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This week I edited [[Startup company]] and here is the [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Startup_company&diff=prev&oldid=1152385142 diff] of my edit. The second article I edited this week is [[Investment]] and here is the [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Investment&diff=prev&oldid=1152386127 diff] of my edit. I refined my editing skills through editing of these two articles and I was swiftly able to identify the right articles to edit as well. [[User:Pa2360|Pa2360]] ([[User talk:Pa2360|talk]]) 23:08, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
This week I edited [[Startup company]] and here is the [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Startup_company&diff=prev&oldid=1152385142 diff] of my edit. The second article I edited this week is [[Investment]] and here is the [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Investment&diff=prev&oldid=1152386127 diff] of my edit. I refined my editing skills through editing of these two articles and I was swiftly able to identify the right articles to edit as well. [[User:Pa2360|Pa2360]] ([[User talk:Pa2360|talk]]) 23:08, 29 April 2023 (UTC)

== Week 6 / zl4474 ==

This week, I edited [[Startup company]], and here is the [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Startup_company&diff=1152385708&oldid=1152385142 diff]. I think that startup company faces many initial difficulties and competitive pressures, and their patent rights need to be reasonably protected

And I also edited [[Artificial intelligence art]], here is the [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Artificial_intelligence_art&diff=1152387254&oldid=1152321786 diff]. I leanred that artificial intelligence can create works through algorithms that identify samples and simulate human artistic behavior. [[User:Zl4474|Zl4474]] ([[User talk:Zl4474|talk]]) 23:28, 29 April 2023 (UTC)

Revision as of 23:28, 29 April 2023


Week 4/pa2360

Hi,

This week I edited the Startup Ecosystem article and here is the diff of my edit. The second article I edited is Angel Investor and here is the diff of my edit. Pa2360 (talk) 21:13, 14 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Pa2360 Per the assignment, please write a sentence or two about what you learned in the process and then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 15:40, 15 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Hi,
This week I edited the Startup Ecosystem article and here is the diff of my edit. The second article I edited is Angel Investor and here is the diff of my edit. I learnt to identify problems in articles, the places that required changes and spotted the right articles to make the correction ```` Pa2360 (talk) 16:02, 19 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Pa2360 Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 23:11, 19 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@FULBERT added the two topics to my Wiki Edu Dashboard Professor Pa2360 (talk) 04:06, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Pa2360 :Nice edits. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 15:35, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week 5/ lz2605

This week, I edited Sexual Stimulation, here is the diff. I found one article talking about the gender difference in masturbation behavior and I think there is a gap in the Wikipedia so I added it.

Also, I edited Stress management, here is the diff . The article lacks one more thing that could impact work stress recovery which is the sexual acitivity at home. Lz2605 (talk) 14:47, 21 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Lz2605 Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 21:06, 21 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I made some changes Lz2605 (talk) 03:02, 22 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Lz2605 Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 16:44, 22 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week5/ KristinaAllen

This week I edited the article Stock Market, here is the diff of my edit. Also, I added article Market Economy, here is the diff of my edit.


In the Stock Market, I learn that there are two common strategies for achieving financial goals in the stock market: long-term investing and stock trading. Long-term investing is a more conservative approach that involves accumulating wealth over extended periods through diversified portfolios. Stock trading, on the other hand, involves making quick gains on short-term market fluctuations through rapid buying and selling of financial instruments. Each approach has its pros and cons and an investor’s choice of strategy will depend on their financial goals, risk tolerance, and investment experience.


In the Market Economy, I learn that supply and demand are fundamental forces that drive market economies by determining prices and quantities traded in markets. When supply and demand meet at equilibrium, the market reaches a balance where the quantity supplied equals the quantity demanded. Prices play a crucial role in this process by providing information about the availability of goods and services. External factors such as technological advancements, government regulations, and natural disasters can affect supply and demand, causing prices to fluctuate. Supply and demand help to stabilize economies by ensuring that prices accurately reflect market conditions and that producers adjust their output in response to price signals from consumers. --KristinaAllen (talk) 22:26, 21 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@KristinaAllen Your first edit dud not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third-party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE and was reverted. As discussed in the assignment and class, always use a reliable source, such as an academic journal article or another high-quality reference. Avoid blogs, corporate websites, reviews, press releases, sources where we cannot determine author expertise or bias, and opinion pieces as they generally do not count as reliable sources. Please either assign yourself a different article and add a credible source that is needed to it or find and cite a more reliable source to the one you edited. Ping me here when done, and I will review. Add 1-2 sentence with a citation, not an entire paragraph unless you add multiple citations. FULBERT (talk) 21:08, 21 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Hi, I just renew it. Here is the diff.KristinaAllen (talk) 06:38, 22 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@KristinaAllen Nice edits. Please do not add more than 2 sentences with a single citations. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 16:47, 22 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week 5 / Liliability

This week I edited two articles: this is the first article Existential risk from artificial general intelligence and here is the diff; this is the second article Artificial general intelligence and here is the diff.

I researched a new topic that's related to my topic and I found some inspiration. I really enjoyed reading new articles and updating and adding citations to it. Liliability (talk) 05:41, 22 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Liliability Citations alone generally do not add value. Beyond adding a citation alone, make sure to provide a sentence or two within the article itself to express your contribution in context (which the citation will support). This will demonstrate how your addition adds to the overall knowledge in the article. Please add a sentence or two to the articles you edited, right by the citations you already added, and then ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 16:49, 22 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@FULBERT I went back and added several sentences. Please check this article Existential risk from artificial general intelligence and the diff; this is the second article Artificial general intelligence and the diff. Please check! Liliability (talk) 23:47, 24 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Liliability These edits are fine now. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 11:32, 25 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week 5 / Yg2816

This week I edited two articles. One is Organizational culture and here is the diff of my edit. Another is Supply chain security and here's the diff of my edit. By digging and learning about the same but slightly different topics as the previous ones, I gained a deeper understanding of information security. Yg2816 (talk) 23:02, 22 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Yg2816 Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 15:36, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week 5 / Zl4474

This week I edited two articles: This is the first article Applications of artificial intelligence and here is the diff . And this is the second article Gender inequality in China and here is the diff.

During the process of adding more detailed content to the article, I deepened my knowledge of the subject of concern. The best way to learn how to edit is to learn in editing, and more articles are waiting to be expanded.

Zl4474 (talk) 02:30, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Zl4474 Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 15:37, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@FULBERT I assigned these articles in the Wiki Edu Dashboard. Zl4474 (talk) 09:46, 24 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Zl4474 Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 11:24, 25 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week 5 /pa2360

This week I edited two articles. This is the first article Finance and here is the diff . The second article I edited was Venture capital and here is the diff

I enjoyed the process of adding articles and citation, doing research and editing articles. This deepened my knowledge on the subject as well as helped in improving my reading skills Pa2360 (talk) 04:00, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Pa2360 Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 15:38, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Wikidata weekly summary #569

Week 2/Rosie Duan

Hi everyone,

link to the article you copyedited:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Economy&action=history

I learned how to edit the content in Wikipedia. This is diff. And I got deep understanding through economy's history and elements. Yaruduan (talk) 19:27, 25 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Yaruduan All edits require citations to credible and reliable sources, exactly as we do in our course papers. Add a citation to a journal article to support your claim on the article, otherwise it will be reverted. Add that to the article you edited and then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 13:04, 26 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Hi, Prof., I already added the citation in the paragraph, can you help me to check it right now? Yaruduan (talk) 15:12, 26 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Yaruduan Your edit does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third-party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. As discussed in the assignment and class, always use a reliable source, such as an academic journal article or another high-quality reference. Avoid blogs, corporate websites, reviews, press releases, sources where we cannot determine author expertise or bias, and opinion pieces as they generally do not count as reliable sources. Please either assign yourself a different article and add a credible source that is needed to it or find and cite a more reliable source to the one you edited. Ping me here when done, and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 15:47, 26 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I learned how to edit the article Economy, and i inserted citation on the website. And this is diff. I became more familiar with economy history through whole process.
Best,
Yaru Yaruduan (talk) 19:13, 26 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Yaruduan Part of the edit you made does not flow smoothly, but overall it is ok. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 12:15, 27 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week6/Savannah yhzzz

This week I edited the article carbonated water. Here is the diff of my edit.

I also edited the article Snails as food. Here is the diff of my edit.

During this week, I became more familiar with how to add citations to my articles and read more popular science articles to increase my knowledge base. Savannah yhzzz (talk) 19:29, 25 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Savannah yhzzz Your first edit was reverted as it discussed health claims. Remember the course guidance we discussed, avoid articles that involve health, politics, or controversial topics as those are more difficult for new editors to edit. OK for now. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 12:20, 27 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week 6/ tc3739

This week I edited WeChat and here is diff of my edit.

I also edited the Stakeholder management articles, here is the diff.

During this week, I gained more knowledge about the stakeholder management which could help my project management course. Tc3739 (talk) 19:40, 25 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Tc3739 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 12:21, 27 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Week3/ Rosie Duan

Hi everyone,

I edited the article medicine. Here is the diff my edit. Durning the process, I learned how the brith control help female to prevent pregnant. And I can do the citation in Wikipedia more smoothly.

Yaruduan (talk) 19:42, 26 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Yaruduan Remember the course guidance we discussed, avoid articles that involve health, politics, or controversial topics as those are more difficult for new editors to edit. FULBERT (talk) 12:24, 27 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Hi everyone,
I edited the article Finance. Here is the diff my edit. Durning the process, I learned how is the operation management is important for risk management. And I can do the citation in Wikipedia more smoothly. Yaruduan (talk) 23:08, 29 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week 4/ Rosie Duan

Hello everyone,

I edited two article this week.

First one is Communicationthis week. Communication article will let you know the model and method to have a good conversation with people. Here is the diff of my edit.

Second one is health literacy.Good health literacy can be defined by more self-assessment. Here is the diff of my edit.

Yaruduan (talk) 20:25, 26 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Yaruduan Remember the course guidance we discussed, avoid articles that involve health, politics, or controversial topics as those are more difficult for new editors to edit. The first edit was ok. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 12:25, 27 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week 5/Rosie Duan

Hello everyone,

This week I edited the article work and life balance, here is the diff of my edit. Balance is about how to properly achieve the desired work and life satisfaction and needs in a conflict situation.

Also, I added article water here is the diff of my edit. Water energy can provide greater convenience to people's lives. Yaruduan (talk) 20:58, 26 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Yaruduan We need to discuss the approach to editing you are doing. Please do not edit any longer until we meet and discuss. FULBERT (talk) 12:28, 27 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week 6/Rosie Duan

Hello everyone,

Hope you doing well.

This week I edited the article social environment. here is the diff of my edit. There are still many people living in the hardship of rural life. The country is renovating roads and facilities in order to change this environment. People's lives are getting better but this is a long-term plan and goal.


Also, I added article women's studies here is the diff of my edit. Water energy can provide greater convenience to people's lives. The role of women is still very problematic in our society nowadays. On the other hand, society and the state are going through the process of helping people to achieve equality between men and women, but the fact is that cultural and racial influences affect the development of feminism even more.

Yaruduan (talk) 21:34, 26 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Yaruduan We need to discuss the approach to editing you are doing. Please do not edit any longer until we meet and discuss. FULBERT (talk) 12:28, 27 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week7/Savannah yhzzz

This week I edited the article Diabetes. Here is the diff of my edit. Added a citation to support the statement about using anti-inflammatory markers as diagnostic tools for type 2 diabetes mellitus and provided additional information about the lifestyle factors and genetics that contribute to the disease. Also, mentioned that lifestyle changes or medications can slow or reverse the progression of prediabetes to type 2 diabetes.

I also edited the article sleep. Here is the diff of my edit.Added a citation summary of the article by Cousins et al. (2021) to support the claim that splitting sleep between the night and a daytime nap can enhance long-term memory and improve sleep quality.

During this week, I became more familiar with how to add citations to my articles and read more popular science articles to increase my knowledge base.

Savannah yhzzz (talk) 23:37, 26 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Savannah yhzzz Remember the course guidance we discussed, avoid articles that involve health, politics, or controversial topics as those are more difficult for new editors to edit. As a result, both of your edits were reverted. Please assign yourself new articles to edit and ping me here when you make new edits on them. FULBERT (talk) 12:36, 27 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week7/Rosie Duan

Hello everyone,

I edited two article this week.

First one is Language shift. Here is the diff of my edit.

Summary: Language communities need to be transformed in various ways as the most dominant form of communication today. The history of languages varies from country to country. English as the most dominant language has largely enhanced the wave of communication, but many other languages have had to be replaced at developmental stages.


Second one is growth of religion. Here is the diff of my edit.

Summary: Since religion is inseparable from economics, one needs to consider the realities. The conduction of religion will be changed because of traditional ideas, and more importantly, the development of economy will bring about the change of religion. The performance of people dependent on religion also depends on the economic reality.


I think the overall experience gives me the pleasure of quoting. We can learn from the process of quoting by exploring different perspectives on the same topic. In the process, I found that all topics are worth exploring. I also discovered a lot of good articles and authors in the process. I can read and summarize topics of my own interest in the process. I will continue to use this way to edit wikipedia because I find it a good exercise of my patience and learning ability. I would recommend wikipedia to anyone who likes to read and write.


Thank you all,

Have a good summer break,

Rosie Yaruduan (talk) 06:46, 27 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Yaruduan We need to discuss the approach to editing you are doing. Please do not edit any longer until we meet and discuss. This edit does not fit into the lead per WP:LEAD, which states that the top, or lead, of an article should identify the topic, establish context, explain why the topic is notable, and summarize the most important points of the article, without including new information that is not covered in the remainder of the article. FULBERT (talk) 12:40, 27 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week 6/KristinaAllen

Hi, I edit two topics this week.The first one is Social Media. Here is the diff. The second one is Recycling. Here is the diff.

From RecyclingI learn that recycling and waste management are important for environmental sustainability and public health. They can help reduce greenhouse gas emissions, environmental pollution, and our carbon footprint. These practices are also important for transitioning towards a circular economy where waste is minimized and resources are kept in use for as long as possible. From Social media, I learn that social media platforms like Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram have revolutionized communication, enabling the sharing of information and ideas across geographical boundaries. KristinaAllen (talk) 23:56, 28 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@KristinaAllen Your first edit is fine and your second edit was reverted due to its not adding anything to the article that was not already there. I agree with it, though still think you did enough for this week. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 16:51, 29 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week 6/ Lz2605

This week, I edited Recovery model, and here is the diff. I think the article I found is interesting and can help people to understand a lit bit more about.

This week, I also edited Stress management, here is the diff. I add one study about the influence of depression and stress on work performance after the pandemic. Lz2605 (talk) 15:28, 29 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Lz2605 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 16:53, 29 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week 7/ lz2605

This week I edited Workplace relationship, here is the diff. There is one study talking about the effect of sex on job satisfaction.

Also, I edited Self-efficacy, here is the diff. I found one study talking more about the self-efficacy and work performance so I added it there to fill the gap. Lz2605 (talk) 16:04, 29 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Lz2605 The language you used in these edits feels a little formulaic, but overall ok. Please write the short reflection per the assignment for this final week and add it here. Ping me when complete and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 16:55, 29 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week 6 / Rosemary XYZ

This week I edited Anatoly Lunacharsky, here is the diff. I added one activity he did in 1930 about form a commission to study satire in all kinds of arts.

I also edited Ardeshir Mohasses, here is the diff. I added two exhibition he attended after arrived New York. Rosemary XYZ (talk) 22:32, 29 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week 6/pa2360

This week I edited Startup company and here is the diff of my edit. The second article I edited this week is Investment and here is the diff of my edit. I refined my editing skills through editing of these two articles and I was swiftly able to identify the right articles to edit as well. Pa2360 (talk) 23:08, 29 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Week 6 / zl4474

This week, I edited Startup company, and here is the diff. I think that startup company faces many initial difficulties and competitive pressures, and their patent rights need to be reasonably protected

And I also edited Artificial intelligence art, here is the diff. I leanred that artificial intelligence can create works through algorithms that identify samples and simulate human artistic behavior. Zl4474 (talk) 23:28, 29 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]