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Week 4/ Update from Assignment 4/ Sleep by 11

Here is the link page of week 4's forum. [[1]]

This is the link to the new article I added a citation to, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sleep%20by%2011/Tencent?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Sleep by 11 (talk) 13:33, 4 November 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, Please edit your post title to include spaces between the week, assignment, and your user name and the " / " and then reply to me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 13:00, 8 November 2021 (UTC)

Done.Sleep by 11 (talk) 14:22, 8 November 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, This linked to something on your own User page, and not to the Tencent article you edited. Can you please reply to this with a link to your edit on the article itself? FULBERT (talk) 00:48, 9 November 2021 (UTC)

I add a citation to this article, which is a different article from week 3. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Changpeng_Zhao&action=history Here is the edit history. Sleep by 11 (talk) 03:25, 9 November 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. You have it assigned as an article to review, though since you are making edits on it, that article should be listed as an Assigned Article. Please move it to there and then ping me here and I will review it. FULBERT (talk) 14:54, 9 November 2021 (UTC)

Done, already assigned. Sleep by 11 (talk) 05:44, 12 November 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 21:21, 27 November 2021 (UTC)

Here is the link of diff. Finally understand how this work, thanks for your patience professor. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Changpeng_Zhao&diff=1054280937&oldid=1053913588 Sleep by 11 (talk) 14:07, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

ping Sleep by 11 (talk) 05:47, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, I am not convinced this is the best high level, credible source for this, but good enough for now. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 04:04, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6/Assignment 6/Huilin826

1. The article I added was "Electronics industry in China". It describes the electronics industry in China grew rapidly after the economy under the national strategic policy. China becomes the world's largest market for personal computers.

2. The link diff:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Electronics_industry_in_China&type=revision&diff=1055193387&oldid=1040614979

3. I learned that I find the citation from the Science Book to support it. Huilin826 (talk) 12:30, 14 November 2021 (UTC)

Huilin826, Please see the feedback you received on this and how the edit was removed due to copyright violation. See the comments on your Talk page about this. As a reminder, everything you contribute must be stated in your own words and never using exactly the words from others that you cite. Revise this and any of the others that were also removed due to copyright issues and then ping me on each of them and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 02:54, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT This is link diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Electronics_industry_in_China&type=revision&diff=1057683439&oldid=1056562132Huilin826 (talk) 01:33, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Huilin826, Better source and addition. Current with Week 6. --FULBERT (talk) 23:29, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6/ Sixth Post / bl2240

1. The article I added was "Tea". It gave us a general picture on tea including its origin, culture and classification. I added the details of tea infusions in the article.

2.Link of the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Tea&type=revision&diff=1055343454&oldid=1055037187

3. I learned that in order to broaden our knowledge and view we must read more different types of articles and try to learn knowledge comprehensively as we keep learning. --Bl2240 (talk) 09:21, 15 November 2021 (UTC)

Bl2240, Nice, basic edit. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 03:45, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6/ Assignment 6/ Crazytoppp

1. Li-Ning is a sportswear manufacturer that has developed rapidly in China in recent years. Their wikipedia only has histroy before 2013, so I added the company performance reports for 2019 and 2020. 2. Link to diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Li-Ning&diff=1055886168&oldid=1051980840 3. I found that because Wikipedia is updated spontaneously by users, some Wiki entries lack attention and lack updates. Crazytoppp (talk) 12:00, 18 November 2021 (UTC)Crazytoppp (talk) 13:32, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Crazytoppp The sources you used could have been of higher quality, though good enough for now. Current with Week 6. -- FULBERT (talk) 03:52, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 5/ Assignment 5 / Sleep by 11

I've added a new paragraph to this term, adding the latest download data, as well as reviews from the news. Also put in citations from authoritative websites. I learned how to find citations based on the topic I wanted to edit. Also while editing, I saw the contribution of other people's edits and was inspired by their formatting, wording, and expressions. I learned a lot from other people's content. Here's the link of the edit history of article "TikTok":https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=TikTok&action=history Sleep by 11 (talk) 13:35, 18 November 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, This source is more like a blog and not very credible. Can you find a better source for this and ping me again here? FULBERT (talk) 02:58, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

I have changed the cited resource to an article with a DOI. This article contains data to support my content.

https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=TikTok&diff=1058366682&oldid=1057877288

Sleep by 11 (talk) 03:19, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, Much better. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 03:59, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6/ Assignment 6 / Sleep by 11

The content of this entry is outdated, so I have added the current new laws and regulations, the SEC's restrictions on foreign joint venture brokerage firms.

This entry is about the China Securities Regulatory Commission and China's financial markets, so I paid close attention to the impact of laws and regulations in the editing process. Each of my wordings should be in accordance with the laws and regulations, not to cause ambiguity to the reader, and also to conform to the original meaning that the laws and regulations intended to convey.

Here's the link of difference:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Securities_industry_in_China&diff=1055897055&oldid=1029987140 Sleep by 11 (talk) 13:47, 18 November 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, This source is a blog and not very credible. Can you find a better source for this and ping me again here? FULBERT (talk) 02:59, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

This referenced page is the official web page published by the CSRC. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Securities_industry_in_China&diff=1058367801&oldid=1055897055Sleep by 11 (talk) 03:27, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, Great! Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 04:00, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6/ Assignment 6/ Notkc01

This is Kyle. Hope everyone is doing great! 1. I have found one article about the introduction of NFT(Non-fungible token). NFT is a very meaningful production for the digital world after cryptocurrency. As more and more high-tech productions are introduced to our daily life, we certainly might have another identity "actually" living in the digital world. NFT plays an essential role as we purchase things in the digital world. As everything is digitalized, we need something to actually prove the authentication and the ownership of the products and NFT is the series of numbers assigned to each product we buy that can be retrieved by any buyer to show the ownership, previous price, and authentication. I added one journal article and revised the basic concept of NFT to make it more comprehendible and convincible.

2. Here is the diff link. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Non-fungible_token&diff=1056216323&oldid=1056165499

3. Cyberpunk may not be that far from the world we are living in right now. We surely should be prepared for the exchanges and take our chances. Notkc01 (talk) 13:25, 20 November 2021 (UTC)

Notkc01, Good overall, though next time please add some more content to expand the article along with the citation. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 04:24, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week5/ Assignment-Citation and Contribution/ Emilyyxx

1. I am working on an article related to my research topic. Virtual workplace has also become one of the most popular topic nowadays. I added one more challenge to it.

2. The Link of Diff.

3. As doing the research, I'm not only getting more understanding on the topic, but also get to know the processes of adding new materials to the article on Wikipedia. --Emilyyxx (talk) 00:51, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

Emilyyxx, Nice edit. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 02:26, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week6/ Assignment-Citation and Contribution/ Emilyyxx

1. Project is the general topic related to my research paper. I also took classes related to the topic and read several books about project management, so I think I might be able to contribute a little on the Wikipedia page.

2. The Link of Diff.

3. On the original Wikipedia page, I think there's a lack of a concise definition of project, so I decided to add one based on the PMBOK Guide, an official guide of project management published the Project Management Institute. --Emilyyxx (talk) 02:27, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

Emilyyxx, This edit is a nice contribution. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 23:40, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Week7/ Assignment7/ Emilyyxx

1. As I was looking at the digital marketing wiki page, I found that some of the references are outdated, so I decided to add to the strategies section cited with a new journal. I chose luosifen to be my second article because it is one of my favorite food.

2. Link to the diff: -Link to the diff. - Digital Marketing -Link to the diff. -Luosifen

3. I used to use Wikipedia as a major source to learn topics I am interested in, but I realized that I probably should always check the date of the references first to make sure I am not learning the outdated contents.--Emilyyxx (talk) 03:22, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

Emilyyxx, Nice contributions for Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 23:41, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Week8/ Assignment8/ Emilyyxx

1. I chose a book and an author for this week's assignment. There are only limited info about the book or the author, so I edited a bit and included citations.

2. Link to the diff. - To Live

Link to the diff. - Rao xueman

3. The articles on Wilipedia often helps, but the contents might be incomplete, so it is important to do more research before take the contents on Wikipedia as truth. I also took a look at the editing history, it is nice to see how many people contributed in different parts to help each other understand the contents better.--Emilyyxx (talk) 04:36, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

Emilyyxx, Nice contributions here. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 23:42, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Week9/ Adding an image/ Emilyyxx

1. Dragon Boat Festival is one of my most favorite festival, and zongzi is a typical food people will have on that day. I looked over the article and did not find a picture of the type of the way people wrap zongzi in my hometown, so I added an image that I took last year of a home-made zongzi.

2.Link to the diff

3. By learning this week's training, I realized that there are different types of licenses of the images and understood what type of images fit on Wikipedia.

4. In the whole process of editing on Wikipedia, I did a lot of research on the topics. I learned a lot about the topics and the rules of editing. I learned that Wikipedia is not the proper reference, but the rules here tend to help editors and readers can learn and contribute on all of these different topics. Without Wikipedia, it might be really hard for us to learn about something that we do not know about.

I probably will continue editing on Wikipedia for the areas I am interested in or on the topics which I've done a lot research on. One of the reasons is that I would like to help more people understand and learn about the things that I like. For example, I added a picture of zongzi from my hometown because I want people to know that there are more different types of zongzi. Also if I've done enough researches on a certain topic in the future, I would like to edit the related topic to allow people get the most recent information or research results on the topic just to help update.--Emilyyxx (talk) 05:26, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

Emilyyxx, Nice reasoning for this addition, and thanks for sharing your perspective on this entire editing experience! FULBERT (talk) 23:43, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/ Assignment 7 / Wikisun1952

1. When I read an article about automated cars, I found that some materials were not fully described, so I added some content. The second article that I use is system modeling. 2. Link to the diff: Vehicular automation: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Vehicular_automation&type=revision&diff=1056452507&oldid=1056215866 System modeling: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Systems_modeling&type=revision&diff=1056453705&oldid=1042933266 3. Wiki is my main way to search for information that I need, but I learned to understand one thing from many aspects and make sure that these materials are up-to-date. Wikisun1952 (talk) 22:27, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

Wikisun1952 Both of these were reverted due to copyright issues. Please revise and ping me here and I will review. See my other comments on writing things in your own words and then citing where you got the idea itself. --- FULBERT (talk) 04:30, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/ Assignment 7/yf2196

1.I added some I parts about dumplings in East Asia and China, which can make people understand the history and traditional names of dumplings more clearly,

I added some traditional content about mooncake in the part of moon cakes. It is an ancient custom about moon cakes. Adding this content can make people better understand the tradition of eating mooncakes.

2.The diff lin:

https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Dumpling&diff=prev&oldid=10564785303

https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Mooncake&diff=prev&oldid=1056480914

3.I need to change or add some knowledge or content I know, so as to ensure that the knowledge you see can be won or complete.Yifannn (talk) 02:05, 22 November 2021 (UTC)

Yifannn, The first link did not work and the second did not include a citation. Please revise both and ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 04:33, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8 / Assignment 8 / Herry3999

1. I have been suffering from urticaria, so I read some articles about this disease these two days and found that the concept is not comprehensive, so I added. The second article is a very interesting article I found about powdered alcohol.

2. links of the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Aquagenic_urticaria&type=revision&diff=1056482709&oldid=1039766369, https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Alcohol_powder&type=revision&diff=1056485053&oldid=1032565788

3. Through this week's homework, I learned how to correctly add citations and query the articles I want to know in different ways. Herry3999 (talk) 03:16, 22 November 2021 (UTC)

Herry3999, These were both deleted due to copyright concerns. FULBERT (talk) 04:34, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/ Assignment 7/ Crazytoppp

1.Article1: I found that there is [citaions needed] tag in the description of Lenovo Legion, so I searched for the relevent news and added the corresponding citiaon. Article2: Lenovo founder Liu Chuanzhi, he has resigned from Legend Holdings in 2019, but the wiki information about him has not been updated 2.Diffs 1:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Lenovo&diff=1056494399&oldid=1054482402 Diffs 2; https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Liu_Chuanzhi&diff=1056495474&oldid=1042497791 3.I found that some wiki information is not updated in time and some information is updated in time but lacks credible citations.

Crazytoppp (talk) 04:04, 22 November 2021 (UTC)Crazytoppp (talk) 13:32, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Crazytoppp These sources you also could have been of higher quality, though good enough for now. Current with Week 7. --- FULBERT (talk) 03:55, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/Assignment 7/Huilin826

1. The first article I added was "Automotive industry in China". It describes China's automobile industry has always been the largest in the world and annual automobile production for each year.

The diff link:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Automotive_industry_in_China&type=revision&diff=1056553603&oldid=1051545398

2. The second article I added was "Manufacturing in the United States". It describes manufacturing as a vital sector in the United States and recovered from the Great Recession.

The diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Manufacturing_in_the_United_States&type=revision&diff=1056559645&oldid=1042928241

3. I learned from two articles that were I should find more specific information from peer-reviewed articles to support it. Huilin826 (talk) 13:47, 22 November 2021 (UTC)

Huilin826, Please see the feedback you received on this and how the edit was removed due to copyright violation. See the comments on your Talk page about this. As a reminder, everything you contribute must be stated in your own words, and never use exactly the words from others that you cite. Revise this and any of the others that were also removed due to copyright issues and then ping me on each of them and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 21:37, 27 November 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT This is a first link diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Automotive_industry_in_China&type=revision&diff=1057686962&oldid=1056567487

This is the second link diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Manufacturing_in_the_United_States&type=revision&diff=1057689572&oldid=1056564343Huilin826 (talk) 02:15, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Huilin826, Better edits. Current on Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 23:33, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7 / Assignment 7 / Jjjjdddd199704

1.I added some details about the city of Hangzhou, because I want more people to have a more comprehensive understanding of my hometown. Among them, West Lake is the most famous attraction in Hangzhou.

2. Hangzhou: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Hangzhou&diff=1056627317&oldid=1056041680

Weat Lake: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=West_Lake&diff=1056628436&oldid=1056097901

3. I think it is very interesting and pleasant to supplement the details of the article.--Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 21:49, 22 November 2021 (UTC)

Jjjjdddd199704, Fix the correct articles assigned in the dashboard and ping me here again and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 17:36, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT, Dear professor I fixed.Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 20:01, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Jjjjdddd199704, Neither of these edits are using credible and reliable sources (see WP:RSPSOURCES). Please revise with higher-level sources, such as we used in our course, and ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 04:36, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/ Assignment 8/ Jjjjdddd199704

1.As an international metropolis, Shanghai has many film and art festivals. I added a little detail. As the largest Shanghai International Film Festival in Shanghai, I added some descriptions of the number of people

2. Shanghai: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Shanghai&diff=1056629670&oldid=1055905682

Shanghai International Film Festival: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Shanghai_International_Film_Festival&diff=1056630712&oldid=1051974982

3. I found that adding citations or materials can enhance persuasiveness and allow us to understand a certain thing or story more comprehensively.--Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 22:06, 22 November 2021 (UTC)

Jjjjdddd199704, I would ordinarily revert both of your edits with a message similar to: "The source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE." Please find and cite more reliable sources and then ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 17:38, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT,Dear professor I put the right source now.

Shanghai: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Shanghai&diff=1057808133&oldid=1057596479 Shanghai International Film Festival: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Shanghai_International_Film_Festival&diff=1057809593&oldid=1057808417 Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 20:20, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Jjjjdddd199704, Neither of these edits are using credible and reliable sources (see WP:RSPSOURCES). Please revise with higher-level sources, such as we used in our course, and ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 04:39, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week5 / assignment 5/ BaixinH

1. I edited Jay Chou's wiki page, my favorite singer. When browsing his materials, I found that there was a song released in 2018 missing from his song introduction, so I added this song. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Jay_Chou&type=revision&diff=1056771186&oldid=1056639169 3. Although everyone can edit wikis, we need to find as reliable reference materials as possible in order to be responsible to others. It will take a little more time, but we can be more confident in our materials.BaixinH (talk) 13:00, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

BaixinH, Nice edit. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 01:48, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week6 / assignment 6/ BaixinH

1. My hometown is Xi'an, and I'm curious about are there some errors about it. I know the latest change about it, so I could add the fresh information on it. I find in the metro part it miss the newest metro line, so I added it and add an citation. However, the Wiki can not generate the citation by URL itself, so I have to use the manual to generate the citation. I miss type the date format at the first time, so I make another change on it. You could see I have two difference pages. 2. Add information with wrong date format. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Xi%27an&type=revision&diff=1056784410&oldid=1055217335 correct the format. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Xi%27an&type=revision&diff=1056784649&oldid=1056784410 3. I have learned that when I click the publish icon, I need to make sure everything is correct.BaixinH (talk) 14:52, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

BaixinH, Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 01:53, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week7 / assignment 7/ BaixinH

Article 1 1. I correct the name of the player. The former version misused the game ID of this player as his real name. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Ame_%28gamer%29&type=revision&diff=1056795648&oldid=1051464213 3. We need to make clear what information we get and do not make mistake.

Article 2 1. I added the newest IPO situation to Bilibili in the history part. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Bilibili&type=revision&diff=1056797380&oldid=1049925895 3. It is important to keep the information in the latest status.BaixinH (talk) 16:26, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

BaixinH, Nice edits. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 02:10, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week8 / assignment 8/ BaixinH

1. I updated the latest student number information and added the citation. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Central_University_of_Finance_and_Economics&type=revision&diff=1056802201&oldid=1054798096 3. Every information added to a wiki needs a reliable source of information.

1. I updated the latest restriction on juvenile implemented by the honor of kings 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Honor_of_Kings&type=revision&diff=1056806924&oldid=1053658486 3. Policy changed from time to time and we need to take care of it change and refresh the information timely.BaixinH (talk) 17:39, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

BaixinH, Nice edits. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 02:11, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week5 / assignment 5/ sunnydayreading

Hi,

The Agenda 21 is a C level article still with room for improvement. I found a sentence under support section still needs citation to support: In the absence of a multi-sectoral consensus on how to achieve sustainable development in the United States, the PCSD was conceived to formulate recommendations for the implementation of Agenda 21 (Agenda 21, Wikipedia). In order to support it, I went through the Agdenda 21 and PCSD documents. Here is a link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Agenda_21&type=revision&diff=1056831619&oldid=1054064900 I learned the importance of ciatation. Citation is a way to give credit to the writers from whom you have borrowed words and ideas.

Thanks

Sunnydayreading (talk) 21:31, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

Sunnydayreading, Per the assignment, "also include a sentence or two to express your contribution in context and demonstrate how it adds to the knowledge in the article." Ping me here when you add this and I will review it. FULBERT (talk) 04:41, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT, there is a statement about USA PCSD's movemnet towarding the Agenda 21. However, there is no evidence to support it. I found two citations that proved the author's idea. Both of them are from the offical website. The frist citation is from the USA PCSD , and second citation is from the United nations. These two ciatation provide the idea/statement is from a correct source. Sunnydayreading (talk) 08:14, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Sunnydayreading, Add a sentence or two to the article itself describing your contribution and extracting the idea from the citation. FULBERT (talk) 17:42, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT, I specified 10 common goals toward Agenda 21 by the PCSD in the article. Here is a diff link based on my previous edit: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Agenda_21&type=revision&diff=1056831619&oldid=1054064900 Sunnydayreading (talk) 21:25, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 5/ Assignment 5 / Baezoey

1. The article I am working on is related to my interested topic.League of Legends League of Legends recently lanches their first TV series Arcane. So I checked the related content in this article and added some details to it.

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=League_of_Legends&diff=1056708526&oldid=1056592251

3. I learned that Wikipedia needs people to keep updating new information or knowledge they acquired through this process. The article could be lack details at the beginning, but as long as people add new content, it becomes more and more completed and updated.Baezoey (talk) 23:57, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

Baezoey, Nice edit. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 01:43, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 5 / Assignment 5 / EricaLiu1260

Hi Folks, this is my assignment 5.

1. My citation article is "Operation of KFC". Here is the link, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Operations_of_KFC

2. The article mentioned how KFC operates in the world, and this article introduces the detailed operation way in different countries, such as China, Japan, and Australia. But there is an obvious disadvantage on that article is that the data is too old. In order for everyone to understand this issue more objectively and accurately, I think I need to add some quotations.  Meanwhile, I update the total number of KFC restaurants in China, which makes this article more accurate. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Operations_of_KFC&type=revision&diff=1056867577&oldid=1056867006

3. This is the link to my citation: https://www.statista.com/statistics/1004991/china-kfc-restaurant-number-by-operation-mode/ -- EricaLiu1260 (talk) 01:42, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

EricaLiu1260, Nice edit. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 02:27, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6 / Assignment 6 / EricaLiu1260

Hi Folks, this is my assignment 6.

1. My citation article is "Meituan". It is the Chinese version of Uber eats and Cheap Tickets. Here is the link, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Meituan

2. I added the latest data that the novel missed, and I add the latest user data in 2021. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Meituan&type=revision&diff=1056870674&oldid=1053999938

3. I not only learn the specific knowledge on Wikipedia but also learn the meaning of responsibility. When I edit the article, I need to be responsible for it. -- EricaLiu1260 (talk) 02:10, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

EricaLiu1260, Nice addition. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 02:28, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6/ Assignment 6 / Baezoey

1. I am working on a topic-realated article.Overwatch League I added more details about the format of 2021 season.

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Overwatch_League&diff=1057006381&oldid=1054438020

3. I found a confusing description in the article so I made a change and cited it. I learned that it is important to review these wiki articles and fix the issues we find through this process.Baezoey (talk) 21:32, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

Baezoey, Nice edit to this article as well. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 01:44, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7 / Assignment 7 / EricaLiu1260

Hi Folks, this is my assignment 7.

1. My citation article is "Uber Eats". It is Uber Eats is an online food ordering and delivery platform launched by Uber. My other citation article is "Open Table". OpenTable is an online restaurant-reservation service company

2. The diff link:

Uber Eats: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Uber_Eats&type=revision&diff=1057038037&oldid=1056698595

Open Table: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=OpenTable&type=revision&diff=1057040125&oldid=1045540344

3. I learn the history and profit model for these two software, both of them are quite popular in the US. -- EricaLiu1260 (talk) 02:28, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

EricaLiu1260, Nice edits. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 02:29, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 5/Assignment 5/Chenjshi

1. I am very interested in the electric vehicle industry. I found that the electric vehicle industry is developing rapidly, so I chose this article. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Electric_vehicle_industry_in_China 2. This is the new information I have added. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Electric_vehicle_industry_in_China&type=revision&diff=1057060584&oldid=1056630719 3. The information I have added can give you a better understanding of China's electric vehicle industry. At the same time, I also learned a lot of information about electric vehicles.Chenjshi (talk) 06:03, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Chenjshi, Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 02:16, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Hello FULBERT, here is my diff link https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Electric_vehicle_industry_in_China&type=revision&diff=1057060584&oldid=1056630719Chenjshi (talk) 02:31, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Chenjshi, Nice addition. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 04:46, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6/Assignment 6/Chenjshi

1. Qoros is a fast-growing automobile company in China. I am very interested in the strategy adopted by the company, so I chose this article. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Qoros 2. This is the new information I added, https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Qoros&type=revision&diff=1057068896&oldid=1020582805 3. The information I added can make the article more detailed and let everyone understand this article more complete. I learned that a complete information chain can make the article more logical and persuasive.Chenjshi (talk) 07:42, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Chenjshi, Nice edit. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 02:19, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 5/Assignment 5/Katxzhang

1. I added two sources, one about some other awards the movie Back To 1942 has won, the other is an extra review of the movie. 2. The link of difference is here: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Back_to_1942&type=revision&diff=1057070062&oldid=1043954318 3. From the article I learned the international impact of this movie. The movie vividly portrayed the major famine that struck Henan, China in 1942. The reviews are not all good, in fact, there are a lot of critics I haven't noticed while watching the movie. I learned that this type of movie can be watched to relive the history but also need to be evaluated carefully like the rest of the movie. By editing the article, I learned to use blockquote and add references to a template.Katxzhang (talk) 08:26, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Katxzhang, Nice addition. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 04:48, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

/* Week6 / Assignment 6 / Cloi929 */

1. This article talks about Moutai's history, current situation, brewing methods and others' views on Moutai. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Maotai&diff=1057079477&oldid=1033001512 3. When checked the information. I found that Moutai is only brewed with sorghum and water. I thought there were other materials. That surprised me.Cloi929 (talk) 09:46, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Cloi929, Nice addition. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 04:52, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6/Assignment 6/Katxzhang

1. I added the fact claimed that the lack of minority professions is a long-stressed issue in the law enforcement department of America. 2. Link of difference: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Law_enforcement&type=revision&diff=1057080871&oldid=1051081341 3. What I have learned is that it is a game-changer situation already that more corners of the world are taking minority rights seriously and starting to make a difference. Individuals like us should contribute to the subject in our own way which will result in an even brighter and more efficient path to a better future.Katxzhang (talk) 10:02, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Katxzhang, Nice addition. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 04:49, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/Assignment 7/Chenjshi

1. I found an article about new energy companies. I think the concept of green energy is very important now, so I chose this article. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Solar_Energy_Corporation_of_India Another article about Chinese restaurants abroad, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_restaurant

2. I added some content to these two articles (1). https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Solar_Energy_Corporation_of_India&type=revision&diff=1057083558&oldid=1047588510 (2). https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Chinese_restaurant&type=revision&diff=1057086977&oldid=1055099882

3. I added more detailed information to these two articles so that we can better understand the content of the article. By updating the information, I also gained a lot of knowledge about Wikipedia, it is a multi-functional information library, we can edit and learn at the same time.Chenjshi (talk) 11:02, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Chenjshi, Nice edits on both these. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 02:20, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/Assignment 7/Katxzhang

1. The citation I added is about the rising demand for Asian Americans to move to or want to live in Long Island City.

2. Difference of editing: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Asian_Americans_in_New_York_City&type=revision&diff=1057089554&oldid=1043045228

3. I have learned some fun facts about Asian Americans' living situation in New York City, I then get to compare it with mine and got an interesting perspective on Asians and Asian Americans' different mindsets.Katxzhang (talk) 11:34, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Katxzhang, This week should include edits to 2 articles. Please add what is missing and ping me again here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 04:50, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT Sorry for the confusion, here is my 2nd article of week 7:

1. The citation I put in is an extra reference on studies of dance and mental health, specifically Hip Pop dance and Social-cognitive ability. It enriched the fact that dance is beneficial to dancers' higher performance in many other aspects.

2. Difference comparison: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Dance_and_health&type=revision&diff=1057161750&oldid=1057135524

3. Due to my interest in street dancing, I looked up the relevant topics, after editing I learned that dancing can do more than bring joy and a sense of achievement, it actually helps with better performance in cognitive behaviors like mental rotation (another new word I've learned), and eventually benefit a dancer's STEM skills. It encouraged me to stick to dancing for the long-term improvement of life.Katxzhang (talk) 17:21, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Katxzhang These are fine. Current with Week 7. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:03, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

week7/assignment 7/ Amber MWY

1. The article is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/COVID-19_pandemic_in_mainland_China. I added a citation for the definition of COVID-19 and the effect of COVID-19. another one is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Software_as_a_service. I added an example for this.
2. Dif link:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=COVID-19_pandemic_in_mainland_China&type=revision&diff=1057098960&oldid=1057071763.https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Software_as_a_service&type=revision&diff=1057575460&oldid=1057244672
3. The impact of COVID-19 has affected the world. Although the epidemic is now under control, there are still potential dangers, and we still need to take precautions. When outputting your own opinions, you need to use data and evidence to demonstrate.--Amber MWY (talk) 13:12, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

   Amber MWY, Please review the assignment for this week as it involves editing 2 articles. Add that as a reply to here and ping me again and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 21:27, 27 November 2021 (UTC)

   FULLBERT, I added it.--Amber MWY (talk) 12:30, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

   Amber MWY, I would ordinarily revert your edit with a message similar to: "The source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE." Please find and cite a more reliable source and then ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 04:55, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

   FULLBERT, I edited it again. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Software_as_a_service&type=revision&diff=1058722546&oldid=1058382382--Amber MWY (talk) 05:45, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

   Amber MWY, Yes, though it needs a more credible and reliable source. Using the vendor's own documentation does not meet this criterion. Ping me here when you add a more reliable source. FULBERT (talk) 06:01, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

   FULBERT,sure, Thank you for explaining.dif link:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.phptitle=Software_as_a_service&type=revision&diff=1058770354&oldid=1058382382--Amber MWY (talk) 14:43, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

   Amber MWY, This url of the diff does not work. FULBERT (talk) 17:57, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

   FULBERT,doe it work?dif link:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Software_as_a_service&type=revision&diff=1058770354&oldid=1058722546--Amber MWY (talk) 05:04, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

week8/assignment 8/ Amber MWY

1. I find two articles about digital marketing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Digital_marketing. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/TikTok.
2. Link dif:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Digital_marketing&type=revision&diff=1057116680&oldid=1057010821. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=TikTok&type=revision&diff=1057578746&oldid=1057204847
3. I add another topic for digital marketing that is tourism marketing. That is a very interesting topic and we can use social media to record the travel. and add a sentence for TikTok--Amber MWY (talk) 15:34, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

   Amber MWY, I think both of these are a bit choppy and do not clearly add to the flow of the article, though other editors have let them remain so good enough for now. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 04:57, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8 / Assignment 8 / EricaLiu1260

Hi Folks, this is my assignment 8.

1. My citation article is "Chick-fil-A". My other citation article is "Jollibee". I added the recent major events for these 2 companies in Wikipedia. And I just recorded the news fairly and did not add any comments.

2. The diff link:

Chick-fil-A: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Chick-fil-A&type=revision&diff=1057154269&oldid=1055560944

Jollibee: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Jollibee&type=revision&diff=1057156031&oldid=1055130341

3. I know that Chick-fil-A has many Christian employees, and it stopped donating to LGBTQ organizations. I love Chick-fil-A, however, in my mind, the world is inclusive. Meanwhile, I know the history of Jollibee -- EricaLiu1260 (talk) 20:16, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

EricaLiu1260, Please review the assignment for this week as it involves editing 2 articles. Add that as a reply to here and ping me again and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 21:27, 27 November 2021 (UTC)

Hello, professor. I have already fixed it, here are two diff links. Happy Thanksgiving day! EricaLiu1260 (talk) 06:38, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

EricaLiu1260, These are both fine now. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 02:30, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/ Assignment 7/ Gdaymate011

1. I Added some content about the first opium war and the second opium war, I'm very interested in the history of this period because this period of history has a huge impact on the reform of modern China.

2. First Opium War: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=First_Opium_War&type=revision&diff=1057660511&oldid=1057557514 second opium war: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Second_Opium_War&type=revision&diff=1058824085&oldid=1058078566

3. By doing this assignment, I realized this is a very interesting thing to supplement the content of the article. It can help others understand the content of the article better.Gdaymate011 (talk) 06:06, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Gdaymate011, Both of these edits were too close to their original sources; restate what you added to both in your own words and ping me here again and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 17:04, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT Gdaymate011 (talk) 22:56, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Gdaymate011, The second one was reverted as it was not from a credible source. Please add something to that article from one or locate an additional article to edit. Ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 05:02, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

User:FULBERT Fixed Assignment Gdaymate011 (talk) 20:13, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/ Assignment 8/ Gdaymate011

1. During the outbreak, The surge in U.S. stocks has been accompanied by a surge in cryptocurrencies. Two of the most famous are Bitcoin and Dogecoin. I've been involved in buying cryptocurrencies myself, so I'd like to supplement this article with more detail.

2.Cryptocurrency: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Cryptocurrency&type=revision&diff=1058825122&oldid=1058671207 Dogecoin: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Dogecoin&type=revision&diff=1058826636&oldid=1058761730

3. When I was doing this assignment, I realized that it made me very happy to make an article more perfect with my own knowledge and understanding.Gdaymate011 (talk) 06:39, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Gdaymate011, Both of these edits were too close to their original sources; restate what you added to both in your own words and ping me here again and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 17:05, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT Gdaymate011 (talk) 23:14, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Gdaymate011, I would ordinarily revert your edit with a message similar to: "The source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE." Please find and cite more reliable sources and then ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 05:04, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT Fixed Assignment Gdaymate011 (talk) 20:30, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 9 / Assignment 9/ EricaLiu1260

Hi Folks, this is my assignment 9

1. My citation article is "Walmart". My other citation article is "Target". I added some recent news for these 2 companies in Wikipedia.

2. The diff link:

Walmart: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Walmart&type=revision&diff=1057542748&oldid=1056979187

Target: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Target_Corporation&type=revision&diff=1057542226&oldid=1057482096

3. In this process, I broaden my horizon by reading lots of news and Wikipedia, and I also learn how to write in a neutral approach.

4. As for this experience, I would say it is a wonderful journey. I choose the topics and search on the Internet, I love sharing my information and knowledge on the Internet. During this process, I learn lots of knowledge in Wikipedia, and I know how to quickly search for information on the Internet. I tend to continue editing on Wikipedia. --EricaLiu1260 (talk) 07:15, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

EricaLiu1260, Fine on both, and thanks for sharing your experience on this assignment! FULBERT (talk) 02:31, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/ Assignment 7/ Notkc01

Hi guys, hope everyone had a good thanksgiving. Here is my assignment 7.

1. I have followed metaverse for a while as this is a hot topic these days for the financial technology field. I read the topic of Metaverse on Wiki and expanded its utilization of Nike's recent action in its Utilization section. Besides technology giants, more and more big companies are stepping into the metaverse and trying to get ahead of others. The second article I found is the introduction to Anta sports. I added more information about its origin with the citation taken from its official website.

2. Link to diff:

https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Metaverse&diff=1057215108&oldid=1056844183

https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Metaverse&diff=1057215108&oldid=1056844183

3. Editing articles on Wiki is definitely a great learning process for me to improve my writing and it also provides me with another angle reading those articles. Notkc01 (talk) 11:44, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Notkc01, These should be for two different articles. Please add a second one and ping me and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 04:26, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT Hi Professor, sorry for the confusion. I must mistakenly paste the same address for my two articles. Here is the link diff for my second article. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Anta_Sports&diff=1057569934&oldid=1057481355. I added one citation about the background of the company to increase the credibility and extended the stock code for more information. Notkc01 (talk) 05:21, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Notkc01, Per the assignment, be sure to provide a sentence or two to express each of your contributions in context, and demonstrate how they add to the knowledge in the article. Ping me when you add some additional content to your citation and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 05:57, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT Please check the new link-diff for the Anta-sports article. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Anta_Sports&diff=1058725039&oldid=1057569934. For the Metaverse article, I actually added one sentence in the virtual reality section about Nike's newest movement toward Metaverse. Notkc01 (talk) 06:53, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Notkc01, Fine on both. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 14:41, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week6/Assignment6/Jw6740

1. I found an S-level article named "E-commerce payment system" since it closely related to the topic of my research paper. When I was reviewing the article, I found there is no reference under the section "methods of online payment". Therefore, I found a high-quality journal article talks about digital payment systems and added it to this wiki article with one description sentence.

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=E-commerce_payment_system&diff=prev&oldid=1057572478

3. What I learned from this process is that a high-quality article must have a lot of references to support its statements. Also, each statement should have an in-text citation to show evidence. Jw6740 (talk) 12:04, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Jw6740, Nice addition. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 05:07, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/ Assignment 8/ Notkc01

1. For assignment 8, I decided to step my feet into the health field not only because I am a gym enthusiast but also I am interested in health and nutrition. Anaerobic exercise and overtraining and interrelated. I checked both articles and they all have explained the topic thoroughly. I edited one sentence of each topic to increase the readability and also inserted related citations to help increase the credibility of certain points in both articles.

2. Link to diff

Anaerobic exercise: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Anaerobic_exercise&diff=1057573258&oldid=1056985048

Overtraining: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Overtraining&diff=1057573561&oldid=1056897382

3. I am very glad that I am able to help edit the topics that I have a passion for. Editing from Wiki has given me a deeper understanding of those topics. Notkc01 (talk) 12:20, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Notkc01, Please review the assignment, "Be sure to provide a sentence or two to express each of your contributions in context, and demonstrate how they add to the knowledge in the article." Add and ping me again and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 04:27, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT For the anaerobic exercise article, the correct explanation of the functionality of the aerobic system. The original sentence did not clarify that aerobic actually help store fuel in the body to prepare for the next exercise. I also added the citation of related studies to be convincible. For the overtraining article, I added one treatment to deal with overtraining. The original treatment section was ambiguous about cutting the aspects of overall training. I specified the volume and the intensity that can be considered to reduce when people experience overtraining. Notkc01 (talk) 05:20, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Notkc01, You only added a citation without adding information that helps us see how you improved the article. What you explained here is fine, though say something in the article that demonstrates how you added to it. Ping me when you add some additional content to your citation and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 05:59, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT please check the new link-diff of the two articles.

Anaerobic exercise: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Anaerobic_exercise&diff=1058726508&oldid=1057573258

Overtraining: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Overtraining&diff=1058727217&oldid=1057573561 Notkc01 (talk) 06:55, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Notkc01, Fine on both. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 14:42, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 9/ Assignment 9/ Notkc01

1. For my bonus assignment, I want to extend the health topic to stretching and aerobic exercise. Even though people may not be able to go to the gym and lift weights regularly, they perform aerobic exercise every day as walking. Both articles illustrated the topics well and I backed up some points with my citation to help increase the reliability.

2. Link to diff:

stretching：https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Stretching&diff=1057578224&oldid=1056895982

aerobic exercise： https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Aerobic_exercise&diff=1057578572&oldid=1056889319

3. The whole journey of editing has changed the way I use Wiki and I am sure that I will keep following up on the articles that I have assigned and continue to contribute on Wiki. Notkc01 (talk) 13:08, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Notkc01, Please revise per my last comment and ping me again. FULBERT (talk) 04:28, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT Hi Professor, I have replied to all the comments. Please let me know if there is any question. Thank you! Notkc01 (talk) 05:23, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Notkc01, Please add 1-2 sentences plus a citation to each of the articles you edit. Ping me here when you make these additions. FULBERT (talk) 05:59, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT, Please check the new link diff for the two articles.

stretching：https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Stretching&diff=1058727926&oldid=1057578224

aerobic exercise: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Aerobic_exercise&diff=1058728431&oldid=1058265439 Notkc01 (talk) 06:57, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Notkc01, Please provide reflection on the overall assignment per the instructions for Week 9 and ping me when done. FULBERT (talk) 14:43, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT For the stretching article, I added one sentence to another way of performing Ballistic stretching that the article did not touch on. For the aerobic exercise article, I added a short paragraph to explain the possibility of using aerobic exercises to lose fat. The original conclusion made by the article was arbitrary and did not consider the level of experience of all potential practitioners. For the process of editing, I learned that we should think laterally especially when we are trying to make a conclusion or advice to readers. The arbitrary conclusions or conclusions without citations backed up can be misleading and unreliable. For the overall reflection with this Wikipedia extra credit assignment, I definitely have more experience on editing Wikipedia and truly explored the overall functionality of Wikipedia. I believe I will continue to follow topics that I am interested in on Wikipedia and provide edits to those articles to improve my writing and the overall platform. Notkc01 (talk) 15:14, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Notkc01 Thanks for sharing this. Good to hear you found this a useful experience. Current with Week 9. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:00, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week7/Assignment7/Jw6740

1. The two articles I found are "Food delivery" and "Home shopping" which are both related to the influences that e-commerce brings to human lives. Fo the "Food delivery", I found the content under the "delivery software service" is focused on the ordering system in the restaurant instead of food delivery, so I added the influence of food delivery application with supportive reference. For the other article, I added the market trend ad benefits of home shopping with two sentences and high-quality references.

2. Link to diff:

food delivery: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Food_delivery&diff=1057584658&oldid=1056740007

Home shopping: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Home_shopping&diff=1057587233&oldid=1050805377

3. What I learned from this process is that e-commerce does contribute to lots of retailing areas such as the food, clothes, and beauty product industries. For Wikipedia, I am gradually familiar with reviewing the articles and adding references. Jw6740 (talk) 14:30, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Jw6740, Nice additions. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 05:08, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

week9/assignment 9/ Amber MWY

1. The articles are https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_media. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/WeChat. I added an institution for the first one. I added the knowledge of life for the second one.
2. dif https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Social_media&type=revision&diff=1057588644&oldid=1057535479. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=WeChat&type=revision&diff=1057591850&oldid=1055904806
3. Everyone can edit Wikipedia. when we read it, we need to know which one is correct or not.
4. I will edit Wikipedia when I know something interesting like knowledge of life or interesting experience that can help people to learn something.--Amber MWY (talk) 15:02, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

   Amber MWY, The first citation does not add content of value and the second did not include a citation. Please revise them and ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 04:59, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

   FULBERT, first dif: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Social_media&type=revision&diff=1058724093&oldid=1058551708. second dif:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=WeChat&type=revision&diff=1058727000&oldid=1057605676--Amber MWY (talk) 06:31, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

   Amber MWY, Wikipedia cannot be a source for itself, so that first one is not reliable. The second refers to a blog, which is also not reliable. Please revise them both and ping me here. FULBERT (talk) 14:32, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

   FULBERT, the first link:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Social_media&type=revision&diff=1058771954&oldid=1058551708. the second link:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=WeChat&type=revision&diff=1058773270&oldid=1058744356.--Amber MWY (talk) 14:56, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

   Amber MWY, Neither of these are credible or reliable sites. Use sources similar to what we use in class from the business databases. FULBERT (talk) 17:59, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week5 / assignment 5/ RickyLiao

1. I am working on the article, it talks about one of my favoutite E-gammer:clearlove,here is link of the article:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clearlove 2: For the information about his returning on 2020, it lacked citation, so I added the citation to this, and here is the deff of the article:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Clearlove&type=revision&diff=1057619448&oldid=1023159124 3. I have learned that, for wikipedia, everything you edit need to be serious and have post the citation, so as to make your article convincing. RickyLiao1997 (talk) 18:27, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

RickyLiao1997, The source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. Please find and cite a more reliable source such as the ones we used in our course and then ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 05:11, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week6 / assignment 6/ RickyLiao

1. I chose the theater in my hometown: Guangzhou Opera House, and added citation.Here is the article link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Guangzhou_Opera_House 2. I found that one piece of information about China’s three major theaters lacks a clear citation, so I added citation, which is the diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Guangzhou_Opera_House&type=revision&diff= 1057620899&oldid=1011081754 3. Like the previous assignment, I realized that all information needs to be more rigorous and provide corresponding ciatation. This is the reason why wikipedia is authoritative and convincing. RickyLiao1997 (talk) 18:28, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

RickyLiao1997, The source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. Please find and cite a more reliable source such as the ones we used in our course and then ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 05:12, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week7 / assignment 7/ RickyLiao

1. In this article, I chose my favorite Korean e-sports player Faker. I found that his mvp information about the 2016 World Finals lacked citation, so I edited this article. Here is the link to the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Faker_(gamer); this is the edited diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Faker_%28gamer%29&type=revision&diff= 1057622830&oldid=1054006892 2. In the second article, I chose my favorite e-sports team FPX. I found that the information about their 2017 Demacia Cup lacks citation, so I added ciation. This is the link to the article: https://en. wikipedia.org/wiki/FunPlus_Phoenix, this is the edited diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=FunPlus_Phoenix&type=revision&diff=1057623819&oldid=1056418158

In this homework, I found that a lot of wikipedia information actually lacks the proper citation, which makes many articles lack the persuasive power, so improving these articles will make me feel very fulfilled.RickyLiao1997 (talk) 18:46, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

RickyLiao1997, The sources used here do not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. Please find and cite more reliable sources such as the ones we used in our course and then ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 05:13, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/ Assignment 8/ RickyLiao

1. In this article, I chose my favorite video site bilibili. I found that the objective description about him lacked due citation, so I added the corresponding citation. This is the article’s link: https:// en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bilibili, here is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Bilibili&type=revision&diff=1057627153&oldid=1056797380

2. I chose my favorite Taiwanese singer Wei Li'an. About his album, the corresponding citation was missing, so I added the album-related citation. This is the article link: https://en.wikipedia.org /wiki/William_Wei, this is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=William_Wei&type=revision&diff=1057628202&oldid=1057386443

Regarding this study, I truly realized the importance of citation. After many edits, I learned the rigor of popular science content.RickyLiao1997 (talk) 19:12, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

RickyLiao1997, The sources used here do not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. Please find and cite more reliable sources such as the ones we used in our course and then ping me again here when done. Additionally, please add a sentence or two of your own contributions in addition to citing a source. FULBERT (talk) 05:13, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/Assignment 8/Katxzhang

1. What I did in this article is add a testified example that emotional damage was made to students because of the neglect of teachers on the relevant issue.

2. Comparison: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=School_climate&type=revision&diff=1057625462&oldid=1015200399

3. I learned that schools should care more about students' general wellbeing rather than focusing on academic progress. Because ample research has proved that school climate can eventually impact the academic performance of students, lead to fewer dropouts, which will raise an institution's reputation in the long run. A good school vibe really can make a difference, as it is never meant to be a place for students to suffer. I also learned to research better by filtering articles from different angles then looking into details of a few selected ones.Katxzhang (talk) 20:00, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Katxzhang, This week should include edits to 2 articles. Please add what is missing and ping me again here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 04:51, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT Sorry, here is the other article of week 8:

1. In this week's article, I added a new sentence to introduce and conclude the meaning of the issue discussed in the paragraph.

2. Comparison: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Social_aspects_of_television&type=revision&diff=1057174763&oldid=1050974371

3. The article I found is called "Social Aspects and Television". I added the session about gender and television. Looking at the golden time television series' revolution, female characters used to have several certain stereotypes, for example, there used to be many characters as desperate wives or gullible teenagers, which, the characters are fine for sure, what is not okay it trying to send the idea that women are powerless and incapable of control their own life. Through this editing, I learned the gradual yet significant changes in the television industry, where feminism is able to be spread across the world to alter many females' minds that they are within the right to speak for themselves, or that they are weak. It is thriving and breathtaking.Katxzhang (talk) 17:24, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Katxzhang, Please assign this article in the dashboard and then ping me again here. FULBERT (talk) 18:06, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERTSorry, it's assigned now:)Katxzhang (talk) 18:09, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week5 / Assignment5 / Damonmand

1. I am working on an article about Fantasy Westward Journey, which is one of the most famous vedio game in China the new citation I added is the additional event information about what happen in 2006,This will give more details for it. 2. The Link of Diff： https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Fantasy_Westward_Journey&diff=1058835822&oldid=1058835667 3. Even I already know a lot about the topic that I pick, but this process help me understanding more details.Damonmand (talk) 22:59, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Damonmand, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 02:23, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT, Hi professor, I assign all my articles, please check. thank you Damonmand (talk) 04:29, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

Damonmand, The source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. Please find and cite a more reliable source and then ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 05:16, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT, Hi, professor, I changed reliable sources and upgrade my Link of diff for assignment 5,6,7, please check, and I did not see your comment for my assignment 8 and 9, is that means I pass for these two?Damonmand (talk) 20:32, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week6 / assignment 6/ sunnydayreading

Hi, I added a citation for rPET(Recycled polyethylene terephthalate plastic). This is a B grade article which still needs improvement. I found a citation from ScienceDirect that can prove the genus Nocardia can degrade PET with an esterase enzyme. Here is a link to show diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Polyethylene_terephthalate&diff=1057659297&oldid=1049252865 . I have learned how to find a citation wisely. When we are looking for a citation, we need to choose a high quality citation. Therefore, it can be a good idea to search in the academic database or scientific research website.

Best, Sunnydayreading (talk) 23:23, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Sunnydayreading, Nice addition. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 04:42, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week7 / assignment 7/ sunnydayreading

Hi, The first article is Green Chemistry, a B grade article. I found a book from Taylor & Francis Group, Impact of Nano-materials on Health and Environment, to prove the necessity of impact consideration on the Nano-materials. Here is a link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Green_chemistry&diff=1057666635&oldid=1049550564 The second article is Clothing Industry, also a B grade article. I found two articles through the NYU database to show a trend of sustainable model in the clothing industry. Here is a link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Clothing_industry&diff=1057669717&oldid=1055299711 Green Marketing is my research topic. I gained a better understanding on green product and materials. This a very good experience for me to add these citations for the article which is related to my research proposal.

Best, Sunnydayreading (talk) 00:12, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Sunnydayreading, Per the assignment, "also include a sentence or two to express your contribution in context and demonstrate how it adds to the knowledge in the article." Ping me here when you add this and I will review it. FULBERT (talk) 04:43, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT, 1) There is a statement suggesting the necessity of impact consideration on the Nano-materials. Because the nano materials will have impact on the environment and human health. However, there is no citation for that statement. I found an article from the Taylor & Francis Group that suggesting the Nano materials will have an impact on the environment and human health. The citation show readers this idea/statement is valid.

2) One of the editor made a statement that the clothing industry has grown to an eco-friendly packaging solution to limit the amount of waste. For the second article, the statement also has no citation to support. I also saw that someone made a tag to reuqire citation to support it. I did a lot of study based on green clothing industry. I found two citations to suopoort it. The first ciatation is from mckinsey, they published a report from their director, announced that the clothing industry is moving to green packing solution with some statistic information. And Second citation is from the ScienceDirect. The second citation introduced a trend in apparel industry to adopt sustainable packing. These two citation serves as a fact-checking tool that help reader to verify the accuracy of statement. Sunnydayreading (talk) 08:53, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Sunnydayreading, Include this within the article not here. FULBERT (talk) 17:54, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT, For the first article, I added some real example of aspects to think about issues associated with nanomaterials. Diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Green_chemistry&type=revision&diff=1058835145&oldid=1057666635

For the second article, I added regulations of packing waste from China, the U.S and Canada to support the statment of green packing. Diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Clothing_industry&type=revision&diff=1058836466&oldid=1057669717 Sunnydayreading (talk) 22:26, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week6 / Assignment6 / Damonmand

1.Genshin Impact is one of the famous mobile games in the world, many people from different countries love to play it. In the Controversies part there is some information missed, so I add one citation to help it explain better. 2. The Link of Diff： https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Genshin_Impact&diff=1058837285&oldid=1058173892 3. It is not hard to see that some information already had citations but that citations are not enough to help explainning what really happen for the event.Damonmand (talk) 00:14, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Damonmand, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 02:24, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

The source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. Please find and cite a more reliable source and then ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 05:17, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week7 / Assignment7 / Damonmand

1. In this article, I chose my hometown region. and in the language introduction part has some "citation needed" marks, so I added the corresponding citation. This is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Chaoshan&diff=1058840018&oldid=1058838137

2. I chose Fujian which is a region that has many relationships with my hometown. And I found that on the introduction of Wuyi tea has no citation on it, so I add it. This is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Fujian&diff=1058842610&oldid=1058840996 Regarding this study, I figure out that many people like me are helping Wikipedia to complete different articles, many articles have "citation needed" marks and I would like to help with that.Damonmand (talk) 00:45, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Damonmand, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 02:24, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

The sources used here do not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. Please find and cite more reliable sources and then ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 05:18, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week8 / Assignment8 / Damonmand

1. I chose one of my favorite game PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds Mobile. and I found that the event about India banned this game need more citation to prove, so I added the corresponding citation. This is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=PlayerUnknown%27s_Battlegrounds_Mobile&diff=1057681177&oldid=1057592953 2. I chose Pubg: New State which is a new mobile game that invented by Krafton and PUBG company, it is a new game and the information is not enoygh, so I add a citatoion to help it prove the introdcution. This is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=PUBG:_New_State&diff=1057682142&oldid=1057269332

Based on what I study, I found out that many new articals lack of enough citation or information and we need to work about it base on what I interesting in.Damonmand (talk) 01:26, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Damonmand, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 02:24, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week9 / Assignment9 / Damonmand

1. I chose one of my favorite game League of Legends: Wild Rift. and I found that the event about Riot refused to invent mobile game need citation to prove, so I added the corresponding citation. This is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=League_of_Legends:_Wild_Rift&diff=1057685240&oldid=1052844531 2. I chose Riot Game which is a company that own Leagye of Legends, the information of the relationship between itself and Tecent need more citations, so I add a citatoion to help it prove the introdcution. This is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Riot_Games&diff=1057687344&oldid=1057356946

Based on what I study, I found out that even many articals already had citations but it still not enough, some information needs more than one or two citation. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Damonmand (talk • contribs) 02:02, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Damonmand Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. Also, be sure to sign your posts. --FULBERT (talk) 02:24, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/Assignment 8/Huilin826

1. The first article I added was "History of education in China".It talks about the origin of education and different approaches of education into modern education. The link diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=History_of_education_in_China&type=revision&diff=1057692684&oldid=1051705692

2. The second article I added was "Construction industry of India". It provides the background of the construction industry and challenges faced the year by year. The link diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Construction_industry_of_India&type=revision&diff=1057693671&oldid=1055317800

3. I learned from two articles that different articles are based on the same high-quality source. Huilin826 (talk) 02:58, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Huilin826, These are fine overall. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 23:35, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Week8 / assignment 8/ sunnydayreading

Hi, The first article is Eutrophication. I found a citation from Oxford Academic that explain Nettles and thorn bushes can be turn into Forest undergrowth. Here is a link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Eutrophication&diff=1057690057&oldid=1054196315 . The second article is Dead Zone. I add a citation for this article shows that the algal bloom is a phenomenon of phytoplankton growth. Here is a link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Dead_zone_(ecology)&diff=1057691518&oldid=1055605656 . I learned a lot through this activity. Similar with our research proposal, every statement needs an evidence to support. And each support should be authentic. Best, Sunnydayreading (talk) 02:58, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Sunnydayreading, Per the assignment, "also include a sentence or two to express your contribution in context and demonstrate how it adds to the knowledge in the article." Ping me here when you add this and I will review it. FULBERT (talk) 04:44, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT , thanks for your reply. The article Eutrophication mentioned that the forest undergrowth caused by Nettles and thorn bushes. However, I found this statement has not cicitation. And a note from other editor said that need a furture citation to support it. Therefore, I found an peer reviewed article to support this statement.

For the second article Deadzoom, the article claims that algal bloom is a phenomenon of phytoplankton growth. Similar with the article Eutrophication, it also had a tag from other editors which requiring further reference to support it. So, I added a peer reviewed article to support it. Sunnydayreading (talk) 07:39, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Sunnydayreading, Those are fine places for citations, though this assignment requires you to add one to two sentences each in addition to the citation. Please ping me when done. FULBERT (talk) 14:45, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT 1) Added a further explanation to the runoff of undergrowth : terrestrial plants have high nitrogen requirements. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Eutrophication&diff=1057690057&oldid=1054196315 2) I added explaination why Bacillus and Nocardia can degrade PET. Because the PET can be esterases by Bacillus and Nocardia. And Esterase is an enzyme family that able to cleave the ester bond. Diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Polyethylene_terephthalate&type=revision&diff=1058840114&oldid=1057659297 Thanks! Sunnydayreading (talk) 22:27, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 9/Assignment 9/Huilin826

1. I added one picture into the article "History of Education in China". The article I added from Assignment 8.

2. The link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=History_of_education_in_China&type=revision&diff=1057695065&oldid=1057692684

3. I learned from the process that how to insert the image put the article, and how to find a useful image describing the article content. At first, I was struggling with a high-quality source, because I added some low-quality sources into the article. However, more practice helps me to understand what is high-quality sources and how to use them. It is a long travel for me, a lot of assignments should finish and fix up the problems. Finally, I did it that was happy for me.Huilin826 (talk) 03:27, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Huilin826, Nice final edit and glad the process overall helped; I hope you continue editing! FULBERT (talk) 02:42, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/ Assignment 7 / Baezoey

1. I picked two articles through Find Article that related to my interested topic. One is Global Esports Federation, one is Esports. The article Global Esports Federation has multiple issues: it may not meet Wikipedia's notability guidelines for companies and organizations and may contain excessive or inappropriate references to self-published sources.

2. Link to the diff: [Global Esports Federation] https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Global_Esports_Federation&diff=1057699667&oldid=1048227709 [Esports] https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Esports&diff=1057703220&oldid=1057606140

3. I learned that for articles that do not have many sources to support, it is really hard to find enough non-self-published sources. But for articles backed by many sources, when we make a claim, we need sources on both sides of the statement.Baezoey (talk) 04:46, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Baezoey, Nice edits, especially the one on esports itself. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 01:45, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/ Assignment 8/ Crazytoppp

1. Dong Mingzhu is a well-known female entrepreneur in China. I added to the wiki that she is the seventh most influential woman in the world in Fortune. In 2020, Haier is the world's number one home appliance brand for 12 consecutive years. 2. Diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Dong_Mingzhu&diff=1057704036&oldid=1023424115 Diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Haier&diff=1057704916&oldid=1057553657 3. The Wiki lacks a description of the current situation of some companies. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Crazytoppp (talk • contribs) 04:48, 29 November 2021 (UTC) Crazytoppp (talk) 13:32, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Crazytoppp Both these are nice additions. Current with Week 8. --- FULBERT (talk) 03:56, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/ Assignment 8 / Baezoey

1. I chose a special city in China which is called Bozhouand I found that the introduction about Tranditional medicine market need citation to prove, so I added the corresponding citation. Another article I chose is about a beautiful small cities in China which is Jieyang, and it lack of the citation of the history.

2. Link to the diff:[Bozhou] https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Bozhou&diff=1057701747&oldid=1057701306 [Jieyang] https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Jieyang&diff=1057701515&oldid=1057701391

3. I found that many Chinese cities do not have detailed descriptions that are backed by sources on Wikipedia. I want to work in this area and try to let more people know about Chinese cities.Baezoey (talk) 05:01, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Baezoey, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 01:46, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT Hi Professor, I have assign these articles to myself. Please check. Thank you!Baezoey (talk) 07:16, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Baezoey, Per the assignment, please add a sentence or two to each of your edits so we see what you are adding from your citations. Ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 05:21, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT, Hi Professor. Here is the link to the diff: Bozhou https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Bozhou&diff=1058841466&oldid=1057882339, Jieyang https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Jieyang&diff=1058845291&oldid=1057884532 Please Check.Baezoey (talk) 23:07, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 9/ Assignment 9 / Baezoey

1.I chose one article in my interested topic : Honor of Kings. It is one of the famous mobile games in China. In the Overview part there are some information missed, so I add one citation to help it explain better. I also chose one of the beautiful cities in China which is Chaozhou, and it lack of the citation of the culture.

2. Link to the Diff：[Honor of Kings] https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Honor_of_Kings&diff=1057702129&oldid=1057701120 [Chaozhou] https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Chaozhou&diff=1057702776&oldid=1048065971

3. Honor of Kings is the most popular mobile game in China. So I want to add information about it for people who might be interested in this game. I did not expect that an article about a game that has been popular in China for many years is still a Start level on Wikipedia.Baezoey (talk) 05:23, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Baezoey, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 01:46, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT Hi Professor, I have assign these articles to myself. Please check. Thank you!Baezoey (talk) 07:15, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Baezoey, Per the assignment, please add a sentence or two to each of your edits so we see what you are adding from your citations. Ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 05:22, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT, Hi Professor. I have edited my changes. Here is the link to diff: Honor of Kings https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Honor_of_Kings&diff=1058837360&oldid=1057702129, Chaozhou https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Chaozhou&diff=1058838819&oldid=1057884527 Please check.Baezoey (talk) 22:14, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week9 / assignment 9/ sunnydayreading

Hi, The first article is Conus textile. The article mentioned Conus textile will stinging human, and several human deaths based on this attribute. I added a citation to support this idea. Here is link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Conus_textile&diff=1057698157&oldid=1054733046 . The second article is Low-density polyethylene. There is a footnote showing that a citation needs to be improve. So, I found a journal article from the ScienceDirect. Here is a link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Low-density_polyethylene&diff=1057706288&oldid=1053243851 . After this activity, I have learned to review the citation. We need to keep our citation most current and authentic.

Reflection: I really enjoy this extra credit activity overall. This is a great opportunity for me to read and learn. Even contribute to the field that I spend whole semester to do the research. I have how to insert picture and citation in the Wikipedia. And I also realize the importance of evaluate the citation. Although this is my first time to edit Wikipedia. However, I will continue to contribute my effort supporting the Wikipedia. I feel a sense of achievement from these extra credit assignments.

Sincerely Sunnydayreading (talk) 05:24, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Sunnydayreading, Per the assignment, "also include a sentence or two to express your contribution in context and demonstrate how it adds to the knowledge in the article." Ping me here when you add this and I will review it. FULBERT (talk) 04:44, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT, For the first article,Conus textile, this is a B grade article. Several human deaths have been attributed to Conus textile. I added a citation from the nature footgae which has a detailed description for Conus textile's attributed, and relative death records. This citation improved credit of this article and proved the dangerous attributed of Conus textile. The second article, Low-density polyethylene, this also a B grade article. The orignal citation is a chemical article from the a website. There is a tag from other editor suggesting that one of citation is clearly bogus.I found a citation from the Science Direct, which is also a peer review article. The thrustworth citation can make this article more reliable. Sunnydayreading (talk) 08:00, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Sunnydayreading, Add the sentence or two to the article itself. FULBERT (talk) 17:41, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT, Thanks for your reply. 1) I add the Habitat of Cnus textile based on the information from a peer review article. And added the statiscs number of human injury due to the CONUS textile. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Conus_textile&type=revision&diff=1058842617&oldid=1057698157

2) For the second article, Low-density Polyethylene, I made improvement based on its real life applications. Here is a link diff to show my current work and previous work: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Low-density_polyethylene&type=revision&diff=1058846092&oldid=1057706288 . Best, Sunnydayreading (talk) 23:16, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 5/ Assignment 5/ Tzc0725

What I Did and What I Learned

Summary of the cited article:

Small and medium-sized enterprises, abbreviated as SMEs are businesses that operate with a limited number of personnel. SMEs are quite important for social and economic reasons and thus, these sectors play an important role in generating employment. Due to the size of SMEs, they are highly influenced by their CEO(s) (Chief Executive Officer) who often acts as the founders, owners, as well as manager of an SME. The duties and responsibilities of the CEO in SMEs are difficult but mirror the CEOs of large companies. SMEs provide wheels to a nation, mainly developing nations, to drive economic efficiency and employment. SMEs play a crucial role in large enterprises’ supplier networks. An SME stands as a solution to the economic problems like abuse and misuse of economic power, mass unemployment, of the mid-20th century. The selected Wikipedia article has covered discussion on a number of countries accepting and using SMEs for their economic development and growth.

Link to the diff of article citation added:

https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Small_and_medium-sized_enterprises&diff=prev&oldid=1057715571

Things I have learned:

From this week, I have learned about SMEs and their impact on the economy as well as in extending large enterprises’ supplier networks.

Tzc0725 (talk) 06:49, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Tzc0725, Nice addition. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 05:26, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6/ Assignment 6/ Tzc0725

Summary of the cited article:

The COVID-19 (coronavirus) pandemic is an ongoing global pandemic of coronavirus disease caused by a severe acute respiratory syndrome named coronavirus 2 (SARS-CoV-2). It was first identified in Wuhan of China in 2019 and then spread over the world. This pandemic heavily influenced the life and livelihood of the people globally. A close to five million people across the world have died and a few million are infected to date. A number of variants of this virus have already hit the world. There is no specific, effective cure or treatment for COVID-19 disease caused by the SARS-CoV-2 virus. This makes supportive care the cornerstone to manage COVID-19. The supportive care includes oxygen support, fluid therapy, prone positioning for the patients as needed, treatment to relieve symptoms, and devices or medications to support the affected organs of the patients. The preventive measures for COVID-19 include getting vaccinated, wearing a mask in public, maintaining social distancing, avoiding crowds, ventilating all the indoor spaces, and more. The global healthcare industry has experienced a huge demand for medical support systems, devices, medications, and other preventive care in the pandemic. I've added the number of vaccines given for COVID-19 as of 11/29/2021 according to Google News.

Link to the diff of article citation added:

https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Vaccine&diff=prev&oldid=1057716509

Things I have learned:

This week, I have learned about the COVID-19 pandemic and its vaccines. I also learned how this pandemic made SMEs seize digital transformation opportunities to ensure their survival by linking with the previously cited article in week 5.

Tzc0725 (talk) 07:00, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Tzc0725, Per the assignment, please add a sentence or two to each of your edits so we see what you are adding from your citations. Also, the source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. Please find and cite a more reliable source and then ping me again here when done. Ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 05:23, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/ Assignment 7/ Tzc0725

Selected articles:

Article 1) Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on retail. Citation: Wikipedia.org. (2021). Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on retail. Retrieved on 22nd October 2021 from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Impact_of_the_COVID-19_pandemic_on_retail

Article 2) Economic impact of the COVID-19 pandemic. Citation: Wikipedia.org. (2021). The economic impact of the COVID-19 pandemic. Retrieved on 22nd October 2021 from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Economic_impact_of_the_COVID-19_pandemic

Summary of the cited article:

Article 1: The coronavirus pandemic has taken a very sharp economic toll on the global retail industry by forcing many shopping centers and retailers to close their operations for months as a result of mandated orders for lockdowns or 'stay-at-home’. This closure boosted the online retailers’ sales by making consumers look for alternative options to shop.

Article 2: E-commerce sites have experienced huge growth during COVID-19 due to retailers moving to these sites to continue their operations. Consumers' shopping behavior related to online purchases had suddenly doubled compared to the year before the pandemic hit. Further, consumers' behavior towards online purchase of healthcare products and services led some major e-commerce platforms like Pinduoduo and Sunning.com to make a promise to keep the prices of their healthcare products stable.

Link to the diff of article citation added

Article 1: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Impact_of_the_COVID-19_pandemic_on_retail&diff=prev&oldid=1057717180

Article 2: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Economic_impact_of_the_COVID-19_pandemic&diff=prev&oldid=1057717514 Things I have learned

From this week I have learned about the impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on the retail industry and e-commerce sites that altogether significantly impacted the global economy. Tzc0725 (talk) 07:07, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Tzc0725, I agree with the editor in the first article who reverted your addition, though the second one was solid. OK for now. Current for Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 05:25, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/ Assignment 8/ Tzc0725

Selected articles:

Article 1) Pharmaceutical industry. Citation: Wikipedia.org. (2021). Pharmaceutical industry. Retrieved on 22nd October 2021 from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pharmaceutical_industry

Article 2) Medical device. Citation: Wikipedia.org. (2021). Medical device. Retrieved on 22nd October 2021 from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Economic_impact_of_the_COVID-19_pandemic

Summary of the cited article:

Article 1: The pharmaceutical industry is engaged in discovering, developing, producing, and marketing drugs to use by patients as medications to vaccinate them, cure them, or alleviate symptoms. This industry has grown over the decades and extended its arms to serve people suffering from health issues.

Article 2: Medical devices are used for medical purposes to diagnose diseases and treat patients. There are several categories of medical devices across the world. These devices are used at home, and hospitals to provide clinical care and assistance to patients.

Link to the diff of article citation added

Article 1: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Pharmaceutical_industry&diff=prev&oldid=1057717979

Article 2: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Economic_impact_of_the_COVID-19_pandemic&diff=prev&oldid=1057718347

Things I have learned

From this week, I have learned about the link between the pharmaceutical industry a large part of which is involved in producing medical devices.

Tzc0725 (talk) 07:17, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Tzc0725, These should have been two different articles, though one of these you edited before. Please find an additional one to edit and ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 05:28, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/ Assignment 7 / Sleep by 11

I have added this phrase, Meituan, to the various latest figures for 2020, which will go a long way to help readers re-understand the app‘s landscape right now.

When editing this article, I looked at research reports from investment banks and news from the media. I wanted to give the reader an accurate figure and information.

In the second article, Pinduoduo, I have added a description of the current situation of this company. This company has changed its chairman and as a result there are some new initiatives that have a big impact on the strategic direction of the company, so I have added them.

Here are the links: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Meituan&diff=1057759903&oldid=1056870674 https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Pinduoduo&diff=1057761183&oldid=1046960539

Sleep by 11 (talk) 14:31, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, These sources are also not credible in themselves. Can you find higher quality sources such as the ones we used in our course? FULBERT (talk) 03:00, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

For the first article, on Meituan, I added Meituan's official financial results, from which I found all my data support. For the second article on PDD, I added professional research reports to support my content.

https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Meituan&diff=1058369293&oldid=1057759903 https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Pinduoduo&action=history Sleep by 11 (talk) 05:48, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, These are also now both fine. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 04:01, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/ Assignment 8 / Sleep by 11

For the first one, BYD Electronic, the introduction to this company was very brief and I gave a detailed description of his main business. And looking for detailed data, as I hope others will not be misled when they see this entry, I found very accurate data through the database of listed companies.

For the second one, Bilibili, I have added objective descriptions to some of the declarative text of features to make this section less of an outdated functional description.

Here are the links: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=BYD_Electronic&diff=1057762507&oldid=1025413170 https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Bilibili&diff=1057764484&oldid=1057627153 Sleep by 11 (talk) 14:57, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, I will let these stay, though they are not as credible as we would like. Current for Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 03:02, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Fine on both. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 04:02, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week9 / assignment 9/ BaixinH

1. I added a picture of a raw xiaolngbao on the xiaolongbao page. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Xiaolongbao&type=revision&diff=1057847550&oldid=1052074012 3. It is important to protect the copyright and we need to find some materials suitable for the policy. 4. I find this extra credit an interesting experience. It not only enlarged my knowledge, but also gave me a chance to help others. I find it feels good to help others. I will continue to contribute to the Wiki as long as I have the ability and not ban by IP.BaixinH (talk) 01:09, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

BaixinH, Nice reflections on this assignment and I hope you continue editing! Current with Week 9. FULBERT (talk) 02:13, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8 / Assignment 8/Chenjshi

1. I found two articles that interest me and modified them, one about Chinese animation, and one about at-risk students. 1）. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_animation 2). https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/At-risk_students 2. Here are two differ link: 1）https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Chinese_animation&type=revision&diff=1057843079&oldid=1057073070 2). https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=At-risk_students&type=revision&diff=1057850310&oldid=1015999825 3. I added some details in the two articles, which can better help us understand the article. Regarding the first article, I added some details about the connection between film and literature. I learned the details to make the article more complete and meaningful. Regarding the second article, I learned that school could impact students' performance on many levels, including grades and self-evaluation; it is crucial in a single student's life.Chenjshi (talk) 01:42, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

Chenjshi, Nice edits on both these. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 02:21, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 7/Assignment 7/bl2240

1. In the first article, which is Tsingtao brewery, I added some details of my favorite beer, Tsingtao Beer. I added it was predominately sold to Europeans in China. For the second article, I added details on the some description on the Shandong cuisine.

2. Link the diffs 1:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Tsingtao_Brewery&type=revision&diff=1057901148&oldid=1056303996 2:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Shandong&type=revision&diff=1057912578&oldid=1057684845

3. I learned that when you edit the wiki, you should always pay extra attention to the source since you want to use only the credible sources. --Bl2240 (talk) 11:27, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

Bl2240, These are both nice edits. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 03:47, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 5 / Assignment 5 / RaymondZqiu

This is Raymond. Here is my assignment 5. 1. I am interested in artificial intelligence technology, so I chose NIO, one of the electronic automobile manufacturers, as my article. Here is the link to the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/NIO_(car_company) 2. I add the award NIO won in 2021 and the source is from NIO's official website. Here is the diff page: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=NIO_%28car_company%29&type=revision&diff=1057963726&oldid=1055281422 3. In this homework, I found that a lot of topics are still not properly updated.--RaymondZqiu (talk) 18:01, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

RaymondZqiu, The source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. Please find and cite a more reliable source and then ping me again here when done. Ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 05:31, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERTI have made another citation on this article. Here is the diff page: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=NIO_%28car_company%29&type=revision&diff=1058880796&oldid=1058286905 Thank you so much.--RaymondZqiu (talk) 04:21, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 6 / Assignment 6 / RaymondZqiu

Hi everyone. This is Raymond. Here is my assignment 6. 1. Lanzhou is my hometown and I have strong feelings about it. As a result, I assigned Lanzhou University as my article and added its 2020 ARWU rank. Here is the link to my article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lanzhou_University 2.Diff page: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Lanzhou_University&type=revision&diff=1057979692&oldid=1054191202 3. During this process, I realize that comparison is important when we introduce some topic. Take Lanzhou University as an example, its increasing rank from different years clearly shows its tendency and makes readers know about its academic level. --RaymondZqiu (talk) 19:45, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

RaymondZqiu, Nice addition. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 05:31, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 9/ Assignment 9/Katxzhang

1. I added an image to support original content.

2. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=The_Walt_Disney_Company&action=history

3. I learned more about Walt Disney Company, its recent innovation, and solution to business decline during the pandemic age.

4. The Wikipedia editing was an incredible experience for me. Frankly, I was not a big fan in the first few weeks, but I started putting in more effort and realize it did make me learn in the areas I want to learn; After 9 weeks of editing, I have learned some techniques to research more efficiently and fluently. I also became more patient at researching in different directions. I learned to always summarize after research, to make up my mind on the next research topic, and make adjustments to what I already had; I will keep editing on Wiki as long as I have the time so that it reminds me of the things that matter to me.Katxzhang (talk) 01:20, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

Katxzhang, This week should include edits to 2 articles. Please add what is missing and ping me again here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 04:51, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT Sorry professor, I didn't clarify that I added a picture here, I thought we only need to do that to one article?Katxzhang (talk) 17:27, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Katxzhang, You did not add the diff nor assign it in the dashboard first. FULBERT (talk) 18:06, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERTSorry I put the wrong link, the difference of version link is:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=The_Walt_Disney_Company&type=revision&diff=1058026179&oldid=1056953767

I assigned it as well, the one name 'the Walt Disney Company'. Thank you!Katxzhang (talk) 18:15, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/ Eighth Post / bl2240

1. For the first article (Cantonese Cuisine), I added a more detailed categorization of the cuisine, which was based on the regional dialect. I also corrected a spelling mistake in the original article. For the second article (Guangdong), I added that the city was the beginning point of the Ancient Maritime Silk Road.

2. Link the diffs. (1) https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Cantonese_cuisine&type=revision&diff=1058028577&oldid=1041135923 (2)https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Guangdong&type=revision&diff=1058032821&oldid=1051329115

3. I learned that Wikipedias is great that you are able to collaborate with people who are interested in the same topic around the world. You can help each other out in getting to know more about the topic, and also help correct each other.--Bl2240 (talk) 01:59, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

Bl2240, Both edits are nice and interesting additions. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 03:48, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 9/ Assignment 9/ Gdaymate011

1. I added a few things about the development and history of the game industry because they are so important to the development of the game industry today。

2. Video game: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Video_game&type=revision&diff=1058828609&oldid=1058054672 video game industry: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Video_game_industry&type=revision&diff=1058827523&oldid=1058448135

3. during this progress, I found that a lot of Wikipedia literature is not enough about historical development.

4. Through this semester's Wikipedia editing training, I incidentally read a lot of different articles in a variety of fields. At the same time, I am very happy to improve an article through my own contribution so as to benefit more people. In the future, I will keep editing Wikipedia articles as a hobby in my daily life.Gdaymate011 (talk) 05:09, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

Gdaymate011, The sources used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. Please find and cite more reliable sources and then ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 05:05, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Fixed Assignment FULBERT Gdaymate011 (talk) 20:44, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

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Copyvio of Clinical metagenomic sequencing

I saw that you commented here. I take it that you are an instructor at NYU for a "Research Process and Methodology course".

I am a bit shocked that you would let Alba Olaso Llorca (your student I assume) get away with a 95% copyvio. I would have thought that if you see flawless English for miles in an article of such complexity by a non-native speaker youd get sceptical or at least you should be using a Copyvio Detector.

IMO the article needs to be completely re-written--Wuerzele (talk) 16:11, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

Wuerzele, Thanks for your message here, though please review that situation as that user is not my student. My comment on that page was that it needed more sources overall. FULBERT (talk) 23:26, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

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Week 9 / Assignment 9 / Jjjjdddd199704

1. My citation article is "Great Wall of China". My other citation article is "Yonghe Temple". I added a description of these two Chinese cultural heritages.

2. The diff link:

Yonghe Temple: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Yonghe_Temple&diff=1058184084&oldid=1056271579

Forbidden City: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Forbidden_City&diff=1058143874&oldid=1055863784

3. In this process, I found that adding citation can give readers a more comprehensive understanding of a thing.

4. We often use Wikipedia in our daily lives, but this is my first time editing it. This feeling is very wonderful, which allows me to share the information and knowledge I have learned. At the same time I also learned a lot of benefits of citation.---Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 00:00, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Jjjjdddd199704, The first edit you made did not have a credible and reliable source. Please edit that one more and ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 05:36, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT, I changed the first edit with a credible and reliable source

Yonghe Temple: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Yonghe_Temple&diff=1058723957&oldid=1058723884 ---Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 05:59, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Jjjjdddd199704, This is still not a credible and reliable source, it is for a tourist company. Use a source similar to the high-level ones we use in class. Ping me when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 06:02, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

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Week 7 / Assignment 7 / RaymondZqiu

Hi, this is Raymond. 1. The first article I assigned is Dunhuang. I added a citation of its latest economic data. The second is Pinduoduo and I cited for its annual active buyers in 2021. 2. Here are the diff pages: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Dunhuang&type=revision&diff=1058379511&oldid=1054647082 https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Pinduoduo&type=revision&diff=1058378722&oldid=1057761183 3. I really felt a sense of achievement and excitement when I updated the information on Wiki.--RaymondZqiu (talk) 05:03, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

RaymondZqiu, These are both fine. Week 7 is current. FULBERT (talk) 05:33, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8 / Assignment 8 / RaymondZqiu

1. The first article I assigned is Nantong and I added some updated information about Nantong Welfare Institution. The second article is China Construction Bank and I added its rank in 2021. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Nantong&type=revision&diff=1058383246&oldid=1058075305 https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=China_Construction_Bank&type=revision&diff=1058388876&oldid=1058212203 3. During this process, I realize lots of information needs to be updated and I am proud of what I have contributed.--RaymondZqiu (talk) 06:17, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

RaymondZqiu, Nice additions to these two articles. Current with Week 8. FULBERT (talk) 05:34, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

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Week 9/ Assignment 9/ TFMonk19970531

1. the first article is about deadlift, I add some benefits of doing deadlift. the second article is about bench press, I add some information about how bench press help increase performance in sports.

2. the first diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Deadlift&type=revision&diff=1058727563&oldid=1055584974 the second diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Bench_press&type=revision&diff=1058728535&oldid=1050871276

3. I always have interests in body-building and exercise. It is exciting to let more people see its benefits. --TFMonk19970531 (talk) 06:52, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Both of the journals you used have had issues with credibility and reliability, but ok for now as there is no clear consensus on them. Week 9 also includes some reflection on the overall assignment. Ping me when you add that. FULBERT (talk) 14:40, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 8/ Assignment 8/yf2196

1. This time I chose two landmark attractions or architectural attractions in Shanghai, China for modification.

2. Difference link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Talk:Tianzifang&diff=prev&oldid=1058732819 https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Talk:Oriental_Pearl_Tower&diff=prev&oldid=1058732076

3. Through this week's homework, I know that when adding content, I should look for some high-quality references for research and addition.Yifannn (talk) 08:00, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Yifannn, These were not to credible and reliable sources, so I reverted one and another editor reverted another. Please use the same quality of sources as we use in our course. Ping me when revised. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:49, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 9/ Assignment 9/yf2196

1. Because I just applied for the real world Ernst & Young course for the next semester, I assigned the first article about Ernst & Young's information. The second article is about the company that I used to intern. I added the ranking of Haitong Securities' global market capitalization.

2. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Ernst_%26_Young&diff=prev&oldid=1058736733

https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Haitong_Securities&diff=prev&oldid=1058737311

3. During this process, I realized that a lot of information needs to be updated, and I also knew how to add references to the materials.Yifannn (talk) 08:41, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Yifannn, Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 14:46, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Week7/Assignment7/ Cloi929

1. I choose Changchun with my article. Because Changchun is my hometown. And I add more information about Badabu which is Eight Grand Ministries. And my elementary school is the Education Ministry. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Changchun&diff=1058733568&oldid=1058544645 2. The second article I choose Xiaohongshu, this is my This is my favorite mobile phone App! I browse it every day. It can even be said that I cannot do without it. There is no information you can't find in it. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Xiaohongshu&diff=1058736432&oldid=1056382048 I think it makes me feel very happy to let more people see more information. Whether it’s the knowledge of my hometown or the knowledge of my favorite App. --Cloi929 (talk) 23:00, 5 December 2021 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cloi929 (talk • contribs) 08:42, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Cloi929 Please be sure to sign your posts. Sign as a reply and I will review. --- FULBERT (talk) 17:56, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

This week's article for improvement (week 49, 2021)

Bushtits eating suet, which is usable as a bird food, from a bird feeder Hello, FULBERT. The article for improvement of the week is: Bird food Please be bold and help improve it! Previous selections: Lazarev Sea • Wholesaling Get involved with the AFI project: Nominate an article • Review nominations Posted by: MusikBot talk 00:05, 6 December 2021 (UTC) using MediaWiki message delivery (talk) on behalf of WikiProject AFI •

Week 8/ Assignment 8/ Cloi929

1.I visited the Intrepid aircraft carrier with my friends on the weekend. I find it very interesting. So I choose Aircraft carrier as my article. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Aircraft_carrier&diff=1058849637&oldid=1058849502 2. Second article I choose lululemon. On Black Friday I bought a yoga pants. I think its marketing is very successful. It was the first brand I thought of. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Lululemon_Athletica&diff=1058850035&oldid=1057300057 I think I learned a lot when I was looking for information about aircraft carriers. Although the US military has already ranked first in the world in terms of maritime power. But still spending a lot of money to build aircraft carriers. I think the US military has excessive military spending and it is not conducive to world peace. Regarding lululemon, when I checked the information. I found that most of the reviews are negative. But for me as a consumer, it has increased my customer experience, and I think it is very good.Cloi929 (talk) 00:05, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 9/ Assignment 9/ Cloi929

1. I pick a Eames Lounge Chair image to the MillerKnoll article. I think this is a very famous chair, and it has changed the way people live. And it became an icon of American design. I can see it in almost furniture store in New York. So I think it is important to add a photo of this chair. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=MillerKnoll&diff=1058855654&oldid=1055095022 3. When I checked this article by MillerKnoll, I thought there must be a picture of this chair. In fact no. This surprised me. This chair that changed people's way of life did not appear in Wikipedia. It is so classic. I also went to understand why this chair is so famous and what's so good about it. 4. My sense of experience is good, not only can help other people, but also enrich my own knowledge. I think I will continue to do it. This gives me a sense of accomplishment, whenever I see that my article views are increasing.Cloi929 (talk) 00:52, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Week 9/ Assignment 9/ Crazytoppp

1.DJI、is a technology company that I like very much. I added the news in November 2015, DJI announced the establishment of a strategic partnership with Hasselblad. 2. DIFF:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=DJI&diff=1058879037&oldid=1056630682 3.I found that some information on the wiki is not very credible. For example, there is no official report about DJI’s acquisition of a majority stake in Hasselblad, only some leaked news. 4.I learned a lot from the extra credit of the WIKI. Not only know how to contribute to the WIKI and publish my own edits, but also I often browse the WIKI and read the knowledge I am interested in. I'm sure I will open and edit the WIKI in the future.Crazytoppp (talk) 03:49, 6 December 2021 (UTC)