you please guide me to what exactly you are looking for and where do I place that in my links?

thank you for your assistance! Lillian DuJour — Preceding unsigned comment added by DebraL55 (talk • contribs) 02:14, 13 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

DebraL55 Wikipedia has no interest in what the articles subject wants to say about herself, only what independent reliable sources have reported.
Wikipedia is only interested in what people who have no connection with the subject have published about them. The article should be limited to a summary of what such independent sources have said about them. If there are no sources then we don’t have an article. Your own website, YouTube etc are not suitable. Theroadislong (talk) 06:44, 13 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Digital Marketing Agency

A tag has been placed on Draft:Digital Marketing Agency requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done for the following reason:

Draft was rejected at the same time that the page was deleted per G11 & G12, now just a blank rejection

Under the criteria for speedy deletion, pages that meet certain criteria may be deleted at any time.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator, or if you have already done so, you can place a request here. DannyS712 (talk) 08:46, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The rejection of Hellshot

May you specify what "blatant advertisement" is in this situation? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Baecien (talk • contribs) 18:42, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

You are promoting something that hasn't happened yet, so it is a blatant advert. Wikipedia only reports on what reliable secondary sources have said about a subject, your draft has no independent reliable sources. Theroadislong (talk) 18:53, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I added more references

It said my article had a loss of references and I addes, they're appropriate, so why it's banned once again? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mile1039 (talk • contribs) 20:43, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft User:Mile1039/sandbox still has no sources? Theroadislong (talk) 20:47, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Draft: Ian Foote

This draft can be sumbitted, all sources were added about this person :

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Ian_Foote

This is the English translation of the French page :

https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ian_Foote

Plz sumbit it correctly. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 196.115.59.92 (talk) 20:47, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing My Article That You Declined

Dear Theroadislong

I have followed your advice by adding more reliable sources to my article. It has been very long since i added very reliable sources and no one has reviewed my article yet. Please do review my article. I can't wait for it to get back on Wiki. Cheers.

Article: Draft:J. Philip Vincent

Thank you very much

Mathewanderson7232 (talk) 06:14, 16 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Articles for creation: Dubblestandart

Dear Theroadislong,

I understand and respect that Wikipedia needs to keep the highest standards when approving new articles, However, i am disappointed that it still didn't go through. All i want is reasonable information for the English speaking world about the band. A German Wikipedia site already exists. Dubblestandart is a band from Vienna, Austria(which is not really known for very many acts becoming internationally known)who produced a full length album with Grammy winning Lee Perry, Ariup from the Slits and film director David Lynch, toured with them and many more since 3 decades! The website https://www.discogs.com/artist/26293-Dubblestandart?page=1 lists the band with more than 30 international releases. The reference section has a long list of internationally known producers and musicians who worked with them. All this are independent sources and i don't understand what's the issue here. This given the fact that the band is already listed on the German Wikipedia site with far less detailed information.https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dubblestandart They are mentioned on David Lynchs Wikipedia entry https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/David_Lynch_discography As well as on Lee Perrys Wikipedia entry https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lee_%22Scratch%22_Perry The collaboration of Dubblestandart & Subatomic Sound System and Lee Perry also put New Yorks Subatomic Sound System on the map! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Subatomic_Sound_System

Of course most of the mentions belong to the past but it is a pretty unique thing that this band made it that far, given the fact that they always have been working 100% independent and coming from a country that is lesser known for delivering acts in that field.

Please think about and i really would appreciate if u could approve the information i put together and put the article online. A lot of people looking for information concerning this band, will thank you.:)

Many thanks!

Sincerely

Paul — Preceding unsigned comment added by Paul Zawilensky (talk • contribs) 16:20, 16 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Paul Zawilensky You need to address all the concerns in the various comments, Wikipedia articles should contain no external links in the body of the article, ALL the content needs to be sourced please read WP:REFB for help with that and please note that Discogs is not a suitable source. The fact that there is a `German Wikipedia article has no relevance at all, English Wikipedia has higher standards, you need to show how the band passes WP:BAND. Theroadislong (talk) 19:04, 16 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Soman Baby

Please glance again the subjected article. some thing error please do not keep deletion, can improve it — Preceding unsigned comment added by Party1967 (talk • contribs) 17:34, 16 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The Sepanta

about the "The Sepanta" draft that you declined: Two sources that you mentioned are my official pages on network. in fact, I am the "The Sepanta"

please accept that. — Preceding unsigned comment added by M.humand (talk • contribs) 04:09, 17 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I'm afraid that Wikipedia has no interest in what you want to say about yourself, it only reports on what the reliable independent sources have said, your draft has none of these sources so cannot be accepted. Theroadislong (talk) 07:55, 18 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Help on Footnotes

Hello!

I am trying to better understand what I need to update on the article. I have been reading the footnotes/citation sections you provided but I feel I am just missing something as I followed this beforehand as well and just cant seem to know what is different from what I put up on the article.

I even went through the Fix ambiguous links · Fix bare URLs · Fix broken links resources. I know you dont have a lot of time, but it would be very helpful to know if all of my citations need to be scratched or was there one specific ones that were bad?

Thank you! Much appreciate it.

--Iamragnorak (talk) 05:03, 17 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Iamragnorak Your citation style looks fine to me, you are just missing the access date but that's not a problem to fix. Theroadislong (talk) 08:02, 18 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Dreizehn_XIII review

I understand and recognize that youtube and blog are not reliable references and that's wikipedia's rules,but as I mentioned in other comment, I also offered many other trustworthy sources, online magazines links and interviews. Moreover, there're thousand of other articles on wikipedia that are violating those terms of wikipedia and that's pretty unfair. There're thousand of underground bands and artists in the wikipedia with poorly done references and youtube links used as proof of relevance.

Regards

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