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Week 5/ Bettyhwt

Hello Professor, for week 5, I chose a new article Demographic transition. This article gives me a more systematic understanding of the five stages of demographic transition and the different characteristics of each stage through scientific statistics. In addition, each country has specific demographic changes phenomenon, such as the United States which had a pattern of colonization throughout its history, where a high mortality rate has been reduced by land expansion. Here is the link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Demographic_transition&type=revision&diff=1082267083&oldid=1081197862 --Bettyhwt (talk) 07:23, 12 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Bettyhwt Citations alone generally do not add value. Beyond adding a citation alone, make sure to provide a sentence or two within the article itself to express your contribution in context (which the citation will support). This will demonstrate how your addition adds to the overall knowledge in the article. Please add a sentence or two to the article you edited and then ping me here when done. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:47, 14 April 2022 (UTC)‍[reply]
@FULBERT I have fixed the problem. Please check. Trying to revise a few sentences within the article to better express the citation statement. Here is the Diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Demographic_transition&type=revision&diff=1083277204&oldid=1082267083 Bettyhwt (talk) 01:35, 18 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Bettyhwt, Nice edits. Current with Week 5. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:19, 19 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Week 5 - Tianhao Ning

For week 5, I assigned one more article, stranger things, to myself, and update the theme park attraction section. make addition of more information and proper citation. Here is the diff link https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Stranger_Things&type=revision&diff=1082920191&oldid=1082892153 Thank you so muchTianhao Ning (talk) 22:31, 15 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Tianhao Ning Your edit does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third-party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. Always use a reliable source, such as to an academic journal article or other high-quality reference as discussed in the assignment and in class. Avoid blogs, corporate websites, reviews, press releases, and opinion pieces as they generally do not count as reliable sources. Please either assign yourself a different article and add a credible source that is needed to it or find and cite a more reliable source to the one you edited. Ping me here when done and I will review. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:10, 16 April 2022 (UTC)‍[reply]
Dear professor I have fixed the problem Please check Thank you https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/1083073397
In the previous reply, I was not sure if it was replied under this conversation, so I am doing it again.
Thank you professor! Tianhao Ning (talk) 06:07, 17 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Dear professor I have fixed the problem Please check Thank you https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/1083073397 Tianhao Ning (talk) 21:35, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Tianhao Ning, Please remember to indent your replies with one colon "  : " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:03, 17 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hi professor, does it supposed to look like this? I have put a ":" before the sentence. Tianhao Ning (talk) 00:26, 18 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Tianhao Ning, Nice edits and clarifying the indents. Current with Week 5. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:22, 19 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Week5/Nanjingnan123

Hello professor, for this week i learnt something about tesla's business strategy, and I made an edit to tesla just to add more information. Here is the differ https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Tesla,_Inc.&diff=1082948808&oldid=1082940025 Tesla has been an industry leader and has a different strategy that has differentiated it from other businesses, that's why I made this edit.--Nanjingnan123 (talk) 23:17, 16 April 2022 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nanjingnan123 (talk • contribs) 02:49, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Nanjingnan123 Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:10, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I have fixed it, please take a look. Nanjingnan123 (talk) 23:18, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Nanjingnan123, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:03, 17 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I have alread assigned this in the Wike Edu Dashboard. Nanjingnan123 (talk) 04:16, 18 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Nanjingnan123, Nice edits on this article. Current with Week 5. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:25, 19 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Week 5 / Nuts666

Hello, this week, I assigned the new article Valve Corporation. I added more information about the Steam section. Valve Corporation is currently one of the most successful game companies in the world, and its success is inseparable from the help of Steam. Here is the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Valve_Corporation&type=revision&diff=1083081946&oldid=1079851103 This week, I learned a lot from the citations. I think I am also learning and improving while editing Wikipedia.Nuts666 (talk) 22:59, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Nuts666 Your edit was reverted as it did not fit and was unclear. Please either make a clearer contribution to this article (and see the other editor's summary) or assign yourself a new article to edit for this week. Ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 18:09, 17 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@FULBERT Hello, I assigned the new article Video game live streaming. I added more information about Benefits section. Here is the diff:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Video_game_live_streaming&type=revision&diff=1083465121&oldid=1078154341 Nuts666 (talk) 23:56, 18 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Nuts666, Nice edit. Current with Week 5. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:08, 19 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Week 5/Rr3961

Hello, for week 5, I assigned Andy Lau, the famous actor. I added more of his acting experience as I did last week. This is my favorite old actor, who accompanied me growing up. Here is the link of the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Andy_Lau&diff=1083115820&oldid=1081861046. Rr3961 (talk) 03:58, 17 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Rr3961 As stated earlier, you have not registered for this assignment through the dashboard. See previous comments to adjust. Ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 18:12, 17 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hi professor, I think I have already registered for this assignment. Can you check it? Thank you! Rr3961 (talk) 23:35, 21 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Wikidata weekly summary #516

Here's your quick overview of what has been happening around Wikidata over the last week.
  • Discussions
    • Open request for adminship: Pi admin bot (RfP scheduled to end after 20 April 2022 17:58 UTC)
    • Closed request for adminship: Stang (successful)
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  • Development
    • Lexicographical data: Worked on inferring the spelling variant from the language's Item on the new Special:NewLexeme page and started building a little help box on the special page to explain what lex. data is.
    • REST API: Getting closer to having a first version of the REST API that returns Item data.

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Week 6 / YC5039

For week 6, I assigned myself two articles: korean idol and Hot pot. Both of them are the things I am interested in so in order to know more about them, I chose these articles. This is the link to the diff of Korean idol: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Korean_idol&type=revision&diff=1083374828&oldid=1081302485. I added a citation about the recognition of Korean idol. Though the idol culture becomes more popular somehow, some extreme, fanatical behaviors in this culture have made society have a lot of prejudice and negative stereotypes about the culture. And this is the link to the diff of Hot pot: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Hot_pot&type=revision&diff=1083369208&oldid=1083125255. It's one of my favorite dishes and I added a citation about the history of its spread around the world. From it, I learned how it becomes popular and known around the world.YC5039 (talk) 14:02, 18 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

YC5039, Nice edits on these two articles. Current with Week 6. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:30, 19 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Week 6/ Bettyhwt

Hi, Professor. For week 6, I assigned myself two articles: Pension and Economy of China. The reason I chose them is I am interested in economic growth and social welfare topics. This is the link to the diff of Pension: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Pension&type=revision&diff=1083463977&oldid=1081439942. I've added a reference to the Ireland Pension place about the total contributions approach, and how it affects contribution plans further. Through research, I feel the OECD document is a very powerful resource to look at because it published a glance report each year to show the latest pension information for each participating country. Another link to the diff of Economy of China: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Economy_of_China&type=revision&diff=1083466028&oldid=1082835376. I am very interested in this topic is because want to take a close look at the economic dynamics and recently China has been published the new Q1 GDP data. I learned a lot of new things from this article. --Bettyhwt (talk) 00:17, 19 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Bettyhwt, A couple of minor issues in the language you used for these two edits, but overall they were well-cited and solid contributions to the articles. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 00:09, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Week 6/ NeverlandAriana

Hi professor, in week six I edit two articles Leslie Cheung and In the Mood for Love. The diff link of the first article:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Leslie_Cheung&type=revision&diff=1083281240&oldid=1082600991. The reference I added talks about Leslie Cheung‘s life story as a superstar, I add some details about how he came out of the closet in his concert.

The diff link of the second article:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=In_the_Mood_for_Love&type=revision&diff=1083646232&oldid=1081813577. The reference I added is a Hong Kong English newspaper, the article talks about how this film In the Mood for Love faced criticism when it was released at first, but gradual earned positive reviews in these twenty years. I add some information about some reviews of this film, such as how the mainstream media appraised this film.

In this week, I learn that professional magazine is a good resource to find references.--NeverlandAriana (talk) 00:39, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

NeverlandAriana, Nice edits on both of these. Current with Week 6. --- FULBERT (talk) 11:51, 21 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Week7/Tracy77tt

Hello professor, The first article link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cultural_tourism diff link1: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Cultural_tourism&type=revision&diff=1083649439&oldid=1064172180

And the second article link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/TikTok#Features diff link2: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=TikTok&type=revision&diff=1083660677&oldid=1082217130

During this week's editing, I added several explanations with citations for two passages. I really enjoy the process of finding interesting articles. And I am glad that I can help improve those passages for more readers. --Tracy77tt (talk) 02:01, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Tracy77tt, Please assign yourself both of these articles in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 11:52, 21 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@FULBERTThank you, I already assigned both of them at this time. --Tracy77tt (talk) 12:04, 21 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Week 7/ NeverlandAriana

Hi professor, this week seven I edit two articles Ashes of Time and A Better Tomorrow. The diff link of the first article:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Ashes_of_Time&type=revision&diff=1083817689&oldid=1083765420. The first article I added a citation talks about the difference between Wang Kar Wai‘s wuxia film and normal wuxia type film. I add some sentences to say that one key point of this film, the characters' mood is more important than the martial arts action.

The diff link of the second article:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=A_Better_Tomorrow&type=revision&diff=1083833189&oldid=1080715674. The second citation is from The Hollywood Reporter, which talks about the fact that this film deeply influenced the west film industry as well as some famous American directors.

Because I edit many Wikipedia articles about films topic, I think some authoritative magazines & websites focused on entertainment or the film industry are useful sources of information.--NeverlandAriana (talk) 02:18, 21 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

NeverlandAriana, Nice edits on both of these for Week 7. Current with this week. --- FULBERT (talk) 11:54, 21 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

wee6/Shuyu1234567

This is the sixth week. I will continue to edit some movie related content. This week I'll choose Zhang Yimou's early and recent films. Red Sorghum and Shadows. Sorghum_(film). Here is the differ https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Red_Sorghum_(film)&diff=1083905016&oldid=1071420169.Because the film has a very strong directorial style,I add some sentences about the director's use of color. This is another article that is different https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Shadow_(2018_film)&diff=1083910538&oldid=1083909666 I will also pay attention to the director's use of color, because it is a completely different style than before. --Shuyu1234567 (talk) 14:16, 21 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Week 7/ DDDANII

Hi professor, I worked on two articles this week. First article is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alipay. The diff link is https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Alipay&type=revision&diff=1083901224&oldid=1066807561. I added the statistical data to emphasize the huge number of people who are using this new service and the earning it generated for the Alibaba. Second article is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Forbidden_City. The diff link is https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Forbidden_City&type=revision&diff=1083918685&oldid=1077271280. For this article, I have added reference about the layout of the Forbidden City to further explain its massiveness. I enjoy editing the wiki pages even though it quite a process to find articles that I want to edit and to find the corresponding references. --DDDANII (talk) 15:20, 21 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Week6/Yahahaya

for this work, I worked on the article supply chain here is the differ https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Supply_chain&diff=1083989391&oldid=1082306867 I have learned that international corporations should have a corporate social responsibility to ensure safety standards are maintained in their host countries in order to protect workers. the second article is Marketing here is the differ https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Marketing&diff=1083990740&oldid=1076699312 I have learned that businesses today need to take advantage of E-commerce platforms largely in use due to advanced technology in order to remain competitive in contemporary business environment.--Yahahaya (talk) 00:07, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Week 8 / DDDANII

Hi professor, I worked on inserting a photo in the article. By following the instruction in the training, I first upload the photo I took onto the Wikimedia commons. Then, inserting the photo in the article Dalian. There is the diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Dalian&type=revision&diff=1084200210&oldid=1083622276. Insert a picture is a new skill that I learned during this process, also learned about what kind of pictures is allowed to use for wikipedia. The extra credit assignments really gave the opportunity to boost grades while learning something new that I probably will not have the chance to learn anywhere else. It may be a little bit overwhelmed with the editing rules, but it will get much better with a few edits. It is a great experience overall. I think I will continue editing on Wikipedia to make my contribution and learn new knowledges. --DDDANII (talk) 04:11, 23 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Week6 / Garrygan10086

This week I edited two Chinese movie wiki pages, they are "A Chinese Odyssey" by Stephen Chow, and "Hero" by Yimou Zhang. I referenced the following two articles: http://doi.org/10.1093/ oxfordhb/9780199328369.013.26 and https://doi.org/10.1177/2059436420928058. Here is the link to the diff/his: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Talk:A_Chinese_Odyssey&diff=prev&oldid=1083995866 , https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php? title=Hero_(2002_film)&diff=prev&oldid=1084217028. I found a lot of historical back documents about Hero movies, and I learned a lot about the history of the ancient Warring States period.--Garrygan10086 (talk) 06:41, 23 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Week 6 / JuggleY

For this week, I added two articles, the first article is Indiana Pacers, one of the best basketball team in NBA,the link of the article is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Indiana_Pacers#Detroit_Pistons, the link to the diffs is https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Indiana_Pacers&diff=prev&oldid=1084205455. From this article, I had a minor change that revising the Pacers–Pistons brawl part. The second part is Instagram, the link of the article is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Instagram#Harmful_effect_on_teenage_girls%E2%80%99_mental_health, the link of the article is https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Instagram&diff=prev&oldid=1084217387. I had a minor changed that adding a sentence for harmful effect on teenage girls’mental health in Instagram. I have learned that sometimes Wikipedia is not 100% accurate. When we need more accurate information, the best way is to look for academic articles. At the same time, we should try our best to correct some mistakes.JuggleY (talk) 07:26, 23 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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